Teaching Writers Using Six Traits Ideas Organization Word Choice Sentence Fluency Voice Mechanics Presentation Teaching For Ideas Think aloud as you select a topic for your own writing Write about things that happen in the classroom As you read aloud, make self-to-text connections. Discuss the possibility of writing about these ideas Share jacket flap material and dedications to make connections with where authors get their ideas Search the web for author info Share books by authors who wrote about things that happened in their own lives (Tomie dePaola, Patricia Polacco) Resources Dear Annie by Judith Casely Dear Mr. Blueberry by Simon James The Jolly Postman by Janet and Alan Ahlberg Stringbean’s trip to the Shining Sea by Vera Williams The Signmaker’s Assistant by Tedd Arnold The Wretched Stone by Chris Van Allsburg The Long, Long Letter by Elizabeth Spurr Learning To Swim in Swaziland by Nila Leigh Picnic at Mudsock Meadow by Patricia Polacco Some birthday! By Patricia Polacco Thundercake by Patricia Polacco Owl Moon by Jane Yolen This Quiet Lady by Charlotte Zolotow Someday a Tree by Eve Bunting Uncle Vova’s Tree by Patricia Polacco What Joe Saw by Anna Grossnickle Hines The Keeping Quilt by Patricia Polacco Wilfrid Gordon MacDonald Partridge by Mem Fox Teaching For Organization Listen for ways authors structure text Chart organizational words found in stories Create a daily news chart and combine it into a weekly summary. Talk about ways to organize the information Study illustrations for clues about the passing of time Talk about and list effective beginnings. Study effective endings Talk about surprises found in texts Recognize when authors stick to a topic Describe ways to organize information in non-fiction texts Resources The books of Eric Carle Last Time They Met by Anita Schreve Mysteries of Harris Burdick by Chris Van Allsburg Teaching for Rich Word Choices Listen for interesting word choices when reading aloud Share the works of authors who make rich word choices Play with words, substituting beginning sounds to make new words Teach tongue twisters Find examples of made-up words (Dr. Suess) Make wall thesauruses Throw away overused words – literally Replace dull words with rich words and vice versa. Compare the differences Use specific nouns and lively verbs; remember adjectives are not the only words that add interest Popcorn – Everyone stands and thinks of another word for an overused word such as good. When teacher points you give your word. If you don’t have one or someone else says your word you sit down. If you think of one you can stand up again. Walking Thesaurus – Teacher wears a plastic apron and gives post-it notes to students if they can think of another word for an overused word. Then they can stick it to the teachers apron. Round Robin – Put an overused word on a piece of paper. In teams pass around the paper and write as many words as you can in a given amount of time. Resources I Am Really A Princess by Carol Diggory Shields Nocturne by Jane Yolen Teaching For Sentence Fluency Compare sentences and fragments Explore different ways to write the same sentence. Try changing the word order to vary the structure Read pieces that have a natural rhythm Sing and clap to the beat; read and clap to the beat Count the number of words in a sentence. Are sentences of varying lengths? Combine shorter sentences to make longer ones and break up longer sentences into shorter ones Resources Aunt Flossie’s Hat by Elizabeth Fitzgerald Howard Honey, I love by Eloise Greenfield Teaching for Voice Explore the works of several illustrators. Talk about their style. Display the covers of two books by the same illustrator and one which is not. Try to determine which are by the same illustrator and which is different. Share pieces of writing that have voice. Praise pieces that are unique. Conduct author studies. Talk about what makes an author’s writing special. Read passages from distinctive writers. Try to identify the author. Resources The books of Eric Carle Chrysanthemum by Kevin Henkes Bats by Gail Gibbons Teaching For Mechanics Use big books, charts, and overheads as you read aloud so students can see what has been written. Read with expression illustrating the use of punctuation. Ask students to find specific punctuation marks. Discuss their function. Construct a high frequency word wall. Use important words which are representative of frequent rimes. Each word with the same beginning letter can be written in a different colour. Each day teachers calls out a word and students find it, chant the spelling and write it. Find words from your word wall in text – count how many times they occur. Use print from different sources and cut out high frequency words for a poster or display. Let students see you edit. Point out when you make errors and have to correct them. Write sentences with mistakes. Challenge students to find the mistakes. Hunt for capital letters. Make a list of why we use them. Resources Yo! Yes! By Chris Raschaka The Signmaker’s Assistant by Tedd Arnold Teaching For Presentation When sharing books, discuss the use of illustrations and how they are placed in the story Point out unusual or striking text features In non-fiction, show how graphs, charts, and tables add meaning Share a variety of ideas for publication (shape books, pop-up books, sound books, etc) Encourage the use of a variety of fonts to add meaning to the story Praise and show creative ways of presenting text and illustration Talk about the choice of medium for the illustrations Talk about the relationship between writers and illustrators Resources Glasses by Elaine Smith The Letter Jesters by Cathryn Falwell Stringbean’s Trip to the Shining Sea by Vera Williams The Night I Followed the Dog by Nina Laden When Picasso Met Mootise by Nina Laden