Name________________________________ Period__________ Argumentative Essay What is an argumentative essay? An argumentative essay is a brief work in which a writer presents the case for (called Pro) or against (called Con) a particular position. An effective argumentative essay includes: A statement of the writer's position on an issue with more than one side. Facts, examples, and other details supporting the writer's position. Arguments for the opposition. Clear organization. Other types of argumentative writing: Persuasive letters Editorials Political Speeches Public-Service Announcements Determine your topic. Choose an issue in which you are interested and about which you care. Choose a topic on which there is more than one side. Gather the evidence for your side. Use… Logical arguments Statistics Expert Opinions Personal Observations Charged Language and Striking images Complete a T chart Create two columns. Write “Argument For” and "Argument Against” on either side. Jot down arguments for your position on one side, and jot down any evidence that might be used as arguments against your idea on the other side. Write your draft Use the 5 paragraph format listed below Paragraph 1 – Introduction o Attention getter- Memorable quote, scenario, introduce your topic and its importance to the reader. o Thesis statement- Give a single, arguable thesis statement with a clear main clause that brings the reader into the piece. o Transition- Use a clear transitional sentence to bring the reader into paragraph 1 Paragraph 2 – Arguments for your idea o First point and fully support/explain it o Second point and fully support/explain it o Third point and fully support/explain it o Transition from your side to the other side, also known as from pros to cons o *REMEMBER - Save your most important argument for Paragraph 4.* Paragraph 3 – Arguments Against your idea o First point against and fully support/explain it o Second point against and fully support/explain it o Third point against and fully support/explain it o Transition from arguments against (cons) to your STRONGEST argument for your side, also known as from cons to knockout pro Paragraph 4 – Knockout round o Use your strongest point (pro) that you did not use in paragraph 2 o You should have multiple supporting details and explanations to support this point Paragraph 5 – Conclusion o Concluding transition o Restate your thesis (your opinion/argument) o Summary sentence (remind the reader of your 4 pros) o Call for the reader’s awareness and/or action for your side- what do you want them to do now that they know the facts? Name______________________ Date________ Period______ Argumentative Essay Assignment Consider ideas and topics that are of interest to you, especially those which have two or more viewpoints. Select an issue that means something personally to you and about which you feel passionate. This issue must be one that has two points of view. You will write an argumentative essay arguing for the value of your idea or your side of the issue. Use the attached T Chart to list the arguments for (Pro) and arguments against (Con) this issue. You will use your list to write a five-paragraph persuasive essay. Writer’s Role and Format You are writing an argumentative essay on a personally important issue that will be shared with peers and teachers. Excellently argued essays will be submitted to the school newspaper or other publications, compiled in a class publication, or delivered as speeches to classmates. Focus Areas Strong thesis statement Accurate, valid, and strong statements supporting your position Accurate and valid statements opposing your position Correct use of direct quotations with citations Length -Draft- 4-5 pages DOUBLE-SPACED, HAND WRITTEN IN YOUR 3SUBJECT NOTEBOOK IN SECTION 3 DRAFTING -Final Copy- 2 pages typed, double-spaced, 12 or 14 TIMES NEW ROMAN font Rough draft due: _______________________ Final copy due: _______________________ Parent Signature: _______________________ Topic:___________________________________ Argumentative Essay – Topic Ideas School Issues: Standardized testing Student drug testing Year round schooling Dress codes Cell phones in school Junk food in school Student searches Charter Schools Banned books Digitized books Pledge of Allegiance Amount of homework Home schooling Zero tolerance policies Religion in schools Cyberschooling Media: Reality TV Sharing music Violence in video games Violence in the media Censoring music lyrics Are video games good for you? Political/Legal: Immigration Adoption Abortion Lowering the voting age Legalizing gambling Gun Control Health Care Drone warfare Teen curfews Cell phones and driving Rich pay higher taxes Death penalty War in Iraq Driving age Animal rights Changing election process Technology Issues: Social Networking Digital Divide Internet Censorship Cyberbullying Health Issues: Vaccines Childhood Obesity Antibiotics Dieting Drinking Age Fast food Sports: Performance enhancement drugs Should college athletes be paid? Are athletes good role models? Concussions Equality in Sports Violence in Sports 7th grade No-No List for Formal Writing Do NOT use any of the following words in formal writing: 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 7. 8. 9. 10. 11. 12. 13. get/got good/bad happy/sad do/did fun nice a lot things/ stuff okay alright 1st person pronouns: I, ME, MY, WE, US, OUR, OURS 2nd person pronouns: YOU, YOUR, YOURS Contractions: don’t= did not *Remember to use the CTRL +F feature on the computer. It will find the no-no words in your paper, so you have no excuse for not replacing them!* You CAN only use 3rd person pronouns in formal writing: she, her, hers, he, him, his, it, they, their, theirs, them Author’s Name__________________________ Partner’s Name___________________________ Period________ Argumentative Essay – Conferencing Activity- STEP 3: Looking at and REVISING your work (Is everything in the right order? Does it make sense? Does it need clarified? Do I have mature vocabulary in every paragraph? Am I missing anything I need?) --Author will read his/her piece aloud to partner. Sit side by side. Partner reads over shoulder. --Partner then answers the following … Did the author give a clear thesis statement? Paragraph 1 Did the author provide enough arguments in support of the thesis? Paragraph 2 Did the author provide enough arguments against the thesis? Paragraph 3 Rate the author's ending. Paragraphs 4 & 5 1–2–3–4 1–2–3–4 1–2–3–4 1–2–3–4 Partner’s favorite part… List at least 10 vivid vocabulary/mature word (s)… Partner’s suggestion, make at least one… Author, now reread your draft. Make any changes and improvements- THIS IS WHAT REVISING IS ALL ABOUT! Author’s Name__________________________ Period________ Argumentative Essay- STEP 3: Time to REVISE your work 1. YOU WILL NEED COLORED PENCILS, A PEN, AND A HIGHLIGHTER 2. Follow these directions exactly to receive credit: a. Highlight your attention getter- this should be sent. 1 in intro. b. In pen, put a rectangle around your entire thesis statement- this should be sent. 2 or 3 in intro c. Highlight your summary sentence in your conclusion- this should be sent. 2 in your conc. d. In pen, circle your entire re-statement of your thesis- this should be sent. 1 of your conclusion with your transition at the beginning of it e. In pen, put a rectangle around your call for action statement- this should be your last sent. in your conc. f. Using a RED colored pencil, underline your transition sentences (hintyou should have 4 of these, one from ¶ 1-2, one from ¶ 2-3, one from ¶ 3-4, and one from ¶ 4-5) g. Using a BLUE colored pencil, put a plus sign + IN THE RIGHT MARGIN next to every one of you arguments for your side (hint- you should find 3 of your arguments in ¶ 2, and your strongest argument should be in ¶ 4) h. Using a GREEN colored pencil, put a minus sign – IN THE LEFT MARGIN next to every one of your arguments against your side (hint- you should find at least 3 arguments against in ¶ 3) i. Using a ORANGE colored pencil, in ¶ 4 put a smile IN THE RIGHT MARGIN next to every one of your supporting detail sentences for your knock-out point (hint- you were required to have at least 2 supporting detail sentences added after you mentioned your K.O.P.) j. Next, with a highlighter go back through your entire paper and highlight every time you find one of the following pronouns : I, ME, MY, WE, US, OUR, OURS, YOU, YOUR, YOURS k. IF YOU HAVE ANY OF THE PRONOUNS MENTIONED ABOVECHANGE THEM TO 3RD PERSON PRONOUNS ONLY! He, she, it, they, them, their, theirs, his, hers, him, her l. Finally, with a BROWN colored pencil, circle EVERY FIRST WORD OF EVERY SENTENCE. MAKE CHANGES SO YOU HAVE A VARIETY OF SENTENCE BEGINNINGS! Author’s Name__________________________ Period________ Argumentative Essay- STEP 4: Time to EDIT your work Look at all of your work from STEP 3 the REVISION process. During the REVISION time you: checked to make sure you had everything you needed, changed the order of sentences, clarified sentences, added sentences, removed statements, added mature vocabulary, changed all pronouns to 3rd person pronouns, and changed the first word in your sentences to have a variety of sentence beginnings! Now you are ready to move on to STEP 4 of the Writing Process which is called EDITING. Editing is often called proofreading. To edit a paper the writer must search out and fix all the mistakes in grammar, spelling, capitalization, and punctuation. 1. TO DO THIS, YOU WILL NEED A PEN! 2. Read the guidelines one at a time. If you need to make changes, mark your changes in pen. Then, put a check mark next to that guideline once you have finished it. Then, move onto the next guideline and follow the same process! Author’s Name__________________________ Period________ CHECKLIST GUIDELINES FOR STEP 4: EDITING YOUR WORK 1. Check to make sure every sentence is complete. (Does it have a subject and a verb?) Make sure it is not a run-on or fragment. _________ 2. Does every sentence begin with a capital letter? _________ 3. Does every sentence end with the correct punctuation mark? ______ 4. Are commas used correctly in sentences? _________ 5. Do your subjects and verbs agree? _________ (Hint- The puppies run- NOT- The puppies runs- Your S/V must agree!) 6. Are all of your verb forms and tenses used correctly? _________ (Hint- If you start your paper in past tense, are other verbs in past tense too?) 7. Are your adjective and adverb forms used correctly in comparisons? _________ (Hint- Heavy, heavier, heaviest-cheerfully, more cheerfully, most cheerfully) 8. Did you use only third person pronouns? _________ (Hint-ONLY USE- THEY, THEM, THEY ARE, THERE, THEIR, THEIRS, HE, HIM, HIS, SHE, HER, HERS, IT, ITS, HIMSELF, HERSELF, ITSELF, THEMSELVES) 9. Does every pronoun agree with its antecedent in number? _________ And is there a clear antecedent for each pronoun? (Hint- An antecedent is the word the pronoun refers to.) Example- George Bush offered his ideas for economic recovery. His is the pronoun referring back to George Bush, so the antecedent to his is George Bush. The pronoun his agrees in number because George is only one person, so the pronoun used is a singular pronoun. It has to be a possessive pronoun to show he is the owner of the idea. 10. Do you have at least 2 direct quotations, are they punctuated correctly, and did you tell me what source they are from and/or who said them? _________ (Hint- Mr. Smith, CEO of Hunting Incorporated, said, “Hunting is essential to survival.” 11. Is every word spelled correctly? ________ Argumentative Essay - Scoring Guideline Focus Single specific topic, awareness of task 1–2–3–4 Content Relevant examples, well-chosen supporting details 1–2–3–4 Organization 1–2–3–4 Logical order & use of transitions which develop and support the topic Style 1–2–3–4 Sentence style & structure (sophistication) that create effective tone o NO FIRST or SECOND PERSON PRONOUNS o NO CONTRACTIONS USED IN FORMAL WRITING (For every 2 errors, you will lose a point.) o At least 10 vivid/charged words underlined PSSA Average Writing Score Conventions 1–2–3–4 Grammar, mechanics, spelling (For every 2 spelling errors, you will lose a point and for every 2 comma errors, you will lose a point) -----------------------------------------------------------Strong thesis statement 2–4–6 Clear and concise single arguable statement Accurate, valid, strong details - 4 arguments for Statements supporting your position (2pts each) Remember 1 of your positive arguments is in paragraph 4 2–4–6–8 Accurate and valid details - 3 Arguments against Statements opposing your position (2pts each) 2–4–6 Correct usage of at least 2 direct quotations With correct in-text citations 2–4 Typed (double-spaced Times New Roman Font 12) 1–2 Works Cited checked by Mrs. Turner 1- 2- 3- 4 Any additional spelling/grammar points lost Total _________/50 - _____ Weighted/Doubled Total- ________/100