Aaron Freundschuh Course Overview: Writing on Crime and Culture in Contemporary History Course Information Near the end of the last century, the arrest and trial of OJ Simpson, a former professional football player and movie star accused of double homicide, attracted an enormous spectatorship and sparked public debate on an array of topics: racial identity in popular culture, the mass media and the justice system; domestic violence and the cult of celebrity; legal ethics and cameras in the courtroom—to name a few. That Simpson’s was by no means the first case to be dubbed the “trial of the century” suggests that the dramatization of crime narratives is something of a tradition in the US and other societies nominally built on the “rule of law.” In this course, we will make arguments about the deeper meanings and uses of crime and its representations in historical context. For a historical perspective on the relation between crime and mass culture, we begin with the Paris Morgue—once a hugely popular pastime for Parisian families and tourists—during golden age of French newspapers, allowing us to assess the ways in which historians, critics and philosophers have linked representations of crime to modern forms of political power. Next we turn to the Simpson case, with an analysis of a firsthand account of the trial by the Los Angeles court’s information officer and media liaison. Finally, for the research paper, students select a criminal case study and develop an argument about how it relates to its historical context. This is foremost a historical writing course, which means that our sustained focus will be on the refinement of inquiry, analysis, and argumentation in your written work. But as we get deeper into the sources, you’ll find that the process of academic writing parallels that of crime investigation in important ways: both begin with a compelling problem, or “motive;” both rely on rigorous and imaginative analysis of evidence; and both, in order to sway a targeted group of people, necessitate forceful, well-structured arguments. It is an investigative spirit, then, that this course will lead you to be more thoughtful and self-reflective about the writing process, and to question and evaluate your own work in each assignment and in the course as a whole. OVERVIEW OF ASSIGNMENTS Paper #1: Critique a Theoretical Text (5-6pp.) Assignment: Using Vanessa Schwartz’s case study of the Paris Morgue, critique and refine Michel Foucault’s theory about the role of crime narratives in the reflection, and exercise, of power in modern life. 1 Common Texts: Michel Foucault, excerpts (pp. 3-10, 58-69, 200-209) from Discipline and Punish: The Birth of the Prison Vanessa R. Schwartz, “The Paris Morgue: Flâneurie in the Service of the State,” from Spectacular Realities: Early Mass Culture in fin-de-siècle Paris Charles Dickens, “The Uncommercial Traveller” (on a visit to the Paris Morgue) PAPER #1 ASSIGNMENT SEQUENCE Critique a Theoretical Text For this paper, your assignment is to use Vanessa Schwartz’s case study of the Paris Morgue to critique and refine Michel Foucault’s theory of the role of the role of crime narrative in the reflection and exercise of power in modern life. In other words, this assignment allows you to “test” a philosophical theory against the evidence fielded by an historian. Your finished paper should be between 5-6 pages long. To develop an argument, you will need to show how the history of the Paris Morgue alters our initial understanding of Foucault. A good paper will push beyond mere description of Foucault and Schwartz, (1) by weighing their respective strengths against each other; and (2) by suggesting where future writing on the topic should go. Goals of the Essay: • Formulate a motivated, arguable thesis. • Structure the essay “organically,” avoiding chronological summary, on the one hand, and the five-paragraph essay, on the other. • Orient your reader. You should address your essay to readers who have read some Foucault, but not in depth. You will need to orient them with important reminders (quick summaries of ideas and arguments), always making sure those explanations serve a purpose in your essay as a whole (not just summary for its own sake). • Analyze the evidence. Never assume that your readers will read a passage in the same way that you do or that they’ll draw the same conclusions. Your analysis of the evidence should persuade your readers of the validity of your claims. • Use active verbs and limit your use of “to be” verbs. “To be” verbs include is, are, was, were, be, to be, been, and being. This simple exercise will invigorate your prose, and has its best effect if you remain aware of it as you draft and write, rather than translating sentences out of “to be” mode once the draft is done. • Document sources using the Chicago-style citation method. 2 Pre-draft: Shared Keywords and Concepts (1 p.) In order to contribute to an intellectual debate, authors first find common ground: shared keywords, concepts, priorities, and themes. Your assignment for this Pre-draft is to identify and define the most important keywords and ideas that both Foucault and Schwartz mobilize in their arguments, and how. Be sure to include any apparent discrepancies in their definitions. Draft The draft you hand in should not be a “rough” one (i.e., the first thing you tap into your computer). Rather, it should be your best possible effort at getting your ideas on paper and shaping those ideas into a coherent and readable whole. The better your draft, the more useful will be the feedback on it. Essay #1 Draft Cover Letter For the draft of Essay #1, please write a letter, addressed to your readers, in which you answer the following questions and present any other concerns that you have. Think of the letter as an opportunity to ask for the kind of feedback you think you particularly need. Your cover letter should be about a page long. • What do you see as your main idea or point? • What are the biggest problems you’re having at this point in the writing process? • If you were going to start revising today, what three things would you focus on? Essay #1 Draft Response (and draft responses thereafter) Each time you read other people’s drafts in this course, you’ll write a letter in response. You should spend at least 30 minutes on each draft. Please be expansive and thoughtful in your comments. Try to make comments that you think will help the writer revise. Revision literally means “seeing again.” Your aim should be to help your colleagues see their papers in a new light, to offer suggestions in a generous and respectful way, and to make demands that will help guide a profound revision of the paper. Directions As you carefully read and re-read each essay, write marginal notes to the writer on anything that puzzles you. After re-reading, write a letter to the writer in which you address these questions: 3 • In your own words, what’s this paper about? (What’s its idea?) • What do you see as the strength(s) of the draft? • Look at the Harvey’s “Writing Lexicon.” Now identify two elements that you think the writer should focus on in revising and discuss these in relation to the draft. Try to point to specific sentences and paragraphs whenever possible. Paper #2: An Argument about Crime Narrative in Historical Context (5-6pp.) Assignment: Make an argument about how Haysett’s role as a media officer for the Los Angeles court shapes her account of the Simpson trial. Common Readings: Linda Williams, Playing the Race Card: Melodramas of Black and White from Uncle Tom to O. J. Simpson Ronald N. Jacobs, “Narrative, Civil Society and Public Culture,” in Molly Andrews et al., eds., The Uses of Narrative: Explorations in Sociology, Psychology, and Cultural Studies. Jerrianne Haysett, Anatomy of a Trial: Public Loss, Lessons Learned from The People vs. O.J. Simpson PAPER #2 ASSIGNMENT SEQUENCE An Argument about Crime Narrative(s) in Historical Context For this paper, you will produce original analysis of Anatomy of a Trial as you develop an argument about how to understand the account in relation to its context. Your paper will use Anatomy of a Trial as an entry point into the vast field of representations sparked by the OJ Simpson affair, and offer insights into how crime narratives relate to the world in which they are made. Because the murders of Nicole Brown Simpson and Ronald Goldman inspired so many competing interpretations – each drawing upon its own specific theoretical perspectives or political motivations – you should define your angle on Haysett’s account early and avoid rehearsing significant portions of the case in your discussion. Goals of the Essay With this essay, you will continue to work on the goals you had with Essay #1: developing and stating a clear thesis and motive, supporting your argument with textual evidence and analysis, structuring your essay in a logical, non-repetitive way, and orienting your reader. This time around, we’ll be refining these skills and adding a few others: 4 • Open with an engaging lead-in and introduction (among other things, making the motivating problem clear) and drawing out the implication(s) of the argument in the essay’s conclusion. • Integrate primary- and secondary-source material into an analysis of a primary text. Using secondary sources to support or authorize your own analysis is the weakest of several ways to integrate this kind of material into your essay. You can also use secondary sources to (1) establish a problem or question worth addressing (i.e., a motivating problem or question), (2) supply context, background, or information, (3) provide key terms or concepts, and (4) grapple with another opinion or interpretation (such as found in literary criticism). Pre-Draft: Reading the account of the trial alongside other sources Having read the firsthand account, and as you read through your sources, take notes and then briefly summarize the aspect of the Simpson case that you’ve chosen to explore. As you write, think about how you will use a reading of some aspect of Haysett’s book to introduce a motivated thesis. Essay #2 Draft Cover Letter Please write a letter, addressed to your readers, in which you answer the following questions and present any other concerns that you have. This letter should run about three-quarters to a full page long. • What do you see as your thesis, or main idea? • What do you see as your motivating problem? (Remember, your motivating problem is your intellectual reason for writing the essay, the reason the argument needs to be made and thus read. Its signal word is “but” or “however.”) • What are the biggest problems you’re having at this point in the writing process? Paper #3: Research Paper Proposal: Presenting your work to colleagues This paper proposal will put forth your argument for undertaking the research topic you’ve chosen. Write a 400- to 500-word proposal—a discussion of the specific question, problem, or issue to be addressed, why it’s interesting, some of the sources you’re likely to discuss, and some of the turns the argument is likely to take. Think of this as a “pitch” of your idea for an interesting research paper on a criminal case of your choice; that is, write a research proposal that defines your topic, presents a motivating problem, and offers a working thesis statement. Follow this up with a short list of sources that you have already consulted or intend to consult. Pre-Draft: Informal (5-minute) presentation of the proposal to the class, with some visual support. 5 Paper #4: Research Paper on a Historical Case Study Assignment: Choose a criminal case and develop an argument about its significance in relation to the historical context in which it unfolded. Reading: Carlo Ginzburg, “Clues: Roots of a Scientific Paradigm” PAPER #4 ASSIGNMENT SEQUENCE Research Paper on a Historical Case Study In this project you will face a new set of challenges, such as selecting a feasible and interesting research topic. You’ll choose a criminal case and develop an argument about its relationship to the historical context in which it unfolded. Your treatment of the case should bring order to its various representations (narrative forms or media) and make an argument for its broader political, social, or cultural significance. Goals of the Essay The goals of this essay are for you to carve from the assignment a topic that interests you, to do research, to use your research to make an argument while evaluating different kinds of sources in an essay. Pre-Draft 1: Identifying a Topic and a Motivating Problem Locate and carefully examine some sources for your paper, then discuss it/them in a few pages, making sure to focus on some problematic aspect—a question, a contradiction, something curious that remains unanswered or unaddressed. If possible, also include a list (or the start of a list) of sources that you think will help you situate and/or address this problem. Essay #4 Draft Cover Letter Please write a letter, addressed to your readers, in which you answer the following questions and present any other concerns that you have. This letter should be typed and should be about threequarters to a full page long. Attach it to the front of your essay. • What do you see as your main idea or point? What do you see as your motivating problem? • Which paragraph (except for the introduction) do you think is most successful and why? Which is least successful and why? 6 • What’s the number one question about your essay—its thesis, structure, use of evidence, use of sources, style, etc.—that you’d like your readers to answer for you? What is your specific concern about that topic? 7