Editor’s Symbols agr subject/verb or pronoun/antecedent (referent) agreement is faulty Subject and verb must agree in number (singular or plural) faulty: One of the puppies are lost. correct: One of the puppies is lost. Pronoun and antecedent must agree in person and number faulty: Each teacher should collect their own books. correct: Each teacher should collect his/her own books. awk awkward construction C capital letter not needed c capital letter needed delete d faulty diction suggests poor word choice or a malapropism; reconsider word choice faulty: The Joad family was excavated from the land and moved to California. correct: The Joad family was evicted from the land and moved to California. doc documentation needed or source incorrectly cited dm dangling modifier does not describe what was intended faulty: The piano was sold by the woman with carved legs. correct: The piano with carved legs was sold by the woman. faulty: After standing in line for hours, the manager announced the tickets were sold out. correct: After standing in line for hours, he heard the manager announce that the tickets were sold out. expletive construction occurs when a word like it, here, or there signals that the subject follow the verb; usually creates an awkward or wordy sentence faulty: There are few antiquities that are as important as the Rosetta Stone. correct: Few antiquities are as important as the Rosetta Stone. expl will frag sentence fragment is written as a sentence, but lacks either a subject, verb or both. faulty: The beautiful sandy beaches in the Bahamas. correct: Beautiful sandy beaches are in the Bahamas. p punctuation error pv passive voice: usually avoided, but does exist for certain applications faulty: Passive voice is usually avoided. correct: Good writers avoid the passive voice. red redundant ref referent (antecedent) is unclear; to what does “it” or “they” refer? ro run-on sentence: two or more clauses are joined in the same sentence without proper conjunctions and/or punctuation sp spelling error tense unnecessary switch in tense top. s consider topic sentence (or lack of) trans poor or missing transitions do not clearly connect the ideas; a smooth transition uses specific words to show relationships (e.g., but, moreover, therefore) wo write out the word for this symbol or abbreviation // construction lacks parallel structure Parallel structure expresses coordinate ideas in similar form faulty: Celia enjoys dancing, singing, and to go to the movies. correct: Celia enjoys dancing, singing, and going to the movies. ^ insert ¶ new paragraphing needed ¶ new paragraph not needed --> indent ? meaning is unclear Written Presentation Rubric Paper is neatly handwritten in blue or black ink or is typed and printed in black in a standard font and size. Correct heading (name, period, and date) is in upper right corner; if paper is typed, heading is typed. Paper is double spaced and appropriately formatted to fit the page(s). Single spaces follow commas; double spaces follow end-of-sentence punctuation. Title is centered at top of the assignment. Writing is on only one side of the paper. Paper is clean and not torn.