1 GSP Journalism Test Review (Updated 25 June 2008) General Rules About the Test Mark the error/section where it is wrong, not where the correction should be. Always assume the subject is correct and the verb is wrong. Pronoun is wrong when dealing with pronouns and antecedents. Dangling participles do not belong in the sentences There are no capitalization errors on the test. There are no misspelled proper names or nouns on the test. There are no correct sentences on the test Part 1: Spelling—The test asks you to identify misspelled words, not correct them. English is very tricky when it comes to spelling. Here are some general rules to follow: Don’t rely too heavily on pronunciation to determine spelling Familiarize yourself with a list of homophones—words that have similar pronunciations but different meanings Familiarize yourself with some common spelling rules Familiarize yourself with commonly misspelled words Part 2: Punctuation—The test asks you to identify errors in punctuation, not correct them. Commas Use a comma before a coordinating conjunction joining independent clauses. But Do not use a comma to connect independent clauses connected without a conjunction. (comma splicing) example: I like beer, he likes whiskey. Do not use a comma when what follows the conjunction is not an independent clause. Use a comma after an introductory clause or phrase Use a comma between items in a series, but since this is journalism, do not use a comma before and with items in a series. Setting off parenthetical expressions Setting off appositives Setting off non-restrictive expressions Terminal Punctuation When a period follows an abbreviation at the end of the sentence, it can serve as terminal punctuation. Correct example: Class starts at 2 p.m. Incorrect: Class starts at 2 p.m.. 2 Colons and Semicolons The colon is a mark of introduction, but do not use a colon after a verb to introduce directs objects of that verb. Incorrect: The three new courses are: calculus, geology, and linguistics. The semicolon is used to separate two independent clauses when there is no coordinating conjunction. Correct example: I like milk; he likes beer. Dashes and Hyphens Dashes and hyphens are often confused. Dashes separate; hyphens connect. In typing, the dash is formed by striking the hyphen key twice in succession (--). Use hyphens to form compound modifiers that come before a noun (a full-time job), but don’t use hyphens with adverbs ending in ly to form a compound modifier. Parentheses Parentheses enclose additional information not essential to the flow of the sentence. Note: If the words in parentheses form a sentence, the terminal punctuation for the parenthetical sentence falls inside the parentheses. The Apostrophe Use the apostrophe to indicate omission (forming a contraction) or to indicate possession. Be careful not to confuse its (possessive pronoun) with it’s (contraction for it is). Others to watch for are whose, who’s, there, their, they’re. In general, the possessive of nouns not ending in s is formed by adding an apostrophe and s: John, John’s; city, city’s The AP stylebook mandates apostrophe and s to form possessives with singular common nouns ending in s, unless the next word begins with an s. Thus: witness’s testimony but witness’ sister For plural common nouns ending in s, the possessive is formed by adding an apostrophe only: writers, writers’; brothers, brothers’ For proper names ending in s, the possessive is formed by adding an apostrophe only: James, James’; Charles, Charles’ In expression of joint ownership, the possessive is formed with the last name only: Strunk and White’s book. Quotation Marks Quotation marks are used to indicate direct quotation and at times to enclose terms used in special ways, like nicknames. Incorrect example: “It was wrong, she said, to punctuate in that way.” Correct: “It was wrong,” she said, “to punctuate in that way.” When a quotation falls within another quotation, single marks are used for the internal quotation: “Why did he say ‘I do not choose to run’?” Smith asked. 3 GSP Spelling Review Homophones: Words with similar pronunciation and different meanings. accept (to receive) except (to take or leave out) affect (v., to exert an influence) effect (v., to accomplish; n., result) ascent (a climb) assent (agreement) brake (something used to stop movement) break (to split or smash into pieces) cite (to quote) sight (vision) site (position, place) manner (way) manor (house) Pair (set of two) pare (to prepare, trim) pear (a fruit) passed (past tense of the verb pass) past (belonging to a former time) principal (most important; a person who has authority) principle (a general or fundamental truth) complement (something that completes) compliment (praise) rain (water falling in drops) reign (to rule) rein (restraining influence) coarse (of ordinary or inferior quality) course (path, policy chosen) raise (to lift) raze (to destroy, to lay level with the ground) desert (v., to withdraw from; n., uninhabited and arid land) dessert (sweet course at the end of a meal) stationary (standing still) stationery (writing paper) discreet (prudent, tactful) discrete (constituting a separate entity) elicit (to draw or bring out) illicit (illegal) eminent (famous, respected) immanent (indwelling, inherent) imminent (ready to take place) formally (in a customary manner) formerly (in time past) hole (hollow place) whole (entire, unhurt) its (of or belonging to it) it’s (contraction for it is) lead (n., metal; v., to guide) led (past tense of the verb lead) loose (free, not securely attached) lose (to fail to keep, to be deprived of) straight (free from curves, bends, or angles) strait (narrow space or passage) than (conj., used to compare) then (adverb of time) their (belonging to them) they’re (contraction of they are) there (that place or position) to (prep., toward) too (also, excessively) two (one more than one in number) weather (state of the atmosphere) whether (indicating a choice between alternatives) who’s (contraction of who is) whose (possessive of who) your (possessive of you) you’re (contraction of you are) 4 GSP Study Guide: Additional Troublesome Words a, an (Use an if the following word begins with a vowel sound. Be careful with words beginning with the letter h: An hour, a hotel.) dual, duel liquefaction due to literally ecology, environment loose, lose about, approximately (Use about) e.g., i.e. majority, plurality aid, aide emigrant, immigrant mantel, mantle all right, alright (Alright is all wrong. Use all right.) eminent, imminent media, medium enormity naval, navel etc. ok faculty (singular group noun except when the members of the group are acting as individuals) pastor, minister farther, further people, persons faze, phase phenomena, phenomenon flack, flak pore, pour flammable, inflammable presently flaunt, flout principal, principle flier, flyer rebut, refute forego, forgo that, which foreword, forward till, until fortuitous, fortunate whether (or not) allude, elude allusion, illusion already, all ready pedal, peddle alumnus, alumna, alumni among, between amoral, immoral, unmoral anybody, anyone as, like (Use like where it sounds right.) assure, ensure, insure (Use insure when referring to business.) average, mean, median, mode awhile, a while B.C. A.D. (B.C. should follow dates and A.D. should precede them.) gender baited, bated got, gotten bimonthly, biweekly hangar, hanger bloc, block hanged, hung blond, blonde hearsay, heresy British thermal unit (Btu for both plural and singular.) imply, infer induction, deduction continual, continuous lay, laid, lain, lie data lightening, lightning disinterested, uninterested light-year 5 Be Aware of These Major Spelling Rules 1. Use I before e except after c or when sounded like ay, as in neighbor and weigh. 5. Add s to form the plural of most nouns; add es to singular nouns ending in s, sh, ch, and x. I before E relieve, believe, sieve, frieze table, tables; paper, papers E before I receive, deceive, sleigh, freight, eight church, churches; dish, dishes Exceptions seize, either, weird, height, foreign, leisure 2. Generally, drop a final silent e when adding a suffix that begins with a vowel. Keep the final e if the suffix begins with a consonant. Ordinarily add s to nouns ending in o when the o is preceded by a vowel. Add es when it is preceded by a consonant. radio, radios; video, videos hero, heroes; tomato, tomatoes desire, desiring; remove, removable To form the plural of a hyphenated compound word, add the s to the chief word even if it does not appear at the end achieve, achievement; care, careful Exceptions argument, truly, changeable 3. When adding s or ed to words ending in y, ordinarily change y to I when the y is preceded by a consonant but not when it is preceded by a vowel. comedy, comedies; dry, dried mother-in-law, mothers-in-law NOTE: English words derived from other languages, such as Latin or French, sometimes form the plural as they would in their original language. medium, media; criterion, criteria; chateau, chateaux monkey, monkeys; play, played With proper names ending in y, however, do not change the y to I even if it is preceded by a consonant: Dougherty, the Doughertys. 4. If a final consonant is preceded by a single vowel and the consonant ends a one-syllable word or a stressed syllable, double the consonant when adding a suffix beginning with a vowel. bet, betting; commit, committed; occur, occurrence Correct any spelling mistakes in the following list of words. If a word is correct, write “correct” after it. (Use a dictionary when in doubt.) ellusive beaurocrat twelth percieve erasible annoint maladies inconsistent ryme beautiful pulleys traceable anullment nuclear retrieveable retirment promoteable skis lonley vidio 6 Learn the Following Commonly Misspelled Words absence academic accidentally accommodate accomplish accumulate achievement acknowledge acquaintance acquire across address aggravate all right almost although altogether always amateur among analyze annual answer apology apparently appearance appropriate arctic argument arising arithmetic arrangement ascend association athlete athletics attendance audience bachelor basically beginning believe benefited brilliant Britain bureau business cafeteria calendar candidate category cemetery changeable changing characteristic chosen column coming commitment committed committee comparative competitive conceivable conference conferred conqueror conscience conscientious conscious convenient courteous criticism criticize curiosity dealt decision definitely descendant describe description despair desperate develop dictionary dining disagree disappear disappoint disastrous dissatisfied eighth eligible eliminate embarrass eminent emphasize entirely entrance environment equivalent especially exaggerated exhaust existence experience explanation extraordinary extremely familiar fascinate February foreign forty fourth friend government grammar guard guidance harass height humorous illiterate imaginary imagination immediately incidentally incredible indefinitely indispensable inevitable infinite intelligence interesting irrelevant irresistible knowledge laboratory legitimate license lightning literature loneliness maintenance maneuver marriage mathematics mischievous necessary nevertheless noticeable obstacle occasion occasionally’ occur occurred occurrence optimistic original outrageous pamphlet parallel particularly pastime perform performance permissible perseverance perspiration phenomenon physically picnicking playwright politics practically precede precedence preference preferred prejudice preparation prevalent primitive privilege probably proceed professor prominent pronunciation quantity quiet quite quizzes receive recognize recommend reference referred regard religion repetition restaurant rhythm rhythmical ridiculous roommate sandwich schedule secretary seize separate sergeant several similar sincerely soliloquy sophomore specimen strictly subtly succeed surprise temperature thorough tragedy transferred tries truly Tuesday unanimous unnecessarily until usually vacuum vengeance villain weird whether writing 7 GSP—Grammar Review Pronouns Antecedents: Pronouns should refer clearly to their antecedents. Incorrect: If your cat won’t eat raw meat, cook it. Pronouns must agree in number with their antecedents. Incorrect: The company admitted their mistake. The media will use its power. Use the correct case forms of pronouns. Incorrect: John, Fred, and me have organized a new company. Incorrect: He praised the doctor and myself. Incorrect: The person whom he said was here has not arrived. Use that to introduce restrictive clauses and which to introduce non-restrictive clauses Verbs Avoid shifts in tense and be sure that verbs agree with their subjects. Remember, however, that many nouns with plural forms take singular verbs, Example: The news is good tonight. Modifiers Good is an adjective, well is an adverb. Avoid dangling and misplaced modifiers. Incorrect: While walking along the roadside, a rock fell near my feet. Incorrect: The coach watched the batter closely sitting on the bench. 10 GSP Review Questions 1. I hoped I had chosen / a history professor who/didn’t give pop quizes. a. I hoped I had chosen b. a history professor who c. didn’t give pop quizes 2. In the courtroom/ I sat next to /the witness’s sister. a. In the courtroom b. I sat next to c. the witness’s sister 3. When I lived in New York, / I was a big fan / of Rodgers’ and Hammerstein’s musicals. a. When I lived in New York, b. I was a big fan c. of Rodgers’ and Hammersteins’ muscials 4. If you travel around Italy,/ you will see many frescoes/ of angels wearing haloes. a. If you travel around Italy, b. you will see many frescoes c. of angels wearing haloes. 5. A group of actors/planned to take/their show on the road. a. A group of actors b. planned to take c. their show on the road. 6. Its not going /to take me a long time/ to finish my Christmas shopping. a. Its not going b. to take me a long time c. to finish my Christmas shopping. 7. He is one of the seniors/ who is going to stay at TCU/ to do postgraduate studies. a. He is one of the seniors b. who is going to stay at TCU c. to do postgraduate studies. 8. Running fast to get to class,/ Cindy’s purse got caught/ on the doorknob. a. Running fast to get to class b. Cindy’s purse got caught c. on the doorknob. 11 9. I drove to Virginia/ in June of 1997; and it was a beautiful trip. a. I drove to Virginia b. in June of 1997; c. and it was a beautiful trip. 10. The journalism department chairman, /Anantha Babbili/ will address the convocation. a. The journalism department chairman, b. Anantha Babbili c. will address the opening convocation. 11. “My favorite expression/ is “be prepared,”” /John said. a. “My favorite expression b. is “be prepared,”” c. John said. 12. After I made 100 on my English test, I was confidant/ I could earn an A in the class. a. After I made 100 on my English test b. I was confidant c. I could earn an A in the class. 13. Sally’s engagement ring/ was centered with a diamond/ that weighed two full carets. a. Sally’s engagement ring b. was center with a diamond c. that weighed two full carets. 14. John said he can never remember/ which city is the capitol/ of New Hampshire. a. John said he can never remember b. which city is the capitol c. of New Hampshire. 12 Usage Test A – Additional Problems Name ____________________ Part 1. Place the letter of the correct answer in the blank at the left of each sentence. ___ 1. There are (a. fewer, b. less) rivers in Texas than in Colorado. ___ 2. Do you know (a. whom, b. who) the thief was? ___ 3. Mike is one of those students who (a. play, b. plays) tennis. ___ 4. None of the boys brought (a. his, b. their) books. ___ 5. There (a. do, b. does) remain two alternatives. ___ 6. What is the point of (a. this, b. these) kind of question? ___ 7. I read in the paper (a. where, b. that) our team won. ___ 8. Neither your friends nor Mr. Smith (a. have, b. has) worked this year. ___ 9. Everyone left (a. her, b. their) books at home. ___ 10. I forgot that he had notified us—john and (a. me, b. I ). ___ 11. The cast of players (a. change, b. changes) monthly. ___ 12. The number of people who object to the plans (a. is, b. are) small. ___ 13. I wish I (a. were, b. was) a rich person. ___ 14. Just between you and (a. I, b. me), I don’t care. ___ 15. The (a. amount, b. number) of students here is large. ___ 16. No one but Bonnie and (a. me, b. I ) went to the dance. ___ 17. Which one of the buses (a. goes, b. go) to El Dorado? ___ 18. The reason I never argue with my sister is (a. because, b. that) I am older and realize my logic is wasted. ___ 19. Anyone as brilliant as (a. he, b. him) should make a lot of money. ___ 20. An (a. affect, b. effect) of smoking is cancer. 13 Additional Problems Name ___________________ Directions: The sentences below contain errors in grammar, usage, word choice, and idiom. Parts of each sentence are underlined and lettered. Decide which underlined part contains the error and circle its letter. If the sentence is correct as it stands, mark E. No sentence contains more than one error. 1. Not wanting them to be unnecessary distressed, I didn’t tell them about our mishap A B C D with the car. No error E 2. By the time he reached the cabin, the mercury had dropped and his hands were A B nearly froze No error C D E 3. We ought to set our prejudices aside and except each other as equals. No error A B C D E 4. Every athlete has their own way of preparing for a game. No error A B C D E 5. As a documentary photographer for the Farm Security Administration during the A Depression, Dorothea Lange recorded the hardships and desperation of America’s B C dispossessed. No error. D E 6. The Piltdown man, one of the most extraordinary scientific hoax of all time, was A accepted by anthropologists as the “missing link” between man and the apes. B C D No error E 7. Lifeguards have been known to effect rescues even during storms. No error A B C D E 8. The mayor expressed concern about the large amount of people injured at street A B C crossings. No error D E 9. “Let us face the fact that we’re in trouble!” he shouted. No error A B C D E 14 GSP Review: Key to Practice Questions GSP Review Questions 1-14 1. C (quizzes not quizes) 2. C (just s’ because sister begins with an s) 3. C (Rodgers and Hammerstein’s because they are a team, not working separately) 4. C (preferred spelling is halos not haloes) 5. C (group is a collective noun, calls for its not their) 6. A (It’s not its) 7. B (seniors who are not is) 8. A (Dangling modifier) 9. B (no ; with the conjunction) 10. B (need commas on both sides of Anantha Babbili—appositive) 11. B (single quotation marks with use of quote within quote) 12. B (confident not confidant) 13. C (carat not caret; note that karat refers to gold, carat refers to gems, caret is a ^, and carrot is a vegetable) 14. B (capital is the city, capitol is the building) Additional Problems—part 1 1. A (fewer and number refer to things that can be counted, less and amount refer to things that can’t be counted) 2. B (The thief was who?—Linking verbs never take the objective case of pronouns) 3. A (students who play—who is a plural subject here because it refers to students) 4. A (none is singular) 5. A (two do remain) 6. A (this kind) 7. B (where always refers to place) 8. B (subject closest to verb determines number of verb with neither/nor and either/or) 9. A (everyone is singular) 10. A (us renames object of preposition) 11. B (cast is a singular collective noun) 12. A (the number is small) 13. A (use were not was with the subjunctive signaled by if or wish) 15 14. B (object of preposition between) 15. B (use number with items that can be counted) 16. A (except is a preposition, object needed) 17. A (one goes to El Dorado) 18. B (the reason is always that, not because) 19. A (anyone as brilliant as he is brilliant—understood verb with as and than) 20. B (in most cases, affect is a verb and effect is a noun) Additional problems part 2 1. B (unnecessarily not unnecessary because the word is used as an adverb) 2. D (frozen not froze) 3. C (accept not except) 4. B (his not their because every is singular) 5. E correct sentence 6. A (one of the hoaxes) 7. B (to affect) 8. C (number not amount because people can be counted) 9. E correct sentence 16 Usage Review #1 Circle the correct word in each sentence. 1. (Who/Whom) do you have in mind? 2. One of the players who (have/has) good potential is leaving the team. 3. Either my sister or my brother (have/has) been here while we were gone. 4. The best part of the program (was/were) the games. 5. He has made better grades than (I/me). 6. They decided to go to Europe with my wife and (I/me). 7. If the water (raises/rises) two feet, the town will flood. 8. Tired, but unable to sleep, he stretched out on the couch and (lay/laid) there. 9. In the foreground of the picture are a pear and a peach, neither of which (look/looks) edible. 10. Roaring with rage, Martin (swang/swung/swinged) the cat over his head. 11. If Charlie could pitch (like/as) his brother does, we would wind more games. 12. No one except Balder and (I/me/myself) should have access to the safe. 13. To (he/him) (who/whom) comes away the victor (belong/belongs) the spoils. 14. My boss paid me a nice (compliment/complement) this morning. 15. The (affect/effect) of the cotton gin on the South was revolutionary. 16. The (principle/principal) reason for his missing class was illness. 17. Everyone must bring (their/his) own food to the campout. 18. Joe is a (real/really) serious boy. 19. He should (have/of) thought of that before he left. 20. I never met anyone as brilliant as (he/him). Usage Review #2 Underline the error in the following sentences. If the sentence is correct, write C after the sentence. 1. He had a peculiar habit. Pinching his nose before he spoke. 17 2. I saw a man leading a dog that I recognized as my cousin. 3. Angered, the color rose in her face. 4. Turmish is quiet, industrious, intelligent, and loves to have fun. 5. When Jim was in grade school, he didn’t like his English teacher because he made him work even when he didn’t want to. 6. Those of you who attended high school with Frank Rogers will recall that he was very strong and of great skill. 7. We have placed mousetraps in every room; I am certain they won’t bother us much longer. 8. I am not likely to forgive Lovelace, Clarissa claims that she does. 9. Because of her teacher’s inspiring example, she decided to be one herself when she grew up. 10. First I rake the soil, then I lay out rows and plant the seeds. 11. It is useless to talk to him about your football because it will just go in one hear and out the other. 12. Searching for a place to hide my treasure, a loose stone in the wall caught my attention. 13. Who’s did you suppose it was? 14. When I walked into the Pentagon, I was overwhelmed by the amount of corridors and the acres of offices. 15. After we had reached the dead end, we realized we should of turned left at the intersection. 16. Have you ever known people as stingy as them? 17. Taking all things into consideration; I guess fall is my favorite season. 18 Usage review #3 Underline the error in the following sentences. If the sentence is correct, write C beside it. 1. Bart not only likes pizza but also lasagna. 2. Having eaten the canned cat food, Larry decided that the cat was no longer hungry. 3. The teacher gave us a lecture on how to behave ourselves in school about every two weeks. 4. The hamburgers were given to all the guests smothered in onions. 5. Not noticing who had just entered the room, Jen’s conversation continued unchecked. 6. The major reason for Stevenson’s continuing popularity is his story telling ability. 7. We saw Johnny hit a home run from the bleachers. 8. We put alcohol in the gas tank, thus we kept the lines free of ice. 9. Everyone is supposed to show their identification card when the usher asks for it. 10. A good set of box-end wrenches cost nearly one hundred dollars. 11. There have been a large number of forest fires, therefore, extra precautions are being taken. 12. The Milky Way is one of the giant galaxies; however, that are visible at great distances. 13. Helen Keller is one of the many persons who has triumphed over physical handicaps. 14. The man either picked up his check or had it sent directly to the bank. 15. There were several reports from the radar stations all of them were conflicting. 16. When mother came home from Europe, she started planning another trip. 17. If you ask me, Charley is being lead down the primrose path. 18. The automobile industry has been effected by Ralph Nadar’s investigations. 19. A dog’s affections are more obvious than a cat. 20. I wish I was fishing on Beaver Lake rather than sitting in my back yard. 19 Review of Subject-Verb Agreement Choose the correct form of the verb within parentheses in each sentence below. Make sure the verb agrees with its subject. 1. Neither Professor Barr nor Professor Neill (think, thinks) that the problem is solved. 2. Attitudes about responsibility, of course, (vary, varies). 3. Every one of the items (was, were) inventoried last month. 4. A low wall and a high hedge (provide, provides) privacy for the entrance. 5. Neither of them even (know, knows) when to stop. 6. There (comes, come) to my mind now the titles of the award-winning novels. 7. The sweepstakes prize (was, were) ten million dollars. 8. A rustic lodge, as well as a game refuge and fishing waters, (is, are) near by. 9. Such computers, which (stores, store) personal data, (jeopardizes, jeopardize) the privacy of millions. 10. An understanding of mathematics (is, are) facilitated by a knowledge of number theory.. 20 Review of Pronoun Case Form Choose the correct pronoun within the parentheses in each of the following sentences. 1. When choosing a career, people like Lucille and (I, me) have many options. 2. (She, Her) and (I, me) applied for a small federal grant. 3. It was Dean and (she, her) who volunteered to do the publicity. 4. Are Mitch and (they, them) still looking for a job? 5. Between Lana and (she, her) there is little cooperation. 6. Mr. Liu will hire a new programmer, either Sam or (he, him). 7. Leaving Scot and (he, him) at home, we went to town with Elizabeth and (she, her). 8. My family and (I, me, myself) expected Bobby and (she, her) to declare bankruptcy. 9. Two employees in our office, Tom and (he, him), talked with the boss. 10. After the meeting, the boss talked with two employees, Tom and (he, him). 21 Case Forms of Nouns and Pronouns Nouns Subjective boy Jessie Personal Pronouns Singular 1st person I 2nd person you 3rd person he she it Plural 1st person we 2nd person you 3rd person they Objective boy Jessie Possessive boy’s Jessie’s me you him her it my, mine your, yours his her, hers its us you them our, ours your, yours their, theirs Relative and Interrogative Pronouns who whom whoever whomever which, that which, that what what Indefinite Pronouns everybody everybody Singular Reflexive Pronouns 1 Person 2nd Person myself yourself Plural ourselves st yourselves whose --------- everybody’s 3rd Person himself herself itself themselves 22 Main Uses of the Comma To separate main clauses linked by a coordinating conjunction (opposite). Main Clause for and or so but nor yet , . Main Clause The building is finished, but it has no tenants. To set off most introductory elements (opposite). Introductory Element , . Main Clause Unfortunately, the only tenant pulled out. To set off nonessential elements. Main Clause , . Nonessential Element The empty building symbolizes a weak local economy, which affects everyone. Beginning of Main Clause , , Nonessential Element End of Main Clause . The primary cause, the decline of local industry, is not news. To separate items in a series. … item 1 , , item 2 and or item 3 . The city needs healthier businesses, new schools, and improved housing. To separate coordinate adjectives. … First Adjective , Second Adjective Word Modified … A tall, sleek skyscraper is not needed. Other uses for commas: To separate parts of dates, addresses, long numbers. To separate quotations and signal phrases.