Comparative Essay Rubric Criteria R (0-49%) No Lead Knowledge No Thesis Statement No comparisons made. -Introduction Lacks clear or distinguishable main ideas. Lacks clear comparisons Does not summarize arguments Does not bring closure to essay -Body -Conclusion Thinking - Thesis -Compare -Contrast -Secondary Sources -Use of sources. Thesis brings no unity to essay No logic, objectivity or coherence in arguments No examples are used from research Student does not provide secondary sources. Communication -Devices -Diction/Voice -Grammar -Punctuation -Spelling -Flow and Style Application -Paragraph Structure -Persuasive Tone -Unified, Coherent, Emphatic - APA Does not use appropriate diction Numerous errors is grammar Numerous errors in spelling Numerous errors in punctuation Shows no command of essay structure, flow and style No use of transitions Student makes frequent errors in voice and tense throughout their paper Total: /40 No comparison in essay No clear paragraph structure. No meaning evident in essay. Does not incorporate literary element. Does not address thematic components of the text. Numerous errors in APA Format Works Cited page is not included in essay Student does not have a title or utilize proper MLA paragraph structure Level 1 (50-59%) Student Name: Level 2 (60-69%) Level 3 (70-79%) Level 4 (80-100%) Uninspiring lead. Unstructured thesis statement Organizes comparative material with limited effectiveness. One to two topics unspecific or vague in their connection to the thesis. One good comparison per argument. Limited summary of arguments. Brings limited closure to essay. Adequate Lead Adequately structured thesis statement Somewhat effective organization of comparative material. Two to three topics somewhat connected to thesis. Two good comparisons per argument. Some summary of main ideas in the conclusion. Brings some closure to essay. Considerable Lead Considerably structured thesis statement Considerable organization of comparative material. Three topics considerably connected to thesis. Three good comparisons per argument. Summarizes main ideas in the conclusion with a high degree of effectiveness. Brings closure to essay Excellent Lead Perfectly structured thesis statement Clear and thorough organization of comparative material. Topics exceptionally linked to thesis. Three excellent comparisons per argument. Summarizes main ideas in conclusion with a high degree of effectiveness. Brings closure to essay. Vague thesis is disconnected from essay Limited comparisons and contrasts made between two texts. Literary elements are incorporated with limited effectiveness and do not provide depth to student’s analysis. 1 comparisons is in essay and provides limited proof of arguments Student uses few pieces of evidence and proof throughout their essay, making their arguments lack persuasiveness. Adequate thesis statement that brings some unity to the essay Some effective comparisons and contrasts made between two texts. Literary elements are incorporated somewhat effectively and provide some depth to student’s analysis. 2 comparisons are used to somewhat prove arguments. Student uses some secondary sources throughout essay with some effectiveness. Effective, focused thesis statement that unifies the essay Strong and effective comparisons and contrasts made between two texts. Literary elements are incorporated effectively and provide considerable depth to student’s analysis. 3-4 comparisons are used to considerably prove arguments. Support and secondary sources used are considerably effective in supporting student’s own ideas and analysis. Uses diction with limited effectiveness Frequent errors is grammar Frequent errors in spelling Frequent errors in punctuation Displays limited command of essay structure, flow and style Limited use of transitions Student frequently uses an informal voice Student switches tense consistently Comparative elements are confusing and paragraph structure demonstrates limited effectiveness. Student uses literary element infrequently as a method to link both texts with limited effectiveness. Limited meaning evident in essay. Literary element is incorporated into essay with limited effectiveness, while addressing few, thematic components of texts. Frequent errors in APA Format Limited use of structure in Works Cited page Frequent errors in APA paragraph structure and poor title Somewhat uses diction effectively Some errors is grammar Some errors in spelling Some errors in punctuation Displays some command of essay structure, flow and style Some use of transitions At times, student uses an informal voice in their paper Student switches tenses at times in their paper Uses appropriate diction considerable effectiveness Few errors is grammar Few errors in spelling Few errors in punctuation Displays considerable command of essay structure, flow and style Considerable use of transitions Student considerably uses appropriate voice throughout Student considerably uses in proper tense Comparative elements are focused, arranged considerably with good paragraph structure. Student regularly uses literary element as a method to link both texts with considerable effectiveness. Considerable meaning applied to essay. Literary element is considerably incorporated into essay while addressing essential, thematic components of texts. Few errors in APA Format Works Cited page utilizes good structure Good APA paragraph structure and interesting title Insightful, thought-provoking thesis statement that unifies the essay Strong, insightful and effective comparisons and contrasts made between two texts. Literary elements are incorporated very effectively and provide exceptional depth to student’s analysis. 5-6 comparisons are used to effectively prove all arguments. Support and secondary sources used are very effective in supporting student’s own ideas and analysis. Uses appropriate diction with high degree of effectiveness No errors is grammar No errors in spelling No errors in punctuation Displays extensive command of essay structure, flow and style Excellent use of transitions Student consistently uses the appropriate voice throughout Student remains in proper tense Comparative elements are somewhat confusing at times, and paragraph structure makes it difficult to follow student’s comparisons. Student somewhat uses literary element as a method to link both texts with some effectiveness. Adequate meaning applied to essay. Literary element is incorporated into essay somewhat effectively, while addressing some, thematic components of texts. Some errors in APA Format Works Cited page is adequate Adequate APA paragraph structure and title Comparative elements are focused, arranged very effectively with logical paragraph structure. Student consistently uses literary element as a method to link both texts with a high degree of effectiveness. Excellent meaning applied to essay. Literary element is effectively incorporated into essay while addressing essential, thematic components of texts. No errors in APA Format Works cited page is perfect Perfect APA paragraph structure and intriguing title Mark /10 /10 /10 /10