Research Paper Scoring Guide Check-list A 90 91 92 93 94 95 96 97 98 99 100 Superior papers address all aspects of the prompt in a meaningful and insightful way that is fully developed over the course of the paper. The author fully describes the current situation of the issue with stylistic flair, and offers a clear, insightful, and research-based solution to the issue. The student synthesizes evidence and integrates quotations in a sophisticated way. Paper skillfully uses evidence from at least 5 sources, but likely includes more. Flawless use of formatting. B 80 81 82 83 84 85 86 87 88 89 Good papers are less thorough or specific in their development of their analysis and some minor aspects of the prompt may not be addressed. The author offers a good depiction of the current situation, and offers a research-based solution to the issue that is apt, but not as well developed or clear. Paper uses evidence from at least 5 sources, but likely includes more. Author properly integrates quotations, and has a good use of formatting. C 70 71 72 73 74 75 76 77 78 79 Suitable papers offer a superficial response to the topic that is on-topic, but mostly summarizes research rather than analyzing or synthesizing. The paper offers a solution to the issue, but it is not well-thought out or covers very limited aspects of the problem. Includes evidence, but is more limited. Paper includes at least 5 sources, but some sources may be off topic or not directly related to topic. Appears to follow MLA format guidelines, but has some errors or is inconsistent. D 60 61 62 63 64 65 66 67 68 69 Ineffective papers offer an underdeveloped and misguided attempt to address the prompt. The paper may be missing key aspects of the prompt, offer a poor description of the current situation, and either create a flawed solution or fail to offer a solution. Paper uses fewer than 5 sources or most sources are not related to prompt. These papers offer few quotations that are poorly documented. They fail to follow most guidelines set by MLA. F 0 – 59 These essays compound the weakness of essays in the C or D essays and are frequently unacceptably brief. They are poorly written on several counts, including many distracting errors in grammar and mechanics. Little to no evidence is include or cited. Paper uses fewer than 5 sources or most sources are not related to prompt. Little attempt is made to follow MLA or has no formatting. ∞ (keep—to infinity and beyond!) Δ (change—we all make mistakes!) CONTENT: Development of Analysis in Response to Topic ❏A Insightful & meaningful development of analysis in response to topic; demonstrates writer’s ability to discuss and clearly analyze with insight, understanding, and control. Covers all aspects of the prompt in a meaningful and insightful manner that synthesizes sources in a meaningful way. ❏B Less thorough, less incisive, or less specific development of analysis in response to topic; demonstrates writer’s ability to analyze the topic; may miss a small aspect of the prompt; reveals a more limited understanding than A papers. ❏C Safe, plastic, & superficial response to the topic; reveals simplistic thinking and/or immature writing by mostly regurgitating information found in research. Little time is spent synthesizing sources, and merely summarizes. ❏D Misinterpretations, underdeveloped or misguided; paraphrase and plot summary at the expense of analysis CONTENT: Description of Current Situation ❏A Paints a picture with stylistic flair of the current situation; includes relevant data, charts, images; the reader can fully grasp the totality of the situation ❏B Gives information of the current situation by describing relevant data, charts, images; the reader can infer most of the situation ❏C Lists or simplistically describes the current situation, includes data, charts, images, but may have some inaccuracies, reader has a basic understanding of the situation ❏D Either fails to describe the situation or gives gross inaccuracies to the current situation CONTENT: Solution to Topic ❏A Offers a clear, insightful, research-based solution to the issue. This could include solutions from other localities, professional insight & recommendations, data from interested groups, etc. Solution is apt for the situation, and could create demonstrable change in the community by addressing all key aspects of the problem in an insightful way. ❏B Offers a research-based solution to the issue. Solution is apt for the situation, but is not as well thought out or clear. Offered solution covers most aspects of the problem, with all key details. ❏C Offers a research-based solution to the issue, but the solution is somewhat inappropriate to the situation. Student’s offered solution covers limited aspects of the problem, but covers most key details. ❏D Flawed solution to the problem. Misses key information and creates an inappropriate solution. CONTENT: Use of Evidence ❏A Skillful use of excellent concrete detail selection; 3-5 suitable quotations per paragraph, all quotations integrated in a sophisticated manner. Includes evidence from at least 5 sources, but superior papers integrate evidence from 5-7 sources successfully. ❏B Good concrete detail selection; 2-4 suitable quotations per paragraph, all quotations properly integrated. Includes evidence from at least 5 sources, but good papers integrate evidence from 5-7 sources well, although one source used may not be as apt or appropriate. ❏C Acceptable use of concrete detail selection; 1-3 mostly suitable quotations per paragraph; quotations are integrated. Includes evidence from at least 5 sources, but acceptable papers may have chosen one source that is less apt or suitable to prompt. ❏D Weak and/or flawed concrete detail selection; evidence doesn’t support topic sentence, one quotation per paragraph FORMAT: MLA and Citations ❏A Flawless use of MLA formatting. Includes proper header, page numbers, in-text citations, footnotes, citations of images/charts. Works cited is alphabetical, using correct tabulation, and conforms to all MLA standards. ❏B Good use of MLA formatting. Includes most aspects of formatting such as header, page numbers, in-text citations, footnotes, etc. Works cited may have some flaws, but uses mostly correct standards such as tabulation and alphabetical order. Includes minimum number of source ❏C Acceptable use of MLA formatting. At first glance, the paper appears to have correct header, page numbers, citations, and works cited, but may be inconsistent in application of MLA. Works cited includes an attempt to use correct standards for a bibliography. ❏D Attempt is made to use MLA format, but is unsuccessful. Major aspects are not followed, for example some intext citations are left off or header is not consistent to MLA. Works cited is included, but has some egregious errors. Mrs. Oh’s Rules: Will only be accepted if: In MLA format Includes Works Cited Is just over 6 pages in length (because the header takes space—no cheating!) At least 5 sources