Persuasive Essay Proofreading Checklist for _________________________ In addition to adding comments and corrections on the paper, this is a checklist of items that I will be looking for on your final drafts. Check off those that are OK and circle or highlight those that need work before the final draft is completed. First Look—things you know just from looking at the essay ____ 1. Title: Interesting/not just a topic! ____ 2. Indents & Spacing: Double-spaced/all paragraphs indented/no extra spaces between Essay—things identified by a thorough reading of the essay ____ 3. Introduction: Interesting/Includes a clear thesis statement and at least three sentences ____ 4. Persuasion: Lists at least two solid points/Supports points with reasoning and examples ____ 5. Research: If used, fact or statistic is cited properly in the text ____ 6. Structure: Stays on topic throughout/Reasoning follows a logical order ____ 7. Conclusion: Ends on a persuasive note/Not just a repeat of the intro/Not “you choose” Mechanics—those details that affect how easy it is for others to read the essay ____ 8. Spelling & Grammar: Look for confused words/capitalization/comma and period placement ____ 9. Sentence Fluency: Clear, varied sentences throughout/No run-ons or fragments ____ 10. No you’s/I think’s/I believe’s: Never! Also, circle or cross out any found in the essay Tactical Help—can you help strengthen the arguments in this essay? 11. In my opinion, your weakest argument was… …because… 12. One example that you could include to illustrate your points better is… 13. (Optional) If I could think of another persuasive reason to support your argument, it would be… Proofread by your pal, ___________________________________ Persuasive Essay Proofreading Checklist for _________________________ In addition to adding comments and corrections on the paper, this is a checklist of items that I will be looking for on your final drafts. Check off those that are OK and circle or highlight those that need work before the final draft is completed. First Look—things you know just from looking at the essay ____ 1. Title: Interesting/not just a topic! ____ 2. Indents & Spacing: Double-spaced/all paragraphs indented/no extra spaces between Essay—things identified by a thorough reading of the essay ____ 3. Introduction: Interesting/Includes a clear thesis statement and at least three sentences ____ 4. Persuasion: Lists at least two solid points/Supports points with reasoning and examples ____ 5. Research: If used, fact or statistic is cited properly in the text ____ 6. Structure: Stays on topic throughout/Reasoning follows a logical order ____ 7. Conclusion: Ends on a persuasive note/Not just a repeat of the intro/Not “you choose” Mechanics—those details that affect how easy it is for others to read the essay ____ 8. Spelling & Grammar: Look for confused words/capitalization/comma and period placement ____ 9. Sentence Fluency: Clear, varied sentences throughout/No run-ons or fragments ____ 10. No you’s/I think’s/I believe’s: Never! Also, circle or cross out any found in the essay Tactical Help—can you help strengthen the arguments in this essay? 11. In my opinion, your weakest argument was… …because… 12. One example that you could include to illustrate your points better is… 13. (Optional) If I could think of another persuasive reason to support your argument, it would be… Proofread by your pal, ___________________________________