Name _________________________ Context, Characterisation, and Themes in Novels - Summative Assessment The Task: To show how the author of your novel develops a theme in the text through the use characterization, and to be able to comment on the significance of the CONTEXT (social, political, economic, cultural, etc). Select one of the options below. 1. Focus deeply on one character for the body paragraphs. See page #2. For example: Through the character of George in Of Mice and Men, John Steinbeck shows that true friendship requires that a person act unselfishly at all times. 2. Focus on More than one of the characters in multiple separate body paragraphs. See page #3. For example: Through the characters of Candy, Lennie, and Curley’s wife in Of Mice and Men, John Steinbeck shows that it is often difficult for people to fulfill their dreams. The Prompts: You will be writing an IN CLASS ESSAY, for which you are allowed to prepare in advance, as you see fit. At minimum, you will need to have a quote card prepared so that you can include textual support in your in class essay. On the day that you write your essay, your teacher will highlight two of the following options below; you will choose ONE of the two options as your essay topic. Note that the bolded motifs are not actually themes; as we’ve practiced in class, your job is to use the motif to create a proper theme statement. Be sure to identify a specific theme in the thesis statement. 1. Use characterization to discuss the author’s message about discrimination as presented in your novel. 2. Use characterization to discuss the author’s message about courage as presented in your novel. 3. Use characterization to discuss the author’s message about isolation as presented in your novel. 4. Use characterization to discuss the author’s message about innocence as presented in your novel. What you need in class on the day you write your essay: Pens, black or blue ink A quote card(s) that lists quotes you might choose to use in writing your essay. This card/sheet will be turned in along with your essay and the rubric. This sheet must be hand written; computer-printed and photocopied documents will not be allowed. You cannot use your book on the day you write. Dictionaries will be available in class. Electronic dictionaries cannot be used. EAL students may use a paper translation dictionary. General Pattern to follow: 1. Introduction that includes CONTEXT (general topic), the SPECIFIC topic, and a correct THESIS STATEMENT. 2. 2-3 body paragraphs, depending on the structure you prefer and evidence gathered on quote cards 3. Conclusion – see examples. Option #1: Focus deeply on one character for the body paragraphs This is the pattern This is how the sample outline looks Introduction 1. Introduction 1. 2. 3. Introduction of general topic Move towards the specific topic Thesis - Show how a writer suggests a theme through the use of one aspect of the text 2. 3. During the Great Depression, people from all over the world struggled to live. Large parts of North America were heavily impacted, resulting in large migrations of people seeking work. The strain of this era is often portrayed in literature, such as John Steinbeck’s Of Mice and Men. The U.S. state of California, in which the novel is set, saw a rapid influx of migrant workers competing for too few jobs. This economic and social competition often lead to personal and societal conflicts and upheaval. In the novel, George and Lennie, the main characters, live through this turmoil, often having their friendship tested. Clearly, Steinbeck wants the reader to consider what a person must do to be a real friend to someone in an environment where isolation is the norm, and friendships are uncommon. Thesis – Through the character of George in Of Mice and Men, John Steinbeck shows that true friendship requires that a person act unselfishly at all times. Body Paragraphs 1.Topic Sentence – Through the character of George, it is obvious that friendship means sacrificing things for others, as the reader can see when George gives up his job in Weed because Lennie has to flee from trouble. Body Paragraph #1 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. Topic Sentence – Give a specific, clear sentence that encompasses what you plan to argue throughout your body paragraph Give a relevant example for support As needed, add quotes as direct evidence to support your argument Be sure to comment on this example directly supports your argument, your thesis Transition into your next paragraph 2. When the story begins, George and Lennie are on the run as men from Weed are trying to catch Lennie for supposedly raping a woman from the town. 3. George is forced to choose between his job and immediately “scramming outta” Weed with Lennie (43). 4. George decides to give up his job to help Lennie escape because he cares about his friend and does not want to leave him alone. Clearly, Steinbeck shows that George’s unselfish decision, although a difficult one to make, was the right one if a person is truly a friend. 5. Steinbeck further develops the importance of unselfish behavior in a real friendship when George later helps Lennie get a new job on the ranch near Soledad and gives Lennie guidance on how to behave in preparation for the new job, and praising him as a “good boy” (8). Body Paragraph #2 and #3 Body Paragraph #2 and #3 Repeat the same pattern as above Repeat the same pattern as above Conclusion 1. 2. 3. Remind the reader of your argument but restate your thesis statement in a different way. Briefly review the main points that support your position. Final thoughts – leave the reader with a intelligent idea about your position. Conclusion 1. Being an unselfish friend is not always easy, but John Steinbeck shows readers in Of Mice and Men how important this idea is through the character of George. 2. George helps Lennie flee from Weed, gets Lennie another job near Soledad, and eventually ends Lennie’s life to save Lennie from further pain, all of which develop the theme that freindship requires sacrificing what one wants at times to help out others. 3. Even 80 years after Of Mice and Men was published, the same message John Steinbeck communicated to his audience about being an unselfish friend is just as important today. Option #2 - Focus on more than one character in the body paragraphs This is the pattern Introduction 1. introduction of general topic 2. specific topic 3. Thesis - areas to be covered in this essay Point 1 (Character 1 from thesis) This is how the sample outline looks Introduction 1. During the Great Depression era, many people tried to retain hope for the future by believing in the concept of “The American Dream”. The idea that one could just work hard enough in a country that was supposed to be free and equal and achieve material success was a comfort to many who were struggling to survive in an time of great economic need. Unfortunately, as Steinbeck and most of society saw at that time, this definition of success was rarely, if ever, achievable by most people, and practically impossible if a person was not male, not white, or did not already have several advantages. 2. Three important symbolic characters are Lennie, Candy, and Curley’s Wife. 3. Thesis – Although Candy, Lennie, and Curley’s Wife in John Steinbeck’s novel, Of Mice and Men, are very different characters at first glance, upon deeper examination it can be seen that all three of them help to illustrate the theme of the impossibility of achieving the American Dream. Topic Sentence – The character of Candy represents the idea that unless a man is young and fit enough, the “dream” common to ranch workers at the time is simply not attainable Provide specific evidence for support – 2-3 quotes with ANALYSIS Point 2 (Character 2) Topic Sentence – Lennie is another example of how a man must also be mentally fit enough to strive towards the American Dream. Provide specific evidence for support – 2-3 quotes with ANALYSIS Topic Sentence – The character of Curley’s Wife is perhaps the strongest in terms of representing the idea that as a woman of that time, any chance of achieving her dream was necessarily tied to men and their willingness to help her. Point 3 (Character 3) Provide specific evidence for support – 2-3 quotes with ANALYSIS Conclusion o Summary of main points o Evaluation and possible future developments Conclusion 1. Remind the reader of your position – restate your thesis statement. 2. Briefly review the main points that support your position. 3. Final thoughts – leave the reader with a intelligent idea about your position. General Things to Remember for English Papers/Essays: ► in-class essays must be written in black or blue ink ► essay must have a title that is concise and represents the subject of the essay (“Expository Essay” is not a title. The Catcher in the Rye has been taken…) ► if your title includes the name of a poem, play, book, etc., then the normal underlining or quotation mark rules apply. e.g.: The Impact of Racism in To Kill a Mockingbird ► Always avoid these pronouns: I/Me ► follow MLA guidelines for internal citations and PUNCTUATE correctly. ► write in present tense, regardless of when the text was written that you are analyzing. e.g: Shelley employs vivid imagery in “Ozymandias” and warns that all societies will eventually crumble. (not “employed” or “warned”) ► avoid informal/colloquial language (e.g. “stuff” “kids” ) ► avoid using contractions: “did not” instead of “didn’t”; “would have” instead of “would’ve”, etc. ► titles of long pieces (books, movies, plays, newspapers, encyclopedia) are underlined, or if typing, italics are also acceptable ► if using quotations from the text you are analyzing, be sure to IMBED (blend the quotation with your own sentence) and deal with the SO WHAT factor. Do not just explain what the quotation means---that is very poor writing style for high school ► The entire introduction and conclusion should be in your own words---no quotes from the text