North Sydney Girls high School Stage 4: Picture books unit Rationale Picture books are the most common form of children’s literature. An exploration of picture books allows students to examine how meaning is constructed through both visual and written language. In this unit, students’ skills, knowledge and understanding will be developed through analysis of a variety of visual texts. Activities will focus upon responding to these texts and the decoding of the techniques used for visual literacy. Students will then compose their own texts thereby expressing themselves and their relationships with others and their world. Outcomes: 1. A student responds to and composes texts for understanding, interpretation, critical analysis and pleasure. Students learn to: 1.1 respond to imaginative, factual and critical texts, including the required range of texts, through wide and close listening, reading and viewing 1.2 respond to and compose texts intended to inform, persuade and entertain, including humorous texts 1.3 compose imaginative, factual and critical texts for different purposes, audiences and contexts 1.7 responds to and composes texts beyond the literal level 1.9 demonstrate understanding of the complexity of meaning in texts. Students learn about: 1.11 the ideas, information, perspectives and points of view presented in imaginative, factual and critical texts 1.15 the forms and features of language, the structures of texts and the nature of content that enables categorisation by content, composer and genre 1.17 features of texts that can be represented in graphical form to enable deeper understanding of meaning 1.20 the complexity of meaning in texts. 2. A student uses a range of processes for responding to and composing texts. Students learn to: 2.2 use and adapt the processes of planning, drafting, rehearsing, responding to feedback, editing, and publishing to compose texts over time. Students learn about: 2.11 different ways of using feedback to improve their texts NSW Department of Education and Training Curriculum K-12 Directorate November 2004 Page 1 of 12 http://www.curriculumsupport.education.nsw.gov.au 2.12 explicit criteria for judging the effectiveness of a text fro its purpose, audience and context 2.15 processes of representation including the use of symbols, images, icons, clichés, stereotypes, connotations, inference and particular visual and aural techniques including those of camera, design and sound. 4. A student uses and describes language forms and features, and structures of texts appropriate to different purposes, audiences and contexts. Students learn to: 4.1 identify and describe the purpose, audience and context of texts 4.2 create and ensure coherence of medium, form and content through specific language conventions and vocabulary appropriate to particular subject matter or contexts. Students learn about: 4.8 the ways in which specific language forms and features and structures of text are used to shape meaning including: in written texts: medium, organisation, sentence structures, grammar, punctuation, vocabulary and spelling, the use of formal or colloquial language and figurative language in spoken texts: : medium, organisation, sentence structures, grammar, punctuation, vocabulary, cues, nonverbal language, tone, pitch, intonation and volume in visual texts: medium, organisation, colour, layout, perspective, focus, camera angles and editing 4.13 the metalanguage of subject English used to describe, discuss and differentiate texts and their language forms, features and structures. 6. A student draws on experience, information and ideas to imaginatively and interpretively respond to and compose texts. Students learn to: 6.1 compose coherent, imaginative texts that use and explore students’ own experiences, thoughts and feelings and their imaginings 6.4 use the features and structures of imaginative texts to compose their own texts and engage their audience. Students learn about: 6.10 the structures and features of imaginative texts including characterisation, setting, tension and climax, chronology and time, narrative voice, effective beginnings and endings 6.11 verbal, aural and visual techniques used to create imaginative texts, such as imagery, figures of speech, selective choice of vocabulary, rhythm, sound effects, colour and design. 10. A student identifies, considers and appreciates cultural expression in texts. Students learn to: NSW Department of Education and Training Curriculum K-12 Directorate November 2004 Page 2 of 12 http://www.curriculumsupport.education.nsw.gov.au 10.1 recognise and consider cultural factors, including cultural background and perspective, when responding to and composing texts 10.3 identify and describe cultural expressions in texts 10.4 identify and describe the ways assumptions underlying cultural expressions in texts can lead to different reading positions. Students learn about: 10.7 cultural assumptions in texts including those about gender, ethnicity, religion, youth, age, sexuality, disability, cultural diversity, social class and work 10.8 signs, symbols, icons and stereotyping in texts and what they signify about different cultures 10.9 the ways culture and personal experience position composers and responders and influence response to and composition of texts 10.11 the ways recurring stories such as legends and fairy stories have been written and rewritten, in and for different contexts. Content Year 7 picture books Piggybook by Anthony Browne, Walker Books, 1995 Gender roles are explored, challenged and reversed. The role of conventional gender modelling in sustaining familial power-play is represented. Westlandia by P. Fleischman, Walker Books, 1999 Explores the value of non-conformity and the role of society and parental expectations in defining the misfit. Affirms the power of the creative and imaginative individual to alter parental and social responses to individualism. The Story of Rosy Dock by Jeannie Baker, Red Fox, 1998 Considers the impact of colonisation of Australia on the environment and cultural values. The introduction of the non-native plant is symbolic of the changes and destruction that occur due to the colonisation process. Hansel and Gretel by Brothers Grimm, illustrated by A. Browne, Walker Books, 1981 Familial relationships are explored and the stereotypical maternal and paternal roles are challenged. Includes the classic battle of good versus evil, where the good is triumphant. Where the Forest Meets the Sea by Jeannie Baker, Walker Books, 1992 Explores the relationship between the past, present, future and the way that pressures of modern society impact upon the natural environment. NSW Department of Education and Training Curriculum K-12 Directorate November 2004 Page 3 of 12 http://www.curriculumsupport.education.nsw.gov.au Year 8 picture books Willy’s Pictures by A. Browne, Walker Books, 2000 Affirms the power of pictures to communicate between worlds. Intertextuality is explored as a vehicle for linking the past and the present, the commonality of human experience, and the relationships between texts. My Place by Nadia Wheatley and Donna Rawlins, Kane/Miller Books, 1989 The exploration of Australia’s history from pre-colonisation to the bi-centenary of Federation. This exploration is achieved by focussing on the transformation within one single space over time. The Rabbits by J. Marsden and Shaun Tan, Lothian Books, 1998 Retells the story of the British invasion of the Aboriginal people of Australia, expressed through the allegory of the rabbits invading a land inhabited by native animals. When the Wind Blows by Raymond Briggs, Penguin 1982 A book that expresses opposition to nuclear armament by examining the actions of the powerless in the face of overwhelming military power and government agendas. The Water Tower by Gary Crew and Steve Woolman, Era Books, 1994 NSW Department of Education and Training Curriculum K-12 Directorate November 2004 Page 4 of 12 http://www.curriculumsupport.education.nsw.gov.au Syllabus Teaching and learning activities content 1.1 1.9 4.1 Resources Introductory whole class activity Teacher-led discussion in which the students define picture books and their purpose and intended audience. What are picture books? Have you read any picture books? Who reads picture books? Favourite picture books? Why do we read picture books? etc Small group activity Students read a sample of the available picture books. (Keep one picture book class set for later closer study. Class discussion of personal responses in which students compare and contrast the content and style of the picture books and their reactions to these. 1.11 4.1 4.8 4.13 Teacher introduces some brief background information on the authors and illustrators. Research task: In small groups students are to conduct research on an different authors/illustrators chosen from the available texts (Browne, Sendak, Fleicshman). Different groups choose different composers. Students find biographical information and a list of the texts the author / illustrator has composed. Students explore and list the illustrator’s elements of design (eg. use of line, colour, shape, space, perspective and texture) using the guidelines from the listed websites. Students report their findings to the class. Teacher informally assesses students’ understanding through observation. See the websites <http://nosferatu.ca s.usf.edu/lis/lis6585 /class/art.html> or Art Children’s Books: Lecture Outline (Google search engine) See also An Introduction to the Grammar of Visual During the reporting the teacher takes this opportunity to introduce and link Design at <http://www.qtp.ns the artistic styles that each composer/illustrator has used such as: NSW Department of Education and Training Curriculum K-12 Directorate November 2004 Page 5 of 12 http://www.curriculumsupport.education.nsw.gov.au Quality teaching Background Knowledge High order thinking Background information Knowledge integration Background Knowledge Cultural knowledge Deep thinking Metalanguage Substantive Syllabus Teaching and learning activities content realistic, naive, primitive, expressionistic and collage. Resources Quality teaching w.edu.au/qtp/files/el communication ise/project3/gramm ar.pdf> Student direction 4.8 4.13 6.10 6.11 1.11 1.17 1.20 Close study of one picture book: Teacher selects one picture book not included in the introductory activity. a) Prediction activity: students analyse the visual techniques of the cover – predict what this story is going to be about, the intended audience, mood and genre. b) Close study of one image selected by the teacher in order to build upon previous knowledge of visual language. Deconstruct this image as a whole class identifying the different visual techniques. Refer to visual literacy handout, Appendix 1. c) Small group activity: Analysing the visual text of the picture book. Students are provided with questions that assist them to analyse the visual text and its relationship to the written text. Teacher gives students only the written text of one other selected picture book as a handout, e.g. from Piggy Book or Weslandia. a) In small groups students read the written text aloud and discuss the central ideas, issues, mood and tone. b) Students consider different ways of reading the written text aloud with different voices to explore how the tone of reading influences the meaning. c) Students identify linguistic features such as imagery, emotive language, symbolism etc. High-order thinking Metalanguage Appendix 1 Deep knowledge Appendix 2 – discussion questions Substantive communication Intellectual Quality: High-order thinking Metalanguage Students make notes on group discussion. 1.3 1.17 2.2 Individual activity Using the written text from the previous activity students choose one of the following tasks: NSW Department of Education and Training Curriculum K-12 Directorate November 2004 Page 6 of 12 http://www.curriculumsupport.education.nsw.gov.au Engagement magazines, Student direction Syllabus Teaching and learning activities content 2.15 6.4 newspapers, coloured paper, coloured pencils, Students write a reflective statement explaining the visual elements of their textas, illustrations. Students are placed in rotating groups thereby allowing them to compare and contrast their illustrations with other students. Quality teaching (a) Each student becomes the illustrator of a selected phrase or paragraph. Non-artistic students could use collage techniques. Students select an effective illustration by identifying images that have added meaning to the text and represented aspects of the written text beyond the literal level. Explain in a brief reflection why it is effective. or 2.15 4.8 6.11 Resources (b) Provide students with only the visual text of a different picture book. Students (in small groups or individually) then compose the written text to support the visual images. A reflective statement (written) needs to accompany students’ created text. Students need to articulate what influenced their decisions. This activity allows students to re-visit and add to their previously acquired knowledge of visual texts and how meaning is constructed within these texts. Provide students with one black and white visual image from a selected picture book. Each student is to examine the meaning of the black and white picture. They are to record this in their workbooks. Allow students to discuss their ideas with other members of the class. Teacher to observe students’ conversations and informally monitor student understanding. Students are to reproduce the same visuals using their own colour choices. Points for students to ponder: how does colour change, emphasise or enhance meaning? does colour alter the mood, tone, and narrative in any way? Students to record their answers in their workbooks and report findings back the class. NSW Department of Education and Training Curriculum K-12 Directorate November 2004 Page 7 of 12 http://www.curriculumsupport.education.nsw.gov.au Deep knowledge High-order thinking Substantive communication Substantive conversation Deep understanding Syllabus Teaching and learning activities content 1.1 1.9 1.11 1.17 1.20 4.1 4.8 Assessment task Oral task In small groups, students find their own picture book and evaluate the picture book by examining visual and written features of the text (see Appendix 1). Each student is to be assigned to a different element of composition. (i.e. framing, colour, positioning, focal point, symbolism, repetition). This enables each member to be assessed individually. Resources Quality teaching Appendix 1 – Visual literacy Deep understanding Metalanguage Substantive communication Student presentations should include: An introduction of the text: outlining the title, author, context of production (when was it produced and for whom?), context of reading (e.g. target audience) and content (plot, characters, themes, genre) An analysis of the visual and written techniques used in a selected page (i.e. one page) the selected page needs to be linked to the text as a whole. 6.1 6.4 6.10 6.11 Additional content: Deep knowledge 1. Compose your own imaginative text Students are to compose their own picture book to be presented to a year 5/6 local primary class. This provides the experience of composing a text for a real audience. Additionally, students are to create a questionnaire for the purpose of receiving immediate audience feedback. This questionnaire provides students with valuable feedback in order to reflect on their own learning experience. Students then need to submit a reflective statement evaluating the strengths and weaknesses of their picture book, according to their own evaluation and the audience responses. Students choose from one of the following suggestions as a starting point for their picture book. They need to also identify purpose and ensure that NSW Department of Education and Training Curriculum K-12 Directorate November 2004 Page 8 of 12 http://www.curriculumsupport.education.nsw.gov.au Deep Understanding High-Order thinking Student direction Syllabus Teaching and learning activities content 1.1 1.3 1.9 1.11 1.20 2.2 4.2 6.4 6.11 their picture book is not just a story with illustrations. Some ideas to help students begin: a) give students a social or global issue to explore. These could be provided on separate cards, e.g. nuclear war, gender roles, conformity, colonisation, environmental impact, immigration, puberty etc b) adopt a narrative genre and an artistic style already examined and employ its elements to explore their own ideas c) model their picture book on the work of a particular author/illustrator d) select an existing text (eg. fairytale, film, poem, novel) and adapt the story by changing one or more elements. This could lead to the subverting or reversing of the story (e.g. retell the story from the perspective of another character, change the ending, and/or introduce a different complication, character or event) e) students write their own story. 2. Compose a web site: Students review a number of children’s picture books for The Children’s Book Council Awards: Children’s Picture Book Award category for younger readers. Students should read several texts (minimum of six) and compile a short list of the three best books. Students write a review of each of the three books and judge them according to the following categories: - Best Picture Book - Highly Commended - Commended Design a web site which introduces the Award, the category, the reviews of short listed books and the judging criteria for each award level. Create each of the pages in hard copy, including written and visual components and links. Construct the site using Frontpage or PowerPoint. NSW Department of Education and Training Curriculum K-12 Directorate November 2004 Page 9 of 12 http://www.curriculumsupport.education.nsw.gov.au Resources Quality teaching Connectedness Deep understanding Higher order thinking Syllabus Teaching and learning activities content 11.2 11.6 11.8 11.14 11.16 3. Research task: a) Students research the history of the development of picture books. They may like to examine decorated books, illustrated books and picture books. b) Students may research the increasing darkness of picture books over recent years. They should read a variety of texts from a variety of timeframes. Reviews (from a variety of sources: newspapers, internet, magazines) or Children’s Book Council Awards for younger readers should be used to help students establish their own conclusion. For example Sydney Morning Herald Weekend Edition August 16-17 2003, ‘Book awards offer telltale sign of changing tastes’. Students should negotiate the form of presentation of their research findings. NSW Department of Education and Training Curriculum K-12 Directorate November 2004 Page 10 of 12 http://www.curriculumsupport.education.nsw.gov.au Resources Quality teaching Deep knowledge Deep understanding Appendix 1 Visual literacy Context of reading/viewing Who is the target audience? Can the text be read from a different cultural position? How is the audience positioned? Content What is happening in the image? Composition How is meaning made? Consider the following elements: use of colour framing positioning of elements, e.g. centering, off-centre focal point reading pathways – vectors perspective – foreground, mid-ground, background use of action, stillness angles symbols, signs and repetition Expression of the image pose gesture facial expression touch and proximity body language – e.g. confidence, weakness, aggression, passivity costume/clothing props setting/surrounding Connotation What are the connotations of objects, symbols, words, ideas? Written text Does the text support or subvert the image? NSW Department of Education and Training Curriculum K-12 Directorate November 2004 Page 11 of 12 http://www.curriculumsupport.education.nsw.gov.au Appendix 2 Discussion questions Examine illustrations by discussing their role in enhancing and extending the written text. How do the visuals shape and alter your interpretation of the written text? Consider use of symbols, colour, layout, intertextual references, characterisation and the effect of media used for the pictures. Evaluate the role of the visual text in constructing the narrative and the interaction between the written and visual text. Do the pictures allow for multiple readings of the story? Be prepared to report your findings to the class. NSW Department of Education and Training Curriculum K-12 Directorate November 2004 Page 12 of 12 http://www.curriculumsupport.education.nsw.gov.au