Essay Content Introduction and Title Support; Details; Examples; Quotations Essay as a whole Grammar; Punctuation; Spelling; Word choice; Vocabulary use Essay Structure Unsatisfactory (D/F) Proficient (B/C) Advanced (A) Insufficient introduction to locate reader. No title. Thesis is unclear or fails to sufficiently outline direction for reader. 4 5 6 Few details or examples to support ideas; makes general statements with little or no support, quotations are irrelevant to stated idea 10 15 20 An essay addresses some aspects of the topic and has limited organization, provides limited or irrelevant evidence. Essay does not assert a personal point of view. May have inadequate control of sentence structure with limitations in word choice. 10 15 20 23 Many errors in grammar, punctuation, spelling and word choice; vocabulary is repetitive; errors cause confusion for reader. Incorrect use of the possessive. Does not follow terza rima format, uses little to no poetic elements, offers no creativity in terms of description 0 Introduction gives sufficient background to locate reader. Title is adequate. Thesis is stated and outlines direction for reader. 7 8 9 Uses some details and examples to support ideas. Asserts a point of view and uses evidence to back it up. 21 23 25 27 Essay addresses the topic adequately, is organized and elaborates with purpose and some degree of specificity. Has adequate control of sentence structure with appropriate use of language and word choice. Creative introduction and title. Clearly, concisely stated and gives audience an interesting approach to your Poem. 10 Uses a variety of specific and relevant details and examples to support ideas, which are specific and well reasoned. 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 Occasional errors in grammar, punctuation, spelling and word choice; vocabulary is varied; errors do not cause confusion. 28 29 30 Essay addresses the topic thoughtfully and is coherently organized. Has exceptional control of sentence structure with precise and appropriate use of language and word choice. Essay asserts a personal position and supports that position with concrete evidence. 31 32 33 34 35 Virtually free of grammar, punctuation, and spelling errors; correct word choice; vocabulary is varied and sophisticated. Does follow terza rima format, uses poetic elements, creative in terms of description 30