Name: __________________________ Period: ____ “They” by Siegfried Sassoon Memorize the poem. Irony affects the meaning of this poem. Before recitation, students will identify one example of irony in their own lives and explain why it is ironic using an introduction, supporting evidence, and a concluding statement in their explanation. They THE Bishop tells us: ‘When the boys come back ‘They will not be the same; for they’ll have fought ‘In a just cause: they lead the last attack ‘On Anti-Christ; their comrades’ blood has bought ‘New right to breed an honourable race, ‘They have challenged Death and dared him face to face.’ ‘We’re none of us the same!’ the boys reply. ‘For George lost both his legs; and Bill’s stone blind; ‘Poor Jim’s shot through the lungs and like to die; ‘And Bert’s gone syphilitic: you’ll not find ‘A chap who’s served that hasn’t found some change.’ And the Bishop said: ‘The ways of God are strange!’ Your grade will be based on the communication rubric (all aspects of the rubric will be used). 5 10 4 EXEMPLARY 3 PROFICIENT Extensive presentation with a complete set of supporting facts, examples, and /or details. Extraordinary confidence, clarity, and awareness of purpose. Effective presentation with ample facts, examples, and/or details. Considerable confidence, clarity, and awareness of purpose. Suitable presentation with adequate supporting facts, examples, and/or details. Acceptable confidence, clarity, and awareness of purpose. Extensive evidence of topic knowledge and reasoning processes. Substantial evidence of topic knowledge and reasoning processes. Adequate evidence of topic knowledge and reasoning processes. Opening/closing Extraordinary opening & closing. Effective opening & closing. Suitable opening & closing. Limited opening & closing. Transitions Enriching transitions. Successful transitions. Acceptable transitions. Negligible transitions. Logical dev. of ideas Extensive development of ideas. Considerable development of ideas. Acceptable development of ideas. Limited development of ideas. Extensive use of appropriate vocabulary/terminology. Consistent utilization of correct grammar and pronunciation. Presentation style is always appropriate to audience. Effective use of appropriate vocabulary/terminology. Nearly always utilizes correct grammar and pronunciation. Presentation style is nearly always appropriate to audience. Adequate use of appropriate vocabulary/terminology. Utilization of grammar and pronunciation is generally correct. Presentation style is generally appropriate to audience. Minimal use of appropriate vocabulary/terminology. Occasionally utilizes correct grammar and pronunciation. Presentation style is rarely appropriate to audience. Volume is loud enough to be heard by all audience members throughout presentation. Presenter speaks clearly and distinctly all the time. Extraordinary use of pitch and tone to convey meaning. Volume is loud enough to be heard by all audience members throughout most of the presentation. Presenter speaks clearly and distinctly most of the time. Effective use of pitch and tone to convey meaning. Volume is loud enough to be heard by all audience members throughout some of the presentation. Presenter speaks clearly and distinctly some of the time. Adequate use of pitch and tone to convey meaning. Volume is barely audible. Presentation indicates advanced levels of original thinking. Exceptional pacing. Presenter stands up straight, is confident, and establishes eye contact with everyone in the room during the presentation. Gestures effectively enhance presentation. Presentation indicates substantial original thinking. Effective pacing. Presenter stands up straight and establishes eye contact with everyone in the room during the presentation. Presentation indicates original thinking some of the time. Suitable pacing. Presenter sometimes stands up straight and establishes some eye contact with the audience during the presentation. Gestures generally enhance presentation. Presentation indicates a minimal level of original thinking. Ineffective pacing. Presenter has poor posture, and/or does not look at people during the presentation. ESSENTIAL ELEMENTS CONTENT Main Idea & Supporting Details Achievement of purpose Knowledge of topic ORGANIZATION LANGUAGE USE Vocabulary & terminology Grammar Pronunciation Style (Formal or Informal) appropriate to audience. VOICE Volume Clarity Intonation DELIVERY Creativity Pace Posture Eye Contact Gestures Gestures nearly always enhance presentation. 2 SATISFACTORY 1 UNSATISFACTORY Limited presentation with minimal supporting facts, examples, and/or details offered. Limited confidence, clarity, and awareness of purpose. Minimal evidence of topic knowledge and reasoning process. Presenter often mumbles or cannot be understood. Minimal use of pitch and tone to convey meaning. Gestures are limited and rarely enhance presentation.