12 Steps To whom the Goblin full of wrauth reply'd, Art thou that Traitor Angel, art thou hee, Who first broke peace in Heav'n and Faith, till then [ 690 ] Unbrok'n, and in proud rebellious Arms Drew after him the third part of Heav'ns Sons Conjur'd against the highest, for which both Thou And they outcast from God, are here condemn'd To waste Eternal dayes in woe and pain? [ 695 ] And reck'n'st thou thy self with Spirits of Heav'n, Hell-doom'd, and breath'st defiance here and scorn Where I reign King, and to enrage thee more, Thy King and Lord? Back to thy punishment, False fugitive, and to thy speed add wings, [ 700 ] Least with a whip of Scorpions I pursue Thy lingring, or with one stroke of this Dart Strange horror seise thee, and pangs unfelt before. 1. Figurative Language “Goblin” (688) o imagery: disgusting, gross, deformed, evil o portrayed as low and weak, yet is talking back to Satan “breath’st defiance here and scorn” (697) o Imagery: angry and spiteful character, but also weathered soul “to thy speed add wings” (700) o Imagery: wings; connection to Raphael, whose wings are described in detail (5.277) o Meaning: go faster “whip of Scorpions” (701) AND “stroke of this Dart” (702) o Imagery: stinging weapon; poisonous 2. Diction [see colored text above] Verbs where Satan performs the action (“broke”, “outcast”) are mainly negative (689) “Traitor” – etymology: Latin “traditor” o “One who delivers” – delivers Hell, evil, loss, and maybe freedom? o When considered with (700) “wings,” Satan seems to be portrayed as the evil version of Raphael (and Hermes) – they both “deliver” Nouns o “faith” (which Satan “broke”) – trust; honesty o “defiance” (which Satan “breath’st”) – challenge; declaration of war o “scorn” (which Satan “breath’st”) – contempt o “punishment” (which belongs to Satan) – correction; penalty “False Fugitive” (700) o “false” – untrue; deceitful; treacherous o “fugitive” – runaway; fleeing; shun o Double meaning: treacherous and shun from Heaven AND/OR not fleeing Hell (because Death intends to stop Satan) Adjectives used to create negative image of Satan, or a positive image of things before Lucifer’s fall “Strange horror” (703) o “strange” – unknown; new o “horror” – dread; religious awe o Possible hidden meaning: Death threatens Satan with religious awe, which is unknown to Satan 3. Literal Content Death responds to Satan’s demand to leave Hell by describing Satan’s reputation in a negative light and ordering him back to Hell with threats of pain and horror. 4. Structure Iambic pentameter and enjambment work together to create orderly and logical progression of thoughts, yet full of connotations and emotion strengthened by imagery (see Style section for expansion of the use of enjambment) Breakdown of excerpt: o Introduces speaker before entering dialogue (688) o Death describes and shows contempt for Satan’s bad reputation (689-95) o Death established relative superiority over Satan by refuting Satan’s position as a “Spirit of Heaven” and asserting his position as “King and Lord” (696-699) o Death threatens Satan and demands that he return to Hell, his “punishment” (700-703) 5. Style Death uses repeated questions to make points against Satan and mock him for: o Being a traitor o Breaking peace o Drawing a third of God’s Angels from Heaven o Being “outcast from God” o Identifying himself as a “Spirit of Heaven” Enjambment used to separate: o Broken from unbroken piece (690-1) o “Spirits of Heaven” from “Hell-doom’d” (696-7) o “defiance and scorn” from “I reign King” (697-8) 6. Characterization Of Death o Rude – began by mocking the King of Hell o Angry – uses harsh words and described as “Goblin” o Intelligently answered Satan’s rudeness – “And reck’n’st thou thy self with Spirits of Heav’n” Of Satan o Outcast – “outcast from God” o Not worthy of Heaven – “Hell-doomed” o Unsure of his identity – is he the ruler of Pandemonium in Hell or an outcast from Heaven – here, Satan asserts his power by identifying as the latter Of the relation between Death and Satan o Death was born in Hell, while Satan fell from Heaven o Death is an important figure in the inferior world where he is a native, while Satan failed to maintain his important position in the superior world where he is from 7. Tone At first – mocking, sardonic, and full of contempt o “Art thou that Traitor Angel, art thouhee…” o “to enrage thee more, / Thy King and Lord” (698-9) Then – angry, aggressive, mean and scary o “Back to thy punishment, / False fugitive, and to thy speed add wings” (699-700) o “Least wuth a whip of Scorpions I pursue” (701) 8. Assessment Microcosm of Satan’s internal conflict that is further explored in later books Struggle of power and origin Satan wants to be the most powerful in Heaven; now he is the most powerful in Hell and haunted by his fallen existence This depiction of a character with faults and inner struggles and obstacles he hopes to overcome makes Satan’s character more sympathetic 9. Context Satan goes on a journey from Hell to learn about Mankind and plot its downfall, but discovers that he must pass through gates guarded by his son, Death. He approached Death and demands that he, as his superior, be allowed through, threatening Death with the power of “Spirits of Heav’n” (688). 10. Texture Structured rhythm, but loosened with enjambment and strong passionate language and imagery o Mirrors the scene – orderly argument and specific threat strengthened with harsh, emotional insults and retorts Structure, imagery, and figuration conducive to our perception of Satan and Death and relatable characters because it matches the texture of regular conversation o Constrained by rules of language and formalities ~ iambic pentameter o Back-and-forth responding to previous statement ~ “Spirits of Heav’n” retort o Imagery – emotion reinforces pathos 11. Themes Satan identifies with “Spirits of Heav’n,” even though is outcast, because that is where he is from o Identity o Power o Roots Death points out that Satan is rejected by Heav’n and punished in Hell o Good vs. Evil o Hell vs. Heaven Death tries to establish superiority over Satan by bringing up Satan’s past failure o Reputation 12. Thesis The excerpt presents Satan as a conflicted character whose position as the leader of Hell is undermined by the desire for power in Heaven that led to his downfall.