APP reading assessment guidelines: levels 3 to 5 with examples from Standards Files AF1 - use a range of strategies, including accurate decoding of text, to read for meaning Level 5 AF2 - understand, describe, select or retrieve information, events or ideas from texts and use quotation and reference to text AF3 - deduce, infer or interpret information, events or ideas from texts AF4 - identify and comment on the structure and organisation of texts, including grammatical and presentational features at text level AF5 - explain and comment on writers' use of language, including grammatical and literary features at word and sentence level AF6 - identify and comment on writers' purposes and viewpoints, and the overall effect of the text on the reader AF7 - relate texts to their social, cultural and historical traditions Across a range of reading Across a range of reading Across a range of reading Across a range of reading Across a range of reading Across a range of reading Most relevant points clearly identified, including those selected from different places in the text Comments develop explanation of inferred meanings drawing on evidence across the text, e.g. “you know her dad was lying because earlier she saw him take the letter” Standards files Chas y6 (low level 5) Book review of “Coraline” . Comments on Coraline‘s mother develops inferential explanations about characters across the text. “She keeps feeling uncanny jolts in her stomach: she gradually realises that this bizarre woman is masquerading as her mother but is actually a soul hunter, thirsty for an ever-expanding number of souls and Coraline knows her life is being gambled with, like a leaf blown about by the wind…and in truth, I just could not put it down!” Comments on structural choices show some general awareness of writer’s craft, e.g. ‘it tells you all things burglars can do to your house and then the last section explains how the alarm protects you’ Main purpose clearly identified, often through general overview, e.g. ‘the writer is strongly against war and wants to persuade the reader to agree’ Standards files Chas y6 (low level 5), p.11. Goodnight Mr. Tom. Exploration of Will’s dilemma focuses on key themes – the impersonal efficiency of hospital care versus the individual, eccentric love of Mr Tom. Comments identify similarities and differences between texts, or versions, with some explanation, e.g. narrative conventions in traditional tales or stories from different cultures, ballads, newspaper reports Some explanation of how the contexts in which texts are written and read contribute to meaning, e.g. how historical context influenced adverts or war reports form different times/ places; or how a novel relates to when/ where it was written Comments generally supported by relevant textual reference or quotation, even when points made are not always accurate Both bullet points: Standards files Chas y6 (low level 5.) p.11. Goodnight Mr. Tom diary. Selects relevant points for empathetic account, incorporating references to the test/ video version where appropriate. “When I got home I thought it would be alright but it wasn’t. All my mum did was shout, shout, shout! Also she said there was a surprise waiting for me, but it wasn’t much of a surprise to me, she had put a baby in a cardboard box! All she could say was: A bit of discipline, that’s all she needs”. Then my mum accused me of stealing my own birthday presents!” Level 4 NB. All examples here are individual, not across a range of work. Across a range of reading Various features relating to organisation at text level, including form, are clearly identified, e.g. ‘each section starts with a question as if he’s answering he crowd’ Comments make inferences and deductions based on textual evidence, e.g. in drawing conclusions about a character’s feelings on the basis of their speech and actions Standards files Chas y6 (low level 5) p.9 discussion of first impressions of Mr Tom. Some development of explanation which suggests that he is fulfilling criteria for AF3 L5 b2. e.g. Chas notes that at the beginning, Mr Tom seems ‘grumpy’ and is able to refer to the way he says ‘Yes’ very sharply, and is almost rude to the billeting officer, to support this point: “He doesn’t seem to want any children and he is not being helpful.” Across a range of reading Some relevant points Comments make inferences identified based on evidence from different points in the text, e.g. Standards files Trevor y5 (secure interpreting a character’s level 4) p2 Zlata’s diary. Teacher: motive from their actions at How does Zlata feel about the war? different points What words tell you this?” Trevor: Zlata wishes it would stop and that Standards files Trevor y5 (secure her mommy and daddy were happy level 4) p2 Zlata’s diary. Teacher: again. It says they used to be “What words tell you that Zlata is For level 3: Attainment at level 3 for AF2, AF3 and one other AF out of AF’s 1, 4, 5, 6 and 7 For level 4: Attainment at level 4 for AF2 and AF3 and at least one other AF For level 5: ticks at level 5 for any four AFs provided there is level 4 for AF3 Various features of writer’s use of language identified, with some explanation, e.g. “when it gets to the climax they speak in short sentences and quickly which makes it more tense” Comments show some awareness of the effect of writer’s language choices, e.g. “‘inked up’ is a good way of describing how the blackberries go a bluey black colour as they ripen” Standards files Chas y6 (low level 5), p.11. Contrasts the use of language in the two texts focusing on the effect on the reader. “The difference between the vocabulary they use is that this one sounds really friendly and uses words that children would understand really easily. However, this one was written a long time ago and uses some words that that I haven’t heard before so it makes reading a bit harder.” Viewpoint in texts clearly identified with some, often limited explanation, e.g. ‘at the end he knows he’s don wrong and makes the snake sound attractive and mysterious’ General awareness of effect on the reader, with some, often limited, explanation, e.g. “you’d be persuaded to sign up because 25p a week doesn’t seem that much to help someone” Standards files Chas y6 (low level 5), p.7. Comparing two diaries, recognition of effect on the reader. “It (quote from the text) helps you to imagine what it might have been like when the ship started to sink. I think anyone would have been confused and exhausted and very scared.” Across a range of reading Across a range of reading Across a range of reading Across a range of reading Some structural choices identified with simple comment, e.g. ‘he describes the accident first and then he goes back to tell you why the child was in the road’ Standards files Chas y6 (low level 5 – level 4 comment) p.5 Main purpose identified, e.g. ‘it’s all about why going to the dentist is important and how you should look after your teeth’ Some basic features of writer’s use of language identified, e.g. ‘all the questions make you want to find out what happens next’ Standards files Trevor y5 (secure level 4) p3 The Magic Finger. Further comment identifies use of punctuation to develop character. Features common to different texts or versions of the same text identified, with simple comment, e.g. characters, settings, presentational features Simple comments show Standards files Chas y6 (low level some awareness of writer’s 5 – level 4 comment) p.7 viewpoint, e.g. ‘he only tells Comparing two diaries: Simple KS2 Standards files do not have page numbers. Numbers have been ascribed with the cover as page 1. AF1 - use a range of strategies, including accurate decoding of text, to read for meaning Level 3 In most reading Range of strategies used mostly effectively to read with fluency, understanding and expression Letters and Sounds End of Phase 6 p168 ‘The shift from learning to read to reading to learn’ AF2 - understand, describe, select or retrieve information, events or ideas from texts and use quotation and reference to text AF3 - deduce, infer or interpret information, events or ideas from texts AF4 - identify and comment on the structure and organisation of texts, including grammatical and presentational features at text level AF5 - explain and comment on writers' use of language, including grammatical and literary features at word and sentence level AF6 - identify and comment on writers' purposes and viewpoints, and the overall effect of the text on the reader AF7 - relate texts to their social, cultural and historical traditions cheerful. It also says that life is disappearing because the children are not like children. Comments supported by some generally relevant textual reference or quotation e.g. reference is made to appropriate section of text but is unselective and lacks focus Standards files Trevor y5 (secure level 4) p2 Zlata’s diary. Commentary – Trevor gives relevant answers in clear summary form, while not directly quoting from the text, his responses indicate sound understanding of its key themes. optimistic that the war will end and things will go back to normal?” Trevor: “She says that the guns are dying down so that means it must be getting calmer if there is less shooting. She also says that when it all stops they might go back to the usual things.” Journalistic writing: identifies typical structural feature of newspaper reports “It’s news- all of the information is important. First words are written in capitals. We find out who, what, where, why in the first sentence.” Teacher: “How do you think Mr and Mrs Gregg were feeling at this point in the story?” Trevor:…Mrs Gregg has to save her children, not like Mr Gregg, you can tell he’s shaking because he’s got exclamation marks” you goo things about the farm and makes the shop sound boring’ commentaries on similarities and differences between texts. “However, this one was written a long time ago and uses some words that I haven’t heard before so it makes reading a bit harder.” Some basic features of organisation at text level identified e.g, ‘the writer uses bullet points for the main reasons’ Standards files Trevor y5 (secure level 4) p7. Zoos back to Nature. Teacher: “How does the presentation/ layout help to persuade you to take notice? Why are speech marks used?” Trevor: “I like the way the words are highlighted for importance. The author gives dates and examples so that you know what he says is more real. Small paragraphs make it more easy to read and keep your attention. Speech marks make it seem more important and realistic. Nobody would say those words unless they believed them.” In most reading Simple, most obvious points identified though there may be some misunderstanding In most reading Straightforward inference based on a single point of reference in the text, e.g. ‘he In most reading A few basic features of organisation at text level identified with little or no linked comment, e.g. ‘it tells In most reading A few basic features of writer’s use of language identified, but with little or no comment, e.g. ‘ there are e.g. about information from different places in the text Some comments include quotations from or references to text, but not always relevant e.g. often retelling or paraphrasing sections of the text rather than using it to support comment Standards Files Julia Y2 (Secure level 3) p7 both bullet points – Detailed discussion of how birds of prey rip their food, using their beaks not claws, confirms Julia’s engagement with the text and her understanding of what she has read. Inferences often correct, but comments are not always rooted securely in the text or repeat narrative or content Standards files Trevor y5 (secure level 4) p2 Zlata’s diary. Teacher: Does Zlata really feel safe in her flat? How do you know? Trevor: “She feels safe when she is in the corner of a room but she says that she does not like to go near the windows maybe this is because of guns and for safety. People are shooting from the hills. If there is shooting they have to go to the cellar, it is the only place.” was upset because it says “he was crying”’ Responses to text show meaning established at a literal level- “walking good” means “walking carefully” or based on personal speculation, e.g. a response based on what they personally would be feeling rather than feelings of character in the text Standards Files Julia Y2 (Secure level 3) p8. Julia uses her knowledge of the text to answer questions and searches the text to check her interpretation…she can discuss events and character’s feelings, relating them to her own in a similar situation e.g. in a book about snowstorms… For level 3: Attainment at level 3 for AF2, AF3 and one other AF out of AF’s 1, 4, 5, 6 and 7 For level 4: Attainment at level 4 for AF2 and AF3 and at least one other AF For level 5: ticks at level 5 for any four AFs provided there is level 4 for AF3 about all the different things you can do at the zoo’ Standards files Julia Y2 (Secure level 3) p6 Uses terminology like build up, problem, resolution and ending and applied them to the familiar story of the ‘Little Red Hen’ Simple comments on writer’s choices, e.g. “disgraceful” is a good word to show he is upset” Standards files Trevor y5 (secure level 4) p7 Zoos back to nature. Teacher: “Find some words/phrases that describe how the animals must have felt when put in cages or closed up. Trevor: “There are some very effective words such as “cramped”, “tend not to breed” and “become overweight”. “First time … touched a tree” makes you realise how unfair it is. “Metal bars” make you think of a prison. What are the animals punished for? Just so humans can look at them – that is not fair.” lots of adjectives’ or ‘he uses speech marks to show there are lots of people there’ Standards files Julia Y2 (Secure level 3) p7. Discussed why the author used technical language (in a nonfiction book) such as habitat, wingspan and species Simple comment on overall effect on reader, e.g. ‘the way she describes him as “ratlike” and “shifty” makes you think he’s disgusting! Bullet points 2 and 3 Standards files Trevor y5 (secure level 4) p7 Zoos back to nature. Teacher: “Who does the writer compare the animals to? How do we know this and how effective is the writer in getting across his viewpoint?” Trevor: He compares the animals to humans so that you feel ashamed and angry and gives you a real motivation to do something. I feel like protesting, we could make banners and present our debate at the Lord Mayor’s Chamber.” In most reading Comments identify main purpose, e.g. ‘the writer doesn’t like violence’ Standards files Jason Y5 (Secure level 3) p4. Newspaper report “Child slaves work to save their families”. Simple comment on the main purpose without development. Question: why do you think this article was written? Jason: “So we could know about it”. Express personal response but with little awareness of writer’s viewpoint or effect on reader e.g. ‘she was just horrible like my nan is sometimes’ Standards files Jason Y5 (Secure level 3) Same newspaper report Valid personal response with implicit reference to text. Question: Think about how the report is written. How does the report make you feel? Jason:” Angry – I want to do something to stop it”. Simple comment on the effect that the reader’s or writer’s context has on the meaning of texts, e.g. historical context, place, social relationships Standards files Chas y6 (low level 5 – level 4 comment). p.7 Comparing two diaries: Awareness of impact of context on text. I think the diary would be different if it was written by a girl who had grown up in England because she would not be surprised by how big the airports are or how many people have a car”. In most reading Some simple connections between texts identified. E.g. similarities in plot, topic, or books by same author, about same characters Standards file Trevor, (Secure level 4) – level 3 in this AF. Teacher's question: “Which of these advertisements is the more successful?” Trevor: ..“it is still the better advert because it is better laid out to read and attracts your attention. The Full of Beans advert is not so interesting.” Recognition of some features of the context of texts, e.g. historical setting, social or cultural background KS2 Standards files do not have page numbers. Numbers have been ascribed with the cover as page 1.