Objectives Starter Lesson 1 To identify the differences between pre-1914 and post 1914 writing. Lesson 2 Examine the type of words used in The Speckled Band Give extract from the bible. Underline old fashioned words. Lesson 3 Learning about - the character of Dr. Roylott - quotations Lesson 4 Developing their knowledge of Dr. Roylott. Introduction Development Plenary Homework Give pre- and post- 1914 sentences. Sort into correct piles. Write a pre-1914 paragraph into modern style. List 3 ways in which language has changed. Find out five things about Victorian times. Share with neighbour and then class facts discovered for homework. Timeline of Victorian life – (see Folens sheet) Issue “The Speckled Band”. Brainstorm what they know or think they know about Sherlock Holmes. Read pages 1-5. Underline the archaic words. Produce a glossary. Write 2 sentences describing the type of language in the story. Recap pages 1-5. Read pages 6-13. Underline words and phrases which show something about Dr. Roylott. Orally share their quotations. Write about three of their quotations explaining what they show about the character. Share their homework. Give out grid for Dr. Roylott. In pairs complete it. (See Folens) Find a quotations for each of the 6 boxes. Feedback on their ideas. Write a character study of Dr. Roylott. Outcomes: Students have some understanding of the context of the story. They have some understanding of the differences between pre-1914 and modern prose. They have written a character study of Roylott. Try the following scheme of work with Pre-1914 prose “The Speckled Band” by Arthur Conan Doyle. Some of the resource materials are also provided. GCSE “The Speckled Band” – Pre-1914 prose Page 1 D J Cobden – March 2003 Amended P Henderson – Nov. 2003 Objectives Starter Introduction Development Lesson 5 To become aware of Holmes’ character Lesson 6 To develop a full understanding of Holmes. Brainstorm ideas about Holmes. Read pages 13-21 Mark the text for quotations which show us something about Holmes. On white boards write five adjectives to describe Holmes Review their knowledge of Holmes from last lesson Give out grid for Sherlock Holmes. In pairs, fill it in. In groups find take an area and find supporting evidence. Jigsaw. Feedback on their findings. Lesson 7 To understand the plot. Around the class, tell the story so far. Read pages 21-26. Complete story. 1. Sequence the plot in the right order. 2. Use text to answer the crossword. Comment on the end of the story Lesson 8 To compare Holmes and Roylott. Definition of a hero. Definition of a villain. Holmes is a hero. How do we know? Roylott is a villain. How do we know? Write 2 paragraphs (one for Roylott, one for Holmes) explaining HOW each character is portrayed. Share paragraphs Outcomes: Students have written a character study of Holmes They have read a pre-20th century text and followed the plot and language They have begun writing comparatively GCSE “The Speckled Band” Page 2 Plenary Homework Write a character study of Holmes GCSE “The Speckled Band” Page 3 GCSE”The Speckled Band Page 4 Objectives Lesson 13 Objectives To be aware of Lesson 9 the processes Using quotations involved in drafting Lesson 14 Topic sentences Drafting Lesson 10essay continued Writing open questions. Confidence in role play Lesson 15 11 Improving Knowledge rough of draft. characters. Confidence in role play. Lesson 12 Lesson 16 Essay planning Newspaper style and drafting. presentational devices. Starter Review importance Starter Introduction Teacher models using Introduction Development Students draft own Development of quoting Give 3 quotations on HP. Students to identify key Give out extract words. from a good lit. essay. Look at Write five topic sentences. questions to find how are they out information. moving the essay along? Read through own Share two work. questions for each character. quotations in paragraph about Redraft paragraphs. Teacher models how to write their paragraphs appearance. Students swap and about a quotation, focusing on on H/R’s portrayal with review homework paragraphs quotations and comments. key words. for quotations and analysis. Give out title – Write a headline underline key for the events in words. the story. Teacher models a plan. (Use Students rough draft Imagine you are producing a Write a newspaper worksheet). introduction to essay and newspaper article. What would article to go with the paragraphs about their you include? headline. What appearances. photograph would you use Brainstorm ideas about their Students find behaviour on board. Using quotations to fit points, teacher models topic brainstorm points. to Teacher demonstrates Write lists of questions sentence for paragraphs about interview: Draft next paragraphs open/closed questions. Holmes, Watson, behaviour of Roylott and using topic sentences Roylott, Helen Stoner. Holmes towards each other. and quotations. Teacher lists features/skills Put into 4 groups, one for required: each character. Prepare comparison, answers to thequotations, questions. paragraphs, analysis, introduction,, conclusion groups, pass work Hot In seat the characters around and check if skills are included. Plenary Students explain Plenary how Use they whitehave boards to changed give two their quotations original draftskey and and underline why. words. Homework Homework Write up final drafts of paragraphs Students share with class the techniques they used inof Sharehave examples drafting. questions. Decide whether they are open or closed. Complete rough draft. Write twothey pieces of What did advice on how to like/dislike about improve a rough the activity? draft. Write essay in best. Swap with a partner. Share articles. Tick if: quotations comments Draft paragraphs about their backgrounds. Write 2 more open questions for each character Outcomes: Outcomes: Students have used drama techniques to develop understanding of characters Drafting process used and Students have begun drafting coursework essay (Compare how Conan-Doyle portrays the characters of Sherlock Pre-1914 prose piece completed Holmes and practice Dr. Roylott. Which of the two characters do you find more interesting and why?) Paper 2 exam – newspaper article Pre-1914 Prose The materials below are examples of what can be done at Key Stage using ideas and strategies which we first used at Key Stage 3. 1. (See lesson 1 of Scheme of Work above) The following extracts all come form two texts, one written before 1914 and one written after 1914. Give out to pairs in the class with th following instructions Sort the extracts into their two groups. Try to explain what it is about the extracts that helped you decide where to put them. “My heart is lightened already since I have confided my trouble to you. “Ha! You put me off, do you?” said our new visitor, taking a step forward and shaking his hunting crop. She dropped her thick, black veil over her face and glided from the room. “It seems to me to be a most dark and sinister business.” “OK! I’ll be there as soon as I can.” A large face, seared with a thousand wrinkles, burned yellow with the sun, and marked with every evil passion, was turned from one to the other of us, while his deep-set, bile-shot eyes, and the high thin fleshless nose gave him somewhat the resemblance to a fierce old bird of prey. Mary knew the police would be here soon so she quickly tipped the body into the bin. “Could I have a pound of apples, please? she asked quietly. A strong smell of sweat hung around his clothes and the unpleasant first impression was confirmed by the brown marks on his yellowing teeth – no Colgate ring of confidence there! Dr. Grimesby Roylett’s chamber was larger than that of his step-daughter, but was as plainly furnished. A camp bed, a small wooden shelf full of books, mostly of a technical character, an arm-chair beside the bed, a plain wooden chair against the wall, a round table, and a large iron safe were the principal things which met the eye. Holmes walked slowly round and examined each and all of them with the keenest interest. 2. Use the grid below with lessons 4 and 6 of the Scheme of Work and class should use them during drafting of essay. 3. Use the Must/Should/Could sheet to guide students during the essay drafting and writing Sherlock Homes Appearance Background Behaviour to each other Behaviour to other people Doctor Roylett Pre-1914 Prose In this essay you need to be able to show that you have read and understood a text written before 1914. We have studied “The Speckled Band” by Sir Arthur Conan Doyle. Your title is: Compare how Conan-Doyle portrays the characters of Sherlock Holmes and Dr. Roylott. Which of the two characters do you find more interesting and why? Objectives To show that you understand the story and characters To show that you can use quotations to prove your points To show you can infer and draw conclusions In this essay you must: Write about the characters of Dr. Roylott and Sherlock Holmes. Remember to PEE Set quotations out in quotation marks Use clear topic sentences at the beginning of paragraphs Use paragraphs Give your opinions about the characters Say which you find more interesting and why In this essay you should: Punctuate your sentences clearly and accurately Use linking words such as however, similarly, by contrast, nonetheless, therefore. Include running quotations (eg When Conan Doyle describes the Roylett’s face as being “seared” he is suggesting...) In this essay you could: Write alternate paragraphs about Dr. Roylott and Sherlock Holmes Make more than one point about some quotations