Lesson Plan Template Lesson Plan Template Grade/Content Area 10th grade - English Language Arts Lesson Title State Standards: GLEs/GSEs NCTE Context of the Lesson Opportunities to Learn Literary Nostalgia - Connecting themes across texts GSE(s): Reading 10-4.2, 10-4.5, 10-8.1 Writing 10-3.2, 10-3.3 Oral Communication: 10-1.1, 10-1.2, 10-1.3, 10-1.4 NCTE: 1, 3, 5, 11, 12 Students have read up to page 185 in Padma Venkatraman’s novel, Climbing the Stairs. In class, the students have been discussing character and theme. Discussion has also included the importance of the library and the significant role books play in Vidya’s life. Students are provided with a graphic organizer (Support for Idea) to aid in organizing and synthesizing information as well as providing them with a handson strategy for analyzing literature. The teacher will state directions orally and demonstrate visually is necessary. The lesson incorporates opportunities to learn in all modalities. Visually, students are reading the texts and worksheets. Aurally, the students are discussing information in groups and as a whole class. Kinesthetically, the students are writing on their worksheets and in their journals. The lesson also addresses Gardener’s Multiple Intelligences, including linguistic (writing a constructed response and a journal response), interpersonal (working in groups), and intrapersonal (making personal connections between the word nostalgia and their own lives). Environment factors: Students will be working independently and in groups of 4 (self-selected). For this reason, ample space and an organized classroom set-up [i.e. the desks have been already placed in groups] are necessary to ensure a productive use of time. Materials: Lamont, Anne. Bird by Bird: Some Instructions on Writing and Life. New York: Anchor Books, 1995. 15. LINK Brainstorming Activity Adapted from Buehl, Doug. “Brainstorming Prior Knowledge.” Classroom Strategies for Interactive Learning. Delaware: International Reading Association, 2001. 31. Oreo Cookie Constructed Response Handout & Rubric Adapted from Nardone, J. “The Hamburger Paragraph.” Rhode Island: Narragansett High School, 2008. Support for Idea Graphic Organizer The United Themes of Literature Essay directions and rubric Venkatraman, Padma. Climbing the Stairs. New York: Penguin Groups, 2008. Wordsworth, William. “I wandered lonely as a cloud.” The Norton Bethany Lisi Page 1 of 11 Lesson Plan Template Anthology of English Literature. Volume 2. Ed. Stephen Greenblatt. New York: W.W. Norton & Company, 2006. 305. Objectives In writing a constructed response, students will interpret Henry Wordsworth’s poem “I wandered lonely as a cloud”, and connect its theme to Climbing the Stairs, using a strong topic sentence, three points of evidence, and a conclusive statement with few mechanical errors. In writing a formal essay, students will select a theme from the text of their choice (i.e. music lyrics, another piece of literature, or a piece of fine art) and relate it to a theme in Climbing the Stairs, demonstrating proficiency in all areas of The United Themes of Literature rubric. Instructional Procedures Opening: 1. The students will engage in the brainstorming activity LINK (list, inquire, note, know) to activate prior knowledge on the word nostalgia. The teacher will begin by writing the word nostalgia on the overhead and providing the definition: “A feeling of happiness, sadness, and longing when recalling a person, place, or event from the past.” Let’s look at this word nostalgia and read its definition. By yourselves on a blank sheet of paper, I want you to take some time and list associations or other words that you feel connect or relate to the word nostalgia. They can pertain to your own lives, your families, friends, or feelings. If you want to give specific examples or events, that’s fine too. 2. Students are given three minutes to complete lists. The teacher will ask for associations and write around the focus word on the overhead. The teacher will prompt the less-active students to offer terms first to ensure everyone participates. Only one term per student is accepted. 3. The teacher will encourage the students to inquire about the offered terms. Ok class, let’s look at all the terms we came up with. Do some of them stand out to you? Are there any that need some elaboration or clarification? Teacher directs student inquirers to ask their questions directly to the student who offered the term. Class demonstrates respect for terms offered. 4. The teacher will turn off overhead and instruct students to flip over their papers and note what they’ve learned about the word. You are going to write down what you’ve learned about the word nostalgia from our class discussion today. This can be a combination of what you already knew or associated with the word nostalgia, and what you learned in our discussion. Let’s also write a prediction: How could the word nostalgia connect to the book, Climbing the Stairs? Students are given a few minutes to complete this task. Engagement: 5. The teacher will ask students to take out their book, Climbing the Stairs by Padma Venkatraman and begin a discussion recapping what they’ve conferred about in past classes. What have we been discussing with regards to Vidya and the library? Why does she treasure that time so much? What do the books allow Vidya to do? Escape? Do they give her comfort? Bethany Lisi Page 2 of 11 Lesson Plan Template 6. The teacher allows for students to discuss and recall before directing them to a particular passage. Let’s turn to the bottom of page 107. “Within minutes, I had discovered Wordsworth and journeyed with him to hills and valleys in the British Isles. By the time I returned downstairs, I knew a verse from a poem by heart, “I wandered lonely as a cloud/that floats on high o’er vales and hills/when all at once I saw a crowd,/a host of golden daffodils.” Does anyone know this poem? It says the author is from the British Isles – do you think this is important considering what we know of England and India’s relationship? This poem was written by William Wordsworth in 1804. How many years apart was this poem written and the time period in which Vidya lives? About 136 or so years, right? Wow! What could this poem and Vidya’s life have in common? Why would the author mention this poem specifically in this novel? 7. The teacher will pass out copies of the poem to students and provide them with guiding questions before reading. While we’re reading this poem, let’s think about why Vidya would be reading this. What connection would the theme of this poem have with Vidya’s life? 8. The teacher will read the title out loud to the class and activate student predictions with class discussion. The poem is called, “I wandered lonely as a cloud.” What tone do you think the narrator will take here? Do you predict this poem to be happy? What is the narrator comparing himself to – what is the simile? 9. The teacher will read the first stanza out loud and begin asking comprehension questions to the class. What is the plot of the poem so far? What is going on here? The narrator sees daffodils by a lake, dancing in the breeze. Does he see a few daffodils? No! Tell me how you figured that out. He sees a host, a crowd of daffodils. How does this sight contrast with his “lonely cloud” feeling? 10. The teacher or student volunteer will read the second stanza. The teacher continues to ask comprehension questions. What is the narrator comparing daffodils to? Why would he bring up stars? It’s like counting grains of sand – counting the stars in the sky. It’s so vast. He seems to be playing up the number of daffodils by comparing them to the stars. What words does he use to exaggerate the number of daffodils? Never-ending, continuous, ten thousand. What is the figurative language term we use for an exaggeration? Hyperbole! 11. The teacher or student volunteer will read the third stanza. The teacher continues to ask comprehension questions. How do you think the narrator is feeling after this stanza? Content? Happy? Where does it say this – point it out in the text. Let’s read the last two lines again. “I gazed – and gazed – but little thought/What wealth the show to me had brought (ll 17-18). What is he saying here? Did he enjoy this beautiful sight while he was experiencing it? Let’s read on. 12. The teacher or student volunteer will read the final stanza. The teacher continues to ask comprehension questions. Bethany Lisi Page 3 of 11 Lesson Plan Template What do you think is our “inward eye?” Our memory. So, could we say the poet is describing this scene to us from his memory and not as it’s happening right now? Where does it say this in the text? It says, “On my couch I lie” (l. 19) – he is not in the field right then. He’s reminiscing. The memory of the daffodils brings nostalgia to the narrator – of a beautiful, happy time that he longs to see again. 13. The teacher will instruct students to write a potential theme for this poem quietly in their notebooks. After a few minutes, volunteers are asked to write their themes on the board. As a class, a common theme is agreed upon by discussing and combining student responses. We could say that a possible theme of the poem is, “Moving events can bring nostalgia when they are taken for granted during the time they occurred.” If this is one possible theme, why do you think Vidya could relate to this poem? What examples, from the text, could you use to support your thoughts? 14. Students work in groups to find textual support for their theories and fill out the graphic organizer, “Support for my Idea,” which the teacher has passed out. Teacher walks around to groups and observes, adding guiding support if needed. 15. After about 7-10 minutes, the teacher brings the class back together asks for student suggestions and textual evidence. Why do you think I asked you to give me support from the text? Why is it good to have evidence? Does it make your theory more credible? 16. The teacher will pass out Constructed Response handouts and review the guidelines for making an “Oreo Cookie Paragraph.” You are now going to write a constructed response to the prompt: “What theme does the poem, “I wandered lonely as a cloud,” by William Wordsworth and the novel, Climbing the Stairs, by Padma Venkatraman have in common? With a constructed response, remember you want to think of it as the “Oreo Cookie Paragraph.” What do I mean by that? You need your top cookie – your topic sentence. What does the topic sentence do? It gives the reader an idea of what the paragraph is going to be about. Then you need your cream – good stuff, which is your evidence. Now, if we’re trying to find a common theme between two pieces of work, would all our evidence come from one source? No – you want to give evidence from both pieces of work. What’s the magic number for pieces of evidence? Three – but of course, if you can find more to support your topic sentence, it is always a plus. What else do we need to complete our Oreo Cookie? The bottom cookie! This is your conclusion sentence. Is this sentence a rewording of the topic sentence? No! It should be a new and interesting sentence that wraps the whole paragraph together in a nice little cookie. 17. Students work independently to complete constructed response, which is collected for an informal assessment. Closure: 18. The teacher will instruct students to journal write on the following prompt, encouraging metacognition and a discussion of what they’ve Bethany Lisi Page 4 of 11 Lesson Plan Template learned in class. “For some of us, books are important as almost anything else on earth. What a miracle it is that out of these small, flat, rigid squares of paper unfolds world after world after world, worlds that sing to you, comfort and quiet or excite you.” –Anne Lamott Prompt: Reflecting upon what we discussed and learned in class today, what conclusions could you draw about the importance of literature in life and the role it plays in connecting cultures? *Hint: Think about the fact that Climbing the Stairs and “I wandered lonely as a cloud,” were written more than a hundred of years apart and in different countries and yet, they share a common theme. 19. The teacher will assign homework and explain the next assessment, which is a formal essay to be written over the course of the week. There are many themes found in Climbing the Stairs besides this one we wrote about today, right? What other themes have we found? [Students offer suggestions.] Your assignment is to choose another text that shares a common theme with Climbing the Stairs. Now, this text could be another piece of literature, music lyrics, or a piece of art. You are going to write a formal essay, which means a few “Oreo Cookie paragraphs,” explaining this common theme in the form of a thesis statement, and then giving textual support for your idea from both texts. We will be working on thesis statements and this essay over the next couple of classes. For tonight, start thinking about the different themes in Climbing the Stairs and where you might find these themes in other texts. Assessment 1. Collect Constructed Response paragraphs and informally assess students’ abilities to use critical thinking to synthesize information and organize it into a clear, cohesive paragraph. 2. Collect formal essays on a common theme and formally assess students’ proficiency using The United Themes of Literature rubric. Reflections Student Work Sample 1 – Approaching Proficiency: Student Work Sample 2 – Proficient: Student Work Sample 3 – Exceeds Proficiency: Lesson Implementation: Bethany Lisi Page 5 of 11 Lesson Plan Template “I wandered lonely as a cloud” By William Wordsworth I wandered lonely as a cloud That floats on high o'er vales and hills, When all at once I saw a crowd, A host, of golden daffodils; Beside the lake, beneath the trees, Fluttering and dancing in the breeze. Continuous as the stars that shine And twinkle on the milky way, They stretched in never-ending line Along the margin of a bay: Ten thousand saw I at a glance, Tossing their heads in sprightly dance. 10 The waves beside them danced; but they Out-did the sparkling waves in glee: A poet could not but be gay, In such a jocund company: I gazed--and gazed--but little thought What wealth the show to me had brought: For oft, when on my couch I lie In vacant or in pensive mood, They flash upon that inward eye Which is the bliss of solitude; And then my heart with pleasure fills, And dances with the daffodils. 20 1804. Bethany Lisi Page 6 of 11 Lesson Plan Template Constructed Responses (or the Oreo Cookie Paragraph) in Literature Paragraph Construction First sentence = Top of the Cookie = Controlling Idea Always ask: Did I answer the question? Does the sentence relate to the question? Does my topic sentence take a position on the question? Can I prove the position I took? Next 1-16 Sentences = The Cream of the Cookie = Proof, Support, Details Always ask: Did I use several references to the text to prove my topic sentence? Did I prove, with my evidence, the position I took in my topic sentence? Did I explain/elaborate on the evidence in my own words? Last 1 or 2 sentences = Bottom of the Cookie = Conclusion Always ask: Did I provide a sense of closure to the paragraph? Did I include what I learned? The A-HA!? Adapted from Narragansett High School English Departments’ “Hamburger Paragraph” - J. Nardone September 2008 Bethany Lisi Page 7 of 11 Lesson Plan Template Constructed Responses (or the Oreo Cookie Paragraph) in Literature Topic Sentence Body Conclusion Conventions Exceeds Meets Below The topic sentence clearly and effectively answers the question. The topic sentence clearly answers the question. The topic sentence does not answer the question and/or is not related to the question. The topic sentence expresses a clearly articulated position that can be supported. Content is always clear, concise, relevant, and accurate. A logical progression of ideas and supporting information uses text references to prove the topic sentence. The topic sentence expresses an articulated position that can be supported. Content is clear, concise, relevant, and accurate. A logical progression of ideas and supporting information uses text references to prove the topic sentence. The position taken in the topic sentence is supported convincingly by specific and ample references to the text. The position taken in the topic sentence is supported with specific references to the text. The conclusion effectively brings closure to the paragraph. Very few mechanical errors are present. They in no way detract from the overall effectiveness of the writing. The conclusion clearly brings closure to the paragraph. Few mechanical errors are present. They may detract slightly from the overall effectiveness of the writing. The topic sentence is not clearly articulated or it cannot be supported. Content may not be clear, concise, relevant, and/or accurate. Content may not have a logical progression of ideas and supporting information. The content does not use or inadequately uses text references to prove the topic sentence. The position taken in the topic sentence is not proven with references to text or the references are unclear. The conclusion does not bring closure to the paragraph. Mechanical errors are present and may detract from the effectiveness of the writing. Adapted from Narragansett High School English Departments’ “Hamburger Paragraph” - J. Nardone September 2008 Bethany Lisi Page 8 of 11 Lesson Plan Template NAME: _____________________________________________ Support for My Idea Book Name::_________________________________________________________ Possible Theme: Possible Theme: Supporting Facts Possible Theme: Supporting Facts Supporting Facts 1. 1. 1. 2. 2. 2. 3. 3. 3. 4. 4. 4. Bethany Lisi Page 9 of 11 Lesson Plan Template The United Themes of Literature Essay Literature: (n) written works with artistic value, e.g. fiction, poetry, and drama; or a body of musical compositions or song lyrics; or printed matter such as brochures or flyers that give information. For this particular essay, however, literature may also include pieces of fine art. The Objective: To write a thoughtful, analytical essay identifying a common theme found in Climbing the Stairs and the text of your choice (i.e. another piece of written literature, music lyrics, or a piece of fine art). The Process: 1. Begin by thinking of themes found in Climbing the Stairs and create a brainstorming list. Pick one theme that you find particularly interesting and begin searching for it in other texts. 2. When you find a promising text, look for at least three examples/pieces of evidence that this text displays the same theme as the one you chose from Climbing the Stairs. 3. Begin drafting an outline of your essay by creating your thesis statement first. Your pieces of evidence must support your thesis statement. From there, create your “Oreo Cookie paragraphs” containing your support. Finish your draft by writing introduction and conclusion paragraphs. Remember – the first attempt at writing is a draft! This means you should rework your writing a few times before you hand in a polished piece. Try to be creative in your introduction and conclusion. Hook me into your paper and leave me satisfied and excited! The Format: Your essay should be 4-5 pages in length, 1” margins, 12-point type, Times New Roman, doublespaced. This assignment is due __________________________. The Product: An analytical essay that proficiently demonstrates a clear focus, relevant support, and logical organization. For a complete list of components, please see the attached rubric. Bethany Lisi Page 10 of 11 Lesson Plan Template The United Themes of Literature Essay Student Name: ________________________________________ CATEGORY Focus on Topic (Content) Support for Topic (Content/Body) Exceeds Meets - Proficient There is one clear, wellMain idea is clear but the focused topic. Main idea supporting information is stands out and is supported by general. detailed information. The thesis statement expresses The thesis statement expresses an articulated position that can a clearly articulated position be supported. that can be supported. Below The main idea is not clear. There is a seemingly random collection of information. Content is always clear, concise, relevant, and accurate. A logical progression of ideas and supporting information uses text references to prove the topic sentence. Content may not be clear, concise, relevant, and/or accurate. Content may not have a logical progression of ideas and supporting information. The content does not use or inadequately uses text references to prove the topic sentence. Content is clear, concise, relevant, and accurate. A logical progression of ideas and supporting information uses text references to prove the topic sentence. The position taken in the topic The position taken in the topic sentence is supported with sentence is supported specific references to the text. convincingly by specific and ample references to the text The position taken in the topic sentence is not proven with references to text or the references are unclear. The introduction clearly states the main topic and previews the structure of the paper, but is not particularly inviting to the reader. Details are placed in a logical Details are placed in a logical order and the way they are order, but the way in which they presented effectively keeps the are presented/introduced interest of the reader. sometimes makes the writing less interesting. The conclusion is strong and The conclusion is recognizable leaves the reader with a and ties up almost all the loose feeling that they understand ends. what the writer is "getting at." There is no clear introduction of the main topic or structure of the paper. Sources (Content) All sources used for quotes and facts are credible and cited correctly. All sources used for quotes and facts are credible and most are cited correctly. Recognition of Reader (Voice) The reader's questions are anticipated and answered thoroughly and completely. The reader's questions are anticipated and answered to some extent. Many sources used for quotes and facts are less than credible (suspect) and/or are not cited correctly. The reader is left with several questions. Grammar & Spelling Very few mechanical errors are present. They in no way (Conventions) detract from the overall effectiveness of the writing. Few mechanical errors are present. They may detract slightly from the overall effectiveness of the writing. Introduction (Organization) Sequencing (Organization) Conclusion (Organization) Bethany Lisi The introduction is inviting, states the main topic and previews the structure of the paper. The thesis statement is not clearly articulated or it cannot be supported. Many details are not in a logical or expected order. There is little sense that the writing is organized. The conclusion does not bring closure to the paragraph. Mechanical errors are present and may detract from the effectiveness of the writing. Page 11 of 11