2ND YEAR WRITING – CRITERIA AND MARKING SCHEME ( MEDIAZIONE & TOURISM) - STUDENT COPY MARKS TASK ACHIEVEMENT Band 5 13 – 15 Very good & professional Band 4 11 – 12 Good & reasonably professional Band 3 9 – 10 Satisfactory – but needs reviewing in professional situation Band 2 6–8 Not sufficient response (not sufficiently accurate or professional) Band 1 5 & less poor COHERENCE & COHESION Satisfies all requirements of task Tone, register and format appropriate Covers the requirements of the task sufficiently Tone, register and format appropriate Most information or points addressed and partially developed Tone, register and format mostly appropriate Generally fairly coherent but … Paragraphing not always appropriate Some, but not all, features of task attempted & / or only partially covered Tone may be uneven Format may be inappropriate Confusion as to situation & reader None of required points addressed satisfactorily LEXICAL RESOURCE Wide range of appropriate & precise vocabulary Words and phrases from original question are reformulated Vocabulary precise enough to convey clear meaning & sufficient range to allow some precision Words and phrases from original question generally reformulated Simple vocabulary mainly correct Uses some phrases from question paper rather than reformulating Errors in grammar and punctuation do not usually reduce communication Presents information & ideas but not arranged coherently and there is no clear progression in the response Haphazard paragraphing Limited range of vocabulary used repetitively and may be minimally adequate for the task Errors in verb forms, punctuation and haphazard changes of tense confuse meaning Does not organise ideas logically Vocabulary too simple or imprecise Limited range of words other than those in original question Some sentences are accurate but errors predominate and may distort meaning Accuracy mostly in memorised phrases Sequences information logically Logically organises ideas – there is clear progression GRAMMATICAL RANGE & ACCURACY Writing - maximum 20 marks in total: Long task maximum marks = 15 Short task maximum marks = 5 ( corresponds to ‘band’ above) Wide range of structures used with flexibility Punctuation accurate and helpful Generally has good control of grammar Punctuation is generally helpful and accurate 2ND YEAR WRITING – CRITERIA AND MARKING SCHEME ( LANGUAGE & LITERATURE) - STUDENT COPY MARKS Band 5 18 - 20 TASK ACHIEVEMENT Satisfies all requirements of task Justifies personal opinion well Tone & register appropriate Covers the requirements of the task sufficiently Supports personal opinion Tone & register appropriate Most information or points addressed and partially developed Given information not always logically used to support opinion Tone, register mostly appropriate Generally fairly coherent but … Paragraphing not always appropriate Some, but not all, features of task attempted & / or only partially covered Given information my be used irrelevantly Tone may be uneven Confusion as to situation & reader None of required points poor addressed satisfactorily Given information may be misunderstood Writing : maximum 20 marks Very good COHERENCE & COHESION Band 4 14 - 17 Good Band 3 12 - 13 Satisfactory Band 2 8 - 11 Not sufficient response Band 1 7 & less LEXICAL RESOURCE Wide range of appropriate & precise vocabulary Words and phrases from original question are reformulated Vocabulary precise enough to convey clear meaning & sufficient range to allow some precision Words and phrases from original question generally reformulated Simple vocabulary mainly correct Uses some phrases from question paper rather than reformulating Errors in grammar and punctuation do not usually reduce communication Presents information & ideas but not arranged coherently and there is no clear progression in the response Haphazard paragraphing Limited range of vocabulary used repetitively and may be minimally adequate for the task Errors in verb forms, punctuation and haphazard changes of tense confuse meaning Does not organise ideas logically Vocabulary too simple or imprecise Limited range of words other than those in original question Some sentences are accurate but errors predominate and may distort meaning Accuracy mostly in memorised phrases Sequences information logically Logically organises ideas – there is clear progression GRAMMATICAL RANGE & ACCURACY Wide range of structures used with flexibility Punctuation accurate and helpful Generally has good control of grammar Punctuation is generally helpful and accurate