Persuasive Writing: Make Me Agree! (6th Grade) Date August 2002 Unit Overview Title Persuasive Writing: Make Me Agree! Focus Questions Can you convince someone to do something you want or agree with something you say? What makes an ineffective argument? Unit Summary Through use of technology and the KSD Writing Curriculum for 6th grade, students will understand and apply elements of persuasive writing and the writing process to create a powerful essay. Subject Area: Writing Grade Level: 6th Grade Standards Essential Academic Learning Requirements: (Writing) 1.1 develop concept and design; 1.3 apply writing conventions 2.1 write for different audiences; 2.2 write for different purposes; 2.3 write in a variety of forms 3.1 prewrite, 3.2 draft, 3.3 revise, 3.4 edit, 3.5 publish 4.1 assess own strengths and needs for improvement; 4.2 seek and offer feedback KSD Curriculum Frameworks (or SLOs): Writing: write persuasively; develop reasoned arguments and support through logical explanation; utilize various types of punctuation; apply rules for capitalization; use sound paragraph breaks; consider audience and purpose at all stages of the writing process; include experiences or examples to support opinion; writes well rounded, researched, and reasoned texts on a variety of topics and themes; maintain a perspective or argue point of view from third person as well as first person; use all the steps of the writing process; evaluates own work and that of others for the craft of writing as well as the content; accept feedback, revise, and edit own writing when appropriate. KSD Technology: Students will insert information into a template. Students will type text into a word processing document. Students will format text, styles, colors, fonts, and size. Students will select, crop, move and resize images. Students will use electronic resources to practice skills and remediate deficits. Learning Outcomes Students will: Understand the key components of a persuasive writing piece Identify effective and ineffective arguments in writing samples Write a persuasive essay, incorporating the writing process Unit Scope and Sequence Immersion Discovery Modeled Writing Guided and Interactive Writing Guided Writing Independent Writing Reflection Persuasive Writing: Make Me Agree! (6th Grade) Student Assessment Students and teachers can use the KSD Persuasive Writing Rubric Students can also walk through a revision/assessment process for a persuasive essay at this site: http://www.eduplace.com/kids/hme/6_8/evalstation/index.html Unit Implementation Instructional Strategies Grouping Options Scaffolds Begin Persuasive Writing Unit with Step 1: Immersion from the KSD Elementary Writing Program Grade 6 Manual (p. 1-2 in Gr. Level Materials section) Integrating the process with the websites provided. Whole Group instruction if you are able to project the linked essays. -Picture book: Mom, Can I Have a Stegosaurus, Mom? Can I? Please!? by Lois G. Grambling If you can’t find it in your school library, try the King County Library System catalog link: http://www.kcls.org/webpac/kclswebpac.html This unit is also available in a PowerPoint format with links to each of the items there as well: Persuasive Writing PPT To edit the PowerPoint presentation, double-click to open it, then right-click and choose Edit Slides. You can edit and/or save from there. Possibly partners or small groups if students are teaming up at computer stations. -Scroll down to third or fourth page of these links for some nice examples: Writing Sample1 from Ontario Ministry of Education Writing Sample 2 from Ontario Ministry of Education (These can also both be saved as an Adobe Acrobat file if you prefer, and they include further lesson ideas.) -Persuasive essay sample from Lesson plan by Paul Rombough/Chateauguay (Valley High School): http://meltingpot.fortunecity.com/gregory/302/essaylessononpersuasion2.htm#sample -Persuasive Essay Examples from Bellingham School District: http://www.bham.wednet.edu/exposit/stmp8H.htm (Good example of supporting details) http://www.bham.wednet.edu/exposit/ad1H.htm (Some examples of supporting details) Houghton-Mifflin sample student essay with some nice examples of paragraph transition: http://eduplace.com/kids/hme/6_8/showcase/56/persuasive.html Persuasive Writing: Make Me Agree! (6th Grade) Step 2 in KSD Manual: Lesson on Discovery (p. 3 in Gr. Level Materials section...Parts 1,2,3): Discovering and identifying effective and ineffective elements of persuasive writing using Per. Unit Table #1, Previous websites from Step 1, and new links provided. Step 2 in KSD Manual: Discovering and Identifying Persuasive Writing Components (p. 5 and 6) Step 3 in KSD Manual: Modeled Writing (p. 1213) Teacher and Students brainstorm a persuasive topic and move through the process of writing a persuasive essay together. Refer to the Key Components from the KSD Writing Curriculum. Use the Inspiration template provided and frequently refer to the outline form to clarify essential understanding of arguments. Evaluate using the Rubric from the KSD Writing curriculum and/or the Eduplace website. Whole group instruction with projection device Individual if printing out hard copies or 1:1 student/ computer situation Partners or small groups when applicable (Teacher may also project the essay, and students may take notes in the Table at computer stations.) Whole group instruction with projector for evaluation stage Partners when appropriate for evaluating/checking work Example of a weak/ineffective persuasive writing piece. http://www.bham.wednet.edu/exposit/ad2L-M.htm http://www.bham.wednet.edu/exposit/stmp9L-M.htm Baseball Essay The baseball essay be printed out or viewed on computer screens. It is saved as a template so it can be used for Key Component Labeling later in Step 2 if desired. *See mgmt. tip below. (Note: .dot file is a template.) Persuasive Table One Key Components of Persuasive Writing Follow the steps on p. 5 in the writing manual and use the following resources: Persuasive Essay Rubric Don't Waste Your Time Essay Use the links to the “Don’t Let Others Waste Your Time” essay* and the Persuasive Key Component Labels* to do the first task rather than actual cutting and pasting. They will need to open both and then click on the rectangular windows in the bottom menu bar to navigate back and forth between them. Directions on copying and pasting Key Persuasive labels are on the Persuasive Key Component Labels Component Label template. Persuasive Writing Template Persuasive Writing components can be found in this Persuasive essay sample from Lesson plan for Paul Rombough/Chateauguay Valley High School Key Components of Persuasive Writing Persuasive Essay Rubric This may be a great time to model using the Student Evaluation online. Persuasive Writing: Make Me Agree! (6th Grade) Steps 4 and 5 in KSD Manual: Guided and Interactive Writing (p. 14) Brainstorm another topic, possibly from a current content area being studied. Work together on Arguments/ Counterarguments, but students should have a stronger participation in writing the essay. Complete the essay using the same tools as Step 3. The grammar link at eduplace.com is provided for needed skill review. Whole Class Small Groups Persuasive Writing Template Persuasive Unit Argument/Counterargument Table Online activities for grammar practice: http://www.eduplace.com/kids/hme/6_8/proofread/index.html Persuasive Writing components can be found in this Persuasive essay sample from Lesson plan for Paul Rombough/Chateauguay Valley High School Key Components of Persuasive Writing Persuasive Essay Rubric If using Microsoft Word, this Persuasive Essay Hidden Text document may be used by students to support their writing. Persuasive Essay Hidden Text In order to use this hidden text document, once open select the ¶ button (Show/Hide)on your toolbar. The Persuasive Essay directions will appear. Students should type their essays in the white spaces. Then, to save or print, select the ¶ button again to once again hide the directions. Link to revising and editing guide questions and examples: http://www.eduplace.com/kids/hme/6_8/evalstation/index.html Step 6 in KSD Manual: Guided Writing (P. 1516) Use the Inspiration template to prewrite and organize ideas. Prior to rough drafting, use SchoolKiT EDclass to teach a mini-lesson on adjectives and adverbs. This can be found in the General folder within the Language Arts folder. You want the one titled Using Adjectives and Adverbs. After this mini-lesson you can decide whether to require a certain number of more descriptive words in their writing. The grammar link is provided for needed skill review. Partners or Small Groups Use Persuasive Essay Inspiration template linked in Step 5 Use Persuasive Essay Hidden Text document linked in Step 5 SchoolKiT EDclass module: Using Adjectives and Adverbs (#E85) Online activities for grammar practice: http://www.eduplace.com/kids/hme/6_8/proofread/index.html Link to revising and editing guide questions and examples: http://www.eduplace.com/kids/hme/6_8/evalstation/index.html Persuasive Writing: Make Me Agree! (6th Grade) Step 7 in KSD Manual: Independent Writing (P. 17-18) Continue process using whatever templates best meet the needs of your students. See #13 on p. 18 for publishing ideas. Use Persuasive Essay Inspiration template and Persuasive Essay Hidden Text template linked in Step 5. Link to revising and editing guide questions and examples: http://www.eduplace.com/kids/hme/6_8/evalstation/index.html Use Persuasive Essay Rubric linked in Step 5. Accommodation Options ELL / IP Students Determine which examples from the first few lessons are closer to the levels of your individual students and give them a printed version as well. When using the Inspiration Template, you could choose to color the text in the outline and in the map so that each section has color-coded information. This support would provide a great visual to help see what belongs in each paragraph. The online grammar activities at the following site allows for selecting a variety of skills to practice, excellent for individual remediation! http://www.eduplace.com/kids/hme/6_8/proofread/index.html Highly-Capable Students (or enrichment/ extension activity) Link to a web quest regarding the reintroduction of wolves to Yellowstone: http://www.esc20.net/etprojects/formats/webquests/fall99/wolf/default.html (Some links are outdated but enough are active to make this worthwhile for a springboard.) Link to a web quest about manatees and boater rights in Florida: http://www.gettysburg.edu/~femmma01/Webquest/home.html Management/Organization Tips *Each time the templates are used, it is best that students immediately do a “Save as” and rename as their own document in a separate student or class file. After that point, they can just choose to save, and it will be updated. Approximate Time Needed (Example: 45 minutes, 4 hours, 1 year, etc.) Lessons will range from 30-60 minutes. The unit can take anywhere from two weeks to two months depending on how it is scheduled. Prerequisite Skills Familiarization with the writing process and 6 Traits Introductory experience with word processing entry Materials and Resources Required for Unit Adopted Print Materials: KSD 6th grade Writing Program Manual Adopted and other Audio/Visual: Supplemental Resources (including Internet resources): Supplies: Technology – Hardware (Click boxes of all equipment needed.) Computer(s) VCR Projection System (if doing whole group instruction) Printer Video Camera Camera Digital Camera Scanner Video Conferencing Television Laser Disk Other Technology – Software (Click boxes of all software needed.) Microsoft Word Microsoft Front Page KidPix Persuasive Writing: Make Me Agree! (6th Grade) Microsoft Excel Microsoft PowerPoint Publisher Microsoft Internet Explorer SchoolKiT Encarta Reference Materials Inspiration Clicker 4 Image Blender/Photo Editor Optional Technology Extensions Create a public service announcement using digital video editing, create a brochure in Microsoft Publisher, create a PowerPoint presentation to present to a large group Key Word Search persuasion, writing, argument, counterargument, 6th grade Author First and Last Name Jody Carder and Karen Marez School Name Soos Creek Elementary and Covington Elementary Email Address jcarder@kent.k12.wa.us, kmarez@kent.k12.wa.us