C----- ---------Intermediate Writing January 14, 2010 Literary Analysis “The Most Dangerous Game” Crammed with the unexpected, bursting with irony, “The Most Dangerous Game” is woven with complex settings, characters and themes. Starting out as an exciting adventure story, this piece takes countless turns and becomes an intriguing and almost unsettling drama. Two sharp men in a paradoxical battle of wits display drastically differing worldviews. As the story unfolds, the irony becomes evident through the settings, characters and themes. After falling overboard a yacht heading towards the Amazon, the protagonist swims to an island for refuge. This island presents extreme danger and risk, rather than safety and shelter from the sea. The protagonist follows tracks through the dense jungle and comes upon a “palatial chateau.” He unknowingly enters a situation as evil as the “leering gargoyle for a knocker” represents. At first, he is hosted by the resident with utmost civility. From the “canopied bed big enough for six men” to the London tailored evening suit, the chateau’s resident offers luxurious comfort and service. Moreover, the protagonist immediately discovers that his host shares his greatest interest: hunting. This story changes mood, however, when the host’s version of pleasure is found to be hunting humans on his preserved and stocked island. In response to his host’s invitation of accompaniment on such a hunting expedition, the protagonist declines, saying, “Thank you, I’m a hunter, not a murderer.” The human-hunter then becomes the antagonist and initiates a hunt between him and the protagonist in the dense jungle of the island. The protagonist uses his expert hunting experience to form intricate trails and set traps for his tracker. He survives three nights by the mocking mercy of the impressed general. At last the protagonist sneaks into the general’s bedroom and wins the proposed dual. The characters of “The Most Dangerous Game” strongly display the irony of this story. Rainsford, the protagonist is an expert big-game hunter. When one suggested that animals understand fear, “nonsense,” laughed Rainsford, showing skepticism. When the superstition-surrounded island is said to cause a feeling of a mental chill, Rainsford responds dismissively with “pure imagination.” He is very cool-headed when in tight situations. As the yacht raced out of sight, Rainsford counts his strokes and swims with slow, deliberate strokes to conserve his strength. He is very intelligent and finds his way through the jungle by observing tracks. Rainsford is an idealist because he views the general’s sport as cold-blooded murder. He is also very practical and while being hunted, commands himself to keep his nerve and “take stock of himself and the situation.” He realizes “it would be insane to blunder on through the dark.” When the general came upon Rainsford’s jungle hiding place, “fear again gripping [Rainsford’s] heart,” he “forced the machinery of his mind to function.” Rainsford is a tough, outdoorsy man whose views on the value of human life are rather romantic. The antagonist, General Zaroff, has the appearance, manners, speech and hospitality of “a true cosmopolite,” and is found “a most thoughtful and affable host.” “The one passion in [the general’s] life… is the hunt.” He “lives for danger.” The general claims that “no animal had a chance with [him] anymore.” The true character of General Zaroff is summed up by his worldview statement: “Life is for the strong, to be lived by the strong, and if needs be, taken by the strong. The weak of the world were put here to give the strong pleasure. I am strong. Why should I not use my gift? If I wish to hunt, why should I not? I hunt the scum of the earth: sailors from tramp ships—lassars, blacks, Chinese, whites, mongrels—a thoroughbred horse or hound is worth more than a score of them.” The general does not consider his type of hunting barbarous, but rather “a game,” for these following reasons. He provides “plenty of food and exercise” for the men he hunts, helps the men to get into “splendid physical condition,” and offers them an advantageous start into the jungle. General Zaroff toys with Rainsford during the hunt. He congratulates Rainsford on his cleverness, but promises to return again. Later he thanks Rainsford for an “amusing evening.” Soon after the general congratulates Rainsford in his victory, he accepts the challenge to a dual. The general’s civility was a disguise of his true barbarianism. The most prominent themes of “the Most Dangerous Game” are: survival of the fittest, hunter becomes the hunted, and civility. In line with the first theme, General Zaroff comments that the current men he’s to hunt are “an inferior lot. Poor specimens and more accustomed to the deck than to the jungle.” “Many of them afford only the most elementary sort of problems.” The man being hunted last night “made a straight trail that offered no problems at all. That’s the trouble with these sailors; they have dull brains to begin with, and they do not know how to get about in the woods. They do excessively stupid and obvious things. It’s most annoying.” The general proposes playing his hunting game with Rainsford: “a foeman worthy of [his] steel.” Rainsford managed to injure General Zaroff with his unique knowledge of making a “Malay mancatcher.” Rainsford also dug and created a Burmese tiger pit which trapped one of the general’s fine dogs. By using a “native trick he had learned in Uganda,” Rainsford killed the general’s assistant. Rainsford was also physically fit enough to swim around the island and to kill the general in a fight. The next theme, hunter becomes the hunted, initiates while Rainsford makes these statements to his yacht companion. “Who cares how the Jaguar feels?” and, “The world is made up of two classes—the hunters and the huntees. Luckily, you and I are the hunters.” The following day, Rainsford was greeted at the chateau by a revolver pointing at his heart. Only a day thereafter a seemingly civilized man hunts Rainsford as a cat hunts a mouse. That situation lent itself to Rainsford as knowledge of the full meaning of terror. With baying hound closely following Rainsfor’s scent, he then knew “how an animals at bay feels,” completely contrary to his initial non-existent concerns of the hunted. Civility is yet another theme which occurs in “The Most Dangerous Game.” Rainford’s first impression of the general and his residence was great civility. The general came across as cultivated and thoughtful, offering Rainsford every convenience and delicacy, even “pajamas of the softest silk.” The general said of himself, “We do our best to preserve the amenities of civilization here.” Although the physical and material surroundings of the general seemed to be evidence of a refined human, the general was later discovered to be a barbarian. His worldview claims no value in human life. Rainsford on the other hand possesses the American idealism which causes him to view the general’s sport as murder. The “Most Dangerous Game” clearly demonstrates these themes of surviving, hunting, and civility. As one examines the setting, characters, and themes of “The Most Dangerous Game,” a hunter gets twisted into being the hunted. The descriptive setting displays incredible irony of the places being opposite of what they first seem. Of the main characters, one who is initially perceived to be civilized, is not and the one who does not appear civilized, is. The themes of hunting, survival, and civility further greaten the ironic masterpiece: “The Most Dangerous Game.” This was a good first try at literary analysis, but it fell short in several ways: missing topic and clincher sentences, a setting paragraph that retold the story rather than focusing on setting alone, missing elements that should have been discussed (Ivan, symbols, motifs). I advise that you rewrite this essay and resubmit it, and I will average the two grades. Be sure you submit a printed copy of this paper with my comments. I'm seeing much growth in the complexity of your sentence structure and an expansion in your diction (word choice)--excellent work! Just be certain that the words and phrases you use work WELL within the context of your essay. Try reading your essay aloud, either to yourself or to a parent or sibling, noting any sentences that seem awkward or unclear, then go back and revise those elements. Be very careful when consulting a thesaurus; be certain that the connotation (the “baggage” a word carries) of a particular word works in the context of your sentence and essay, not merely the denotation (dictionary definition). GRADE: 78% C+