(4/2011) 6+1 Traits of Writing Rubric A Ideas & Content The meaning & development of message Organization The internal structure of the piece Voice The way the writer brings the topic to life Word Choice Vocabulary used to make meaning Sentence Fluency The way the words & phrases flow throughout text Conventions The mechanical correctness of the piece Presentation Overall appearance of the work (5pts) B (4pts) One clear, well-focused topic. Main idea stands out and is supported by accurate details. Relevant, telling, quality details give reader important information going beyond the obvious or predictable. Main idea is clear but the supporting information is general. Supporting details and information are relevant, but one key issue or portion of the writing has no supporting details. Inviting introduction and strong conclusion Main topic and previews the structure of the paper. Effective sequencing and pacing Thoughtful transitions connect ideas; smooth organization Writer seems to be writing from knowledge or experience. The author has taken the ideas and made them "his own." Effective and strong reader/writer connection; writer takes risks & reflects interest in topic Purpose is powerful and engaging Writer uses vivid words and phrases that linger or draw pictures in the reader's mind. Choice & placement of words seems accurate, natural & not forced. All paragraphs are well-constructed with sentences varied in structure and length. All sentences sound natural and are easy-on-the-ear when read aloud. Each sentence is clear and has an obvious emphasis. Writer makes no errors in grammar, spelling, capitalization or punctuation that distract the reader from content, so the paper is exceptionally easy to read. Routine lead and conclusion Introduction clearly states the main topic but is not particularly inviting to the reader. Mostly logical sequencing & pacing Predictable connections/transitions Basic beginning, middle & ending Writer seems to be drawing on knowledge/experience, but there is some lack of ownership of the topic. Reader/writer connection present but not strong Pleasing yet “safe” Energy level inconsistent Purpose is credible but not powerful Writer uses vivid words and phrases that linger or draw pictures in the reader's mind, but occasionally the words are used inaccurately or seem overdone. Almost all paragraphs are wellconstructed with most sentences varied in structure and length. Almost all sentences sound natural and are easy-on-the-ear when read aloud, but 1 or 2 are stiff and awkward or difficult to understand. Writer makes 1-2 errors in grammar or spelling that may distract the reader from content. Writer makes 1 or 2 errors in capitalization or punctuation, but paper is still easy to read. Handwriting mostly legible Spacing improves clarity Margins and headers effective Overall appearance is acceptable Presentation consistent & uniform Good balance of space and text Overall appearance is pleasing C D (3pts) Main idea is somewhat clear but there is a need for more supporting information. Supporting details & information are relevant, but several key issues or portions of the writing have no supporting details. Ineffective lead and/or conclusion Sequencing/pacing/order confusing Connections awkward or fuzzy Formulaic structure detracts from the content Writer attempts to make the reader care about topic; is not successful. The writer relates some personal knowledge or experience, but it adds nothing to the discussion of the topic. Occasionally intrigues the reader “Risk free”; purpose lacks conviction Writer uses words that communicate clearly, but the writing lacks variety, punch or flair. Some words are used inaccurately or are overdone. Some sentences vary in length and are well-constructed but have a similar structure. Most sentences sound natural and are easy-on-the-ear when read aloud, but several are stiff and awkward or are difficult to understand. Writer makes errors in grammar/ spelling; distracting reader from content. Writer makes errors in capitalization & punctuation that catch reader's attention and interrupt the flow. Handwriting poor, reader must exert some effort to figure out some of the words. Some thought given to spacing Overall appearance is distracting (2pts) The main idea is not clear. There is a seemingly random collection of information. Supporting details and information are typically unclear or not related to the topic. The transitions between ideas are missing or unclear. Missing intro and/or conclusion Sequencing and pacing not present Connections are confusing or not present & hard to follow Writer made no attempt to make the reader care about the topic. The writer has not tried to transform the information in a personal way. Lifeless and mechanical Flat or inappropriate No clear purpose Writer uses a limited vocabulary that does not communicate strongly or capture the reader's interest. Jargon or clichés may be present and detract from the meaning. Sentences rarely vary in length, lack structure and appear incomplete or rambling. The sentences are difficult to read aloud because they sound awkward, are distractingly repetitive, or difficult to understand. Spelling errors impede readability Incorrect punctuation and capitalization Many usage and grammar errors Lack of paragraphing Handwriting unreadable Random or lack of spacing Poor use of white space Overall appearance is unacceptable