1119/1&2 SULIT 1119/1 Bahasa Inggeris Kertas 1&2 Percubaan 2005 JABATAN PELAJARAN TERENGGANU PEPERIKSAAN PERRCUBAAN SPM 2005 PERATURANPEMARKAHAN BAHASA INGGERIS SPM Peraturan Pemarkahan ini mengandungi 10 halaman bercetak. [Lihat sebelah SULIT 1119/1 © 2004 Hak Cipta IPNT 23 PEPERIKSAAN PERCUBAAN SPM 2005 ENGLISH 1119/1&2 MARK SCHEME PAPER 1 SECTION A: DIRECTED WRITING Award marks for: (a) Format 3 marks (b) Contents 12 marks (c) Language 20 marks (d) Total 35 marks Detailed Marking Instructions (a) Format FI F2 F3 Informal letter Sender's address Marks must appear before the salutation Both mentioned to get 1 mark Date Salutation Dear ... (name) Do not accept 'Dear my cousin' Informal closing e.g. Your cousin, Do not accept 'Yours Truly' / 'Yoursfaithfully' Signature (b) Contents 1 mark 1 mark 1 mark Marks Asking cousin 'to rent rooms at a hostel' Cl I mark Mention of ,date' C2 I mark Mention of'number of people going' C3 I mark Mention of 'number of days you intend to stay there' C4 I mark Mention of ' number of rooms required' C5 I mark Mention of 'budget for the rooms per day' C6 I mark Mention of 'visit the Singapore Science Centre' C7 I mark - elaboration of 'visit the Singapore Science Centre' C8 I mark Mention of 'go shopping at Orchard Road' C9 I mark - elaboration of 'go shopping at Orchard Road' CI0 I mark Mention of 'tour the city' C11 I mark - elaboration of' tour the city' C12 I mark TOTAL 24 12 marks MARKING METHOD FOR LANGUAGE Indicate errors in language by underlining the word or phrase where the mistakes occur. Indicate by a tick (I) any good appropriate vocabulary, structure and tone. Award marks on a 'best-fit' basis by referring to the table of band descriptors below. Band Description Band/Mark A 19-20 B 16-18 C 13 -15 D 10-12 E 7-9 Language is accurate. Sentences are varied in structure, length and type for effect. Vocabulary is precise and sophisticated. Paragraphs have unity and are properly linked. Tone is appropriate to an informal letter. Language is almost always accurate (minor errors). Sentence structures varied and interesting. Vocabulary wide enough to convey intended shades of meaning. Spelling is nearly always accurate. Paragraphs show unity and are appropriately linked. Tone is appropriate to an informal letter. Language is generally accurate. Simple structures are accurate. Vocabulary is adequate, some may lack precision. Paragraphs show unity and are appropriately linked. Tone may be inconsistent. Language is sufficiently accurate to communicate meaning clearly. Patches of clear accurate language when used in simple structures. Vocabulary is adequate, some may lack precision. Simple words are correctly spelt. Paragraphs may not be properly linked. Errors are sufficiently frequent. Serious errors to hamper the speed of reading but meaning is never in doubt. Some simple structures are accurate but not sustained. Vocabulary is limited or too simple. Simple words are correctly spelt. Paragraphs may lack unity. Linkers may be absent or incorrectly used. Frequent and serious 'single word' errors impede reading but meaning is fairly clear. Vi 4-6 Vii 2-3 Viii 0-1 There may be a few simple and accurate sentences. Vocabulary is limited. Spelling errors are frequent. Paragraphs lack planning. Sense will be decipherable, but errors are multiple - requiring re-reading and reorganizing. There may be one or two accurate sentences. Makes little sense, barely comprehensible. Very little or no sense. 25 SECTION B: CONTINUOUS WRITING Marking is emphasized on student's ability to: write sentences of various lengths and types (for effect) use a wide range of vocabulary appropriately. spell accurately punctuate accurately and effectively. write in coherent paragraphs respond relevantly and precisely to the chosen topic engage and sustain the interest of the reader Marks A 45-50 B 38- 44 C 32 -37 Descriptions Lan2ua2e Sentences Vocabulary Spelling Punctuation Paragraphs Task fulfilment Appeal Entirely accurate. Varied in structure, length and type to achieve a particular effect. Wide and precise. Accurate Accurate and helpful. Well-planned, have unity and properly linked. Topic well- addressed with consistent relevance. Interest is aroused and sustained. Language Sentences Vocabulary Spelling Punctuation Paragraphs Task fulfilment Appeal Accurate, occasional minor errors. Some variations in length and type including some complex structure. Wide enough to convey intended shades of meaning. Nearly always accurate Accurate and generally helpful Show some planning, have unity and appropriately linked. The writing is relevant to the topic Interest is aroused and sustained. Language Sentences Vocabulary Spelling Punctuation Paragraphs Task fulfilment Appeal D 26 -31 Language Sentences Vocabulary Spelling Punctuation Paragraphs Task fulfilment Appeal ~ - ~ - ~- Largely accurate Simple structures are accurate. Sentences may show variety in structure and length but tend to be of one type - monotonous. Sufficient to convey intended meaning but may lack precision. Simple words are correctly spelt. Generally helpful. Some planning and unity, although links may be absent or inappropriate. I The writing is relevant but may lack originality. Some interest is aroused but not sustained. ~ =-=d Sufficiently accurate to communicate meaning. Patches of clarity when simple sentences and vocabulary are used. Some variety of sentence types and length but the purpose is not clear. Usually adequate to show intended meaning but inaccurate. Simple words spelt correctly. Fairly helpful. Lack of planning or unity. Topic is addressed with some relevance. Lacks liveliness. 26 I E 20-25 Language Sentences Vocabulary Spelling Paragraphs Task fulfilment Interest Vi 14-19 Language Sentences Vocabulary Spelling Punctuation Paragraphs Task fulfilment Interest Vii Lanauase 8-13 Sentences Sense Task fulfilment Sense I Task fulfilment Meaning is never in doubt but errors are sufficiently frequent to hamper reading. Simple structures may be accurate but not sustained. Limited, too simple to convey precise meaning or may be too ambitious but inaccurate. Simple words correctly spelt but frequent errors making reading difficult. Lack unity or haphazardly arranged. Subject matter is only partially relevant. Lacks liveliness. Many serious SINGLE WORD errors of various kinds throughout the script but meaning is fairly clear. Simple and often repetitive. Frequent errors cause blurring. Frequent errors Ignorant of rules. Haphazardly arranged, may be absent. Limited subject matter or partiallv treated. Interest is not aroused. MULTIPLE WORD errors predominate, re-reading is necessary. Only a few accurate sentences, however simple. Content may be comprehensible but high frequency of errors distorts meaning. Script may be far too short of required length. Almost entirely impossible to read. Make little or no sense at all. 27 I PAPER 2 SECTION A [15 marks] 1 C 9 C 2 B 10 A 3 C . 11 B 4 B 12 B 5 C 13 A 6 C 14 D I 7 D 8 A 15 C SECTION B [ 10 marks] 16 Indah Water bill 17 Summonses / summonses 18 [ 1 mark] (3)summonses / (three) Remark [ 1 mark] [ 1 mark] MyKad. government officers can (really) smile 19 20 II We should return a smile [Accept lifting of All you have to do is smile back.] be polite Gust as you would like someone else to be polite to you / show politeness [1 mark each] Accept any 2 answers I 21 ( It was) RM 500 22 She was happy that she did not have to wait long for her tum / the woman at the counter was polite / helpful to her. [ 1 mark] 23 The I.e. Department has been moved (to Putrajaya) 24 identity card / 25 wonderful/ nice/ fruitful! good! delightful/pleasant ( anything to show a positive feeling) r.c, / IC Proper nouns must be capitalized Correct spelling is compulsory [ 1 mark] [ 1 mark] [ 1 mark] 28 [1 mark] L SECTION C [25 marks] 26 27 a) It was the last day / paper of (her) SPM (examination) 1 mark b) She let out a long sigh of relief. / She sighed with relief (To them), she was still their ( helpless) little girl / 1 mark a) 1 mark (To them), she was still their little girl, (helpless incapable of facing the world) To them, she was still a little girl, (helpless incapable of facing the world) 28 b) They wanted permanent staff / workers/ employees 1 mark (a) flipped 1 mark (b) A part-time job was available. 1 mark Her pale face 1 mark Her shaky hands 1 mark (i) 29 (ii) 30 She She She She She had had had had had * gained working experience. earned her own money. met many people. learnt words in other languages. used her time beneficially. 2 marks [ 2 or 0 ] * mandatory Accept any other reasonable answer. 29 Question 31 Mark the content points and award 1 markfor each correct point to the maximum of10. Marks Code Content points 1 2 3 4 5 6 I 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 to the sundry shop looked under classifieds section in newspaper (next morning) took a bus/went to town went to all fast food outlets asked for part time job (but was refused) walked to a lady behind a counter in/went into a cafe (with a green signboard) asked for a part time job ­ must be awarded with the presence ofpoint 6 filled up a form attended an interview (on the next day and was accepted) nervous ­ to serve the first customers more confidence / relaxed as days passed enjoyed meeting people happy ­ to receive first pay cheque / salary proud - to earn own money . she felt she was worth something! proud to contribute to the country's economic growth! economy great - to use own money for shopping 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 SECTION D - LITERATURE COMPONENT (a) 32 (b) (c) It is raining ( heavily) / it is rainy/ the weather is (very) wet / there is (down-pouring) rain / The monsoon has arrived (They) watch (their) mother uncoil her snake hair / (They) watch (their) mother unbuckle the silver mesh around her waist (They will be) waiting for (their) father (pacing the sand of the Straits) (to get home) The washing of (their) feet before going to bed / the wearing of a silver mesh around the waist for women / The mother wears a silver mesh around her waist Anyone 1 mark Anyone 1 mark 1 mark .< (d) The air is still and silent like a person who is fast asleep / The air is not moving and quiet like someone who is fast asleep / in a deep sleep / in a deep slumber / sleeping like a baby/ The air is still and silent [Allow lifting ofline 1 ofstanza 2.] 30 2 marks I (a) 33 (b) (c) (d) She was annoyedl angry I upset I exasperated! frustrated! irritated that she did not have a single piece ofl any jewellery or ornament to wearl put on I have on. [Do not accept 'necklace' or the mention of any particular type of jewellery at this point] OR She would look poverty stricken without any jewellery ( to wearl put onl have on) [Do not accept 'looking poverty stricken' without the mention ofjewellery] (The flowers)They were quite fashionable at that* time ofthe year ( *accept 'this') They cost only ten francs I For ten francs she I Mathilde can get two or three magnificent roses. They were cheapl not expensive I not dear humiliating Accept any appropriate responses and reasons. If there is no mention of "YES' or "NO ", look for impliedpos itive or negative responses. DO NOT AWARD MARKS FOR: (i) 'YES' or 'NO' only; A reason must be given. (ii) implied positive and negative responses e.g " Madame Loisel is reasonable" and no reasons offered. 31 1 mark 1 mark 1 mark 2 marks ( dichotomous­ 2 or none at all) 34. Content Language TOTAL Score • • 9-10 • • • • • 7-8 • • • 10 marks 5 marks 15 marks Content Descriptions Response is relevant to the task. The event described highlights the theme very clearly. Shows full knowledge of the plot and effectively links it to a theme. Main and supporting ideas are relevant to the task Very good textual support Response is mostly relevant to the task. The event described highlights the theme clearly. Shows adequate knowledge of the plot and able to link it to a theme. Main and supporting ideas are mostly relevant. Adequate textual support Language Descriptions Score 5 4 Language is accurate. Ideas presented are clear, well­ organised and easily understood. Effective use of linkers. Language shows some minor errors. Ideas presented are fairly clear and easily understood. Able to use linkers appropriately. r-------t-----------~-+--------I • • 4-6 • • Response is likely to be intermittently relevant to the task. Describes an event but does not clearly link it to a theme, thus leaving gaps. Shows some knowledge of the plot but does not clearly link it to a theme. Some textual support. • 2-3 0-1 Response is barely relevant to the task specified. • Shows a little knowledge of the plot/event • Inability to link the event to a theme. ­ plodding • Writing hardly contains ideas that may be relevant to the task. - aim unclear • Hardly any textual support. • Has barely any understanding of the requirements of the task. • Writes in a disorganized way - no coherence. • Has no understanding of the task. • Shows almost no knowledge of an event or theme. • No textual support. 3 Frequent errors but ideas presented are generally clear and can be understood. [ SWEs] 2 Multiple Word errors ideas presented may be difficult to understand. Some distortions may occur. [SWEs + MWEs] Sense is still deciphered Meaning difficult to establish. Response provided in language other than English or no response. No sense is deciphered. [MWEs throughout] PERATURANPEMARKAHANTAMAT 32