English Language Arts A30 Module 1 Assignment 3 English Language Arts A30 Assignment 3 English Language Arts A30 Assignment 3 Assignment Three A. Responding to Essays An essay is a piece of prose writing in which ideas on a single topic are presented, explained, argued, or described in an interesting way. Essays can be divided roughly into the categories of formal and informal. A formal essay: is impersonal, written by a knowledgeable author. is informative, explanatory. is developed in a logical and systematic way. An informal essay: is meant to entertain. is conversational in style. reveals the personality of the author. The topic of an informal essay is limited only by the personal choice of the writer. The treatment of the subject, the style, and tone all reflect the writer’s personality. It is his personal approach to the subject that makes the informal essay often as entertaining as a letter from a friend. Although an informal essay may appear to meander from one topic to another, it is unified through theme and the writer’s attitude to the subject of the essay. The theme, though usually unstated, is so central to the essay that the reader can easily identify it. (2) 1. Circle one of the choices below. “Native People Finally Claim Their Culture” is a(n) informal or formal essay? Reasons 1. 2. English Language Arts A30 Assignment 3 Evidence from the essay to support your reasons. 1. 2. (2) 2. In a sentence or two, give your first response to “Native People Finally Claim Their Future.” (2) 3. In sentence form, state the theme of “Native People Finally Claim Their Future.” (2) 4. In sentence form, discuss the tone of “Native People Finally Claim Their Future.” (6) 5. In his essay, Cuthand makes reference to a number of reserves. Explain what happened to the Last Mountain Reserve, the Thunderchild Reserve, the Pheasant Rump and Ocean Man Reserves. English Language Arts A30 Assignment 3 (4) 6. After some reflection, answer the following questions based on Cuthand’s essay. What was the impact of the Indian Act and the Soldier Settlement Act on the Native People’s of Saskatchewan in the early part of the 20th century? According to Cuthand what is being done to correct the injustices resulting from the loss of land in the 20th century? A pun is the humourous use of two words that have the same or similar sounds but different meanings, or the witty use of a word in two senses. For example, “The first thing that strikes a tourist coming to our province is the rocks.” A pun is sometimes unjustly considered a low form of humour, but if a pun is imaginative and fresh, it can add colour and a bit of the unexpected to a piece of writing. Shakespeare used puns to great effect in a number of his plays. Riddles are often based on puns such as this one. Q. A. Why couldn’t the animals play cards on the Ark? Because Noah sat on the deck. Puns can also be found in comic strips in newspapers and magazines. (4) 8. Find two examples of puns in newspapers, magazines, or in other materials available to you. You can copy them out in the space below or send in the original examples. English Language Arts A30 Assignment 3 B. Writing the Essay 1. Pre-writing A personal essay is an informal essay written in a conversational style and usually from a first-person point of view. When writing a personal essay you need to go beyond just telling about events or experiences. You need to explore the significance of an event or experience and offers a perspective on it. In a personal essay, at least three paragraphs in length, support or refute one of the following statements. Your essay may have a serious or humorous tone. Rural Saskatchewan people are the most interesting people in Canada Canadians television shows have no sense of humour. Canada is an imitation of the United States. Support means to argue in favour of something; refute means to argue against something or to prove an assertion to be in error. Examples, quotations, and statistics help you to support or to refute a statement. (3) In writing your essay, use the following steps. a. Write a purpose statement indicating your intent to the reader. My purpose is to _________________________________________ so that my reader________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________. English Language Arts A30 Assignment 3 Use the webbing technique in your pre-writing phase to generate and gather ideas about your topic. c. The following organizer will help you sort out your argument. Position Reason Evidence Reason Evidence Reason Evidence English Language Arts A30 Assignment 3 2. (4) d. Choose a method of arrangement. e. Use an outline or a tree diagram to show how you will put your ideas together. Writing the First Draft a. In the space provided on the next two pages write your first draft. In your first draft the focus is on content and clarity of ideas. Spelling and mechanics are not important in the first draft. b. Double-space your first draft so that you have space to make corrections and revisions. c. Provide an interesting and suitable title for your essay. Write your first draft on the following pages. English Language Arts A30 Assignment 3 English Language Arts A30 Assignment 3 English Language Arts A30 Assignment 3 (5) 3. Revising the First Draft If possible, it is a good idea to leave your first draft alone for awhile after writing it. After a few hours, or even better a day or two, you can come back to it with fresh eyes and the revision process will seem less onerous. To make revisions to your first draft use a different coloured pen than the one you used to write your first draft. This will make it easier for you to see what you want to change. Listed below is a self-assessment checklist to help you edit and proofread your first draft. The evaluation of your essay by your teacher will be based on the criteria listed in the self-assessment guide. Content and organization Does your introductory sentence grab your reader’s attention? Does your introductory paragraph clearly establish the topic of your essay? Are your ideas arranged in a logical order? Is there sufficient and appropriate evidence to defend your position? Is your concluding paragraph effective in that it wraps up the points made in the body of your essay? Is your tone, either humorous or serious, consistent? Does your essay have an interesting and suitable title? Sentence structure, spelling, mechanics and presentation Are your sentences clear and complete? Have you used transitional devices to make your essay coherent to your reader? Are your sentences punctuated correctly? Are your words colourful and expressive? Are all your words spelled correctly? Is the verb tense consistent throughout the essay? Is the overall appearance of the essay pleasing? Teacher Comments English Language Arts A30 Assignment 3 (15) 4. Presentation English Language Arts A30 Assignment 3 English Language Arts A30 Assignment 3 C. Responding to Poetry (4) 1. In a sentence or two give your first response to reading the poem in Lesson Three, “I am a Canadian” (3) 2. Duke Redbird’s poem is written from the first person point of view. In two or three sentences, say why this point of view is effective. (3) 3. In a sentence or two, state one theme of the two poems. “I am a Canadian” (2) 4. State the tone of Redbird’s poem and tell how he achieved this tone in his poem. Use sentence form. (3) 5. What is a country – the land or the people? Does the country make the citizen or do the citizens make the country. In one or two sentences tell what Redbird’s poem says about these two questions. English Language Arts A30 Assignment 3 D. Creating a poem of your own In this exercise you will use your imagination and creativity to write a poem about Canadian identity. Writing a poem is a creative process, and you can employ the same writing strategies you use when writing a paragraph or an essay. Although writing a poem is a creative writing process, you can still use the strategies of pre-writing, drafting, revising (proofreading and editing) before presenting your poem for your audience. You need to think about the following aspects. topic rhyme rhythm form – the look of the poem on the page diction figurative language and literary devices Narrowing the Topic The topic of your poem is Canadian identity. This topic is far too broad; you will need to narrow it to a manageable size. You can use any one of the prewriting techniques to help you narrow the very broad topic of Canadian identity to some aspect of this subject that is meaningful to you. Deciding on a theme for your poem will also be helpful in narrowing your topic. What idea, general truth or commentary on life or people do you want to convey to your reader? English Language Arts A30 Assignment 3 Rhythm Maybe the melody of a song or ballad will serve well as a rhythm for you to use. Another method would be to use the same rhythm in your poem as the rhythm used in one of the poems in this course. “Heat,” and “Moon-Songs” have rhythms and stanza forms that would be excellent to imitate. You may wish to use free verse as Marilyn Dumont has done in her poem “Not Just a Platform for My Dance.” Remember, however, that your poem should still have deliberate rhythmic effects. Free verse is not just prose that is arranged in an odd way. Dumont’s poem is very good evidence for this point. Rhyme Roses aren’t red Violets aren’t blue If you think poems have to rhyme Think again Many poets do not use regular rhyme schemes. Some do. Decide on what pattern of rhyme you will follow if you plan to use a regular rhyme scheme. If you use free verse, you might want to include some rhyme for special effect. For help with rhyme and rhyme schemes see the “Poetry” section of your English Language Arts Ready Reference. The Form: the look of the poem on the page. The look of the poem may be controlled by the rhythm you have chosen. If you are imitating “Heat” or “Moon-Songs,” your poem will likely have a look or stanza form that is similar to the poem you have imitated. If you write a poem in free verse, you need to think carefully about how to handle punctuation and spaces. For example, Duke Redbird’s poem has only one comma and one period. In Archibald Lampman’s poem the punctuation is very important and is vital to the meaning of the poem. English Language Arts A30 Assignment 3 The form of the poem is based on specific reasons. A poem is not a haphazard creation. Creating a poem is a very thoughtful process. Diction Diction (word choice) is an important aspect of literature. Of all types of literature, poetry is perhaps the most reliant on effective diction for its success. This is because poetry is usually a short, condensed form of writing. Therefore, every word counts in creating the effect the poet desires. It is important to choose the exact word you need to create the effect you want. A thesaurus or a dictionary can help you in this task, as well as your imagination. Figurative Language and Literary Devices Nearly all poems contain figurative language such as similes, metaphors or personification. Most contain some literary devices, such as parallelism or alliteration. Reread the poems you have studied so far in this course and see how the poets have used both figurative language and literary devices in their poems. Try to include at least one example of figurative language and one literary device in your poem. Should you need more help with figurative language and literary devices see your English Language Arts Ready Reference, both the “Poetry” section and the “Glossary” section. Note: You may use any of the poems you have read for this course as models for your poem. You are also free to use your imagination to create a poem that is uniquely yours. Presenting your poem Use your own paper to write your poem. Be sure to attach it to this assignment upon submission. English Language Arts A30 Assignment 3 (20) Your poem will be evaluated as follows. Requirements Poem conveys a clear idea about a single topic. Teacher's Comments Rhythm is appropriate to the topic of the poem. Rhyme (if used) suits the rhythm and topic of the poem. OR Free Verse (if used) is appropriate to the topic of the poem. Form is pleasing and helps convey meaning. Diction: Choice of words is appropriate. The words are specific and well-suited to the topic. At least one example of effective figurative language. At least one use of a literary device. Spelling is correct Punctuation (if used) is consistent. Overall appearance of poem is pleasing. English Language Arts A30 Assignment 3 (16) D. Building Vocabulary It is important to know literary terminology so that you can think, speak, and write in knowledgeable ways about literature. Knowing these terms and what they mean will also enhance your listening skills. Should you need help with any of the literary terms in the following exercise, consult the “Glossary” section of your English Language Arts Ready Reference. Magic Square: How Well Do You Know Literary Terms? Directions: Select from the numbered statements the best answer for each of the literary terms. Put the number in the proper space in the magic square box. The total of the numbers will be the same across each row and down each column. Statements Literary Terms a. b. c. d. e. f. g. h. i. j. k. l. m. n. o. p. 1. 2. 3. 4. alliteration symbol theme stanza tone metaphor personification lyric poetry narrative poetry simile hyperbole diction free verse irony euphony imagery 5. 6. 7. 8. 9. 10. 11. 12. 13. 14. 15. 16. Answer Box English Language Arts A30 mental pictures created by words a writer’s attitude toward a subject poetry which tells a story a group of poetry lines arranged according to a plan a specific thing that stands for an idea or values exaggeration for effect inanimate objects are given human attributes saying one thing but meaning another a general truth brought out through a piece of literature a comparison introduced by like or as an indirect comparison pleasantness of sound poetry with no regular rhyme or rhythm pattern poetry that focuses on emotion choice of words repetition of the same initial letter in two or more words close to one another A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Magic number = _____ Assignment 3