26th October 2015 AP Lang, Period 5 Syllabus Oct 22 (Th) (Mrs. M. Late— Field Trip) Oct 23 (F) (HALF DAY) Oct 26 (M) HW: Solidify topic IDEA for Argument Essay (to hand in for feedback!) and begin research Yet more Toulmin: “When Did Compromise Become a Dirty Word?” + Worksheet (to hand in) Vocab Review H & J in teams Share topic idea with a partner, who will offer any suggestions for improvement HW: Revise your topic and begin filling in a Toulmin outline with specific ideas for essay. Bring three sources and rough outlines for Monday.(Type your own, separate outline.) Vocab H & J Quiz HW: PCAR; Continue to work on Argument Essay—REVISED outlines due PCAR due COMPUTER LAB Work with partner to peer edit outlines and evaluate each other’s sources. Search for additional research Writing conferences Doggie draft pair and share activity Writing conference with instructor Vocabulary Activity: A and B word roots (Kaplan)—quiz next class Practice exercises and reverse paragraphing using Civil War medicine article Revise use of quotations in rough drafts. Citations as needed. HW: Vocabulary Quiz #1 Individual and team quiz on A and B word roots Freewrite #4 HW: Read “A Modest Proposal” and “A Nation in Need of Vacation” and complete PCAR chart Collect HW PCARs. Mini-lesson on varying sentence structure (Purdue Online Writing Lab). Sentence analysis sheet to attach to rough draft. In-class reading of Chapter 3 on voice (pp. 59-63). Write a brief description of the voice that is used in each of the two homework readings and how they affect the arguments therein. Select exercises from the textbook (pp. 63-65) Go back to your rough draft. In pairs, read aloud own work. Partners characterize the voice used. HW: Journal—How did your partner characterize the voice used in your draft? Is this what you expected/intended? What about your writing expressed this voice? Does that voice make your argument more/less effective? Non-fiction PCAR due. Collect Non-fiction PCAR Punctuating and interacting with text as reading strategies. Students read and punctuate series of readings on homelessness (pp. 582-589) In teams, fill out a PCAR for each essay and then decide which of the two essays is more effective in its arguments, and be able to say why using the vocabulary of rhetoric and academic discourse. HW: Final drafts of persuasive essay due, with all preceding drafts attached, due on October 2. NO CLASSES Freewrite #5 Revisit student Kundera responses. Journal: Knowing now what you do about argument and persuasive writing in general, how would you change/revise how you responded to this prompt? What did you do effectively at the start? In-class response to AP argument prompt. Be sure to preplan!! HW: Final drafts of persuasive essay due Sept. 30. Bring digital version tomorrow for activity. Mini-lesson: Grammar Diagnostic follow-up Parts of Speech Gunning Fog Index introduction and calculation. Discuss the exercise. Work Session: Persuasive Essay HW: All drafts of persuasive essay (final on top) Collect persuasive essay final drafts (with prior drafts attached; turnitin.com submission before midnight). Label Toulmin components Freewrite/Journal #6: Reflection on process of writing persuasive essay. Which lessons/concepts did you have the most difficulty with? Which class activity/lesson helped you improve your essay the most? What do you think is the biggest strength in your persuasive writing at this point? HW: PCAR (Thursday this week!) Collect PCAR Freewrite #7 Discussion on importance of analysis, and definition of “literacy history” Read Mulvaney essay on analysis, and write a journal entry sharing your “literacy history” (finish for HW) Individual and team quiz on Mulvaney essay. Follow-up discussion. Voluntary sharing of literacy histories Vocabulary Activity: C and E word roots (Kaplan) HW: Vocabulary Quiz