SCEGGS DARLINGHURST YEAR 7 ENGLISH Incognito by Claire Carmichael Wall-E by Andrew Stanton A unit of work developed by members of the English Department at SCEGGS Darlinghurst 2009-2011: Marilyn Pretorius, Sonja Richards, Timothy Archer, Jenny Bean, Dominic Wan. Presented at the AIS Conference 2011 by Marilyn Pretorius Head of Department, English Outcomes and content from the draft NSW English syllabus this workshop will address: 1. A student engages imaginatively and creatively, critically and interpretively with experience, information, ideas and arguments to responds to and compose texts. 1.1, 1.2, 1.3, 1.4, 1.5, 1.7, 1.8, 1.9; 1.10, 1.11, 1.13, 1.15, 1.16, 1.17 2. A student responds to and composes texts for understanding, interpretation, critical analysis, imaginative expression and pleasure 2.2, 2.3, 2.4, 2.5, 2.6, 2.7, 2.8, 2.9, 2.11, 2.12, 2.13, 2.15; 2.18, 2.19, 2.22 4. A student selects and uses language forms and features and structures of text appropriate to different purposes, audiences and contexts with accuracy, clarity and coherence 4.1, 4.3, 4.7, 4.8, 4.10 5. A student makes connections between and among texts 5.1, 5.2, 5.3, 5.5, 5.6, 5.7, 5.8, 5.9; 5.10, 5.15, 5.16 6. A student demonstrates understanding of how texts can express aspects of their broadening world and their relationships within it 6.1, 6.2, 6.3, 6.4, 6.5, 6.6; 6.8, 6.9, 6.10, 6.11, 6.12 Outcomes 4, 5, and 6 are in bold because they will be assessed SCEGGS DARLINGHURST YEAR 7 ENGLISH 2011 Incognito by Claire Carmichael Wall-E by Andrew Stanton This unit builds on skills learned earlier in the introductory unit on Narratives. Students explore the construction and complexity of a novel through close reading. By examining the elements of narrative they develop skills in interpretation, inference and critical analysis. Students will also learn the concept of genres, in particular that of speculative fiction through a close study of Claire Carmichael's Incognito. They will come to understand the conventions and values of the speculative fiction genre and how these manifest in a variety of texts and relate to their own society. Students will also develop understanding of fundamental film techniques through a study of Andrew Stanton’s Wall-E and work on more sophisticated tasks such as tracing similar ideas through two texts. Students will explore core values associated with human nature and will, individually and cooperatively, and consider how human beings interact with each other in an increasingly complex world. Students will also come to understand the enchanting nature of speculative fiction and consider their own futuristic visions and representations. What is Speculative Fiction? “Speculative Fiction is the fiction of 'what if...?' What if we had a time machine? What if robots could do the work of humans? What if we had an honest government?” Speculative fiction is a genre which speculates about worlds that are unlike reality. At its heart, it usually involves a vision of the future, or an alternate world, which is used by an author to comment on and explore ideas about their own society. This is where the speculation occurs as such stories are typically concerned with the future of humanity. It is concerned with where humanity is currently, and more importantly, where it is headed. Speculative fiction can be seen as “the roadmap to tomorrow”. The term is often attributed to Robert A. Heinlein. In his first known use of the term, in the editorial of The Saturday Evening Post in 1947, Heinlein used it specifically as a synonym for "science fiction”. Over the years, speculative fiction has differed from science fiction through a more focused attention on social issues and the future of humanity rather than on the development of science itself. Speculative fiction is a place beyond reality, a place that could have been, or might have been, “if only the rules of the universe were altered just a bit. It sees the world with new eyes. It is the fiction of unlimited possibilities”. QUESTIONS 1. Consider the verb ‘to speculate’ more closely. Find five synonyms. What further insight might this provide into the nature of speculate fiction? 2. Typically, speculative fiction uses an imaginary or futuristic world to explore important issues in contemporary society. Consider the following: a) Compare the world today with the world your parents and grandparents grew up in. Identify some major changes. b) What does the future hold for our world? (Consider optimistically and pessimistically!) c) How will human beings be different in the future? d) Will human beings treat one another differently in the future? Why? e) Do you think we will live in a happier society in the future? Explain. f) What do you see as being the future benefits and dangers of technology? g) Which novels or films have you read or seen which could be included in the genre of speculative fiction? What kinds of futures do they outline? Visions of the Future Predicting the future of our world and what life might be like has long been part of popular culture. The different versions of possible futures are diverse and range from the optimism of ease of lifestyle to the fear of the consequences of nuclear warfare. 1. The Jetsons (1960s) Hanna-Barbera’s space age counterpart to “The Flintstones”, this family sitcom projected contemporary American culture and lifestyle into another time period. The Jetsons live in a futuristic utopia in 2062. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lhF4gu87rn0 a) Describe the world in which the Jetsons live. b) What has changed and, interestingly, what has remained the same? c) What does the music contribute to the images? 2. Buck Rogers in the 25th Century (1980s) A 20th century astronaut, Buck Rogers is on a space mission when his shuttle runs into a cosmic anomaly. Frozen in suspended animation until he is revived 500 years later, Buck helps solve future Earth's dilemmas. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CO8kFHCXiEg a) The setting is 2491. What expectations are prompted of this world? b) What mood is created by the music and voiceover? c) Who is the target audience of this series? 3. I Am Legend (2007) Virologist Robert Neville is immune to a vicious man-made virus originally created to cure cancer. He works to create a remedy while living alone in Manhattan in 2012, a city inhabited by violent victims of the virus. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=o7CC0kbGj6s a) Consider the opening image. What does it imply? b) Watch the trailer first without and then with sound. Comment on the contribution of music and silence to the atmosphere and ideas. c) Describe the future suggested by this film. 4. Aeon Flux (2005) Set in a single city 400 years into the future, a side effect of an antidote to disease which has wiped out 99% of the human race has made humans infertile. Aeon realises every person is a clone, created with recycled DNA. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ivqm96rXf7w a) In what ways is the future presented in this film different from 2011? b) Comment on the variety of camera movements. What do they illustrate? c) What are the dominant colours in this clip? What might they symbolise? For an audio version of the following short story: http://ia700506.us.archive.org/8/items/DimensionX/Dimx_e011_ThereWillComeSoftRains_ZeroHour.mp3 There Will Come Soft Rains by Ray Bradbury In the living room the voice-clock sang, Tick-tock, seven o'clock, time to get up, time to get up, seven o'clock! as if it were afraid that nobody would. The morning house lay empty. The clock ticked on, repeating and repeating its sounds into the emptiness. Sevennine, breakfast time,seven-nine! In the kitchen the breakfast stove gave a hissing sigh and ejected from its warm interior eight pieces of perfectly browned toast, eight eggs sunnyside up, sixteen slices of bacon, two coffees, and two cool glasses of milk. "Today is August 4, 2026," said a second voice from the kitchen ceiling, "in the city of Allendale, California." It repeated the date three times for memory's sake. "Today is Mr. Featherstone's birthday. Today is the anniversary of Tilita's marriage. Insurance is payable, as are the water, gas, and light bills." Somewhere in the walls, relays clicked, memory tapes glided under electric eyes. Eight-one, tick-tock, eight-one o'clock, off to school, off to work, run, run, eight-one! But no doors slammed, no carpets took the soft tread of rubber heels. It was raining outside. The weather box on the front door sang quietly: "Rain, rain, go away; rubbers, raincoats for today…" And the rain tapped on the empty house, echoing. Outside, the garage chimed and lifted its door to reveal the waiting car. After a long wait the door swung down again. At eight-thirty the eggs were shrivelled and the toast was like stone. An aluminium wedge scraped them into the sink, where hot water whirled them down a metal throat which digested and flushed them away to the distant sea. The dirty dishes were dropped into a hot washer and emerged twinkling dry. Nine-fifteen, sang the clock, time to clean. Out of warrens in the wall, tiny robot mice darted. The rooms were acrawl with the small cleaning animals, all rubber and metal. They thudded against chairs, whirling their mustached runners, kneading the rug nap, sucking gently at hidden dust. Then, like mysterious invaders, they popped into their burrows. Their pink electric eyes faded. The house was clean. Ten o'clock. The sun came out from behind the rain. The house stood alone in a city of rubble and ashes. This was the one house left standing. At night the ruined city gave off a radioactive glow which could be seen for miles. Ten-fifteen. The garden sprinklers whirled up in golden founts, filling the soft morning air with scatterings of brightness. The water pelted windowpanes, running down the charred west side where the house had been burned evenly free of its white paint. The entire west face of the house was black, save for five places. Here the silhouette in paint of a man mowing a lawn. Here, as in a photograph, a woman bent to pick flowers. Still farther over, their images burned on wood in one titanic instant, a small boy, hands flung into the air; higher up, the image of a thrown ball, and opposite him a girl, hands raised to catch a ball which never came down. The five spots of paint—the man, the woman, the children, the ball—remained. The rest was a thin charcoaled layer. The gentle sprinkler rain filled the garden with falling light. Until this day, how well the house had kept its peace. How carefully it had inquired, "Who goes there? What's the password?" and, getting no answer from lonely foxes and whining cats, it had shut up its windows and drawn shades in an old maidenly preoccupation with self-protection which bordered on a mechanical paranoia. It quivered at each sound, the house did. If a sparrow brushed a window, the shade snapped up. The bird, startled, flew off! No, not even a bird must touch the house! The house was an altar with ten thousand attendants, big, small, servicing, attending, in choirs. But the gods had gone away, and the ritual of the religion continued senselessly, uselessly. Twelve noon. A dog whined, shivering, on the front porch. The front door recognized the dog voice and opened. The dog, once huge and fleshy, but now gone to bone and covered with sores, moved in and through the house, tracking mud. Behind it whirred angry mice, angry at having to pick up mud, angry at inconvenience. For not a leaf fragment blew under the door but what the wall panels flipped open and the copper scrap rats flashed swiftly out. The offending dust, hair, or paper, seized in miniature steel jaws, was raced back to the burrows. There, down tubes which fed into the cellar, it was dropped into the sighing vent of an incinerator which sat like evil Baal in a dark corner. The dog ran upstairs, hysterically yelping to each door, at last realizing, as the house realized, that only silence was here. It sniffed the air and scratched the kitchen door. Behind the door, the stove was making pancakes which filled the house with a rich baked odour and the scent of maple syrup. The dog frothed at the mouth, lying at the door, sniffing, its eyes turned to fire. It ran wildly in circles, biting at its tail, spun in a frenzy, and died. It lay in the parlor for an hour. Two o'clock, sang a voice. Delicately sensing decay at last, the regiments of mice hummed out as softly as blown gray leaves in an electrical wind. Two-fifteen. The dog was gone. In the cellar, the incinerator glowed suddenly and a whirl of sparks leaped up the chimney. Two thirty-five. Bridge tables sprouted from patio walls. Playing cards fluttered onto pads in a shower of pips. Martinis manifested on an oaken bench with egg-salad sandwiches. Music played. But the tables were silent and the cards untouched. At four o'clock the tables folded like great butterflies back through the panelled walls. Four-thirty. The nursery walls glowed. Animals took shape: yellow giraffes, blue lions, pink antelopes, lilac panthers cavorting in crystal substance. The walls were glass. They looked out upon colour and fantasy. Hidden films docked through well-oiled sprockets, and the walls lived. The nursery floor was woven to resemble a crisp, cereal meadow. Over this ran aluminium roaches and iron crickets, and in the hot still air butterflies of delicate red tissue wavered among the sharp aroma of animal spoors! There was the sound like a great matted yellow hive of bees within a dark bellows, the lazy bumble of a purring lion. And there was the patter of okapi feet and the murmur of a fresh jungle rain, like other hoofs, falling upon the summer-starched grass. Now the walls dissolved into distances of parched weed, mile on mile, and warm endless sky. The animals drew away into thorn brakes and water holes. It was the children's hour. Five o'clock. The bath filled with clear hot water. Six, seven, eight o'clock. The dinner dishes manipulated like magic tricks, and in the study a click. In the metal stand opposite the hearth where a fire now blazed up warmly, a cigar popped out, half an inch of soft gray ash on it, smoking, waiting. Nine o'clock. A voice spoke from the study ceiling: "Mrs. McClellan, which poem would you like this evening?" The house was silent. The voice said at last, "Since you express no preference, I shall select a poem at random." Quiet music rose to back the voice. "Sara Teasdale. As I recall, your favourite…. "There will come soft rains and the smell of the ground, And swallows circling with their shimmering sound; And frogs in the pools singing at night, And wild plum trees in tremulous white; Robins will wear their feathery fire, Whistling their whims on a low fence-wire; And not one will know of the war, not one Will care at last when it is done. Not one would mind, neither bird nor tree, if mankind perished utterly; And Spring herself, when she woke at dawn Would scarcely know that we were gone." The fire burned on the stone hearth and the cigar fell away into a mound of quiet ash on its tray. The empty chairs faced each other between the silent walls, and the music played. At ten o'clock the house began to die. The wind blew. A failing tree bough crashed through the kitchen window. Cleaning solvent, bottled, shattered over the stove. The room was ablaze in an instant! "Fire!" screamed a voice. The house lights flashed, water pumps shot water from the ceilings. But the solvent spread on the linoleum, licking, eating, under the kitchen door, while the voices took it up in chorus: "Fire, fire, fire!" The house tried to save itself. Doors sprang tightly shut, but the windows were broken by the heat and the wind blew and sucked upon the fire. The house gave ground as the fire in ten billion angry sparks moved with flaming ease from room to room and then up the stairs. While scurrying water rats squeaked from the walls, pistolled their water, and ran for more. And the wall sprays let down showers of mechanical rain. But too late. Somewhere, sighing, a pump shrugged to a stop. The quenching rain ceased. The reserve water supply which had filled baths and washed dishes for many quiet days was gone. The fire crackled up the stairs. It fed upon Picassos and Matisses in the upper halls, like delicacies, baking off the oily flesh, tenderly crisping the canvases into black shavings. Now the fire lay in beds, stood in windows, changed the colours of drapes! And then, reinforcements. From attic trapdoors, blind robot faces peered down with faucet mouths gushing green chemical. The fire backed off, as even an elephant must at the sight of a dead snake. Now there were twenty snakes whipping over the floor, killing the fire with a clear cold venom of green froth. But the fire was clever. It had sent flames outside the house, up through the attic to the pumps there. An explosion! The attic brain which directed the pumps was shattered into bronze shrapnel on the beams. The fire rushed back into every closet and felt of the clothes hung there. The house shuddered, oak bone on bone, its bared skeleton cringing from the heat, its wire, its nerves revealed as if a surgeon had torn the skin off to let the red veins and capillaries quiver in the scalded air. Help, help! Fire! Run, run! Heat snapped mirrors like the brittle winter ice. And the voices wailed Fire, fire, run, run, like a tragic nursery rhyme, a dozen voices, high, low, like children dying in a forest, alone, alone. And the voices fading as the wires popped their sheathings like hot chestnuts. One, two, three, four, five voices died. In the nursery the jungle burned. Blue lions roared, purple giraffes bounded off. The panthers ran in circles, changing colour, and ten million animals, running before the fire, vanished off toward a distant steaming river. Ten more voices died. In the last instant under the fire avalanche, other choruses, oblivious, could be heard announcing the time, playing music, cutting the lawn by remote-control mower, or setting an umbrella frantically out and in the slamming and opening front door, a thousand things happening, like a clock shop when each clock strikes the hour insanely before or after the other, a scene of maniac confusion, yet unity; singing, screaming, a few last cleaning mice darting bravely out to carry the horrid ashes away! And one voice, with sublime disregard for the situation, read poetry aloud in the fiery study, until all the film spools burned, until all the wires withered and the circuits cracked. The fire burst the house and let it slam flat down, puffing out skirts of spark and smoke. In the kitchen, an instant before the rain of fire and timber, the stove could be seen making breakfasts at a psychopathic rate, ten dozen eggs, six loaves of toast, twenty dozen bacon strips, which, eaten by fire, started the stove working again, hysterically hissing! The crash. The attic smashing into kitchen and parlor. The parlor into cellar, cellar into sub-cellar. Deep freeze, armchair, film tapes, circuits, beds, and all like skeletons thrown in a cluttered mound deep under. Smoke and silence. A great quantity of smoke. Dawn showed faintly in the east. Among the ruins, one wall stood alone. Within the wall, a last voice said, over and over again and again, even as the sun rose to shine upon the heaped rubble and steam: "Today is August 5, 2026, today is August 5, 2026, today is…" QUESTIONS This story is one of the most famous short stories in the speculative fiction genre. It was written and published in Bradbury’s highly acclaimed collection of stories, The Martian Chronicles, in 1951. Written in an era in which many people were concerned about the devastating effects of nuclear weapons, the story depicts a world in which humans have been destroyed by nuclear force. In this way, it can be said to be a postapocalyptic narrative. 1. THE TEXT – LANGUAGE a) This short story uses a range of language techniques very effectively. Find examples of two different techniques, provide quotes to illustrate and explain their effect. b) Where is the climax of the story? Use a diagram to trace the narrative structure. c) How is the relationship between humans, technology and nature depicted? d) Consider the poem by Sara Teasdale. What is it about and what does it contribute to the story? e) What was Bradbury’s purpose in writing this story? 2. AN ILLUSTRATION – IMAGES a) Plan a short animation based on Bradbury’s story. Construct a brief story board to outline how your animation might progress. Carefully consider: - camera shots - What are the important images? What would the audience seeor not see? How would the camera move to reflect the atmosphere of the scene? - colours - Which colours would best illustrate the ideas within and mood of the narrative? - sound / music - What would your audience hear? How would it make them feel? b) Consider the animation by Peter Cotter and compare his visual decisions to your own. http://vimeo.com/1192818 c) Consider the adaptation of the story by Budet Laskovyj Dozhd and compare his rendition of the story to Peter Cotter’s. Which version do you prefer. Why? Write a paragraph. For the adaptation of "There Will Come Soft Rains" by Budet Laskovyj Dozhd, go to: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5LNHYz89sNc CREATIVE WRITING Select ONE of the following options. Plan your writing first by brainstorming possible ideas and images. Remember to consider your language choices carefully in order to create characters, setting and atmosphere appropriate to the speculative fiction genre. Your response should be at least 300 words. Ensure your work is carefully edited before submission. Option 1 Select a familiar context (eg: domestic kitchen, primary classroom, teenager’s bedroom, Australian beach) and write the first few paragraphs of the orientation of a speculative narrative. Your descriptions should reveal the futuristic context without directly specifying the time and place. Draw on familiar images, ideas and routines, but transplant them into a futuristic setting. Option 2 “Speculative Fiction is the fiction of 'what if...?' What if we had a time machine? What if robots could do the work of humans? What if we had an honest government? What if technology were misused to exert power over the people in a society? What if technology was used to spy on our every move?”Begin your writing with “What if...” Explore the possibilities that your futuristic notion presents. Option 3 Use one of the images above as a stimulus for a short story. Give your short story a title. Incognito by Claire Carmichael Set a few years into the future, in the world of Incognito there is no privacy as “nothing should be secret – that is the only way to achieve a free and open society” (p.45). Everyone is identified by their unique wristcode, all personal information is held in databases and the government observes, authorises and controls. A tranquil world of honesty, ease and trust or an apprehensive one of surveillance, secrets and corruption? When Karr Robinson's identity is obliterated from the database, his seemingly perfect life changes overnight and he begins to question his principles, what real freedom is and how power is used. DISCUSSION QUESTIONS 1. What does “incognito” mean? Why is it an effective title for the novel? 2. Consider the following concepts. Define them and list any associated ideas. Select one and illustrate it first in a visual form and then in words (simile or metaphor). POWER FREEDOM IDENTITY PRIVACY 3. Consider the images on the book cover. How do they illustrate the ideas of the novel? CHAPTER ANALYSIS Prologue 1. What is the purpose of a prologue? 2. How is figurative language used to set the scene in the opening paragraph? 3. How is suspense developed in these pages? 4. Describe the atmosphere at the end of the prologue. How is this generated? 5. Outline the character of Lord Alpha based on the prologue. Provide quotation to support. Chapter 2 1. Brenna and Cole are not who they seem. Describe their designated role (appearance) and their truer personality (reality). (p.13-15, 16, 19) 2. How does Mr Sneep explain “the importance of conformity”? (p.15) What does this reveal about the world of the novel? What persuasive techniques does he use? Chapter 3 1. How does Karr feel as an oblit? (p.27 & 31) How does the setting echo this? 2. Reread p.28-30. Outline the two opposing views of privacy and explain who holds them. What does this foreshadow? 3. The last few pages of this chapter provide an interesting insight into the Peverill family. What do we learn about the characters and about privacy? Chapter 4 1. Ms Plato presents a lecture on “The History of Secrecy” (p.45-49). What is her explanation? What insights does Brenna provide the reader? What does this reveal about the world of the novel? 2. Explain what is meant by the euphemisms – “the bad decades” and “the great partnership” (p.48-49) 3. What is Ms Plato’s response when her view of the world is questioned? (p.4950) What does this also reveal about the world of the novel? 4. “You’re all brainwashed! There is no freedom without privacy.” (p.51) Explain Brenna’s view. Do you agree with Brenna’s assessment? Chapter 5 1. The Tracts are first mentioned on p.53. Closely consider the language used to describe them. List the adjectives and outline what atmosphere it generates. 2. Karr has until this point assumed that his obliteration has simply been a mistake. What is the reality his father explains to him on p.59? What does this reveal about power? 3. What do we learn about data lords at the end of this chapter? Chapter 6 1. How is symbolism used in the opening of this chapter? (p.70) 2. The reader is provided with more details about the group, Incognito. Who are they and what is their purpose? (p.79) 3. By this point, the reader has been introduced to most of the characters in the novel. Construct a diagram which depicts the connections between them. Think carefully about where each character should be placed. Provide a brief quote to indicate their relationship to Karr and a few adjectives to describe them. (You should have about 20 characters!) Chapter 7 1. This chapter is only a little over two pages long. What effect does a sudden and short chapter have on the narrative? 2. What is Jonathan’s response to the revelation that Vonny Peverill signed the order for his arrest? What does this tell the reader about Jonathan and about the world of the novel? Chapter 8 1. Karr takes advantage of his last moments of sanctuary in his home, secure and “free from surveillance” (p.90). How has this been achieved? What does this reveal once again about society in this future world? Provide quotation to support. 2. Karr plans and packs to go to the Tracts. What does he put in his backpack? (p.92) What would you pack in similar circumstances? 3. Describe Alicia’s and Clay’s contrasting reactions to the news about Karr’s father. What do both responses reveal about their relationship to Karr? (p.93-96 and 99) Chapter 9 1. Reread the descriptions of Karr’s arrival at the entrance of the Tracts on p.100103. Describe the atmosphere. What language techniques are used develop this? 2. Karr continues to realise more about the appearance of things and people as opposed to reality. Provide examples that the appearance of some things is very different from how they really are. (p.106, 113) Chapter 10 1. What further insights is the reader given into the philosophy and organisation of Incognito? (p.125, 127, 128, 132) 2. Explain how and why Brenna enjoys a freedom Karr and others have never known. Compare this situation to our world today. How different is it? 3. How is tension created in the last few pages of this chapter? (p.133-5) Chapter 11 1. What is surprising about Yvonne Davillo’s appearance at the barricade? (p.142) What connections does the reader make at this point? 2. How has Carmichael built suspense in this chapter? Chapter 12 1. Karr suggests that the current society is not all bad - “People have good lives.” (p.157) How does Aunt Jai respond to his assumption? 2. What is Brenna’s role in Incognito? (p.158-9) 3. Draw a diagram which summarises the evidence Aunt Jai has gathered regarding corruption (p.159-161). How does it add to the suspense of the novel? Chapters 13-16 1. Explain how Karr's attitude towards Uncle Leith changes in this chapter. Provide evidence to support your answer. 2. Who is the data lord behind the corruption that Jonathan discovered? How did Karr know and when did he begin to suspect? 3. What does Karr’s confrontation with Professor Peverill confirm about data lords? (p.186-191) 4. What does Alicia’s response to Karr’s attack on her father confirm about her? (p.192) 5. Consider how Karr has changed as a person by the end of the novel. Compare his character in the orientation to his character now. LANGUAGE TECHNIQUES As your previous study of narratives and narrative poetry has revealed, language is used carefully and creatively to engage the reader and to develop the characters, setting, ideas and atmosphere within a story. As you reread the novel highlight strong examples of a variety of language techniques. Make a note of what technique is being used and how it creates meaning. TECHNIQUES to consider include: descriptive language (strong verbs and interesting adjectives) figurative language (alliteration, similes, metaphors, personification) repetition symbolism rhetorical questions ANALYTICAL TASKS 1. The reader is left with a vivid impression of The Tracts. Review the language used at various points to describe this location. Analyse the language and explain how it is used to generate atmosphere, develop setting and further the ideas of the novel. 2. Science and technology play a central role in the world of Incognito. Compile a list of examples of gadgets and processes which are the result of advances in technology. Explain what kind of world they create and how they assist and impede characters. CREATIVE TASKS 3. Write a media report which breaks the news of the existence of a corrupt data lord. Consider what Jonathan Robinson discovered, what Karr recorded in his confrontation and what the reader knows about Professor Peverill. Carefully consider tone and structure. 4. Imagine that Brenna Cole kept a diary. Write a series of three diary entries which reflect her thoughts about her role at school, Karr’s obliteration, Incognito’s mission and her relationships with her peers. Think carefully about which points in the novel Brenna would have felt compelled to record her thoughts and feelings. EXTENSION READING Read The Giver by Lois Lowry. Twelve year old Jonas lives in an apparently utopian society of the future. This world is free of pain, fear, prejudice and conflict, but colour, music and choice are also absent. Selected as a Receiver of Memories, he telepathically receives memories of things eliminated from his world: violence, sadness and loss, as well as beauty, joy and adventure. Having knowledge of these complex and powerful concepts alienates Jonas from his friends and family. Should he leave their peaceful but bland existence undisturbed, or should he share his rich memories despite the all the detrimental aspects which accompany them? OPTIONAL CREATIVE TASK In the world of The Giver, a society unlike our own, some concepts we consider ordinary would seem unfamiliar and strange. The author presents common things, such as sleds, love and sunburns, with fresh eyes. Just as Lowry does, select something ordinary and describe it as extraordinary, capturing strangers’ reactions to the familiar object. OPTIONAL ANALYTICAL TASK The Giver and Incognito both present different visions of the future. Explain what these visions are and discuss how the authors have used language, characters and/or settings to create their version of dystopia. OR Read Fahrenheit 451 by Ray Bradbury, which is a dystopian novel written in 1953. It presents a future American society where reading is outlawed and firemen start fires to burn books. Written in the early years of the Cold War, the novel is a critique of what Bradbury saw as issues in American society of the time, post WW2. Guy Montag is a fireman who presents the dystopia through the eyes of a loyal worker to it, a man in conflict about it, and one resolved to be free of it. Through most of the novel, Montag lacks knowledge and believes what he hears. Over the years, the novel has been subject to various interpretations, mainly focusing on the historical role of book burning in suppressing dissenting ideas. Bradbury has stated that the novel is not about censorship, but a story about how television destroys interest in reading literature, which leads to a perception of knowledge as being composed of factoids, partial information devoid of context. Mildred Montag is Guy Montag's wife. She is a conformist and represents the totalitarian state. Faber is a former English professor, who represents those who know what is being done is wrong, but are too fearful to act. Bradbury notes in his afterword that Faber is part of the name of a German manufacturer of pencils, Faber-Castell. OPTIONAL CREATIVE TASK Imagine you found yourself in the world of Fahrenheit 451. What would you say to Guy Montag? What would you say to Faber? OPTIONAL ANALYTICAL TASK Fahrenheit 451 and Incognito both present different visions of the future. Explain what these visions are and discuss how the authors have used language, characters and/or settings to create their version of dystopia. McTighe and Wiggins (2004) advocate focus on transferable, Big Ideas1 In English, it is particularly useful to continuously move from big picture, to parts so that students do not lose sight of the big picture. For example, in the Year 7 unit on Speculative Fiction, it is important to move from the big picture of what speculative fiction is, and its conventions, to a close study of the short story by Ray Bradbury, There Will Come Soft Rains and then back again to the big picture to show how and why Bradbury’s story fits in. SYNTHESIS TASKS In small groups of 3 or 4 1. From all that you have read, viewed, discussed or considered this term: create a list of the conventions or characteristics of Speculative Fiction which are evident in: There Will Come Soft Rains Incognito The extracts from the films The Jetsons, Buck Rogers and I Am Legend (The Giver or Fahrenheit 451 if you have read one or both) Do this on an A3 piece of paper divided into 3 (or 4 columns for The Giver/Fahrenheit 451)), one for each text/group of texts. 2. Which conventions, or characteristics, are common to all the texts? Highlight them. 3. Which conventions are particular only to a specific text? Can you suggest why? 4. What can you conclude about Speculative Fiction as a genre (or category of fiction)? Individually 1. Write about half a page to a page explaining how and why the short story by Ray Bradbury, There Will Come Soft Rains fits into the genre, or category, of Speculative Fiction. 2. Do the same for Incognito. Now answer the following questions: What aspects of Incognito are plausible (=believable or possible)? Make a list Write a cohesive paragraph explaining EITHER how Ray Bradbury is answering the question characteristic of the Speculative Fiction 1 McTighe and Wiggins, 2004, Understanding by Design: Professional Development Workbook, p. 225 genre, ‘What if?’ through his short story There Will Come Soft Rains OR How Claire Carmichael is answering ‘What if?’ through her novel, Incognito? “Ads Follow Web Users and Get More Personal” by Stephanie Clifford (New York Times) For all the concern and uproar over online privacy, marketers and data companies have always known much more about consumers’ offline lives, like income, credit score, home ownership, even what car they drive. Recently, some of these companies have started connecting this mountain of information to consumers’ browsers. The result is a sea change in the way consumers encounter the Web. Not only will people see customized advertising, they will see different versions of Web sites from other consumers and even receive different discount offers while shopping — all based on information from their offline history. Two women in adjoining offices could go to the same cosmetic site, but one might see a $300 Missoni perfume, the other the house-brand lipstick on sale for $2. The technology that makes the connection is nothing new — it is a tiny piece of code called a cookie that is placed on a hard drive. But the information it holds is. And it is all done invisibly. “Now, you’re traveling the Internet with a cookie that indicates you’re this type of consumer: age group X, income level, urban versus rural, presence of children in the household,” said Trey Barrett, a product leader at Acxiom, one of the companies offering this linking to marketers. Advertisers and marketers say this specificity is useful, taking out the guesswork involved in online-only profiling, and showing products to the people most likely to be interested. Retailers including Gap and Victoria’s Secret are using this tactic. But consumer advocates say such unseen tracking is troubling. On the old Internet, nobody knew you were a dog. On the new targeted Internet, they now know what kind of dog you are, your favourite leash colour, the last time you had fleas and the date you were neutered. “The industry’s love affair with persistent cookies has made it virtually impossible for users to go online without being tracked and profiled,” said Marc Rotenberg, executive director of the Electronic Privacy Information Center, in an e-mail message. While Congress has been holding hearings on online privacy lately, the sessions have focused on online behavioural targeting. The industry has argued that no government intervention is needed, an argument that the Federal Trade Commission has so far accepted. Consumers can avoid cookie-based tracking by deleting cookies from their computers or setting their browsers not to accept cookies. But few do, and privacy advocates say it is easy for companies to add cookies without users noticing. For decades, data companies like Experian and Acxiom have compiled reams of information on every American: Acxiom estimates it has 1,500 pieces of data on every American, based on information from warranty cards, bridal and birth registries, magazine subscriptions, public records and even dog registrations with the American Kennel Club. Patrick Williams, the publisher of the personal finance magazine Worth, recently asked Acxiom to find the names and addresses of 10,000 Americans from each of 11 cities who had houses worth more than $1 million, net worth of over $2 million, lived within a few miles of other rich people and subscribed to business publications. “They are the scariest data research company around — they know far too much,” said Mr. Williams, who said he was very happy with the amount of information it gave him. Companies like Acxiom and a competitor, Datran Media, make the connection between online and offline data when a person registers on a Web site or clicks through on an e-mail message from a marketer. Datran’s cookies include 50 to 100 pieces of information. Both companies say cookie data is anonymous and generalized. Datran and Acxiom then sell advertising on Web sites like NBC.com, Facebook and Yahoo to companies that use their data. For marketers, all this data is a boon. Beltone New England, a hearing-aid company, asked Datran to find people online who were 65 and over, owned a house, were head of a household, made more than $35,000 a year and lived in New England so it could show them ads. Datran also tested the same ads with a wider group of people. “What was surprising was we found the majority of responders turned out to be women 35 to 40 who had elderly parents at home,” said Perry Ebel, Beltone’s director of marketing and business development. He said he was changing his offline marketing to include that group. By using real-world data online, marketers can customize messages even further — showing different products to people with different shopping habits, whether it is in ads, an e-mail message or in semipersonalized Web pages. Rodale, which publishes books along with magazines like Men’s Health and Prevention, uses Acxiom data to help determine which promotional e-mails to send to which customers. Offers aimed at women might be accompanied by an e-mail message offering a Father’s Day subscription to Men’s Health for him and a free book on losing belly fat for her. Young men might get another offer — a book on sex positions. Some marketers are using offline data more subtly — for example, showing a budget shopper a discount offer and a regular shopper a full-price section. “The people who buy less frequently and are most price-conscious may get a better deal than someone who buys more frequently, who would buy anyway,” said Christopher S. Marriott, global managing director of Acxiom Digital, a division of Acxiom. Of course, shoppers would have little reason to think their experience or their ads are being personalized based on their home value or Volvo ownership. “It is a little Big Brother-ish,” said Betsy Coggswell, 49, a social worker in Fullerton, Calif., who shops online regularly. Still, she said, she wasn’t shocked. “Every time you put out information about yourself — people have got to understand — it’s going to be collected by somebody.” Some online companies avoid matching online and offline profiles. In 2000, DoubleClick abandoned plans to connect online and offline data after a huge outcry. Google, which later acquired DoubleClick, has been conducting studies that connect the two areas, but it does not currently collect or serve ads based on such personal information without user permission, Sandra Heikkinen, a Google spokeswoman, said. While Acxiom, Datran and some of their partners address their use of tracking in their privacy policies, such policies have become worthless, Mr. Rotenberg said. “Real transparency means that the user gets access to the information, not to a policy about the information,” he said. Paul M. Schwartz, a law professor and privacy expert at the law school of the University of California, Berkeley, said the unwitting participation by consumers makes online marketing different from offline.“Interactive media really gets into this creepy Orwellian thing, where it’s a record of our thoughts on the way to decision-making,” he said. “We’re like the data-input clerks now for the industry.” QUESTIONS 1. How did you feel reading this article? Explain why. 2. How does it reflect some of the ideas explored in Incognito? WALL-E by Andrew Stanton This film is set 700 years in the future when the earth has become uninhabitable as a result of consumerism and neglect. The human race has evacuated a toxic, barren and litter ridden earth, leaving behind trash compactor robots to clean up. For hundreds of lonely years, WALL-E (Waste Allocation Load Lifter Earth-class) has been routinely compacting and collecting rubbish. A spaceship lands and deploys a sleek search robot named EVE (Extraterrestrial Vegetation Evaluator) when he discovers a seedling plant growing amongst the garbage. This fertile symbol of hope for the recolonisation of earth takes both robots on an adventure that changes the destiny of their kind and of humanity. FILM TECHNIQUES Just as novels utilise the power of language, films utilise a range of techniques to engage their audience and develop their ideas. There is very little dialogue in WALL-E so the film relies more on a variety of camera shots, lighting and sound to create meaning. CAMERA SHOTS The size of the shot the audience sees in the frame is defined by the proximity of the camera to the subject. EXTREME LONG SHOT An extreme long shot is a landscape or vista scene. It is often used to establish the world of the narrative, to clarify the setting and signal the atmosphere. LONG SHOT A long shot includes a full length figure and some of the surroundings. This can establish character or action and show links between characters and their setting. MEDIUM SHOT A medium shot shows a person from the waist up. The audience can view facial expressions and body language. It develops character or shows action. CLOSE-UP A close-up focuses intently on the face, hands or feet of a character or an object at close range. This emphasises emotion and increases tension. CAMERA ANGLE The angle of the camera contributes to the atmosphere of the scene. It also suggests the importance or power a character holds. HIGH-ANGLE SHOT In a high-angle shot the camera is above the character or object. This has the effect of making the object appear weak, inferior or under pressure. EYE-LEVEL SHOT An eye-level angle shows a character at the same level as the camera. It encourages the audience to not only see the character as an equal but also to see the world of the film from their perspective. LOW-ANGLE SHOT In a low-angle shot, the camera is below the character or object. This has the effect of making that character seem powerful and important. CAMERA MOVEMENT Moving the camera in particular ways focuses attention on particular characters, objects and actions. It can also contribute to the tension by slowly revealing part of a scene and make the audience feel part of the action. There are four main types of movement: TRACKING – Mounted on wheels, the camera runs parallel to the action, keeping pace with the movement of a character. This captures the intensity of action and the emotions of characters. DOLLY – The camera, again mounted on wheels, zooms in (dolly in) or zooms out (dolly out). This movement forward or backward can intensify the drama and provide details about the surroundings. PANNING – The camera remains in one position but rotates to follow the action. This often reveals scenery, establishes setting or provides a moment of further important detail. TILT – The camera again remains in one position, but tilts up and down. This can be used to follow the subject or move slowly from head to toes of a character. This can heighten empathy, tension or humour of a scene. LIGHTING Lighting plays an important part in creating atmosphere. Consider also colours which are emphasised and the symbolism of them. HIGH-KEY : High key lighting is free from dark shadows and is sometimes used to create an optimistic atmosphere. LOW-KEY : This lighting emphasises shadow and is often dark and suspenseful. BACK LIGHTING : The light comes from behind the subject, creating a silhouette, creating a sense of mystery and foreboding. SOUND In addition to what the audience sees, consider also what they hear. When listening to DIALOGUE consider the volume, tone and pitch of the characters’ speech. Also listen carefully to the MUSIC (score) accompanying a scene as it is a powerful generator of atmosphere. Consider also its volume and style. Just as influential as sound, is the lack of it. Consider when SILENCE occurs and why. CLOSE STUDY OF SELECTED SCENES SCENE 1 – Out There a) Watch the opening sequence of the film with the sound muted. What images and colours are dominant? What kind of world is this? Which camera shots assist this impression? b) Watch these first few minutes again this time with the sound. How does the music change the tone? c) What is WALL-E’s role in this world? Which camera shots guide the audience’s understanding of this purpose? d) How is the audience’s understanding of this world developed in the next scene? SCENE 4 – A Day at Work a) Describe WALL-E’s daily routine. What characterises his habits? b) What does WALL-E’s relationship with the cockroach reveal about him? c) How does Stanton want the audience to feel about WALL-E? How is this encouraged? d) How is humour generated in this scene? e) The discovery of the plant is a pivotal moment in this scene. Which film techniques are used to indicate this? f) At the end of this scene WALL-E notices and follows the red dot. Which film techniques are used to develop suspense? SCENE 5 – EVE Arrives a) What is WALL-E’s first impression of EVE? Which film techniques show this? b) What does EVE’s flight through the sky reveal about her character? What does the music contribute to this moment? c) Why does EVE’s first shot at WALL-E shock the audience? Of what does this remind us? d) Explore the contrasts between WALL-E and EVE. e) Consider what this scene reveals about: i) Power ii) Freedom iii) Appearance and Reality iv) Science and Technology SCENE 9 – WALL-E’s Favourite Things a) What are some of WALL-E’s favourite things? b) Why does he want to share them with EVE? c) Explain what the exploration of them reveals about both WALL-E and EVE? d) What happens when EVE sees the plant? Why does this occur? e) Outline WALL-E’s response to this. What does he attempt to do in the next scene? What does this reflect about how he feels about EVE? How do film techniques echo this? f) SCENE 20 – Escape Pod a) What is suggested about technology when we see WALL-E trapped in the escape pod? b) What film techniques are used to show EVE’s distress when she sees the pod explode? c) Why is this an important turning point in the relationship between WALL-E and EVE? d) What does this scene convey about freedom? SCENE 24 – It Only Takes a Moment a) Why is the captain surprised when he sees the images of Earth from EVE’s memory? b) What is the Captain’s realisation at this point in the film? How does a high angle camera shot and music emphasise this? c) Describe the character of the Captain. What does he represent about the current state of the human race? d) The security footage that EVE sees functions as a flashback. What is its purpose? SCENE 25 – Code A113 a) When the Captain gives the plant some water he says “You just needed someone to look after you.” What does he realise once he articulates this important statement? Which film techniques are used to reinforce his realisation? b) Describe the character of Auto. How are film techniques used to develop his character in this scene? c) What kind of shot is used of the former captains of the Axiom? What in particular does it illustrate? d) Who is the most powerful character in this scene? Explain your answer. e) Consider what this scene reveals about: i) Power ii) Freedom iii) Appearance and Reality iv) Science and Technology CLOSE STUDY OF CHARACTERS For each of the characters below, complete the following questions: 1. Which adjectives best describe this character? 2. Select one of these adjectives and outline a scene which illustrates this quality. 3. How does this character’s physical appearance reflect their personality? 4. What is the purpose of this character in the film? 5. What kind of music would best accompany this character? Explain your choice. 6. Which colour would best symbolise this character? Explain your choice. WALL-E EVE The Captain Auto from Interview with Wall-E’s Writer and Director by Alex Billington Wall-E is both written and directed by Pixar's Andrew Stanton, who also wrote and directed A Bug's Life and Finding Nemo. Many have questioned where he actually got the idea for the look of Wall-E, whether it was inspired by E.T. or Short Circuit, but Stanton confirms that it was something else entirely - binoculars. He recalls playing with binoculars at a baseball game and thinking that "you don't need a mouth, you don't need a nose, you get a whole personality just from them." That drove the whole rest of the design and the remainder came out of logic. They wanted it to be a roving trash compactor that could hide like a turtle and would have tank treads so he could get over any terrain. "I wanted to see it as a machine first and as a character second." Can you tell us the story of how Wall-E went from the idea in your mind with the binoculars to actually becoming a film here at Pixar? Andrew Stanton: Well, actually, I'm sorry, there's no short answer to this, but in '94 we were having a lunch about what to do next because we were finishing up Toy Story and we realized we were already behind schedule-wise if we were going to make another movie soon. So we came up with A Bug's Life from that lunch, but before we got to that, we threw out a bunch of other sort of half-baked thoughts. Some of them just were settings, like an ocean, some of them were your fears, and that's – it's fascinating to see later that they became Finding Nemo and Monsters Inc. But then we just had a character we came up with. We came up with the last robot on Earth, this robot that just keeps doing the same thing, that got left on for whatever reason, and it's just doing the same job. And I just thought that was the saddest character I had ever heard of and I just loved that and I remember Pete Docter and I couldn't drop it for a couple of weeks. We said, wouldn't it be cool if it was sort of like R2D2, you sort of had to infer based on how it was engineered how it -- it would almost be a movie about Luxo Jr. through the whole thing. And then the very next thing we said is nobody will ever let us do it, because we hadn't even proven ourselves as filmmakers, hadn't proven Toy Story yet and it just seemed so out there. But as filmgoers, as geeks, we were like, I would go see a movie like that! So that just stuck up there for a long time and we got completely swept up in all these other movies and so it wasn't until Finding Nemo that I was having to do rewrites, so about 2002, so we're jumping to eight years later, almost a decade later, and I couldn't stop -- so I started thinking about this little guy again, and I said, he's so lonely, it's such a great character, I don't even know what he's called, I don't why we've left Earth... And I just started to answer all that. I found myself very quickly writing the first act of the movie, which is not that different then what you have here. Then I couldn't stop. Then, I was like, by the time Nemo came out, this is what I want to do next, and I was definitely emboldened by the idea that Nemo was so huge. I mean, I had gone with my gut on so many things on Nemo that seemed iffy and not so sure. The whole time I was working on them here that it kind of threw me for a loop that it went over so well and it gave me a lot of confidence to just stick with my gut. So I said, well, my gut is telling me to do this movie, so I'm going to do it. So it was in 2003 near the end of the year, Nemo was already out, that I was really thinking seriously about design and stuff like that. And I knew the design of him was going to be crucial to how engaging he was and how much you wanted to follow him and how much you wanted to infer personality on him and the big epiphany was definitely late 2003. I was at a baseball game and I got the binoculars and I think the rest is known. So it had a long gestation period, a long time sitting on the stove, simmering. How did you come up with “Hello, Dolly!” as the film Wall-E watches in his truck? Stanton: I know, and I love the choice, too, and I couldn't explain it at first. I just knew I wanted an old-fashioned song against space, and I just loved the future against the past, but I thought that's millions of songs. Which one do I pick? And so I started going into standards and a lot of standards come from musicals, and that sort of led me to musicals, and I did musical theater as a kid, so I knew a lot of them. I got to Hello, Dolly!, and I was just hittin' songs on iTunes, and you're just hearing the beginnings and I hear 'Out there...' and I loved it! I was like, that just works, I can't even explain, it just works, with the stars and what a great way to kick off the movie. It kind of propels you into it and it was a great juxtaposition to such a dire background. I loved the two together. I thought it really balanced the movie and it really, in a weird way, helped you meet Wall-E before you meet him. Then when I thought about the song, I said, why do I like this so much and then I realized not only is it catchy and it has this sort of naiveté to it, but it's about these two guys that have never left their small town and they want to go out into the big world and kiss a girl. And I thought -- that's Wall-E, that's it! So I started looking at other songs, just to see if there would be any other epiphanies, and I got this huge one from watching the movie and seeing 'It Only Takes a Moment' with the two lovers and when I saw them hold hands, it was like, that's exactly it, that's how we will convey that the phrase 'I love you.' When you get that much back from research, you just take it as fate, you just go -- I know and I'm running with it. I know I will be answering this question for the rest of my life, but it's a price I'm willing to pay because it just works. How do you go about developing a story, like in Wall-E, that really doesn't have a lot of dialogue. How do you go about writing that? Stanton: Here's my argument. There's dialogue from frame one. Each of those beeps and those squawks and those whirrs mean something and they're trying to convey a specific thing, so I actually wrote the script with dialogue – wrote it just like a regular script. I would just put the dialogue in brackets. So if he says 'hey, come over here,' I wrote 'hey, come over here' and I put it in brackets. Now it was a map for me and for anybody else. When you put in a sound, it's got to convey that. And so it was actually very conventional how I wrote it. The only thing I did that was a little unconventional, is the manner in which I formatted the script. I was very inspired by Dan O'Bannon's script for Alien. His description paragraphs were not your typical paragraphs, they were actually small phrases that were all left justified, almost like a haiku, and they created this rhythm of just being in the moment of quiet and visual. And you found yourself reading the descriptions much more than you normally do a script because of that form, instead of just skipping to the dialogue. It really kind of paced you as a reader and gave you the much more visceral feel of what it will be like to watch that movie. So I used that for Wall-E -- it really helped. QUESTIONS 1. Why did Stanton find binoculars inspiring? 2. What were some of the other influences for the physical appearance of character of WALL-E? Find pictures of these influences and list the similarities and differences. 3. What is Stanton’s explanation for the choice of music in the film? 4. Stanton argues that there is indeed dialogue in the film. What does he mean by this? OPTIONAL SYNTHESIS EXTENSION TASK Create a multimedia presentation that fully explores a key theme from the novel Incognito OR the film, WALL-E, OR the novel Fahrenheit 451 OR the novel The Giver OR the short story There will Come Soft Rains. Use at least three media, for example: music, painting, poetry, sculture (or a diorama), photography in your exploration. Draw at least two comparisons or contrasts between themes in your life and in the text you choose for this task.