Little BIG Books MONDAY 10/1/2007 Friday’s Homework: Section A: Queenie Assignment; Read to end of Chapter 6 Section D: Read Chapters 5&6 Materials Needed: Buried Onions Books; Dialectical Journal handout 1. Do Now (QUIZ) 5 min (10 points): For Group A a. Why do you think Eddie told Lupe about what his little brother Samuel was doing? b. Do you think Lupe’s response was appropriate? Why or why not? c. Who did Eddie find waiting in the hospital with Jose? d. What does Coach do to help Eddie? What does he encourage Eddie to do? e. What happens to Eddie at the end of chapter six? Why do you think it happened? For Group D a. Who is Queenie? b. What questionable thing does Eddie do that relates to Queenie? c. Why do you think Eddie told Lupe about what his little brother Samuel was doing? d. Do you think Lupe’s response was appropriate? Why or why not? e. What does Coach do to help Eddie? What does he encourage Eddie to do? **COLLECT QUIZZES FOR GRADING** SKIP QUEENIE ASSIGNMENT FOR D – 25 pts HOUSEKEEPING: Hand back weekly point sheets. Students should keep assignments but I will keep their sheets in a binder. ***Take attendance – SALESFORCE Activity #1: Dialectical Journal (20): Ultimate Onion Guide Introduce Dialectical Journal format (we’ve done it before… now we are focusing on a particular literary element – this Onion metaphor) Model first 2 on the board with students, then set them free to work individually til end of period HOMEWORK: Complete Chap 6 if not finished already (Hand out books!) Complete Ultimate Guide for chaps 1-6 – due TUES TO HAND IN AT THE END OF CLASS: Last week’s point sheet (T keeps these) Today’s point sheet Name _________________________ Buried Onions – Chaps 1-6 Section _______________ October 1st, 2007 The Ultimate Guide to Eddie & the Onions Chapter 1: Quote referring to onions on pg ______2_________ "I had a theory about those vapors, which were not released by the sun's heat but by a huge onion buried under the city. This onion made us cry. Tears leapt from our eyelashes and stained our faces." What’s going on in the story at this point? Eddie is setting the scene – telling us about his neighborhood. What is Eddie trying to say? Eddie is trying to say that he is surrounded by sadness. He tells himself there must be something powerful that makes the people in his environment this way. This couldn’t just be coincidence… When he refers to the tears ‘staining’ their faces, he gives us the idea that they never go away, like stains never go away. Chapter 2: Quote referring to onions on pg _____22_______ “While I was… working… I discovered an onionlike bulb, maybe the source of all our weeping. I examined the bulb and knew it wasn’t an onion, but I laughed to myself and said “Mr. Onion, you’re going to die.” I slashed the bulb in two and it bled clear tears. I sniffed it. It didn’t give off an onion smell, just an earthy vapor that reminded me of work and nothing more.” What’s going on in the story? In this quote Eddie is feeling… The fact that Eddie slashes the bulb shows…. The bulb didn’t give off an onion smell because… Chapter 2: Quote referring to onions on pg ______30__________ “ What’s going on in the story? In this quote … Chapter 3: Quote referring to onions on pg _____40___________ “ What’s going on in the story? In this quote … Chapter 4: Quote referring to onions on pg ________62________ “I need money, man. I got onions , and my family is hungry” In this quote, The person talking is…. The onions represent… Chapter 5: Quote referring to onions on pg _______72_________ “The homies cussed at Coach and ran across the lawn toward the parking lot. They stopped and gave us the finger. They were like vapors on the black asphalt. ‘Little punks,’ Coach said, I don’t know if they’re going to stay alive the way they act. In this quote… Eddie compares the homies to vapors on the black asphalt. The homies are… He compares them to vapors because…. Chapter 6: Quote referring to onions on pg ________103_______ “I felt like I was getting somewhere and then I felt something under my shoe like a baseball. I got out of the hole and, dropping to my knees, I clawed it out. It was a bulb of some kind, onionlike. I peeled off a sheet of its skin and sniffed it. It smelled only of earth” This is the second time that Eddie finds an onionlike bulb in Mr. Stiles’ yard. The first time, it represented… But this time, it’s different. Just after he finds this bulb…. In this case, the onionlike bulb represents… Little BIG Books TUESDAY 9/25/2007 1. Do Now (15): Quiz - Grammar issues pulled from student work Go over answers on board then collect papers. Students must make all corrections to get full credit (½ pt each) HOUSEKEEPING : Hand back weekly point sheets Check for HW Take attendance – send to room 115B/SALESFORCE Activity #1 Review the Onion sheet (30 min): Exit Ticket (5) – Why does Eddie constantly recall the image of the buried onion? HOMEWORK: Complete Chapter 7 (Read p. 105 to p. 120) TO HAND IN AT THE END OF CLASS: Today's point sheet Homework – Ultimate Onion guide 1-6 Exit ticket Name _________________________ Buried Onions – Chaps 1-6 Section _______________ October 2nd, 2007 Common Grammar Mistakes All of the following sentences were drawn from student work. Underline the mistakes & make corrections where necessary. Rewrite if you think the sentence needs it! 1. Jose stabbing was a tragity because he was such a good person. ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ 2. Eddie know that it is partially his fault. ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ 3. Everyone in the story that trys to stay on a straight path get’s hurt or killed. ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ 4. The top three things that makes Eddie upset is… ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ 5. Eddie look up too Jose and the Coach. ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ 6. Every time someone trys to move ahead, something get’s in there way ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ 7. When Eddie went to Mr. Stiles’ house he get’s arrested. ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ 8. Mr. Stiles think’s that Eddie stoled the red truck, and Eddie think’s that Angel did it. ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ 9. When Eddie is on the phone, Jose got stabbed. ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ 10. Eddie shouldn’t’ve stopped at his house because he know he live in a bad neighborhood and its not his car. ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ Little BIG Books WEDNESDAY 10/3/2007 Materials Needed: Do Now (chart paper); Do Now/Activity 1 (20): On Board – students hand in for grade 1. What happens when Eddie goes to the recruiter? (chap 6) 2. What was the real reason Mr. Stiles turned Eddie in to the cops? Would you have done what Mr. Stiles did? 3. What does Eddie find when he returns home from the police station? 4. How does Eddie now feel about Mr. Stiles? 5. Who comes to take Eddie fishing? Discuss Do Now Qs after collecting the quiz Activity 1- Cubing HOUSEKEEPING: Hand back weekly point sheets Take attendance – send to room 115B Students work in groups of 3 to make cubes & complete activities. HOMEWORK: Read Chapter 8 (pgs 121-139) GROUP D – READ BOTH CHAPS 8 & 9!! TO HAND IN AT THE END OF CLASS: Today’s point sheet Today’s in-class assignment Name ________________________________ Little BIG Books Section _____________ Wednesday, 10/3/07 CUBING ACTIVITY Describe COACH: Use textual evidence to write 2 paragraphs describing him. * Why does Eddie look up to him? * What is his history? Integrate at least 3 quotes Cubing Template Dice Compare Eddie & Jose: * Their personalities * Their lifestyles * What they are doing with their lives Write a paragraph that includes at least 4 integrated quotes. Associate Choose any friendship or relationship you have read about in the book so far. Write a paragraph comparing it to one you are in or have seen. Integrate at least 3 quotes from the text Argue for/Against: Eddie’s options for the future: Discuss at least 3 options for Eddie right now & state what you think he should do and why. Include at least 3 integrated quotes. Analyze Name major conflicts in the story. Consider: Character vs: * Other Characters * Self * Society * Nature Describe one conflict for each category Analyze II Consider the use of the Onion metaphor. Write 2 paragraphs describing how Gary Soto uses the image to develop a theme in the story. Cubing Activity: Buried Onions Use this sheet to fill in the answers to your 3 questions. Name______________________________ Activity 1 ________________________________ Section ___________________ Activity 2 _______________________________ Activity 3 ____________________________________ Little BIG Books THURSDAY, 10/4/2007 Materials Needed: Response copies Do Now (chart paper); COPIES OF CHAPTER 5; Do Now (10): Quiz on Chapter 8 a. Eddie makes a big move in this chapter. What move does he make and what do you think contributed to his decision? b. What happens during this event? c. Who does Eddie go visit next? d. Where does Eddie decide to go with the person from question c? e. Who does Eddie bump into at the end of the chapter? What happens? HOUSEKEEPING: Hand back weekly point sheets Take attendance – send to room 115B Activity 1: (Section A) CUBING ACTIVITY HOMEWORK (Group A only): Read Chapter 9 TO HAND IN AT THE END OF CLASS: Today’s point sheet Today’s Do Now & In-class writing FRIDAY, 10/5/07 Little Big Books LESSON PLAN DO NOW: (10 min) Quiz (CHAPTER 9): a. What does José try do when Eddie leaves the hospital? How does Eddie react? Why do you think he does this? b. Why does Lupe come to Eddie’s house? What does he say/do? c. What major decision does Eddie make? d. Why/how does Eddie end up on the side of the road? e. Where does Eddie find himself at the end of the story? Who does he see? ACTIVITY #1: (30) DISCUSSION: (Eddie & the Onions part II) What is Eddie leaving behind? Use textual evidence – provide quotes, especially from chapter 9 What is in store for Eddie in the future? (Use textual evidence) Read quote from page 146: “I hunched down, my hands to my face to hide the shame that had brought me to this field. I saw Jesús on the ground, then Angel over him. I saw my palms bloodred from all the city wars – those in the past, those now, and those to come when every homie would raise a fist to his brother. Without saying a word, the man raised me up and handed me onions, one for each hand. And whether is was from the sun or the whipping wind, my eyes filled and then closed on the last of childhood tears” Eddie mentions hiding the shame that brought him to this field. Whose shame is it? What does he mean? What evidence can you find that up until this point, Eddie still seems to be hanging on to his childhood? (eg: the cream soda – first grade drink, the chee-tos he hadn’t outgrown on p. 11; the fact that he fights, still asks his mom for $, soda drinking, the chocolate milk – childhood liquid, p. 120) How do you know that he is now ready to give it up? ACTIVITY #2 (10) Intro Final Project a. students pick essay topic b. hand out graphic organizers & review what makes a good thesis statement i. step 1– gather evidence to answer question ii. step 2 – develop a thesis statement iii. step 3 – breaking down a thesis statement Homework: Choose the essay topic you want to focus on & answer the question in your own words – short paragraph Name _________________________ Buried Onions Section _______________ October 5th, 2007 Eddie & the Onions Part II Answer the following questions as we discuss them in class. THIS WILL BE HANDED IN AND GRADED (20 points) What is Eddie leaving behind? (Refer to specific textual evidence w/ pg #s) What is in store for Eddie in the future? (Refer to specific textual evidence w/ pg #s) From page 146: “I hunched down, my hands to my face to hide the shame that had brought me to this field. I saw Jesús on the ground, then Angel over him. I saw my palms bloodred from all the city wars – those in the past, those now, and those to come when every homie would raise a fist to his brother. Without saying a word, the man raised me up and handed me onions, one for each hand. And whether is was from the sun or the whipping wind, my eyes filled and then closed on the last of childhood tears” Eddie mentions hiding the shame that brought him to this field. Whose shame is it? What does he mean? (Refer to specific textual evidence w/ pg #s) What evidence can you find that up until this point, Eddie still seems to be hanging on to his childhood? (Refer to specific textual evidence w/ pg #s) How do you know that he is now ready to give it up? evidence w/ pg #s) (Refer to specific textual Name ___________________________ Section ______________ Little BIG Books Project #1: Buried Onions by Gary Soto First Draft Due: Tuesday October 16th REQUIREMENTS: o At least five paragraphs including an introduction and conclusion o Clearly defined thesis statement o Three pieces of direct evidence o Three explanations that show how your evidence proves your thesis statement OPTIONS: Choose ONE of the following questions: Option A Conflict is a struggle between two opposing forces. In every novel there are many conflicts that affect the characters. The four basic types of conflicts are: character vs. character, character vs. self, character vs. society and character vs. nature. o Choose and define a conflict in Buried Onions. Explain how this conflict relates to an important theme in the story. Option B The main character, or protagonist, in a book is obviously very important. However, often another character (not the main character) plays a large role in terms of affecting both the protagonist and the action in the story. o Choose a character other than Eddie from Buried Onions and explain why he/she is actually very significant in terms of the overall story. Explain how the author uses this character to develop an important theme in the story. Option C “I had a theory about those vapors, which were not released by the sun’s heat but by a huge onion buried under the city. This onion made us cry. Tears leapt from our eyelashes and stained our faces. Babies in strollers pinched up their faces and wailed for no reason. Perhaps as a practice for the coming years. I thought about that giant onion, that remarkable bulb of sadness”(p.2). o Why does Eddie constantly recall the image of the buried onion? Explain the significance of the image of the buried onion in the novel. What does the image symbolize? How does Gary Soto use the image of the buried onion to develop an important theme in the story? DON’T FORGET TO… o Type your paper (Computers available during hw help) o Use Times New Roman font o Double-space o Include a title Homework for the Weekend: Due Tuesday, October 9th 1. Choose an essay topic 2. In the space below, respond to your chosen essay topic in one or two paragraphs. (This will help you formulate your thesis statement.) Name ________________________ LBB Week 4 Section Week of: _10/1-10/5__ ______ __5___ Days Little BIG Books: Weekly Point Sheet Monday 10/1 On Time (5) ___________ Do Now – QUIZ on Chap 5/6 (10)___________ Prepared (5) __________ –Pen(1) –Literature(2) –Binder open on desk(2) Tuesday 10/2 Possible points this week: ____200_____ Behavior (5) ___________ On Time (5) ___________ Do Now – (grammar)(5)___________ Homework (5) ___________ Prepared (5) __________ ______/25 ______/25 –Pen(2) –Literature(2) –Binder open on desk(1) Wednesday 10/3 Behavior (5) ___________ On Time (5) ___________ Do Now (Quiz on Chap 7) (5)______________ Prepared (5) __________ –Pen(2) –Literature(2) –Binder open on desk(1) Thursday 10/4 Class Work (5)___________ On Task (5) ___________ On Time (5) ___________ Do Now (Quiz on Chap 8) (10)______________ Prepared (5) __________ –Pen(2) –Literature(2) –Binder open on desk(1) Friday 10/5 ______/25 ______/25 Behavior (5) ___________ On Time (5) ___________ Do Now (Quiz on Chap 9) (5)______________ Prepared (5) __________ –Pen(2) –Literature(2) –Binder open on desk(1) ______/25 Homework (Eddie & Onions Pt. 2) (5)___________ Behavior (5) ___________ Weekly Assignments Eddie &Onions Part 1(20) __________ ____________________________ (20): _____________ Eddie & Onions Part 2 (20): __________ Class Discussion (15): ___________ Total for week of ______10/1 – 10/5_____ ______/75 ______/200 Comments on other side Comments: