Clay Rankin 4/4/00 Public Speaking A Rhetorical Criticism to a section of Frederick Douglass’ speech “What To the Slave Is the Fourth of July?” When “the Rochester Ladies’ Anti-Slavery Society” asked Frederick Douglass to speak “in Corinthian Hall on the Fourth of July”, he declined to speak on that particular day but agreed to do so the following day (McFeely, 172). Barely allowing the American people a day to wallow in their Independence Day celebrations, Douglass delivered his scathing Fifth of July speech entitled “What To the Slave Is the Fourth of July?” Douglass claimed that the democratic ideals of Liberty, Justice, and Equality were onesided, because these rights only extended to the white segment of the population and excluded the black members of society. During his speech, Douglass exposed the paradoxical nature of the Fourth of July, because he noted that while the whites commenced to celebrate their freedom and rights, the blacks continued to be second-class citizens who faced gross injustices and who were denied basic rights. And so by looking at the Fourth of July from the perspective of an African American, Douglass made note of the deep racial divisions in American society that lay beneath the thin covering of national celebrations like the Fourth of July. In this paper, a historical analysis will be provided to help understand why Douglass gave the speech, a descriptive analysis will be used to highlight Douglass’ most effective rhetorical techniques, a critical perspective will be developed to explain the descriptive analysis, an evaluation of the speech will be given, and a conclusion will be drawn. To help understand why Frederick Douglass gave this speech, we need to examine the historical context of the time period in which the speech was delivered. During the era of the 1850’s, America was in the process of undergoing social reform. At the core of this reform, lay the question of whether slavery was a justifiable institution or whether it should be outlawed. Those individuals who were advocates of slavery lived in the South, and they claimed that slave labor was needed to help support and bolster the growing cotton industry. Claiming that they were no worse than Northerners, Southerners said that slave labor was similar to the labor that workers in northern factories had to do. Like the slaves, Southern slave owners claimed that the factory workers also worked in oppressive conditions where they had to endure long hours of work in poor conditions (Henretta, Brody, and Dumenil, 341). However, Northerners did not accept this reason, or any of the many others, that the Southerners gave to support the institution of slavery. Perhaps, one of the most motivating political factors that led to Frederick Douglass to delivering a harsh rebuttal and condemnation of the institution of slavery in his speech was the Fugitive Slave Act of 1850 that had just been passed. Under this Act, American citizens, including Northerners, had to provide slave-catchers and owners with help if a slave had runaway. The implications of this law were that slaves were no longer guaranteed their freedom if they escaped up North. Thus to slaves, it appeared as though there was no longer a differentiation between what the North and South stood for concerning the issue of slavery (Douglass, xiii-xiv). Along with these new guidelines, the Fugitive Slave Act also made it easier for Southern slaveholders to reclaim their runaway slaves, because the new law “required a slaveholder to supply only minimal proof of ownership before having an alleged runaway returned to him” (Voss, 45). The significance of the Fugitive Slave Act of 1850 is that it made Douglass more adamant and radical when expressing his disapproval towards slavery. Whereas before he had advocated peaceful means to voice his disapproval, Douglass now believed that more radical measures were appropriate (Voss, 45). And although he does not advocate that people should riot or turn to violence, we see that, through the choice of his word selection in his speech, he is definitely radical and unquestionably harsh with his condemnation of slavery. To cite one example of this, he says towards the end of his speech, “It is not the gentle shower, but thunder. We need the storm, the whirlwind, and the earthquake… The conscience of the nation must be roused... The hypocrisy of the nation must be exposed” (speech, 3). Through this example, we see that he is at, perhaps, the pinnacle of his anger in the speech, because he metaphorically refers to natural disasters to accomplish the task of shaking the infrastructure of American beliefs. Along with understanding the social context of the time period and the Fugitive Slave Act of 1850, we also need to examine Douglass’ ideas concerning a “multiracial democracy” to understand why he gave the speech. One of Douglass’ core beliefs was that “the constitution, along with the Declaration of Independence, ‘gives us a platform broad enough’ on which to build a multiracial democracy, ‘without regard to color, class, or clime’” (Stephens, 177). Thus, although the founders wrote the constitution with regards to white male property owners, Douglass believes that those rights were to be expanded to others in the future. As Douglass saw it, the constitution “also contains language and provisions clearly intended to steer the young republic towards more inclusive employment of its egalitarian ideals” (Stephens, 180). Thus through Douglass’ interpretation, he believed that the rights of the constitution should eventually be given to all people regardless of their class or social status. With these ideas in mind, we see why Douglass gave this speech, because he saw the need for advocating the idea of a multiracial democracy to the people of Rochester New York. And in turn, one of his possible motivations for delivering this speech might have been to address that a multiracial democracy was still not in place and that constitutional rights were still not granted to the blacks of the nation. Finally, along with understanding the social context of the time period, the Fugitive Slave Act of 1850 and the idea of a multiracial democracy, it is helpful to look at how Douglass’ audience viewed him as well as how they reacted to his speech. Douglass presented this speech in Rochester in Corinthian Hall to a crowd that numbered between 500-600 people (Blassingame, 359). And in addition, the crowd had great respect for him as an orator, because he was considered to be the most prominent black American of the time (Douglass, xiii). Thus, after finishing his oration, Douglass received “ ‘a universal burst of applause’” (Blassingame, 359). This in part can be explained because they respected him and his ideas, and also because they too shared antislavery views (McFeely, 172). Along with understanding the historical context of the speech, a descriptive analysis is helpful to examine the speech itself. For example, when looking at the style of Douglass’ speech, we want to see that “the language reflects the rhetor’s role” (Campbell and Burkholder, 30). And we see this throughout Douglass’ speech, because his usage of language reflects his role as being one who speaks against the institution of slavery and who advocates equality. One example of this is when he says, “What to the American slave is your Fourth of July? I answer, a day that reveals to him more than all other days of the year, the gross injustice and cruelty to which he is the constant victim” (speech, 3). Here we see that he juxtaposes the white meaning of the Fourth of July with what it means to the blacks. And he says, that while this is a day for the whites to celebrate, this is also a day for the blacks to mourn, because they are reminded that they are secondclass citizens who are not granted their constitutional rights. Also, from this statement we are provided with, and reminded of, Douglass’ condemnation of slavery and his call for equality. Douglass does not use soft or friendly language. Rather, by delivering a diatribe towards the nation’s Independence Day and by using strong words like “injustice” and “cruelty,” we see that those words, and his statement as a whole, reflect his role as being a leading abolitionist as well as an adamant proponent for equality. And at the same time, it allows us to see that he is one who is not afraid to expose the injustices in American society. Along with demonstrating that style involves how language reflects the rhetor’s role, we also see that the style of Douglass’ speech reflects specific techniques of rhetoric. One specific technique that he incorporates into several areas of his speech is the usage of the antithesis. This rhetorical technique is where the rhetor places parts of a sentence against one another to reveal contrasting ideas. For example in his speech, Douglass says, “Fellow citizens, above your national, tumultuous joy, I hear the mournful wail of millions…” (speech, 2). This is an example of an antithesis because Douglass is contrasting the two opposing emotions that whites and blacks feel on the Fourth of July. Specifically, he says that while the whites are joyous, the blacks mourn. Another example of an antithesis that he provides is when he says, “Whether we turn to the declarations of the past, or to the professions of the present…” (speech, 2). Again, we see here that he is contrasting two different ideas, because he is placing two different time periods, the past and present, against one another in the same sentence. Along with the usage of the antithesis, Douglass also uses the specific technique of enthymemes in his speech. An enthymeme is where you are “presenting an argument in such a way that audience members participate in its creation”(Campbell and Burkholder, 30). In other words, the goal of an enthymeme is to allow the audience to finish your argument for you. One example of this in Douglass’ speech is where he says, “I will use the severest language I can command, and yet not one word shall escape me that any man, whose judgement is not blinded by prejudice, or who is not at heart a slaveholder, shall not confess to be right and just” (speech, 2). This is an example of an enthymeme because Douglass is allowing the audience to finish his argument and ask themselves the questions of whether or not they are prejudice and slaveholders at heart. And he says to them that if they are not, then they should agree with what he is saying. Thus his technique of using an enthymeme is an effective speech strategy, because he is allowing the audience to go through the thought process for themselves and finish what he is going to say in their own heads. Besides including antitheses and enthymemes in his speech, Douglass also uses vivid imagery throughout his speech. Because this is one of the most abundant techniques that he uses in his speech, Douglass is able, through the usage of his words, to create clear mental images in the minds of the listeners and readers so that they are able to both hear and visualize his arguments. An example of this vivid imagery is when he refers to “the chains of servitude” (speech, 2). Here Douglass uses the adjective “chains” to describe the impact that servitude has on the lives of slaves. By using that particular adjective, he is inferring that they are bound and unable to escape from their master’s authority, and that they are at his complete mercy. Thus, the listeners and readers of the speech are able to envision a slave unable to break away or move from his owner’s control. Another example of his usage of imagery is when he says, “to beat them with sticks, to flay their flesh with the lash…” (speech, 3). And by using these descriptive adjectives, we are able to paint a horrifyingly vivid image in our minds with regards to the cruelties that slaves endured. Finally, along with using antitheses, enthymemes, and vivid imagery, Douglass also incorporates the technique of using metaphors in his oration. An example of this is when he says, “There is not a man beneath the canopy of heaven who does not know that slavery is wrong for him” (speech, 3). By using the metaphor of a “canopy of heaven,” Douglass is stating that there is not a man on earth that does not know that the institution of slavery is wrong. So in that sense, he is also using the “canopy of heaven” to infer that there are universal morals held by all individuals, and that the practice of slavery violates those morals. Along with looking at style of the speech, it is also an important part of the descriptive analysis to show that Douglass infers that he and other blacks are deprived of basic constitutional rights. In the second sentence of the section of the speech, Douglass asks his audience, “What have I or those I represent to do with your national independence?” (speech, 1). Thus, we see that from the beginning of his oration, Douglass is making it clear that he, and his fellow black countrymen, have nothing to do with the Fourth of July celebrations, because they are deprived of the constitutional rights that the whites have. And a little later in the speech he says, “I say it with a sad sense of disparity between us. I am not included within the pale of this glorious anniversary. Your high independence only reveals the immeasurable distance between us” (speech, 2). Through this statement, Douglass is commenting that because neither he nor other blacks share in the rights of liberty and justice, they can not consider themselves to be a part of the Fourth of July celebrations. To further illustrate that he and other blacks are deprived of their rights he says that they are denied the rights of humanity and liberty as well as those granted to them by the Constitution and the Bible (speech, 2). And to emphasize this point concerning their depravation of rights he says, “What to the American slave is your Fourth of July? I answer, a day that reveals to him more than all other days of the year, the gross injustice and cruelty to which he is the constant victim” (speech, 3). Finally besides looking at style of the speech and examining how blacks were deprived of their rights, the descriptive analysis also shows how Douglass builds a common ground that all of his listeners can stand on. He does so by claiming that his audience already knows that everyone is entitled to basic rights such as liberty. And he illustrates this point when he says, “Would you have me argue that man is entitled to liberty? That he is the rightful owner of his own body? You have already declared it” (speech, 3). Through this statement we see that he is explaining to his audience that he does not need to spend his time demonstrating that all Americans are entitled to basic rights. And, when he says that they have already declared it, we can infer that he is referring back to the American Revolution when the colonies declared their independence from Britain in order to obtain their own freedom and liberties. With this in mind, he infers that the idea of liberty should not be new or unclear to American citizens, because after all, they fought the Revolution to gain this right. Along with providing a historical analysis and descriptive analysis of Douglass’ speech, a critical perspective will be developed to explain the descriptive analysis. I decided to illustrate how Douglass incorporated style, the feeling of deprivation, and commonality in his speech, because these were the three major aspects of the speech that were most apparent and emphasized. Douglass incorporates a myriad of different stylistic techniques into his speech, and the reader is bombarded with many examples of how language reflects his role as a rhetor. Not only that, but he provides the reader with multiple examples of antitheses, enthymemes, vivid imagery, and metaphors throughout his oration. Also, the biggest point that he makes in his speech is that he and other blacks are denied their basic rights. More importantly, although not mentioned, as often, is his belief that the blacks, like the whites, are entitled to and should not be deprived of basic rights. The first critical perspective I used was that of style portion of the rationalistic approach. In this approach, it is asks, “How does the language reflect the rhetor’s role?” (Campbell and Burkholder, 30). In addition it asks if there were any specific techniques, such as enthymemes, antitheses, imagery, or metaphors, used to enhance the speech. As the text notes, “style critics sometimes describe how rhetors use language to make the discourse aesthetically pleasing to audiences…” (Campbell and Burkholder, 81). In other words, this aspect of the rationalistic approach looks to see not only how the orator used language to reflect his own role and position, but also to see how the speaker made the speech pleasing to the listeners and or readers. And so in Douglass’ speech, we see that he used all of these aspects to not only increase his credibility but to also provide an aesthetically pleasing speech to his audience. Thus, when looking at the audience’s reaction to the speech, we might infer that part of their applause resulted from them being pleased by the eloquence of his speech. Along with using the style segment of the rationalistic approach, I also used the social movement section of the psychosocial approach. In this approach, one of the key aspects is that the “individuals must experience relative deprivation; that is, they must see themselves deprived in relation to others who become a reference group or a basis for comparison” (Campbell and Burkholder, 87). This means that individuals must feel that they are lacking something when comparing themselves to others around them. And so in Douglass’ speech, we see that he creates this feeling of deprivation, because he notes that blacks were unable to have rights of liberty and equality. Also with regards to this perspective, “what individuals perceive as unmet needs is affected by the social and political climate of the culture in which they live” (Campbell and Burkholder, 88). And so with regards to the political and social climate of the 1850’s, it is important to understand the significance of the passing of the Fugitive Slave Act of 1850. Due to the passing of this law, blacks no longer felt that they could retreat to the north. More importantly, they felt as though their freedom was in jeopardy, because now they faced the possibilities of northerners turning them back over to their owners. Thus their need and agency for liberty and freedom probably grew even more. And so in relation to Douglass’ speech, we hear Douglas calling for these rights in front of the people of Rochester. Finally, besides using the style part of the rationalistic approach and social movement section of the psychosocial approach, I also used the identification and consubstantiality aspects of the dramatistic approach. Through this approach, a common ground is looked for. Not only that, “But the sheer fact of common experience means little unless that commonality is recognized and acknowledged, a process that occurs through symbols, usually language” (Campbell and Burkholder, 93). Thus Douglass achieved this in his speech, because he identified that all Americans are entitled to liberty and equality. Not only that, but through his usage of language he answered the question out loud by claiming that everyone knew that people were entitled to liberty. And, as Stephens points out in his critique of Douglass’ speech, Douglass believed that the Constitution and Declaration of Independence allowed for a multiracial democracy where people of all colors and race would receive equal rights (Stephens, 177). And so in essence, Stephens is pointing out that Douglass’ interpretation of these two documents called for a commonality of rights to exist between all people. Finally, along with giving a historical analysis, descriptive analysis and a critical perspective, an evaluation of the speech will be made. Concerning the style segment of the rationalistic approach and the deprivation section of the psychosocial approach, I believe that Douglass did a good job and fulfilled the necessary requirements of those approaches. As is noted in the Campbell and Burkholder text, both the rationalistic and psychosocial perspectives deal with the audience’s reactions to the speech and whether or not the rhetor successfully managed to convey his message to his listeners (Campbell and Burkholder, 111-112). With this in mind, it is important to note that the crowd of over 500 people applauded Douglass at the end of his speech. As it was noted, he was given “ ‘a universal burst of applause’” from the immediate audience (Blassingame, 359). Thus, we can conclude that Douglass effectively delivered his message to the packed crowd inside Corinthian Hall. Along with doing a good job with the rhetorical and psychosocial approaches, I believe that Douglass also accomplished his goal in the dramatistic approach. In this approach, “critics are more interested in judging the ethics and/or artistry of the means used to produce those effects” (Campbell and Burkholder, 114). Knowing this, I believe that Douglass did a very good job in this area, because his speech contained many examples of well-crafted sentences. For example, Douglass says, “When the dogs in your streets, when the fowls of the air, when the cattle on your hills, when the fish of the sea, and the reptiles that crawl, shall be unable to distinguish the slave from a brute, then I will argue with you that the slave is a man!” (speech, 3). Amongst many other sentences in the speech, the style of this sentence illustrates one example of where Douglass uses the stylistic techniques of imagery and repetition, to convey his message. Finally, I would like to use the artistic criterion to evaluate Douglass’ speech. From a rationalistic standpoint, “discourses are expected to be unified, consistent, and coherent in structure and to be clear and precise in their use of language or style” (Campbell and Burkholder, 121). And so with regards to this, Douglass did do a good job, because he chose his words carefully, he was very clear in his message, and he was consistent. Echoing his notion concerning the hypocrisy of the Fourth of July, Douglass says at the end of his speech, “search out every abuse and when you have found the last…you will say with me that, for revolting barbarity and shameless hypocrisy, America reigns without a rival” (speech, 3-4). Thus this sentence illustrates that his ideas are very clear and thought out. More importantly, he leaves no questions as to where he stands with his beliefs. And, he also leaves the listeners with the sounds of strong and unrelenting condemnation ringing in their ears. Although from a rationalistic standpoint Douglass did a good artistic job, I do not believe that he did very well from a psychosocial standpoint. From this perspective, “the rhetor describes vividly and memorably depicts the satisfaction-what the situation would be if the plan were adopted or the product purchased” (Campbell and Burkholder, 122). However, Douglass does not do this in his speech, because he does not infer what the situation would be like if blacks were to achieve the same rights as the whites. Instead of leaving his immediate audience with a sense of satisfaction, he ends the speech on a down note by saying that America is the winner when it comes to demonstrating hypocrisy. Rather than providing any hope or glint of a promising future, he leaves the audience to ponder his strong accusations. And instead of implementing a plan, Douglass neglects to offer any ways to achieve the equality he and other blacks long for. Although Douglass did not do a very good job from a psychosocial perspective when evaluating through an artistic lens, Douglass did do a nice job from a dramatistic perspective. From this perspective, one looks at “assessing the artistry of the rhetorical act-its strategic use of the available resources in appeal, argument, and language in order to achieve its ends” (Campbell and Burkholder, 123). In other words, the primary concern in this approach is to tell how well the rhetor gave his speech by looking primarily at the language he used (Campbell and Burkholder, 124). So from this perspective, Douglass did a good job, because he was artistic with the formation of his sentences, and the majority of those well-constructed sentences helped to emphasize his own viewpoints. For example he says, “Whether we turn to the declarations of the past, or to the professions of the present, the conduct of the nation seems equally hideous and revolting” (speech, 2). Thus, we see that through his usage of an antithesis and strong adjectives, he is claiming that the nation’s inability to provide blacks with equal rights is inexcusable. By doing this, he leaves the audience with the unmistakable impression of being thoroughly disgusted of America’s present state. In conclusion, when examining Douglass’ speech, it is important to understand the historical context in which the speech was given, because it provides reason as to why he spoke on the issue he did. In other words, due to the social atmosphere of the time, we see that Douglass thought it was necessary to address the pressing issue of slavery that confronted the nation at the time. Also, through the descriptive analysis and the critical perspectives, we are able to examine many of the ways in which he used rhetorical techniques to craft his effective speech. Finally, by providing an analysis of the speech, we were able to conclude, that from an artistic perspective, Douglass, overall, gave an eloquently effective speech.