Name ____________________________________________ HR ________________ Date_________________ PERSUASIVE ESSAY RUBRIC CATEGORY 4 3 2 1 Introduction and Uses an effective lead strategy Clearly introduces the topic in an engaging way. You have a Thesis Statement to clearly introduce the topic and has a strong thesis statement that clearly expresses your opinion. Organization (Paragraphs) You have two supporting paragraphs that each contain a clear topic sentence which supports your thesis statement. Each paragraph contains details which support the topic sentence. Evidence/Support Three or more reasons are (Persuasiveness) very well supported with research- based or personalexperience based facts and details. The essay is highly persuasive. Introduces the topic and/or Does not introduce the topic problem in a simple way. Your and your thesis statement is thesis statement that expresses thesis statement does not unclear or not present. your opinion on your topic. accurately summarize the opinion. You have two supporting paragraphs but they do not each contain a separate and distinct topic sentence that supports your thesis. You have too few or very disorganized supporting paragraphs that do not clearly illuminate your thesis statement. Your essay is not organized in such a way that the reader can distinguish supporting paragraphs from the introduction. Two or more reasons are well supported with research- based or personal-experience based facts and details. The essay is persuasive. Reasons are partially supported with researchbased or personal-experience based facts and details. The essay is not persuasive enough. Reasons are not supported with research- based or personal-experience based facts and details. The essay is not persuasive. Conclusion Provides a strong, highly persuasive conclusion that restates the thesis, summarizes key points, and ends with a prediction, call to action, or scare statement. Provides a persuasive conclusion and restates the thesis, but may be missing key points and/or a prediction, call to action, or scare statement. Provides a conclusion, but it is Does not provide a not persuasive enough and is conclusion. missing the required thesis, key points, and/or a prediction, call to action, or scare statement. C.U.P.S. Great diligence produced a piece with no errors in capitalization, word usage, punctuation, or spelling. The piece has few errors in capitalization, word usage, punctuation, or spelling. The piece has many errors in capitalization, word usage, punctuation, or spelling. Total Points ________ = _________% Comments A B C D F The piece has so many errors in capitalization, word usage, punctuation, or spelling that it is difficult to read. Persuasive Essay Format 4 paragraphs Introduction (one paragraph) Introduce your topic with a statement and hook your reader. Explain both sides of the argument. Give an interesting/shocking detail that will engage your reader. Write a strong thesis statement that explains your opinion about the topic Body (two paragraphs) 1. Write a paragraph with a topic sentence and supporting details. Include your reasons and evidence or quotes from your research. Types of evidence Hypothetical example (What if…, Imagine…) Real-life example o (this happened to you or someone you know) Testimony (quote an expert) o In the words of ... o According to ... o Many experts agree… Data (surveys, polls, research, percentages) o A recent survey showed… o The latest research proves 2. Finally, write a counter argument paragraph that addresses what the opposing side would say about your topic. Give a rebuttal and knock down each point with your own feelings, opinions, or researched facts. Suggested sentence starters for counter: “On the other hand, some people believe ______...” “One may argue _________; however, _____...” Conclusion (one paragraph) Tell the reader what to do or how to think! Restate your thesis in another way. Summarize the key points to support your side. Leave the reader feeling persuaded or at least challenged with a final personal comment. o This personal comment can include a prediction, a call to action, or a scare Suggested sentence starters for conclusion: “We need to…” “It’s our responsibility to …” “It’s important to…” “In order to______, we must…” “It would be to our benefit to…” Persuasive words list: -convince -logic -clarify -eliminate -overcome -resist -unleash -imperative -truth -evidence -consider -focus -prevent -shatter -transform -important -fact -support -popular -improve -reconsider -solve -reduce -take action -agree -debate -must -inspire -realize -stop -explore -need -research -discover -lead -respond -succeed -choose PERSUASIVE ESSAY TOPIC Choose a debate topic. Turn the topic into a question and list the pros and cons. Choose a side and research the topic to find support for your opinions. Keeping animals in zoos Using animal fur for coats Recycling Beauty contests Homework Helmets Aliens Donating organs Smoking Vegetarian or meat-eater Celebrities or athletes as role models Keeping exotic animals as pets (chimps, tigers) Military women in combat Animals used in circuses Physical education Facebook for kids Owning certain breeds of dogs (pit bulls) Electric cars-hybrids Conserving energy Conserving water Caffeine for kids Animal testing Violent video games Athletes and drug tests Co-ed sports teams (girls and boys play together) Name ____________________________________ Date _______________ Topic ________________________________ Question: ________________________________________________________________ PROS/YES (reasons for) CONS/NO (reasons against)