including a close study of The Burnt Stick by Anthony Hill and Onion Tears by Diana Kidd A teaching unit for Stage 4 English with links to ESL pedagogy English Stage 4 January 2007 NSW Department of Education and Training Curriculum K-12 Directorate http://www.curriculumsupport.education.nsw.gov.au/secondary/english/ Page 1 of 12 English Syllabus Stage 4 Outcomes (Focus outcomes for this unit are in bold type) 1. A student responds to and composes texts for understanding, interpretation, critical analysis and pleasure. 2. A student uses a range of processes for responding and composing texts. 3. A student responds to and composes texts in different technologies. 4. A student uses and describes language forms and features, and structures of texts appropriate to different purposes, audiences and contexts. 5. A student makes informed language choices to shape meaning with accuracy, clarity and coherence. 6. A student draws on experience, information and ideas to imaginatively and interpretively respond to and compose texts. 7. A student thinks critically and interpretively about information, ideas and arguments to respond to and compose texts 8. A student makes connections between and among texts. 9. A student demonstrates understanding that texts express views of their broadening world and their relationships within it. 10. A student identifies, considers and appreciates cultural expression in texts. 11. A student uses, reflects on and assesses individual and collaborative skills for learning. The dimensions and elements of the NSW model of pedagogy Intellectual Quality Quality Learning Environment Significance Deep Knowledge (DK) Explicit Quality Criteria (EQC) Background Knowledge (BK) Deep Understanding (DU) Engagement (E) Cultural Knowledge (CK) Problematic Knowledge (PK) High Expectations (HE) Knowledge Integration (KI) Higher-Order Thinking (HOT) Social Support (SS) Inclusivity (I) Metalanguage (M) Students’ Self-Regulation (SS-R) Connectedness (C) Substantive Communication (SC) Student Direction (SD) Narrative (N) English Stage 4 January 2007 NSW Department of Education and Training Curriculum K-12 Directorate http://www.curriculumsupport.education.nsw.gov.au/secondary/english/ Page 2 of 12 Outcomes ESL scales links Students learn about: Teaching and learning activities Resources Quality teaching dimensions and elements Introducing the unit 11.12 outcomes-based learning Use the unit overview to discuss with the class the aims of the unit, the focus outcomes to be addressed and the nature of the teaching and learning activities in which they will be involved as well as the mode and requirements of the end of unit assessment task. Student/teacher information sheet 1: Unit overview HE Significance: In addition to introducing students to the concept of cultural identity discuss the meaning of ‘literature’ and specifically ‘Australian literature’. Ask the school librarian to put together a collection of age appropriate examples of Australian literature including novels, short stories and poetry anthologies. Display these and find out who has read them. Encourage students to borrow at least one of these texts to read during this unit. You may wish to set responding tasks for an additional text requiring students to focus on aspects of Australian identity represented through symbols, language, stereotypes or visual images. Quality Learning Environment: BK Collection of Australian literature from school library Show students the two texts set for close study in this unit; some may already be familiar with one or both of them. Part 1: Before reading activities Students learn about: 10.5 different cultures and their common and distinguishing elements Students learn to: 11.4 use the language of the subject when engaging in learning 11.5 use speaking and writing as learning processes for sorting and 4.1e Contribute information and express ideas in group tasks and classroom discussions 4.4c Use language acquired from new sources or experiences English Stage 4 Focus on students own cultural experiences and understanding Explore further the notion of cultural identity using OHT 1 / Worksheet 1: Cultural identity mind map. Brainstorm aspects of cultural identity. These could include: language, religion and spiritual beliefs, traditions, food, nation, ethnicity, race, rituals and celebrations, music, dancing, sport, family, stories, gender, age, social connections, education. Ensure these terms are discussed and explained thoroughly; they could form the basis of a class word bank. Worksheet 2: Cultural identity cloze passage is an example of an ESL strategy using guided support to allow students the chance to practise using the target language (key terms associated with cultural identity) introduced January 2007 NSW Department of Education and Training Curriculum K-12 Directorate http://www.curriculumsupport.education.nsw.gov.au/secondary/english/ OHT 1 / Worksheet 1: Cultural identity mind map Significance: CK I Worksheet 2: Cultural identity cloze passage Page 3 of 12 selecting information and clarifying ideas in the previous activity. You may wish to adapt this passage or use it as a guide to prepare your own cloze passage based on the unique discussions you have with your class around cultural identity. OHT 2: Answers to cloze passage Students learn to: 4.6. Use Standard Australian English, its variations and different levels of usage appropriately Students learn about: 4.13 the metalanguage of subject English used to describe, discuss and differentiate texts and their language forms, features and structures 5.11d Use a range of conjunctions to relate ideas across sentences or paragraphs in a text (although, yet, however) Using terminology associated with making comparison between texts, their forms, features and ideas is the main language focus for this unit. Students will need to be able to express similarities and differences between the stories told in Onion Tears and The Burnt Stick. They will also be required to compose a text discussing these aspects for the formal assessment task. Introduce students to the language of comparison and model it. Include terms such as: however whereas nevertheless rather than in contrast to is similar to differs from alternatively also instead of on the other hand is common to Intellectual Quality: M Quality Learning Environment: SS Record these words in two columns (terms expressing similarity and terms expressing difference) on butchers paper so that they may be displayed and revisited throughout the unit. Significance: Students learn about: 10.5 different cultures and their common and distinguishing elements Students learn to: 5.1l Interview familiar members of home or school community to elicit structured English Stage 4 In pairs, students interview their partner using Worksheet 3: Interview questions, and record each other’s responses. This activity encourages students to get to know their partner better, especially with reference to how they feel about their sense of cultural belonging. Ask students to share their responses to Question 20 with the rest of the class. Model the language of comparison (for example, “Josh’s experience is similar to Jelena’s but quite January 2007 NSW Department of Education and Training Curriculum K-12 Directorate http://www.curriculumsupport.education.nsw.gov.au/secondary/english/ Page 4 of 12 I Intellectual Quality: SC 11.5 use speaking and writing as learning processes for sorting and selecting information and clarifying ideas responses through a prepared format Students learn to: 9.2 compose texts that reflect their broadening world and their relationships within it 9.3 explain and justify personal empathy, sympathy and antipathy towards characters, situations and concerns depicted in texts 9.5 compare and contrast texts that present alternative views of their own world different from Tran’s because...”) and encourage students to use it in their responses (for example, “I feel the same way as Mel and Daoud except that I…”) Worksheet 3: Interview questions. Representation and stereotypes 5.1m Make simple hypotheses and generalisations Distribute Worksheet 4: Representation. Discuss the terms ‘representation’ and ‘composer’ before allowing students to complete the activity requiring them to depict a person, place or thing using words, symbols or images. Worksheet 4: Representation Now distribute Worksheet 5: Stereotypes and discuss the term ‘stereotypes’. Ask students to work in pairs or small groups and then share responses as to why certain cultural stereotypes can be misleading and why they might have developed. During this discussion model and encourage the practise of the key terms associated with cultural identity and the language of comparison. M SC Worksheet 5: Stereotypes Students learn about: 9.9 the ways their experiences and perspectives are represented in texts 10.8 signs, symbols, icons and stereotyping in texts and what they signify about different cultures Holidays and celebrations from around the world Students learn about: 10.5 different cultures and their common and distinguishing elements Students learn to: 4.1e Contribute information and express ideas in group tasks and classroom English Stage 4 Group activity Discuss with students the importance of food as a unifying aspect of cultural identity and the importance of particular food eaten during holidays and times of special celebration. For example, turkey at Thanksgiving in the United States, plum pudding at Christmas in England, decorated eggs for January 2007 NSW Department of Education and Training Curriculum K-12 Directorate http://www.curriculumsupport.education.nsw.gov.au/secondary/english/ PK HOT Once complete, encourage feedback as a whole class by discussing the similarities and differences which appear in their depictions. 5.6c Identify some common social and literary stereotypes in texts Intellectual Quality: Page 5 of 12 11.5 use speaking and writing as learning processes for sorting and selecting information and clarifying ideas discussions 11.6 find, select and evaluate information from a range of sources 11.7 identify, plan and prioritise stages of tasks with clear teacher directions 11.8 generate, document, clarify, organise and present ideas and information Students learn about: 11.14 research techniques using books, indexes and the internet 11.15 roles and responsibilities of individuals in groups Distribute Worksheet 6: Preparing a banquet group activity 5.5g Find specific detail or information from a range of factual texts 4.6b Make comparisons with own country and culture when reading Students learn to: 4.6c Respond to different cultural attitudes and practices as exemplified in stories (express opinion, ask questions, make comparisons) 3.3 use the features of information and communication technologies, including word processing, importing and manipulating of graphics, and formatting to compose a variety of texts 5.5j Collect, organise and analyse information from a text according to guidelines (in diagrammatic form, such as flow Students learn to: 1.3 compose imaginative, factual and critical texts for different purposes, audiences and contexts Greek Easter and extra sweets at the feast of Eid ul-fitr to end Ramadan, the month of fasting, for Muslims. Ask students to share their family’s food traditions with the class. Research of how these traditions began could be undertaken. Explain to students that the purpose of the following activity is to allow them a chance to work together, exploring this aspect. You may wish to ask students to bring in a dish either from their home country or their parents, or select a dish from ‘Western’ cuisine to share. English Stage 4 This task will require a computer work station and a minimum of two computer sessions. EQC E Worksheet 6: Preparing a banquet group activity Discuss with students expectations for group work, including that contributions should be shared as the allocation of assignment marks will be distributed equally. Class access to computers and the Internet Students are to locate the following Holidays & Celebrations from Around the World website: http://www.topics-mag.com/internatl/holidays/festivals.htm Students are to read the article, ‘Weird food from around the world’ in their groups. They must research four of the most unusual dishes and write about these in their books. They must describe where these particular foods come from, how they originated and if they are of any special cultural significance. Once the research is complete, students are to work on the following assignment in the same group. Students are to create an exotic banquet for a group of highly important guests and country officials from a cultural group of their own choosing. This includes: selecting a location for the feast drawing a map of where the event will take place creating a menu for the evening which incorporates a variety of dishes previously researched during the website task. The map, invitation and menu can be designed and illustrated by hand or using the computer. January 2007 http://www.curriculumsupport.education.nsw.gov.au/secondary/english/ HE SS Significance: Organise students into small groups of three to four. NSW Department of Education and Training Curriculum K-12 Directorate Quality Learning Environment: Page 6 of 12 CK KI I for different purposes and audiences charts, graphs) Students learn about: 1.15 the forms and features of language, the structures of texts and the nature of content that enables categorisation by content, composer and genre 4.7a Identify important features of text organisation (book/chapters, chapters/ paragraphs, paragraphs/topic sentences) Students learn to: 1.1 respond to imaginative, factual and critical texts, including the required range of texts, through wide and close listening, reading and viewing Part 2: During reading activities Reading the novels Before reading commences, show students how to identify the standard conventions of layout in a novel, including: title names and biographical information on the authors and illustrators the acknowledgements page dedication front and back covers (including the back cover blurb) the spine contents page Point out that most novels are divided into sections delineated by chapter titles, however, in both these novels divisions are indicated by other means; in Onion Tears by the repeated image of the chopsticks, and in The Burnt Stick by a paragraph beginning with a large italicised font. 1.5 interpret, question and challenge information and ideas in texts through close study 1.9 demonstrate understanding of the complexity of meaning in texts Students learn about: 1.12 links between the ideas, information, perspectives and points of view presented in texts and their own background and experience Provide students with a variety of models of banquet menus, recipes and invitations and discuss the language and structural features of these texts, modelling written examples for students who need additional support. 5.5 Reads with understanding a English Stage 4 Intellectual Quality: Class set of The Burnt Stick DK DU Explain the purpose of each of these conventions of layout and discuss language and visual features. This will extend students’ critical literacy skills and help them become familiar with the standard conventions of layout in a novel. PK Because of the brevity of these novels, reading should be done in class, out loud, with good reading modelled by proficient readers. However, the approach to reading the novels should be determined by the experience and ability of the class and groups of students with it. You may want to place motivated, proficient readers together and separately support students who need to practise their reading skills. Keep in mind that students need to hear reading modelled by proficient readers and this is particularly so for ESL students. This can be achieved by you reading selected chapters or you can organise for students from another year to SC January 2007 NSW Department of Education and Training Curriculum K-12 Directorate Class set of Onion Tears http://www.curriculumsupport.education.nsw.gov.au/secondary/english/ Page 7 of 12 HOT M 1.13 the ways their own background and experience affect their responses to texts Students learn about: 4.8 the ways in which specific language forms and features and structures of text are used to shape meaning including: in written texts: medium, organisation, sentence structures, grammar, punctuation, vocabulary and spelling, the use of formal or colloquial language and figurative language 4.13 the metalanguage of subject English used to describe, discuss and differentiate texts and their language forms, features and structures Students learn to: 6.5 identify the ways characters, situations and concerns in texts connect to students’ own experiences, thoughts and feelings Students learn about: 6.8 the ways ‘the real world’ is represented in the imaginary worlds of texts including literature, film, media and multimedia texts range of texts, including those remote from personal experience, interpreting mainly at a literal level and using the information for other purposes 5.6 Demonstrates awareness of how information is organised and presented in English texts 5.7 Interprets texts, cueing into key organisational and language features 5.8 Applies basic text access strategies to enhance comprehension and learning 4.6 Relates own culture, knowledge and experience to information in the text read parts of the novel onto audio tapes that can be played to students. Worksheets are provided for the close study of each text. They include a series of comprehension and language questions as well as suggestions for additional activities divided into sections according to the breaks in the text. For each novel it is recommended that you read each section in the text and then allow students time to complete the relevant section on the worksheets. However, structure reading and responding in whichever way best suits the needs of your class. During reading draw students’ attention to language and visual features and other aspects of narrative. Include features such as: Quality Learning Environment: the repetition of visual images in Onion Tears (refugee boat, chopsticks) and compare this to the individual illustrations in The Burnt Stick which might have been drawn by a burnt stick /charcoal, resources which would have been available to Aboriginal people, rather than pen and ink or oil on canvas. EQC E HE SS characters settings - both are set in Australia but Onion Tears looks back to Vietnam SS-R SD narrative style and structure Significance: plot and themes - the importance of kindness, the need to feel loved by family in the community in which you grow up, separation from loved ones and the trauma and grief that results and the importance of memory, especially of a past home in maintaining identity. I While not all of these aspects have been draw out in the close reading activities, they are assumed knowledge when students come to complete Worksheet 13 and the assessment task. Students will also be better equipped to complete these activities if you continue to model the language of comparison while reading The Burnt Stick, making links to Onion Tears. Close study of Onion Tears This story can be used as a platform for students to comprehend how one’s current experience is shaped by cultural background, encouraging students’ awareness of themselves and each other and the world around them. Worksheets 7a-f: Close study of Onion Tears Intellectual Quality: SC Significance: English Stage 4 January 2007 NSW Department of Education and Training Curriculum K-12 Directorate http://www.curriculumsupport.education.nsw.gov.au/secondary/english/ Page 8 of 12 Students learn about: 10.6 representations of culture through choices of language and content 10.8 signs, symbols, icons and stereotyping in texts and what they signify about different cultures 10.9 the ways culture and personal experience position composers and responders and influence response to and composition of texts Students learn to: 4.5 selectively use dictionaries, thesauruses, spellchecks and other reference texts 4.6 use Standard Australian English, its variations and different levels of usage appropriately Distribute Worksheets 7a-f: Close study of Onion Tears. BK Some students may work independently through these tasks and also choose from the extension tasks below while others may work better in pairs or small groups with the assistance of the class teacher, ESL teacher or other support personnel. CK Extension activities for Onion Tears could include: Quality Learning Environment: I 1) Photocopy all the letters Nam-Huong writes. Ask students read each letter and highlight all the similes and metaphors used, as the letters are rich in these language features. They could also track the story of what happened to Nam-Huong’s family and summarise this in point form in their workbooks. EQC E HE 2) Research the history and importance of kites in different cultures. For example, the kite runners in Afghanistan would make an interesting topic as it was banned under the Taliban regime. Draw comparisons with the game as it’s played in the novel and discuss the possible symbolism of the kite flying in Onion Tears. SS SS-R SD 3) Research cultures that use water in their rituals of farewell to their dead. Such rituals include placing bodies on a river or out to sea and floating candles, lanterns or flowers on a flowing river as a way of farewelling the dead person and helping each other to grieve and move on. Compare these rituals to that performed by Nam-Huong at the end of Onion Tears. Distribute Worksheet 8: Food in Onion Tears. Food is mentioned throughout this novel and one of the recurring visual images is of chopsticks. Ask students to count how many times this image is repeated and to list all the other illustrations which have a reference to food. Students may be familiar with the dishes mentioned in the novel or they can be researched on the Internet to find out what ingredients are used in each dish, what they look like and when they are eaten. Worksheet 8: Food in Onion Tears Class access to Internet Discuss with the class how exposure through food or connection with a person from another cultural group can lead to greater understanding and acceptance and help to eliminate cultural stereotypes and prejudice. Close study of The Burnt Stick Distribute Worksheets 9a-f: Close study of The Burnt Stick. Each worksheet includes responding questions, language activities and an English Stage 4 January 2007 NSW Department of Education and Training Curriculum K-12 Directorate http://www.curriculumsupport.education.nsw.gov.au/secondary/english/ Worksheets 9a-f: Close study of The Burnt Stick Intellectual Quality: DK Page 9 of 12 extension activity, which students may complete individually or in groups, depending on their needs and motivation levels. DU HOT For more information and teaching resources on the ‘Stolen Children’ visit: the HREOC website: http://www.hreoc.gov.au/social_justice/stolen_children/index.html SC Note: The syllabus outcomes and links to the ESL scales are the same for the study of both texts. Students learn to: 8.2 synthesise information from texts with similar subject matter and identify differences in content, purpose, attitude, values and perspective Students learn about: 8.5 the ways in which meaning is shaped by form, structure, personal perspective and by the composer’s purpose and audience 8.8 bias and perspective in texts Students learn to: 10.2 identify and explore the ways different cultures, cultural stories and icons, including Australian images and significant Australians, 4.9 Communicates for a range of purposes on a variety of familiar topics, using a basic repertoire of text types 4.10 Demonstrates an awareness of how effective writing is tailored to the requirements of the topic and the needs of the reader 4.11 Writes a variety of texts, demonstrating some overall cohesion and coherence 4.12 Makes use of discussion and reflection to enhance the English Stage 4 Part 3: After reading activities Making links between texts The activities in this section aim to consolidate students’ knowledge of Onion Tears and The Burnt Stick and demonstrate how to make comparisons between these texts. The activities also aim to develop the skills necessary for all students to successfully complete the formal assessment task for the unit. Issue Worksheet 10: Making links between the texts – visual images. Students are required to use the table on this worksheet as well as the terms of comparison introduced in the Before reading activities section of the unit to help them complete the cloze paragraphs in the second half of the worksheet. Point out the topic and supporting sentences of each paragraph and tell students this structure will be required in the composition they must write for the formal assessment task. The paragraphs form a comparison of the visual features used by the composers of the set texts and may be used by students to begin their assessment task. For further information on the features of visual design refer to the teacher and student information handout in the Stage 4 Dragons unit: http://www.curriculumsupport.education.nsw.gov.au/secondary/english/stag es4_5/teachlearn/eng_esl/eng_esl.htm As a class recap the themes in each text, writing them on the board. Ask students to decide which themes are common to both. Highlight these on the board. It is assumed here that the themes were discussed during the reading of each story, see page 8 of this program. Distribute Worksheet 11: Making links between the texts – themes. In January 2007 NSW Department of Education and Training Curriculum K-12 Directorate http://www.curriculumsupport.education.nsw.gov.au/secondary/english/ Worksheet 10: Making links between the texts – visual images. Quality Learning Environment: EQC E HE SS Worksheet 11: Making links between the Page 10 of 12 including Aboriginal Australians, are depicted in texts writing process 10.3 identify and describe cultural expressions in texts Students learn about: 10.6 representations of culture through choices of language and content 10.8 signs, symbols, icons and stereotyping in texts and what they signify about different cultures Students learn to: 9.5 compare and contrast texts that present alternative views of their own world addition to identifying themes in the texts and determining which are common to both texts this worksheet requires students to give an example, a relevant quote or reference to a visual image which illustrates each theme. Explain to students that an understanding of characters increases our appreciation of the author’s/ illustrator’s message. Distribute Worksheet 12: Making links between the texts – characters. The activity on this worksheet allows students to ‘step into the shoes’ of certain characters through role-play to empathise and identify with them. It will also increase students’ confidence in talking to the class in a way which is less intimidating than a formal speech. They will each take a turn representing a different character in the “hot seat”, and will have to answer questions from classmates about that character. To prepare for this activity students choose 2 main characters from each text and prepare 3 questions to ask each of these characters. (Note: They may only get to ask one of these questions as all students must get at least one turn to ask a different question.) The next activity on Worksheet 13: Group activity and panel discussion draws together the elements of narrative studied in the unit and prepares students for the assessment task. It is to be done in groups of 3-4. Students are required to make links between the texts using the table on the worksheet. Ask students to write in dot point form when completing the table and include specific examples and quotes or references to particular illustrations from the text where relevant. texts – themes Worksheet 12: Making links between the texts – characters Worksheet 13: Group activity and panel discussion 9. A student English Stage 4 Part 4: Assessment task The formal assessment task for this unit is a writing task. To complete the task students are required to draw on the knowledge and skills developed throughout the unit to write a composition comparing the stories told in January 2007 NSW Department of Education and Training Curriculum K-12 Directorate http://www.curriculumsupport.education.nsw.gov.au/secondary/english/ DU Quality Learning Environment: EQC HE Then, using the table as a guide, students participate in the panel discussion, sharing what they have learned and making links between the texts using the language of comparison. Encourage the use of this language, prompting students where necessary by pointing to the list of terms of similarity and terms of difference created at the beginning of the unit. Organise the discussion so that every student has the opportunity to contribute ideas. 8. A student makes connections between and among texts. Intellectual Quality: Student/teacher information sheet 2a: Assessment task requirements Page 11 of 12 demonstrates understanding that texts express views of their broadening world and their relationships within it. 10. A student identifies, considers and appreciates cultural expression in texts. 11. A student uses, reflects on and assesses individual and collaborative skills for learning. Onion Tears and The Burnt Stick. Worksheets 10-13 draw together the knowledge and skills required to successfully complete the task and prepare students for the composition. Students will be assessed on their: knowledge and understanding of the plot, themes and characters of the texts ability to use language of comparison when making connections between the texts ability to organise writing effectively according to purpose, audience and context. Student/teacher information sheet 2b: Assessment task marking guidelines Students must write approximately 400-600 typed words and also submit a hand written plan and draft of their composition. See Student/teacher information sheets 2a and 2b: Assessment task requirements and marking guidelines. References Kidd, D and Huxley, D (1990) Onion Tears, HarperCollinsPublishers (Australia) Pty Limited. Hill, A. and Sofilas, M. (1994) The Burnt Stick, Penguin Books Australia Ltd. English Stage 4 January 2007 NSW Department of Education and Training Curriculum K-12 Directorate http://www.curriculumsupport.education.nsw.gov.au/secondary/english/ Page 12 of 12