The 2013 Pearce Award for Excellence in Written Communication Essay Evaluation Form Essay Title: ______________________________________________________________________________ Exceptional Adequate Weak Comments Focus and Organization The essay should have a clear focus and should stick to that focus throughout. The essay should be on the topic “This I Believe.” The essay should be logically organized. Development The first lines should get the reader’s attention. Each point should be made convincingly, with ample details, examples and/or explanation. Voice The essay projects the writer’s distinct voice; it does not sound stilted or forced. Surface Issues The writer should competently employ standard written American English grammar, mechanics, and spelling. The essay should be between 300 and 500 words (a factor only if you’re trying to decide between two equally good essays) The essay should be entirely the student’s own work, and any use of another writer’s work or ideas should be clearly documented. Other: Reviewer’s feedback to the writer: Please check if any of the following apply: ____First Place ____Second Place ____Honorable Mention