Gender, identity and narrative in oral tellings of Red Riding Hood by native speaking English teachers in South Korea Alexander Grevett University of Leicester Alexander Grevett ED7504: Language, Discourse and Society Gender, identity and narrative in oral tellings of Red Riding Hood by native speaking English teachers in South Korea Contents 1 Introduction ........................................................................................................................ 4 2 Literature review ................................................................................................................ 5 2.1 2.1.1 Deficit theory ....................................................................................................... 5 2.1.2 Difference theory ................................................................................................. 6 2.1.3 Performative theory ............................................................................................. 7 2.2 Linguistic features ................................................................................................ 8 2.2.2 Styles, topics and purposes .................................................................................. 9 Society, power & language ....................................................................................... 10 2.3.1 Reflexivity.......................................................................................................... 10 2.3.2 Socialization....................................................................................................... 11 2.3.3 Power and asymmetry ........................................................................................ 11 2.4 Identity and gender .................................................................................................... 12 2.4.1 Constructing and performing ............................................................................. 13 2.4.2 Group identity .................................................................................................... 13 2.5 4 Differences in men and women’s speech .................................................................... 7 2.2.1 2.3 3 The history of language and gender research .............................................................. 5 Narrative and gender ................................................................................................. 14 Research background and method ................................................................................... 16 3.1 Background ............................................................................................................... 16 3.2 Research method ....................................................................................................... 16 Discussion of results ........................................................................................................ 18 4.1 Character voicing ...................................................................................................... 18 4.1.1 Results ................................................................................................................ 18 4.1.2 Discussion .......................................................................................................... 19 4.2 Comments on voicing................................................................................................ 24 4.3 Narrative .................................................................................................................... 24 4.3.1 Audience ............................................................................................................ 24 4.3.2 Storytelling as a community of practice ............................................................ 25 4.3.3 Traditional stories vs. individual stories ............................................................ 29 5 Conclusion ....................................................................................................................... 31 6 References ........................................................................................................................ 32 7 Acknowledgements .......................................................................................................... 37 8 Appendix A: Transcripts and audio links ........................................................................ 38 8.1 Woman 1 ................................................................................................................... 39 2 Alexander Grevett ED7504: Language, Discourse and Society Gender, identity and narrative in oral tellings of Red Riding Hood by native speaking English teachers in South Korea 8.2 Woman 2 ................................................................................................................... 40 8.3 Woman 3 ................................................................................................................... 42 8.4 Woman 4 ................................................................................................................... 45 8.5 Woman 5 ................................................................................................................... 46 8.6 Man 1......................................................................................................................... 48 8.7 Man 2......................................................................................................................... 51 8.8 Man 3......................................................................................................................... 52 8.9 Man 4......................................................................................................................... 55 8.10 Man 5 ..................................................................................................................... 57 8.11 Man 6 ..................................................................................................................... 58 9 Appendix B: Marked up transcript .................................................................................. 59 10 Appendix C: Submission Guidelines ............................................................................... 60 11 Appendix D: Release form............................................................................................... 62 3 Alexander Grevett ED7504: Language, Discourse and Society Gender, identity and narrative in oral tellings of Red Riding Hood by native speaking English teachers in South Korea 1 Introduction Do men and women really speak differently? Much research has been carried out in order to answer this question, and many books have been written claiming that they do. Other books, though fewer, claim that there is little significant difference in speech styles between genders. Furthermore, the literature disagrees not only as to whether men and women speak differently, but also as to why this may be so. This study aims to make a small contribution to finding the answers to both questions, and suggest a research method and some areas of study as yet underexplored, by asking men and women to tell their own versions of a famous folktale, and analysing the differences therein. The paper is organized as follows. It begins with a review of some of the literature relevant to the project, in the areas of language and gender theory, features of gendered speech, the way language constructs gender in society and individually, and the way gender links to narrative. Following this, the research method is described, and the results are analysed. 4 Alexander Grevett ED7504: Language, Discourse and Society Gender, identity and narrative in oral tellings of Red Riding Hood by native speaking English teachers in South Korea 2 Literature review In this section the literature relating to theories of language and gender1 is reviewed. It begins with the history of language and gender and purported differences in gendered speech, and then moves to a wider focus on the role that language plays in society and in constructing individuals’ identities. Finally, the relationship between gender and narrative is examined. 2.1 The history of language and gender research This section will provide a review of recent work in the field of language and gender, covering theories from 1970 to the present: namely Deficit, Difference and Performative, with particular reference to a key text from each. Is has been noted by Cameron that these theories did not directly supersede each other, but grew out of interaction, with the balance between them shifting over time with academic developments and the changing social climate. (2005:484) 2.1.1 Deficit theory It seems almost impossible to discuss theories of language and gender without mentioning Language and Woman’s Place2 (Lakoff 1975). Lakoff could reasonably claim to have invented the discipline as we understand it today. Her influence, direct and indirect, can be seen in many of the works mentioned in this study. Importantly, Lakoff’s work dealt with language from a feminist viewpoint which saw language as discriminating against women both in description and usage to a dehumanizing end (1975:4–5). The problem for Lakoff was that the way that women were taught to speak led to them not being taken seriously and “systematically denied access to power, on the grounds that they are not capable 1 In keeping with current trends, seen for example in Wardhaugh (2009) and Cameron (2005, 2010) this paper will use the term ‘gender’ in the ranged, socially constructed sense, as opposed to the more biologically based, and binary ‘sex’. 2 Hereafter LWP. 5 Alexander Grevett ED7504: Language, Discourse and Society Gender, identity and narrative in oral tellings of Red Riding Hood by native speaking English teachers in South Korea of holding it as demonstrated by their linguistic behaviour” (1975:7). Her ‘women’s language’3 is marked by “powerlessness, insecurity, and triviality” (Cameron 2005:485). Lakoff saw ‘women’s language’ as reflective of a wider oppression, in which the language that women are taught and the subjects that it relegates women to dealing with are "not relevant to the real world of (male) influence and power" (1975:13). This leads to what she calls a “double bind”, a “problem in our culture” which the women are seen as unfeminine if they speak like men, and powerless if they speak like women (1975:57). 2.1.2 Difference theory Difference theory was perhaps a reaction to criticism of LWP and the idea that it saw ‘women’s language’ as inherently deficient (see for example McConnell-Ginet 2004:108). Its most famous text, You Just Don’t Understand (Tannen 1990), attempts to counter the view that "Experts and nonexperts alike tend to see anything women do as evidence of powerlessness" (1990:225), by revising Deficit theory and presenting men and women’s speech styles as separate but equally valuable “genderlects” (1990:279). Tannen’s genderlects are characterized by a focus on status and hierarchy in men, while women tend to use language to establish connection and intimacy (1990:279). This basic distinction is often the cause of misunderstanding in the way that men and women communicate with each other. These differences are pronounced enough for Tannen to proclaim that it is akin to cross-cultural communication (1990:18). Like Lakoff, Tannen sees these differences as being produced by society, but for her they are a result of the way that children are exposed to and acquire language in early childhood, in particular during single sex play. As she says: "Even if they grow up in the same neigborhood, on the same 3 Lakoff’s scare quotes. 6 Alexander Grevett ED7504: Language, Discourse and Society Gender, identity and narrative in oral tellings of Red Riding Hood by native speaking English teachers in South Korea block, or in the same house, girls and boys grow up in different worlds of words" (1990:43). It is this difference that informs the way we speak as adults, and causes the misunderstandings that Tannen deals with in her book. 2.1.3 Performative theory Performative theory came about with a “postmodern turn” in which less importance was placed in grand narratives such as binary gender difference, and more attention given to a range of locally constructed, gendered identities (Cameron 2005:487). This turn led to Cameron writing The Myth of Mars and Venus (2007) in which she showed that the differences that Tannen claimed for men and women held neither over time in Western society, nor in different cultures today. Performative theory is based on the ideas of philosopher Judith Butler, who suggests that rather than being essential, gender comes about through continuous practices that constitute it – in her words “gender is the repeated stylization of the body” (1990:33). These practices are located in society, but the individual can either reinforce them or attempt to challenge or revise it (Bucholtz 1999:206 citing de Certeau 1988). This theory is reflective of current Western society, where gender is increasingly seen as a product of personal choice rather than an inescapable essence (Cameron 2005:490). This section examined three current and historical theories of language and gender and gave brief descriptions which will be elaborated upon in the coming sections. 2.2 Differences in men and women’s speech This section will examine some of the claims in the literature about the features, styles, topics and purposes of men and women’s speech. 7 Alexander Grevett ED7504: Language, Discourse and Society Gender, identity and narrative in oral tellings of Red Riding Hood by native speaking English teachers in South Korea 2.2.1 Linguistic features In LWP, Lakoff suggested a number of features that characterized women’s speech. These included trivial adjectives such as minute colour distinctions, or perceived feminine adjectives such as “divine”; tag questions; uptalk (declarative sentences spoken with rising intonation); powerless exclamations (“fudge” instead of “shit”); and intensifiers such as “so” which bring little extra meaning to the utterance (1975: 53-56). These claims were based on Lakoff’s impressions, but were investigated further by a generation of researchers. Some found little support for Lakoff’s claims; for example Dubois & Crouch (1975) found that in a meeting men used 33 tag questions to women’s 0 (they did not however count the amount of talk by different genders). Siegler and Siegler found that people thought that women used more tag questions, even when they didn’t (1973). Holmes improved Lakoff’s hypothesis by dividing the functions of tag questions into modal and affective. She found that women used more modal tags, and men used more affective ones (Holmes 1984 cited in Cameron, McAlinden & O’Leary 1989: 82). Overall though, little evidence was produced to validate or disprove Lakoff’s findings. However, the importance of Lakoff’s observations may not be their empirical legitimacy, but that they all serve to “weaken or mitigate the force of an utterance” (Cameron, McAlinden & O’Leary 1989:75). Aside from Lakoff, other researchers have also made claims that women use more questions than men (Fishman 1980), and that boys at play tend to give “aggravated directives” (such as “Gimme some rubber bands”) while girls use more “mitigated directives” (“Let’s go around Subs and Suds”) (Goodwin 1998). However, as theory moved on, researchers moved from exploring individual features to examining the speech styles of men and women, which will be covered in the following section. 8 Alexander Grevett ED7504: Language, Discourse and Society Gender, identity and narrative in oral tellings of Red Riding Hood by native speaking English teachers in South Korea 2.2.2 Styles, topics and purposes Lakoff claims that women seem more polite because they are socialized to be indirect, deferential and unclear in order not to offend (1975: 73). These claims were developed by Tannen (1990), who saw this politeness as an attempt to avoid conflict and strengthen bonds between people. Men, on the other hand, see themselves in a hierarchy of power where challenge and respect are much more important. Some effects of this are in the table below: Men (Hierarchical) Women (Community-minded) Independence: men will take decisions alone, and be less willing to show sympathy or concern for fear of seeming “one-up” or “one down”. Connectedness: women take decisions in consultation, and are happier to show empathy. Public speaking: men will speak more at public events in order to win respect. Private speaking: women will speak more at home in order to build intimacy with their partners or friends. Conflict: men seek conflict or challenge to demonstrate their hierarchical position. Avoidance: women try to avoid conflict as it threatens intimacy. Interrupting: Men interrupt to gain the floor (see also Zimmerman & West 1975:116) Overlapping: women use overlapping speech to choose topics and build conversations collaboratively (see also Coates (1993: 138). Tannen claims that these differences contribute to different “genderlects” spoken by men and women (1990: 279). While Tannen’s theories seem to relate to a universal concept of men and women, other researchers investigated at a more local level. This came from notions of Speech Communities (Milroy & Milroy 1978) and Communities of Practice (Eckert 1992). Coates examines 2 studies (Milroy & Milroy 1978 and Cheshire 1982) that showed that where a variable could be labelled prestige, it was generally used more by women (1993: 77). Eckert and McConnell-Ginet found that in a high school community, “jock” girls used far less non-standard forms, and “burned-out burnout” girls 9 Alexander Grevett ED7504: Language, Discourse and Society Gender, identity and narrative in oral tellings of Red Riding Hood by native speaking English teachers in South Korea use far more. The boys use of non-standard forms falls between the two (2003:295). Given that “jocks” tend to adopt middle class norms (including standard language) while burnouts reject them, we can see this as these girls taking the linguistic behaviour of their respective groups to the extreme. Cameron theorizes that this was due to the fact that women are "judged more by style than achievement" (2007:148), and therefore expend more energy in the area where they will be greater rewards. If we can draw a parallel between prestige language in society, and language of identity in a group, which has its own prestige, then we may be able to claim that this is one aspect of women’s speech styles that is used across several Western contexts. This section has examined several features and styles of men’s and women’s speech found in studies by Deficit, Difference and Performative theorists. 2.3 Society, power & language In this section, the relationship between society, power and language will be examined in greater detail. The section begins by describing the reflexivity of language and society, before discussing how children are socialized through language, and finally demonstrating how power and inequality in society manifest themselves in language. 2.3.1 Reflexivity Both Deficit and Difference theories see language as being firmly rooted in society (Tannen 1990:243, Lakoff 1975:3). For Lakoff, this concept is related to the Sapir-Whorf hypothesis (Hoijer 1954:93) which says that language constructs and limits our view of the world. Thus the world that we experience will simultaneously be affected by language, while at the same time being reflected in that language. This property is known as “reflexivity” (Gee 2010:101). 10 Alexander Grevett ED7504: Language, Discourse and Society Gender, identity and narrative in oral tellings of Red Riding Hood by native speaking English teachers in South Korea 2.3.2 Socialization The reflexivity of language means that we acquire and maintain concepts embedded in it, such as the way men and women are supposed to speak (Goddard & Patterson 2000:86). This is known as socialization: This [socialization] is a two-way process: in becoming linguistically competent, the child learns to be a fully fledged male or female member of the community; conversely, when children adopt linguistic behaviour considered appropriate to their gender they perpetuate the social order which creates gender distinctions (Coates 1993:143). Socialization is particularly important in Tannen’s work; throughout that she relates the differences in genderlect to studies of children’s play, claiming that this is crucial to developing the linguistic styles that we use in later life (1990). Her work leans heavily on an article by Maltz and Borker (Malz & Borker 1982), which examines a range of studies of childhood play (including the aforementioned Goodwin 1998). The study suggests that girls play is by invitation, and requires closeness. If conflict occurs, the group breaks up, so girls learn to engineer closeness and avoid conflict (Malz & Borker 1982:205) The boys play is much more inclusive, but involves the use of speech to assert dominance and gain audiences for stories (1982:209). These patterns mirror the linguistic behaviour of the adults in Tannen’s book. 2.3.3 Power and asymmetry One criticism of Tannen’s work is that it largely ignores the influence of power on language and society (Cameron 2007:77–78). Tannen sees genderlects as springing innocently from children’s play. For Lakoff, the differences are much more pernicious. Women are “taught” (1975:4) language which is not so much ‘women’s language’ as powerless language: "These words aren’t, basically, “feminine”; rather, they signal “uninvolved,” or “out of power.” (1975:14). This idea is furthered by a study that examined the linguistic behaviour of participants in trial, and found that many of 11 Alexander Grevett ED7504: Language, Discourse and Society Gender, identity and narrative in oral tellings of Red Riding Hood by native speaking English teachers in South Korea Lakoff’s features of women’s language corresponded not with gender, but perceived power in the courtroom. (O'Barr & Atkins 1998) One manifestation of power, language and society all interacting is what Coates calls the Androcentric Rule: "Men will be seen to behave linguistically in a way that fits the writer's view of what is desirable or admirable; women on the other hand will be blamed for any linguistic state which is regarded by the writer as negative or reprehensible" (Coates 1993:16). This explains the fact that men and women are judged differently even if they speak the same way (Tannen 1990:228). This final example is one of asymmetry – the tendency for male language to be considered the norm. (Tannen 1990:244) gives an example that male language tends to feature in mixed groups. In a study of British parliament, Sylvia Shaw (2006) found that powerful men had access to powerful strategies such as transgressing the rules of debate, where women did not. Linked to this asymmetry is Cameron’s view that while women have become a more powerful group in modern society, they have achieved it through “masculinization” of themselves to lessen this asymmetry, rather than a feminization of society (2007:175). Thus it is perhaps power and the desire for it, rather than gender, that has a greater effect on the language that we use. This section has outlined some of the ways in which power, society, language and gender interact. 2.4 Identity and gender In recent years research has focused less on wider society, and more on gender as a part of group or individual identity. This section will outline some of the key concepts in this area. 12 Alexander Grevett ED7504: Language, Discourse and Society Gender, identity and narrative in oral tellings of Red Riding Hood by native speaking English teachers in South Korea 2.4.1 Constructing and performing In 2.1.3 performativity was defined as a range of gendered practices, which can be adhered to or subverted according to the desires of the individual. Cameron demonstrates this with an example of Japanese schoolgirls adopting rebellious ways of speaking from comic books (2007:143). The importance of this was that they did not originally pick the particles up from play as infants, nor were they taught them by adults. They adopted them in order to signify their independence. Further evidence of this concept comes from Bucholtz’s study of “nerd girls” who use hyper-correct language both in order to distinguish themselves from the “Jocks” and “Burnouts” and to construct a positive identity for themselves (1999:212). These linguistic practices cannot be explained by theories of socialization (Cameron 2007:143). 2.4.2 Group identity The two examples in the preceding section show individuals choosing identities so as to mark themselves out as part of a group. This notion has been called a “community of practice” – a group centred on a mutual endeavour (Eckert 1992:464) and relates closely to Gee’s notion of language as “doing and being things” (2010: 2). Thus the language that people who are (or wish to be) members of a particular group use, will serve to identify them as such. Wardhaugh suspects that communities of practice may be a better indicator of speech style than a single variable such as gender (2009:348). Cameron points out that "A further key insight is that gender identities may be constituted less by the contrast with the other gender and more by contrast with other versions of the same gender" (Cameron 2005:487–488) . The research examined in this section suggests that looking for universal differences between men and women is unlikely to succeed, but insights may still be gained in more local contexts. 13 Alexander Grevett ED7504: Language, Discourse and Society Gender, identity and narrative in oral tellings of Red Riding Hood by native speaking English teachers in South Korea 2.5 Narrative and gender This section will explore the links between narrative and gender. The investigation of narrative is a powerful sociolinguistic tool because “stories have a pervasive role in our daily life” (Thornborrow 2005:1) and by telling stories we “actively create worlds” (Johnstone 1993:67). Being the teller4 of a story is a powerful position, from which choices can be made to reflect both the subculture that the teller exists in, as well as the psychological, social and cultural situation of the individual (Johnstone 1993:67–68). Threadgold takes a different position that narratives “perform identities and rehearse, enact and change social realities and norms” (2005:265). These differing viewpoints reflect Difference and Performative theories, the first in which individuals reflect society, the other in which they are given more agency in order to change it. Thornborrow also points out that by telling a story, one becomes part of a community of practice (2005:15), and this may also have an impact on the telling. Investigating the differences between men and women’s personal narratives, Johnstone (1993) found important differences in the ways men and women told personal anecdotes. In men’s stories, men were almost always the protagonist (supported by Cheshire (2000:253)) and often acted alone with successful results. In contrast, women generally tell stories with a group of protagonists and violation of social norms. Again, Cheshire finds similar evidence (2000:256) although the social norms violated by her subjects tend to be more frightening than embarrassing. However, they are linked by the fact that women’s stories often seem to involve things happening to women. Johnstone (1993) also finds that women use reported speech (and even reports of unspoken speech (1993:73)) more often in order to build rapport with the listener. They also include names more often in their stories, whereas men focus more on time and place. Cheshire reports an interesting 4 The term “teller” for the performer of the story is borrowed from Blum-Kulka 2005:151, along with its sister terms “tale” for the text of the story, and “telling” for the performance of the story. 14 Alexander Grevett ED7504: Language, Discourse and Society Gender, identity and narrative in oral tellings of Red Riding Hood by native speaking English teachers in South Korea finding in a similar vein, that in telling third person narratives, boys use third party subjectivity (reporting the thoughts and feelings of the protagonist), while girls use first person subjectivity (reporting their own reactions to events). Again it is suspected that women do this in order to build rapport with an audience (Cheshire 2000:255). This section examined theories of narrative related to gender, and found close links between gender and narrative theories, along with important differences in the way men and women tell stories. 15 Alexander Grevett ED7504: Language, Discourse and Society Gender, identity and narrative in oral tellings of Red Riding Hood by native speaking English teachers in South Korea 3 Research background and method 3.1 Background The idea for this study comes from Cameron’s claim that "if you study situations where men and women are doing the same things and playing the same roles, you may find... that the expected differences between men and women do not appear" (Cameron 2007:50) and sets out to test this hypothesis. Her claim is based on performative theory (see 2.1.3), which suggests that gender can be made more or less relevant according to the will of the performer and the expectations on them. Performative theory superseded difference theory, which held that men and women speak in inherently different ways due to socialization and that gender was always an influence on speaking (see 2.1.2). Johnstone’s (1993) study found major differences in the way men and women told personal anecdotes, both in content and style (see 2.5). This would seem to suggest that difference theory was more valid, especially as the content and style differences matched with the aspects of “genderlect” claimed by Tannen (1990). However, telling personal narratives is very general task, and if men and women are essentially different, Johnstone may actually have been asking them to perform different tasks. By asking different genders to perform a text already known to society, the task is the same for both, and variation may not be expected. In addition, by telling the stories in isolation, some of the social aspect is removed, especially the problem of the gender of the interviewer. This experiment was designed to give as similar a task as possible to both genders in order to test Cameron’s hypothesis. 3.2 Research method The study was carried out with ex-patriot English teachers living in South Korea, all of whom spoke English as their L1. All were aged 22-32 and were living and working in South Korea at the time. 16 Alexander Grevett ED7504: Language, Discourse and Society Gender, identity and narrative in oral tellings of Red Riding Hood by native speaking English teachers in South Korea This group was selected for ease of access, and all subjects were previously known to myself. Participants were asked to record themselves telling the story of Little Red Riding Hood (with no researcher present) and submit it for analysis5. In total 6 men and 5 women submitted recordings. The Red Riding Hood story was chosen to give participants the chance to create some stereotypical gendered characters - the predatory wolf, the defenceless girl and grandmother, the avenging woodsman - and also because it is a well-known folktale, but with opportunities for content and style choices within a relatively fixed story. Participants were told that they were telling the story to no particular audience, and that they could tell the story as they felt it should be told. The only stipulation was that they could not read from a text, though they could first research the story. These choices were designed to give participants maximum creative control over their story worlds, and to remove them from any expectations. The recordings were transcribed, with long and short pauses noted. They were then printed and annotated by hand, particularly where intonation was examined6. The transcripts were then analysed to produce the discussion that follows. All participants agreed to participate in the experiment but were not told in advance the nature of the project in order to not influence their recordings. However, once the recordings were complete, the purpose of the study was revealed to them, and they signed release forms7 allowing use of their stories. All of them participated on the condition of anonymity, and agreed that the data they supplied could be published or shared as long as their identity was protected. 5 A copy of the request document can be seen in section 10. 6 A marked up transcript can be seen in section 9. 7 An example of the release letter can be seen in section 11. 17 Alexander Grevett ED7504: Language, Discourse and Society Gender, identity and narrative in oral tellings of Red Riding Hood by native speaking English teachers in South Korea 4 Discussion of results8 This section will analyse the stories submitted, present significant findings and their relation to language and gender9. The 11 stories analysed showed a great deal of variation. Length ranged from around two minutes to over 5 minutes for both men and women. In creating their tellings, all narrators stuck closely to the original storyline, but there were elements that varied between stories such as whether Red Riding Hood10 meets the wolf in the forest, and whether she is eaten by the wolf. None of this variation appeared to be typical of male or female11 narrators. 4.1 Character voicing 4.1.1 Results There were, however, elements of creating the story where men and women’s tellings varied significantly. One of these was voicing the characters, especially feminine ones. Table 1 (below) shows a description of the voices used for each character, if they spoke. The voice the teller used for narration was taken as a standard against which the voices used for the characters could be compared. In the table, a black square indicates that the character did not speak directly in the story; 8 The small scale nature of this experiment means that any quantitative data will be insignificant and not suitable for presentation. This section will therefore move straight to a discussion of some of the issues arising from the analysis of the recordings and transcripts. 9 Full transcripts and links to audio recordings are in section 8 10 Hereafter RRH. 11 This study agrees with Bucholz that “contemporary feminists view identities as fluid, not frozen; they note that, although identities link individuals to particular social groups, such links are not predetermined” Bucholtz 1999:209. Therefore, terms such as “male”, “female”, “man”, “woman”, “masculine” and “feminine” are used advisedly, and for the purposes of an easily understandable discussion, but not in order to establish a binary opposite view of gender. 18 Alexander Grevett ED7504: Language, Discourse and Society Gender, identity and narrative in oral tellings of Red Riding Hood by native speaking English teachers in South Korea grey shading indicates that the character’s voice varied significantly from the narrator’s, and no shading indicates minor or zero variation from the narrator’s voice. There was little difference between men and women’s narratives in the amount of characters who spoke directly – 18 characters in 5 women’s stories compared to 20 characters who spoke in 6 men’s stories. As predicted by Cameron (2007: 133), there were significant differences between individuals within each group, and the number of characters who spoke seemed to vary, predictably, with the enthusiasm that the teller displayed for the task. However, in giving the character a voice different to the narrator, women were much more willing – 13 characters to men’s 6. Furthermore, of the 6 characters voiced by the men, 3 were the wolf and 2 were the wolf as the grandmother, with no attempt at sounding feminine. This means that a single feminine12 voice was attempted by men. By contrast, all of the women who gave the wolf a voice altered it significantly from the narration by lowering their pitch and becoming gruffer or huskier. In addition, the one woman who voiced the huntsman also gave him a voice with considerably lower pitch. While the number of male voices created by women was only 4 in total, this was four times as many as the female voices created by men, and may be lower due to the low number of male characters in the story. It is suspected that the number of male voices performed would be higher were there more male characters. 4.1.2 Discussion These results seem to show that men are less willing to give female characters a female voice. – but why is this so? An explanation may be found in the concept of power. While Lakoff talked more about lexical items than voice quality; it is suspected that feminine voice qualities also contribute to the powerless position in which Lakoff states that women are placed (1975:7). There is some evidence for this in Lakoff’s mention of intonation patterns (1975:56). In creating a story, the 12 The story has both female characters, and male characters pretending to be female characters, hence the term “feminine” is preferred here. 19 Alexander Grevett ED7504: Language, Discourse and Society Gender, identity and narrative in oral tellings of Red Riding Hood by native speaking English teachers in South Korea position of narrator is a powerful one involving choices (Johnstone 1993:71–72), and thus adopting a powerless manner of speech is perhaps seen by men as a threat to their role. 20 Alexander Grevett ED7504: Language, Discourse and Society Gender, identity and narrative in oral tellings of Red Riding Hood by native speaking English teachers in South Korea Table 1 Participant Narrator RRH Woman 1 Even and slow, but with more intonation at key points. Woman 2 Natural, quite conversational. Same pitch, but more intonation and emphatic stress. No different at first. Then a bit more sing song. Much greater emphatic stress. Woman 3 Normal pitch, but very precisely enunciated and lots of intonation and emphatic stress. Normal pitch, carefully spoken. Exaggerated stresses. Woman 4 Very high pitched and sing-song. No different to narrator at first, but slightly higher later. Mother Wolf as Wolf Wolf as Granny No different from narrator. Granny Actually starts higher – unthreatening? Then pitch lowers but is still more singsong than the narration. Drop in pitch below narration and huskier at “eat you”. Much lower pitch – almost booming. Gruff and fierce at “eat you”. Slightly more intonation than narrator. Lower and gruffer at “eat you”. 21 Higher, very similar to Granny. Drops in pitch later. A little higher, but not as exaggerated as Wolf as RRH. Frail but not much change in pitch. Exaggerated stress. Noticeably higher pitch. Very high pitched. Huntsman/ Woodsman Wolf as RRH Very high pitched. Lower pitch. Very high pitched. More so than RRH herself. Alexander Grevett ED7504: Language, Discourse and Society Gender, identity and narrative in oral tellings of Red Riding Hood by native speaking English teachers in South Korea Participant Narrator RRH Woman 5 Normal pitch. Weary sounding . Not much intonation. Slow, deliberate. Normal pitch. No difference Man 2 Steady, normal pitch. Average intonation and some emphatic stress. Man 3 Slow, informal. Marginally softer, higher and more intonation. More exaggerated at the climactic exchange. No different from narrator. Man 4 Slow, pronounced intonation. Slow. Exaggerated emphatic stress. Man 1 Man 5 Man 6 No different from narrator. No different from narrator. Slightly higher. More intonation. Slow. Little No different intonation or stress. from narrator. Mother Wolf as Wolf A tiny bit more deliberate, but no change in pitch. No different to narrator. No different from narrator except some gruffness on “eat you”. Significantly lower pitch and gruffer. Wolf as Granny Barely noticeable increase in intonation. Very small increase in pitch and softness. Huntsman/ Woodsman Significantly lower pitch and gruffer. Slower and more stressed. Same pitch. Lower pitch. Huskier. No different from narrator. No different from narrator. No different from narrator. 22 Granny Same pitch. Huskier. No different from narrator. No different from narrator. Wolf as RRH Alexander Grevett ED7504: Language, Discourse and Society Gender, identity and narrative in oral tellings of Red Riding Hood by native speaking English teachers in South Korea Performative theory may provide another insight into the reasons for this difference. Asking participants to create characters of the opposite gender is in fact a dual task. Firstly, the teller must create the gender of the character in the story. While doing this however, they have to manage the presentation of their own gender as narrator or teller. Clearly from these results, women are less worried about using stereotypical aspects of a male voice (lower pitch, gruffness) than men are about using equivalent aspects of a female voice (higher pitch, sing-song quality). Participants knew that the recordings would be examined by myself (a male researcher known to them). It is theorized that a desire not to be seen as either effeminate or powerless in my eyes may have contributed to men’s reluctance to speak in female voices. This may also be explained by Terry Threadgold. Invoking Butler’s claim that “gender is the repeated stylisation of the body” (Butler 1990:33) he describes the difficulty that children had in performing a role of “pro-asylum roles” in a play, when they had been “stylised” to “anti-asylum” roles by the press (Threadgold 2005:276). The male participants difficulties in performing feminine features of voice may be because they never perform them, as opposed to the women, who may be more comfortable, or used to performing as men, in order to succeed in a society which still bears marks of androcentrism (Coates 1993:16). This may contribute to the feminine being cast as “outside” (Butler 1993:42) and thus difficult or distasteful for men to perform. So far, reasons why men are unwilling or unable to use features of female voices have been examined, but it is also important to investigate why women use features of men’s voices. If Tannen (1990) is correct and we do really speak inherently different genderlects, but society has undergone a process of masculinization (Cameron 2007:175), then perhaps women have arrived at a position of greater flexibility in how they can perform gender. While the difficulty of a position in which women must learn to speak like men was lamented as uncomfortable and energy-sapping by (Lakoff 1975:7), it does give a lot more flexibility and could even be an advantage in tasks such as this. A more positive idea is that recently the performance of gender has come to be seen as more 23 Alexander Grevett ED7504: Language, Discourse and Society Gender, identity and narrative in oral tellings of Red Riding Hood by native speaking English teachers in South Korea choice than socialization (Cameron 2005:490), and the evidence from the stories suggests that women may have more choice in their self-presentation, and feel either more confident in displaying features of male speech, or less bound by either their own or society’s notions of femininity. In this experiment, there would seem to be an asymmetry in favour of women, in that they can speak as either men or women, while men may only speak as men, though this may be a reflection of a wider asymmetry to the reverse in society. 4.2 Comments on voicing One further interesting feature of these tellings was the comments of the tellers on the voices used. Women tended to comment on the femininity of their voices, even where it was the wolf, (“In his sweetest girl voice he could come up with” – Woman 2), and men only commented on more masculine features of voices (“a loud gruff voice” – Man 2). In both of these examples, the actual voice used displayed these features, so there was no need to mention them. This phenomenon may well be revealing about attitudes to stereotypes of gender, as the voices used were at the extremes of what might be called stereotypical speech (high and shrill for feminine, deep and gruff for masculine). The descriptions of the voices may be acting as a hedge against an extreme performance of gender. However, this theory is based on very small amounts of data, and more research is required in this area. 4.3 Narrative 4.3.1 Audience Use of different voices may make women more effective tellers of stories like these. In this study, women seemed, on average, the more enthusiastic tellers (although these are, of course, subjective judgements). However, it is important to consider the conditions of the telling that may be significant, and what we may be able to learn from the literature on this. In an informal 24 Alexander Grevett ED7504: Language, Discourse and Society Gender, identity and narrative in oral tellings of Red Riding Hood by native speaking English teachers in South Korea conversation after Man 1 had submitted his recording, he revealed that he found it difficult making a recording without any audience. From the evidence of the recordings, it can be assumed that women find this less difficult – but why is this? Tannen’s claim that men do “public speaking” in order to curry status with observers, whereas women do “private speaking” in order to create intimacy with friends (1990:76–77) may answer this question. By asking the tellers to speak without an audience, the telling was perhaps seen as more private, and so perhaps disadvantageous to men. A similar experiment conducted with a live audience would provide some evidence to prove or disprove this theory. 4.3.2 Storytelling as a community of practice In the previous section it was suggested that in this experiment women were the better storytellers. One explanation for this may come from theories of communities of practice (Eckert 1992). In telling a story, one is naturally orienting to a tradition of a storytelling that could be viewed as a community of practice, as it is organized around a common goal (Thornborrow 2005:15). If women tend to follow the linguistic norms of a group closer than men do (see 2.2.2), and we extrapolate this theory to the practice of telling a story, we may expect women to follow more closely its norms. In contrast, given the evidence in section 2.5, if men are more focused on the audience than the practice, then it is expected that they will consider the audience more than the tale itself. Table 2 examines some ways in which we may be able to evaluate this. Two common features of folktale tellings are the use of traditional openings and closings, and having a strong moral to the tale. These are examined in the first two columns of the table. Following this, instances where the telling diverts from the norm, or tradition. First, instances of the story breaking down are examined, either where it loses logical cohesion, or where something is forgotten or unknown by the narrator. After this, ways in which the tale is deliberately subverted from the norms, either in terms of language or plot are listed. Finally the table looks at attempts to 25 Alexander Grevett ED7504: Language, Discourse and Society Gender, identity and narrative in oral tellings of Red Riding Hood by native speaking English teachers in South Korea involve an audience in the telling, either by first person subjectivity (Cheshire 2000:255) or by addressing them directly using the pronouns “we” or “you”. Table 2 (below) shows little variation in the usage of traditional openings and closings between genders. However, there does seem to be a stronger moral to the women’s tales, with 3 out of 5 women mentioning the importance of not straying from the path, compared to 2 out of 6 men. This could perhaps have been expected. Johnstone (1993) found that mid-western women tended to tell stories with multiple protagonists which focused on building community bonds. If we see moral tales as the passing on of advice between generations (in this tale the advice is from mother to daughter in order to keep her safe) then it seems to bear out both Johnstone’s findings and the wider views of Tannen (1990) that women are focused on interconnectedness whereas men are more hierarchical. If this is true of men, then we may expect them to focus more on their relationship with the audience, which naturally involves relations of power (See 2.3.2). In the context of this study, where there is no defined audience, it was theorized that men may still try to create an imagined audience (something akin to Eco’s “model reader” (Eco 1994:9)), and a relationship with it to legitimize themselves as narrators. This tendency was expected to be reflected in features such as direct address to the audience and first person subjectivity. In fact, the only instance of direct address was by a man, excepting a “you know” in Woman 5’s story, but this was insufficient evidence from which to draw a conclusion. Cheshire suggested that in telling third person stories, boys use third person subjectivity more, and girls use first person (2000: 255). Again, table 2 shows that both men and women use first person subjectivity in their stories, both to comment on events in the story (“luckily”, “strangely”) and to pass judgement on the characters actions (“naively”). In this 26 Alexander Grevett ED7504: Language, Discourse and Society Gender, identity and narrative in oral tellings of Red Riding Hood by native speaking English teachers in South Korea Table 2 Participant Beginning / Ending Moral? Breakdowns Subversions 1st Person Subjectivity Direct Addresses Woman 1 “Once upon a time” Story unfinished. “Once upon a time” “Happily ever after” No “The wolf somehow got into her house” None None “Luckily” None None None “Once upon a time” Moral ending “Once upon a time” “The end” Yes, strongly emphasized. No None None “Luckily” “Being the sweet girl that she was” None See breakdowns. This could be seen as subversion. “Because it was very gory” None Woman 5 “A long time ago” Moral ending Yes, strongly emphasized. None “Stupidly” “Or smarter than Red Riding Hood” “Miraculously” “Apparently” “You know” Man 1 “There once lived” “Happily ever after” Strong moral, but only mentioned once. None “as girls are wont to” “being a little bit naïve” “Somehow” “Strangely” None Man 2 “Once upon a time” “Happily ever after” No “Then it’s possible that red riding hood and the woodsman got married” “And whatnot” “And so on like this” “I guess he’s maybe the grandmother’s neighbour” “I believe the huntsman killed him. I’m not sure.” “Simple enough” “Or I guess he opened the door – it was already open.” “Somehow she was still alive” None None None None Woman 2 Woman 3 Woman 4 Yes, but not strongly emphasized. 27 None Alexander Grevett ED7504: Language, Discourse and Society Gender, identity and narrative in oral tellings of Red Riding Hood by native speaking English teachers in South Korea Participant Beginning / Ending Moral? Breakdowns Subversions 1st Person Subjectivity Direct Addresses Man 3 “Once upon a time” “That’s the story of little red riding hood” Yes, strongly emphasized. None Talks about Red riding hood being from the ‘hood. “As you know” “As we said” “As we just explained” Man 4 “Once upon a time” “Happily ever after” No None Man 5 “Here is the story of Little Red Riding Hood” “That is the story of” No “Awesome goodies” None None Man 6 Story title “At which point they all celebrated” No “She met…err…who was watching her” Cuts short the climactic exchange between RRH and the wolf. “Ah sorry and was seen by a wolf” “Or Little Red Riding Hood told the woodsman” “I’m not exactly sure how the woodsman was following…” “Window or door or whatever” “I’m not sure why the wolf didn’t attack her” “Little Red Riding Hood wasn’t the brightest of the bunch” “Very naively” “She’s not very smart” “It was a miracle” “Both miraculously unharmed” “Anyway” None None 28 None Alexander Grevett ED7504: Language, Discourse and Society Gender, identity and narrative in oral tellings of Red Riding Hood by native speaking English teachers in South Korea second category, there may be a suggestion that men are more willing to comment on the thoughtlessness of RRH’s actions, but the data is not significant enough to draw a firm conclusion. This may however be an area for further research. 4.3.3 Traditional stories vs. individual stories The narrators’ comments on the story highlight one further interesting power relation here, that of the individual and the traditional telling. In creating their stories, the narrators are exercising creative power over the story, but the traditions of the story simultaneously exercise power over them. This can be best observed in areas where the story breaks down, diverges from tradition, or is deliberately subverted. Again, given men’s desire to act independently (Tannen 1990:24–25), we may expect to see evidence of both, as men’s desires conflict with the story’s traditions, whereas women may be happier to follow those traditions. In fact, the data shows that men may be happier to subvert both the story (RRH’s being from the ‘hood in Man 3’s story) and the language used to tell it; “Awesome goodies” (Man 5) and “Anyway” are also examples of non-traditional language for a fairy story. This tendency may also be visible in the breakdowns observed (see table 2), with 6 in the women’s stories compared to 10 in the men’s. The type of breakdown is also important, and in men’s stories often come as an attempt to rephrase or explain something necessary for the cohesion of the story (“I’m not exactly sure how the woodsman was following…” – Man 6) or to express some kind of reaction, such as surprise, when the traditional story and the teller’s story appear to be in conflict (“Grandma answered the door and the wolf gobbled her up. Simple enough” – Man 1). It is suspected that the higher number of these kinds of breakdown in men’s stories may have been caused by friction between their own narratives and those of the traditional story. 29 Alexander Grevett ED7504: Language, Discourse and Society Gender, identity and narrative in oral tellings of Red Riding Hood by native speaking English teachers in South Korea In this section the stories submitted were examined, and some significant differences were found between men and women’s tellings. Male tellers did not use traditionally female features of voice such as high pitch, but female tellers were able to use equivalent features of male speech. It was theorized that this was principally because male tellers did not want to or could not present themselves as more feminine, perhaps because of the male researcher. It also found that the audience may be more of a concern to male speakers, and that men’s stories suffer breakdown more often than women’s do. This may be because of friction between the individually created narrative and the traditional one. 30 Alexander Grevett ED7504: Language, Discourse and Society Gender, identity and narrative in oral tellings of Red Riding Hood by native speaking English teachers in South Korea 5 Conclusion This study did not find that if men and women are given the same task, the expected differences did not appear (Cameron 2007:50). In fact, the stories in this study showed significant differences between men and women’s tellings in voicing of characters and in story breakdown. Time and space restrictions on the study also prevented other suspected differences from being examined, such as differing levels of politeness in the character of RRH, differences in detail levels when describing clothes, and amount of speech acts. All of these examined and unexamined features may be explicable in terms of Deficit and Difference theory, suggesting that they still carry some weight. However, a valid criticism of the work of Tannen (1990) by Cameron (2007) is that we cannot create a stereotype of all women or all men by examining a small group of them. Given this, and the extremely small scale of the study, these results are not claimed to be significant of anything outside of the context examined in this paper. If this study has value, it is more likely in suggesting new directions and techniques for further research. Little has been done in some of the areas that this paper has touched upon. For example, while there is some research (for example Barrett 1998) into men presenting themselves as feminine (or not!) there is little outside the context of queer studies. Asking men who would identify as heterosexual to perform femininity may provide some useful insights into both their and society’s attitudes. 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(2009) An Introduction to Sociolinguistics. 6th ed., Chichester: Wiley-Blackwell. 35 Alexander Grevett ED7504: Language, Discourse and Society Gender, identity and narrative in oral tellings of Red Riding Hood by native speaking English teachers in South Korea Zimmerman, D. H. & West, C. (1975) Sex Roles, Interruptions and Silences in Conversation, in Thorne, B. & Henley, N. (Hg.): Language and Sex: Difference and Dominance. Rowley, MA: Newbury House, 105–129. 36 Alexander Grevett ED7504: Language, Discourse and Society Gender, identity and narrative in oral tellings of Red Riding Hood by native speaking English teachers in South Korea 7 Acknowledgements I would like to express my gratitude to the 11 friends and acquaintances who took the time and effort to record and submit their stories to this project. This was not an easy task, so I am all the more appreciative. I hope that having read this project, you feel that your efforts were worthwhile; to me, they were invaluable. I would also like to pass on my thanks to my supervisor Dr. Fei-yu Chuang for her help and support. 37 Alexander Grevett ED7504: Language, Discourse and Society Gender, identity and narrative in oral tellings of Red Riding Hood by native speaking English teachers in South Korea 8 Appendix A: Transcripts and audio links On the following pages transcripts of the 11 stories submitted can be found. There is a link to a downloadable audio version below each story. These electronic transcripts were the basic versions. They were then printed and marked up by hand with notes and some intonation and stress markers. A marked up version can be seen in appendix B. 38 Alexander Grevett ED7504: Language, Discourse and Society Gender, identity and narrative in oral tellings of Red Riding Hood by native speaking English teachers in South Korea 8.1 Woman 1 ok here’s the story of little red riding hood um once upon a time little red riding hood was told by her mom to go visit her grandma to bring her a basket of fruit and cookies um little red riding hood skipped through the forest and picked flowers and took her time then meanwhile err her grandma was sick and err the big bad wolf somehow got into her grandma’s house and was really really hungry so he ate the grandma and then he disguised her-himself as little red riding hood’s grandma so err little red riding hood gets to her grandma’s house and um when she knocks on the door [cough] and [cough] ? she says “whoa what big- what a big nose you have” and grandma says “all the better to smell you with” and then finally little red riding hood says “Whoa what big- [cough] My what big teeth you have” and grandma goes “all the better to eat you with” [cough cough] and goes to eat little red riding hood and chases her around the house but luckily there’s a woodcutter in the forest and hears little red riding hood’s screams and bursts through the door and then he punched the wolf in the stomach and the wolf spit out the grandma and grandma and little red riding hood are safe and the wolf… Total words: 229 Length: 1:56 Audio File: https://www.box.com/s/f6ab4e59e09e3f5ff153 39 Alexander Grevett ED7504: Language, Discourse and Society Gender, identity and narrative in oral tellings of Red Riding Hood by native speaking English teachers in South Korea 8.2 Woman 2 This is the story of little red riding hood once upon a time there lived a young girl and her family in the woods and they were quite happy her name was little red riding hood grandmother nearby lived her once little red riding hood’s grandmother became ill so being the sweet girl that she was she decided to bring her grandmother a basket full of treats to make her feel better on her way through the woods to get to grandmother’s house little red riding hood encountered a wolf and she had been warned many times by her parents to be careful of wolves but this wolf seemed friendly “where are you going little red riding hood” oh I’m going to grandmother’s house to bring her these treats she’s very ill” “oh what a sweet girl you are” answered the wolf “be on your way then get off to grandmother’s house” however the little red riding hood had no idea that the wolf was actually being malicious and cunning in his questions he was off to grandmother’s house himself as soon as he heard this and at breakneck speed he ran through the woods and got to grandmother’s house before little red riding hood had a chance he knocked on the door and said “hello granny it’s me little red riding hood” in his sweetest girl voice he could come up with “come in dear” answered grandma once inside the wolf gobbled her up “tralalala” along came little red riding hood not knowing the danger that was awaiting her inside the granny’s home knock knockknock “grandma it’s me” “come in dear” answered the wolf there he laid in bed disguised as grandmother with a bonnet and the blankets pulled up close to his face “oh granny you must be very ill” “oh dear I’m fine don’t worry come closer” “oh my grandmother what big eyes you have” “oh the better to see you with my dear” “oh dear granny what a long nose you have” “oh the better to smell those lovely treats” “and granny what big teeth you have” “the better to eat you” growled the wolf and he was off after little red riding hood she was running through the woods screaming “oh my dear” and the wolf was fast on her tail luckily there was a nearby woodsman who had been working chopping away at some trees the ruckus and he heard he stopped what he was doing and ran right into the direction of the wolf and saw 40 Alexander Grevett ED7504: Language, Discourse and Society Gender, identity and narrative in oral tellings of Red Riding Hood by native speaking English teachers in South Korea that he was hot after little red riding hood using his axe he cut down the wolf and in doing so the wolf opened up and they found granny luckily still alive inside the wolf’s gut they were able to save granny and they lived happily ever after Total words: 471 Length: 3:32 Audio File: https://www.box.com/s/9fe33974a716f6a0235e 41 Alexander Grevett ED7504: Language, Discourse and Society Gender, identity and narrative in oral tellings of Red Riding Hood by native speaking English teachers in South Korea 8.3 Woman 3 Once upon a time in a village far away there lived a little girl but most so by her grandma the girl was loved by everyone when she was young her grandma gave her a red cloak she loved it so much that she wouldn’t take it off so people started calling her little red riding hood and the name stuck one day little red riding hood’s mother asked her to take some things to her grandma who was sick and unable to get out of bed as this was the first time little red riding hood had gone to her grandma’s house alone her mother cautioned her to be careful and not to dawdle on the way Soon after entering the woods that her grandmother lived in little red riding hood became distracted by the BEAUTY of the forest suddenly a wolf appeared to her but not knowing what a wicked creature he was little red riding hood was not afraid young lady” said he “good afternoon mr wolf” she replied “good afternoon “where are you off to?” he asked “to my grandmother’s she’s sick and I’m bringing her food to make her strong again” “This is a dangerous forest for a young girl to be walking in alone and you are alone right?” he asked in the sweetest voice he could muster I’m a big girl” “yes my mother said I could come all by myself because “maybe I should accompany you” “That won’t be necessary mr wolf her house isn’t that much further down the road it’s in the clearing past the three large oak trees” “oh yes I know that house that old woman looks quite delightful” he replied “and delectable” he added to himself “I should hurry mr wolf my grandmother is expecting me soon bye bye” as the girl skipped down the path towards her grandmother’s house the wolf took a shortcut through the woods to the house and knocked on the door hood” relied the wolf “I have food to make you stronger” “who’s there” “little red riding “come in my dear” called out the grandmother “I am too weak and cannot get up” the wolf threw open the door and without saying word he went straight to the grandmother’s bed and gobbled her up clothes dressed himself in her cap and laid himself on the bed a little while later little red riding hood appeared she was surprised to find the cottage door partially ajar 42 then he put on her she felt uneasy Alexander Grevett ED7504: Language, Discourse and Society Gender, identity and narrative in oral tellings of Red Riding Hood by native speaking English teachers in South Korea but went on in she called out “good morning grandma” but received no answer so she went to the bed and opened the curtains there laid her grandmother with her nightcap pulled over her face and looking very strange “oh grandmother” she said “what big ears you have” “all the better to hear you with my child” was the reply “but grandmother what big eyes you have” she said “all the better to see you with my dear” “but grandmother what large hands you have” “all the better to hold you and hug you with” “oh but grandmother what a big mouth you have” “all the better to eat you with” and scarcely had the wolf said this that one within one bound he was out of bed and swallowed up red riding hood when the wolf had finished his meal he laid back down on the bed and fell asleep and began to snore VERY loudly a little while later a kind huntsman who was passing the old woman’s house decided to stop and see if the old woman was feeling better being accustomed to letting himself into the house he didn’t bother to knock going right on in he saw the wolf laying down right on top of the bed the old woman’s clothing being shed from him when he devoured little red riding hood now the huntsman and the wolf had a longstanding nasty feud seeing him there the huntsman immediately drew the rifle he always carried but just as he was about to blow the wolf to smithereens a thought occurred to him “this wicked beast might have swallowed the old woman maybe she’s STILL ALIVE!” and with that he grabbed the carving knife that was laying on the kitchen table and began to slowly cut open the sleeping wolf’s stomach when he made a long enough cut he saw the little girl’s red hood having seen that the huntsman dug his fingernails into the slice he’d made and began to RIP the huge wolf in half with his hands little girl out that dark wolf” soon the hole was big enough for him to pull the as she sprang out she cried “thank you huntsman I’ve been so in frightened inside after that the old woman came barrelling out with the fiery vengeance that one can only get after being swallowed by a wicked animal the grandmother although still sick and a little weak from her ordeal grabbed the carving knife that the huntsman had dropped and cut straight through the wolf’s neck then all three were delighted because the wicked beast was no 43 Alexander Grevett ED7504: Language, Discourse and Society Gender, identity and narrative in oral tellings of Red Riding Hood by native speaking English teachers in South Korea more after the huntsman drew off the wolf’s skin and proudly went home with it the grandmother butchered and baked the wolf’s kidney and liver into a delicious pie that helped revive her ailing health and red riding hood she thought to herself “as long as I live I will never talk to strangers or spend time alone in the woods” Total words: 921 Length: 4:55 Audio File: https://www.box.com/s/8ba9b673f2d694904ec7 44 Alexander Grevett ED7504: Language, Discourse and Society Gender, identity and narrative in oral tellings of Red Riding Hood by native speaking English teachers in South Korea 8.4 Woman 4 Once upon a time there was a little girl who lived near a forest one day her grandmother was sick so her mother made her a basket of picnic goods and told her to take it up the mountain to her grandmother so she was walking through the woods and she ran into a wolf and the wolf said “where are you going little girl” and she looked at him and said “my grandmother is sick and so I’m taking her this food and the wolf said “aha! good luck” and off she went and the wolf decided to take a shortcut up to her grandmother’s house so he ran up the mountain and he got there well before little red riding hood and he went inside and he gobbled her grandmother up and then he put on her clothes and lay in her bed and he waited a little while after that little red riding hood arrived and knocked on the door and the wolf said “come in” doing his best little old lady voice and so she came in and she saw him lying in the bed with her grandmother’s bonnet and dress and she said “is something wrong with your voice grandmother you sound funny” and the wolf said “oh [short cough] it’s just this cold I have” and she said “my! grandmother what big eyes you have” and the wolf said “all the better to see you with my dear” and she said “my! grandmother what big EARS you have” and the wolf said “all the better to hear you with my dear” and she said “my! grandmother what big TEETH you have” and the wolf said “all the better to EAT you with” and he sprang out of bed and he was just about to eat her up when a woodsman who had been passing by heard her screaming for help and he ran inside and he chopped the wolf’s head off with his axe and then because it was very gory they cut the wolf open and stacked him full of rocks and sewed him up again and threw him into the river so that he would never bother anyone again and then it’s possible that red riding hood and the woodsman got married the end Total words: 382 Length: 2:09 Audio File: https://www.box.com/s/a1b5435b4cff9c7ce3e8 45 Alexander Grevett ED7504: Language, Discourse and Society Gender, identity and narrative in oral tellings of Red Riding Hood by native speaking English teachers in South Korea 8.5 Woman 5 This is the story of little red riding hood a long time ago in a village there was a little girl who was loved by her mother and her grandmother and the grandmother loved her so much that she had a red riding hood made for the little girl and it looked so good on her that she became known as little red riding hood one day the mother made some cake and packaged it up with some wine and asked little red riding hood to [pause] to take it to her grandmother’s house her grandmother lived in in the woods quite far from the village and the mother taught little red riding hood to go straight there and not to diverge the cake and wine to her grandmother’s house little red riding hood agreed and so she set out with on the way err a wolf saw little red riding hood and thought she looked delicious and that he wanted to eat her so he asked her where she was going and little red riding hood said you know she was going to her grandmother’s and he asked where that was and she explained you know it’s under some trees and whatnot and so the wolf was a little bit smart or smarter than red riding hood and he said to her why don’t you enjoy the scenery why don’t you pick some flowers and enjoy the sunlight and so little red riding hood stupidly did so and the wolf took off towards the grandmother’s house when he reached the grandmother’s house he had seen that the grandmother was very sick and quite old and helpless he ate her up and then little red riding hood went to the grandmother’s house and had seen that the door was open and she thought that it was a bit strange she went in anyways and she called out to her grandmother but her grandmother didn’t reply so she went to her grandmother’s room to bring her the cake and wine and the flowers that she had picked while she was traipsing around in the woods [cough] she said she knows that her grandmother looked a bit strange so she said to her grandmother “Oh my what big ears you have” and the wolf replied “well better to hear you with” and so on like this until little red riding hood said “my what a terrible mouth you have- terribly big mouth you have” and the wolf said “well you know what better to eat you with” and then he gobbled her up so the huntsman had realized that I guess he’s maybe the grandmother’s 46 Alexander Grevett ED7504: Language, Discourse and Society Gender, identity and narrative in oral tellings of Red Riding Hood by native speaking English teachers in South Korea neighbour um he realized that there was something- something amiss amiss at the grandmother’s house so he went over to investigate and he had seen that the wolf was sleeping in the grandmothers bed and at first he was going to shoot the wolf but then he realized that maybe the wolf had eaten the grandmother so instead he began to cut open the wolf ??? the wolf’s stomach while the wolf was sleeping and the huntsman saw the red riding hood so he pulled out little red riding hood as well as the grandmother who were both miraculously alive and then little red riding hood stuffed the wolf with some stones and they stitched him up and the stones were so heavy that the wolf couldn’t escape and he fell over and died and they were all happy and they celebrated with their cake and wine then there was another wolf who was trying to do almost the same thing and he wanted to eat little red riding hood because she apparently looked so delicious and the wolf was trying to trick her and the grandmother realized this so the grandmother had made some sausages and then she asked little red riding hood to go fill the trough with the water that she had used to boil sausages so she did this and then the wolf smelled it went to go investigate and then I believe the huntsman killed him I’m not sure anyway after then little red riding hood was free and she went back to her grand- her mother and never diverged from her mother’s direction again. Total words: 713 Length: 4:36 Audio File: https://www.box.com/s/dc1324f5934acef67fa4 47 Alexander Grevett ED7504: Language, Discourse and Society Gender, identity and narrative in oral tellings of Red Riding Hood by native speaking English teachers in South Korea 8.6 Man 1 There once lived a young girl named little red riding hood always used to wear a red cloak wherever she went she got this name because she she lived in a small village with her mother her mother used to always warn her “never go into the forest never go into the forest alone it’s a very dangerous place for young girls like you” so one day the mother sent her off into the forest to deliver some wine and some cookies to her grandmother was believed at that time that wine would cure her her illness her had been sick recently and it so off she went into the forest but her mother said “don’t stray away from the path stay on the path in the forest” along the way she was walking in the forest and through the pa- through the path in the forest and she saw some flowers at the side of the path a little bit into the forest so as girls are wont to do she went over over and started looking at the flowers and smelling the flowers and watching the bees buzzing around when suddenly a big wolf appeared “Oh what are you doing here” said the wolf “oh I’m just on my way to see my grandmother she’s very sick these days” said little red riding hood “Is your- Does your grandmother live in the forest” the wolf said “oh well kind of she lives in ain a hut that’s in the forest so I’m just on my way there” said riding hood “oh well how exactly do you get to this hut” asked the wolf little red riding hood being a little bit naïve and not knowing much about wolves and how dangerous they are just easily answered by saying “oh straight down this path over the bridge and to the left” the wolf said “I see well I’ll be seeing you later” “ok” said little red riding hood and the wolf took off unbeknownst to little red riding hood the wolf actually knew a shortcut to the grandmother’s house way down the path little red riding hood then continued on her the wolf thought to himself “hmm this’ll be perfect away from the road where people can’t see me I can go into the grandmother’s house eat her and then wait for the girl and eat her too this’ll be perfect I’ll be able to eat both of them at the same time so the wolf arrived at the home at the grandmothers home and knocked on the door and when the grandmother answered the door the wolf ate her simple enough ah after the wolf ate her he 48 Alexander Grevett ED7504: Language, Discourse and Society Gender, identity and narrative in oral tellings of Red Riding Hood by native speaking English teachers in South Korea decided the best way to trick red riding hood err would be to wear the grandmother’s clothes so the wolf went through the grandmother’s wardrobe and chose some clothing to cover his face as much as possible or his head as much as possible his body as much as possible his face would have still been revealed slightly he then got under the covers of the grandmother’s bed meanwhile red riding hood was crossing over the bridge turning and going towards her grandmother’s home she arrived at the home and she knocked on the door she noticed it was a little bit open so she just pushed the door open called out to her grandmother “grandmother are you there” said riding hood and she could hear a faint call from the bedroom “I’m in here I’m in here sweetie” and so red riding hood walked towards the bedroom red riding hood entered the bedroom and could see a figure in the bed looked a little bit strange though didn’t look exactly like her grandmother and she said “grandmother is that you” and grandma said “yes dear come closer” so red riding came a little closer and then stopped and said “oh but grandmother what big eyes you have” “oh yes the better to see you with my dear” the wolf said and red riding hood came a little closer and riding hood said “oh but grandmother what big ears you have” “yes yes the better to hear you with my dear” so riding hood came a little closer and stopped and said “oh grandmother what big teeth you have” and immediately the wolf jumped up and said “the better to eat you with“ and immediately jumped on red riding hood and ate her up while she was being eaten she started screaming and screaming and a local woodsman heard the screaming the wolf swallowed her completely as the woodsman came by he broke down the door or I guess he opened the door it was already open and came in and saw the wolf and realized this wolf must have eaten the grandmother because the grandmother lives here the woodsman then grabbed the wolf pinned him down took his axe and slit open the wolf’s stomach pulled out the grandmother somehow the grandmother was still alive and came right out and then cut a little bit more of the wolf open and also somehow the little red riding hood was also alright the wolf was unconscious at this point and the three of them decided on what should be the fate of the wolf and strangely 49 Alexander Grevett ED7504: Language, Discourse and Society Gender, identity and narrative in oral tellings of Red Riding Hood by native speaking English teachers in South Korea they decided to put rocks in his stomach and sew him back up this resulted in the wolf waking up and then trying to run away but being in terrible pain and then the wolf died and they all lived happily ever after Total words: 930 Length: 6:37 Audio File: https://www.box.com/s/60676076565febd0c746 50 Alexander Grevett ED7504: Language, Discourse and Society Gender, identity and narrative in oral tellings of Red Riding Hood by native speaking English teachers in South Korea 8.7 Man 2 the little red riding hood once upon a time there was a little girl named little red riding hood she lived in a small forest with her mother one day she asked her mother if it would be ok to go visit grandma “of course” her mother said “but let me bake you some cookies so you can take them to her” once the cookies were finished she put on her little red bonnet took the cookies and hopped along down the path towards grandma’s house when she stopped to pick some flowers by the side of the path she did not notice a large black wolf watching her from just inside the forest when the wolf found out where little red riding hood was going he ran along ahead of her to grandma’s house when little red riding hood got to her grandmother’s house she felt a little nervous so she called out first “grandmother are you there?” her “of course I am come on in darling” a loud gruff voice answered when little red riding hood opened the door she saw her grandmother in the bed covered with blankets “oh my are you sick grandmother?” “[cough] just a little but it’s ok come on in” “what big eyes you have grandma” ears you have” little red riding hood approached the bed cautiously “all the better to see you with my dear” “all the better to hear you with” better to eat you with” “and what big “and what big teeth you have” “all the the wolf jumped out of the bed and lunged toward little red riding hood but just before little red riding hood was about to get eaten by the wolf a lumberjack swung open the door wielding his axe and grabbed the wolf by the tail of him he took the wolf outside and took care once he was finished he went back inside and him and little red riding hood discovered grandma hiding in the closet she told them the whole story that she saw the wolf coming and ran to hide in the closet because she was afraid after that little red riding hood her grandmother and the lumberjack all sat down and ate cookies with some fresh lemonade and they lived happily ever after Total words: 382 Length: 2:37 Audio File: https://www.box.com/s/a93d1ca21696aca51aa5 51 Alexander Grevett ED7504: Language, Discourse and Society Gender, identity and narrative in oral tellings of Red Riding Hood by native speaking English teachers in South Korea 8.8 Man 3 Once upon a time there lived a young girl named little red riding hood now they called her this because she wore a red cloak and she was from the hood so she was from you know the bad part of town some would call it the ghetto well one day little red riding hood’s mother told her that she needed to go visit her grandmother so she was going to send little red riding hood to see her grandmother and give her some medicine because she had been sick well little red riding hood agreed and she looked forward to visiting her grandmother she hadn’t seen her in a long time now little red riding hood and her mother lived in the city but her grandmother lived out in the woods out in the forest far away so her mother told little red riding hood that she needed to be safe stay on the path and don’t wander off into the forest where there are dangerous creatures and criminals so little red riding hood agreed and she said that she would do exactly as her mother said so she set off with the medicine the food to see her grandmother but as she was going she noticed but as she was going she noticed a lot of interesting flowers and animals that she wanted to chase after and play with so she spent about a good hour wandering around in the forest off of the path before she decided to go on to her grandmother’s house but during this time little did she know that she was being watched by a big hungry wolf as she decided to make her way to her grandmother’s home the wolf approached her and asked her where she was going little red riding hood wasn’t the brightest girl of the bunch so she told the wolf exactly where she was going very naively then she went on her way but the wolf was really hungry and he thought little red riding hood looked delicious but he didn’t wanna kill her on the path on the public path where he could easily be seen so he decided to go to little red riding hood’s grandmother’s house and be waiting for her there so that he could eat her at the opportune time so he went along on to the grandmother’s house in a hurry as you know he’s a wolf so he’s very fast quick footed little red riding hood trotted along at normal pace to her grandmother’s house as she arrived at her grandmother’s house she knocked on the door and said “hello grandmother 52 Alexander Grevett ED7504: Language, Discourse and Society Gender, identity and narrative in oral tellings of Red Riding Hood by native speaking English teachers in South Korea I’m here” but she didn’t receive any answer so she just opened the door and walked in there she saw her sick grandmother who was tucked away in her bed very comfortably up to her mouth err the covers were up to her mouth so her face couldn’t really be seen and little red riding hood approached a little bit and noticed that her grandmother looked very strange so she said “oh grandmother what’s the matter with your eyes? they’re so big” and her grandmother said “well I can see you better now my dear” and little red riding hood also noticed her ears were extra large so she asked her grandmother “grandmother why are your ears so large?” and grandmother said “oh the better to hear you with my dear” and little red riding hood was becoming a little suspicious at this time so she approached a little closer err grandmother pulled down the covers from her mouth and little red riding hood saw how big her mouth was so she asked “grandmother why is your mouth so big?” and grandmother answered “the better to eat you with my dear” now this was a very strange answer for little red riding hood and as we said she’s not very smart so she approached a little closer but at that time her grandmother jumped out of bed and revealed her true form which was actually a wolf so the wolf had beaten little red riding hood to her grandmother’s house and had eaten her grandmother before she had got there started to chase little red riding hood around the house and the wolf now little red riding hood was faster because the wolf had eaten her grandmother he was a bit slow at this time she was able to make it outside of the door outside of the house and begin running the wolf close behind her but he couldn’t quite catch her because of the extra weight of the grandmother now at that time a lumberjack in the area he saw what was going on and he decided to intervene he grabbed his axe and started to run after the wolf who wasn’t quite as fast as we just explained he grabbed the wolf by the tail and cut off his head and at that time the grandmother was able to slide out the neck of the wolf and she was saved luckily ah she was still able to breathe after being in the wolf’s stomach it was a miracle now anyway at that time she and little red riding hood thanked the lumberjack greatly for his service to them for saving their lives and they decided to have him 53 Alexander Grevett ED7504: Language, Discourse and Society Gender, identity and narrative in oral tellings of Red Riding Hood by native speaking English teachers in South Korea over for dinner where they had a generous feast of wolf meat and also gave the wolf’s fur err his pelt over to the lumberjack so that the lumberjack could make some new clothes received a reward and a nice meal for his heroic act so he later on it was time for little red riding hood to go back home and her grandmother urged her to follow the instructions and stay on the path and not wander off into the woods again so this time little red riding hood promised and she stayed on the path and she made it home safely err without any trouble from any more wild animals and that’s the story of little red riding hood Total words: 1013 Length: 6:45 Audio File: https://www.box.com/s/6e674e7d008edc69c589 54 Alexander Grevett ED7504: Language, Discourse and Society Gender, identity and narrative in oral tellings of Red Riding Hood by native speaking English teachers in South Korea 8.9 Man 4 once upon a time there was a little girl who was called red riding hood she was called that because she always wore a red riding cloak whenever she went outside one day she decided to travel through the forest to deliver food to her sick grandmother so she packed up a picnic basket and headed off into the woods Whilst she was there she met err she didn’t know it but who was watching her was a big bad wolf and he was very hungry and he put together a plan he decided he ran ahead of her he found the grandmother’s house and he knocked on the door the grandmother who was expecting little red riding hood opened up and he gobbled her up right away when little red riding hood finally got there she um she knocked on the door and she heard a distant voice saying “come in dearie come in” so she opened up the door and she walked in it was very dark inside it was hard to see but she heard the voice coming from the bedroom “this way dearie, over here” so she walks in to see her grandmother and the room is so dark she can only see the shadow in the bed so she walks a little closer “grandma, are you ok” she asks and the wolf who’d put on the grandmother’s clothes says to her “I’m fine dearie just come a little closer I want to see you” so little red riding hood takes another step forward and she can start to see a little more of the shadow and she says “grandmother are you ok w-w-what big ears you have” and the wolf says “aah the better to hear you with my dearie” come closer so little red riding hood takes another step and she says “huh grandmother what big eyes you have” “the better to see you with my dear” come closer little red riding hood takes another step she’s right by the bed and says “oh grandmother what big teeth you have” says “the better to eat you with my dear” and gobbles up little red riding hood and the wolf so the wolf sits back in contentment having devoured two delicious people but what he doesn’t know is that a woodsman nearby heard the scream when he ate little red riding hood he walks to the window and he sees the wolf lying in the bed so he busts in the door with his axe chops off the wolf’s 55 Alexander Grevett ED7504: Language, Discourse and Society Gender, identity and narrative in oral tellings of Red Riding Hood by native speaking English teachers in South Korea head cuts open the wolf’s stomach and out pop little red riding hood and the grandmother both miraculously unharmed and they all lived happily ever after Total words: 450 Length: 2:56 Audio File: https://www.box.com/s/8858535cebf6304fc1be 56 Alexander Grevett ED7504: Language, Discourse and Society Gender, identity and narrative in oral tellings of Red Riding Hood by native speaking English teachers in South Korea 8.10 OK Man 5 so here is the story of the little red riding hood you see little red riding hood was going to see her grandmother who was very sick and ill so she was bringing some awesome goodies with her and while she was traipsing through the forest she sees a big bad wolf and the wolf talks to little red riding hood and finds out where she’s going the grandmother’s house gets inside the house then sprints ahead and goes to at the grandmother’s house the wolf pretends to be the little girl and then the big bad wolf decides to eat the grandmother whole and pretends to be the grandmother so when little red riding hood gets there she looks at the grandma and says “my you look different” your voice is very deep and the wolf replies “all the better to greet you with” and then little red riding hood realizes that the hands are too big and big nose and gets very very scared and then the big bad wolf eats her whole too and then the wolf is very full and takes a nap this is where the hunter comes in and saves both little red riding hood and the grandma by cutting open the wolf’s belly and putting stones in instead that is the story of the little red riding hood Total words: 226 Length: 1:33 Audio File: https://www.box.com/s/67b9a504b1387ca5fd86 57 Alexander Grevett ED7504: Language, Discourse and Society Gender, identity and narrative in oral tellings of Red Riding Hood by native speaking English teachers in South Korea 8.11 Man 6 little red riding hood little red riding hood lived in the woods or along the edge of the woods she was sent by her mother to deliver some fruit vegetables or biscuits to her grandmother her grandmother lived in the woods so she had a basket filled with the food and left the house she was wearing her red riding hood she walked through the woods and saw ah sorry and was seen by a wolf and I’m not sure why the wolf didn’t attack her but anyway she was seen by a wolf she also met a woodsman and the woodsman was concerned why is there a child walking in the woods she told her or little red riding hood told the woodsman “I’m walking in the woods to deliver something to my grandmother” the woodsman said “oh my god go home it’s dangerous” she said “no no I must deliver” anyway the wof went to the grandmother’s house ate the grandmother whole and dressed up in the clothes of the grandmother little red riding hood arrived walked in started to lay out the food and said “grandmother why are you in bed” and grandmother said “I’m a little bit sick” so little red riding hood asked her “oh grandmother what big eyes you have” the response “all the better to see you with” “what big ears” “all the better to hear you” “what big nose” “all the better to smell you” etcetera and eventually little red riding hood said “oh grandmother what big teeth you have” at which point the wolf jumped up and said “ll the better to eat you with” um I’m not exactly sure how the woodsman was following or if he was actually with red riding hood or so on anyway he jumped in the window or came in the door or whatever killed the wolf and then when he chopped open the wolf there was the grandmother inside alive at which point they all celebrated Total words: 332 Length: 2:09 Audio File: https://www.box.com/s/33a4d7e09d4ac3224f62 58 Alexander Grevett ED7504: Language, Discourse and Society Gender, identity and narrative in oral tellings of Red Riding Hood by native speaking English teachers in South Korea 9 Appendix B: Marked up transcript 59 Alexander Grevett ED7504: Language, Discourse and Society Gender, identity and narrative in oral tellings of Red Riding Hood by native speaking English teachers in South Korea 10 Appendix C: Submission Guidelines On the following page is the instruction letter sent to potential participants. 60 Alexander Grevett ED7504: Language, Discourse and Society Gender, identity and narrative in oral tellings of Red Riding Hood by native speaking English teachers in South Korea Hi, Thanks for agreeing to participate in my project. This document will explain exactly what you need to do. This is a project I am doing for my MA TESOL & Applied Linguistics at University of Leicester, UK. I am collecting recordings of people telling the story of Little Red Riding Hood. I can’t tell you much more about the project until you have completed the recording for fear of prejudicing the experiment, but please rest assured that its nothing sinister! Once you have submitted the recording I will be happy to tell you more about the project. Some instructions: Please make a recording of yourself telling the story of Little Red Riding Hood. As a guideline, the story should be 2-5 minutes long, but more or less is OK too. Please record it using a computer, table or phone (Windows sound recorder will work nicely) in any common format (.wav, .mp3, .caf, .3ga). However, please avoid using Kakao Talk as the voice recorder has a limited time, low quality and it’s a pain to convert the files to anything usable. When you have finished your recording, please email it to alex.grevett@gmail.com. Please tell the story as you want to and as you remember it. If you don’t remember it well, feel free to look at one or preferably more than one story online or in a book, so that you have an idea of the different tellings. However, when you do the recording, please tell the story from your memory or imagination, please don’t read it from the source. You do not need to assume any particular audience. If you have any procedural or technical questions, please get in touch by email or Kakao Talk (my ID is AlexGrev). Your privacy will be respected at all times during this experiment. You will be anonymous to everyone but me. The audio files and transcripts will be available to staff at the University of Leicester, and to anyone else who views the final paper. As a participant, you have the right to refuse to do the recording, or to withdraw from the experiment at any time up until the project is submitted on 17th August. If you wish to read the final results, they will be available from 17th of August and I will be happy to send you a copy. Again, please contact me if you have any questions or concerns, and thanks once again for taking part. Sociolinguistics salutes you. Alex 61 Alexander Grevett ED7504: Language, Discourse and Society Gender, identity and narrative in oral tellings of Red Riding Hood by native speaking English teachers in South Korea 11 Appendix D: Release form 62