REVIEW OF THE DRAFT WORK PLAN FOR PRE-DESIGN INVESTIGATION OF SEDIMENT AT INSTALLATION RESTORATION SITE 25, MOFFETT FIELD, SANTA CLARA COUNTY, CALIFORNIA Comment Number Section/ Page Comment Response Comments from the United States Environmental Protection Agency, Sarah Kloss, dated May 14, 2010 1. Section 2.3, Page 2-3: Please change the word “sediment” to “soil” in the last sentence of this section. The last sentence of Section 2.3 will be revised as follows: “…pesticides; and various soil areas contaminated with PCBs (referred to as upland source areas addressed separately by NASA, Navy, and U.S. Army, not as part of the remedial design of IR Site 25).” 2. Section 3.2, Page 3-1: Please change the phrase “under the auspices of” to “pursuant to.” The text has been revised as follows: “This Work Plan for pre-design investigation sampling of sediment at Moffett Field is being conducted pursuant to a Federal Facilities Agreement that provides a procedural framework and schedule for the CERCLA cleanup process at Moffett Field.” 3. Section 4.4, Page 4-3: Please add criteria that will be used to determine if a bathymetric survey is needed. A topographic survey and/or a bathymetric survey will be required to support the development of the Remedial Design. A topographic survey is preferred because it is more precise and cost-effective. The bathymetric survey may, however, be required depending upon the extent of standing water in the ponds at the time of the survey. For this reason, the text specified that either or both surveys will be required. For clarification, Section 4.4 of the Work Plan and SAP Worksheet #17, Section 17.3 will be revised to the following: “A topographic and/or bathymetric survey will be conducted as part of the predesign investigation. The need for a bathymetric survey will be determined based on the amount of standing water in the ponds at the time of the survey.” Additionally, the following sentence will be added to SAP Worksheet #14, page 14-1 for clarification: “The need for a bathymetric survey will be determined based on the amount of standing water in the ponds at the time of the survey.” 4. Worksheet (WS) #17, Section 17.1.1, Page 17-1: Paragraph 2 refers to Figure 10-8 to show the defined upper and lowers areas; however, this figure does not include a boundary between “upper” and “lower.” Please edit Figure 10-8 to visually define the upper and lower areas referred to in WS #17. The terms “upper” and “lower” areas were used to distinguish between those samples collected for hot spot detection (star symbols) and those to refine the remedial design (triangle symbols), as defined in the legend of the figure. Figure 10-8 will be revised to show the division between the upper and lower areas of the site. KCH-2622-0007-0016 Page 1 of 2 August 2010 REVIEW OF THE DRAFT WORK PLAN FOR PRE-DESIGN INVESTIGATION OF SEDIMENT AT INSTALLATION RESTORATION SITE 25, MOFFETT FIELD, SANTA CLARA COUNTY, CALIFORNIA Comment Number Section/ Page Comment Response 5. WS #17, Section 17.1.1, Page 17-2: The second paragraph of this page states that “Seventeen of the surface samples will be collected from 17 of the 28 sample locations in the upper area…” The word choice implies that there are 28 samples in the upper area alone, not 28 samples total. The same language exists for the lower area. Please edit the text to be clear that there are 28 samples total, 17 in the upper area and 11 in the lower area. The text will be revised as follows: “Seventeen of the 28 surface sediment samples will be collected from locations in the upper area of IR Site 25 (within the northern portion of the three subareas) to verify that hot spots of contamination do not exist in areas that are not currently targeted for remediation.” And… “Eleven of the 28 surface sediment samples will be collected from locations in the southern portion of the Central Basin to refine the size and shape of the polygon areas targeted for remediation.” 6. WS #17, Section 17.2, Page 17-3: Please clarify the approval process once the wetland and sensitive habitat evaluations are complete. For example, will the US Army Corps of Engineers make a determination based on the Navy’s wetlands evaluation? The wetland and sensitive habitat evaluations are being conducted to establish baseline conditions at the site prior to the Remedial Design. These evaluations will not undergo a formal approval process. As discussed in the ROD, no formal permits are required under Section 121(e) of CERCLA (42 USC, Section 9621[e]); but the Navy will comply with the substantive provisions of the permit as a means to ensure compliance with the substantive portions of the ARARs for excavating and backfilling in the wetland areas of the Eastern Diked Marsh. As part of the remedy, the Navy will restore and revegetate the wetlands where necessary and will monitor the recovery of the wetlands. 7. WS#17, Section 17.4, Page 17-4: Please specify the approximate volume of soil that will be used for each treatability study sample. Also, please add additional text to justify that the 48 hour timeline for the final sample is sufficient to determine the long term efficacy of the stabilizing agents. While 24 hours should be enough for the curing time, we have added 1 more day to the treatability study to confirm the curing time. Therefore, the 48-hour timeline for the final sample is sufficient to determine the long-term efficacy of the stabilizing agents. Section 17.6.3.2, Item 1, states that 5 gallons of sediments and debris will be collected. The following text has been added to WS#17, Section 17.4, Page 17-6: “A curing time of 24 hours should be sufficient; however, 48 hours will be allowed to confirm that curing is complete.” KCH-2622-0007-0016 Page 2 of 2 August 2010