Verbal Phrases What is wrong with these sentences? The ad for the car begins with a couple driving down the beach in their Hummer, enjoying the perfect setting in a huge 6,400 pound vehicle. I saw a whale sitting on the dock. The pilot, tailing horribly because of a gas leak in the plane, soon crashed. Infinitive Phrases: to + verb (e.g. “To succeed where others had failed is my life’s goal”). These phrases function as a noun. Participial Phrases: Formed with either present participials (ing) or past participials (ed) These phrases function as adjectives that modify (e.g.) Our branch office submitted a complete report, giving details about this transaction with J&M Associates.” Gerund Phrases: (ing) phrases that function as a noun (e.g.) Feeding stray cats became my hobby. Incorrect: Working at full speed, fatigue overtakes many of the employees in the afternoon. Correct: Working full speed, many of the employees become tired by noon. Incorrect: To improve typing skills, practice is needed Correct: To improve typing skills, I must practice Incorrect: To evaluate the feasibility of the year-long project on oil refinery reform procedures, the centralized plan will be compared with the present system of dispersing facility sites. Correct: To evaluate the feasibility of the year-long project on oil refinery reform procedures, the committee will compare the new plan with older versions. Exercise on Gerunds: Underline the gerunds or gerund phrases in the following sentences and label how they function in the sentence 1. Swimming keeps me in shape. 2. Marked by degrees of suspicion, I could not escape the scrutiny of the police officers. 3. Telling your father was a mistake. 4. The college recommends sending applications early. 5. He won the game by scoring during the overtime period. 6. Her most important achievement was winning the national championship. 7. To write a film like Lost in Translation suggests a deep existential crisis. Exercise in participials: Choose the correct sentence and explain your choice 1. 2. Rushing to finish the paper, Bob’s printer broke Rushing to finish the paper, I broke the printer 1. 2. The game, exciting the fans, when into extra innings. The game went into extra innings, exciting the fans. Exercise in infinitives 1. To win the game, cheating is necessary 2. To win the game, the Wildcats must cheat. Exercise in gerunds 1. Watering my neighbor’s garden, snakes appeared in the grass. 2. Watering my neighbor’s garden, I found snakes in the grass. Sample paragraph: revise this paragraph and focus on the verbal phrases Excited to enjoy a popcorn snack, Back to the Future appeared last night at the Kentucky Theatre Summer Classic Film Series. To watch a film directed by Steven Speilberg, relinquishing moral sensibilities is required. The film depicts the fantasies of mid-1980s U.S. culture and economy, hobbled by the trappings of its own opulence. It depicts the attempt of one disaffected scientist to travel back in time, working against the greed and destruction of the present era, to make right the wrongs of rampant greed. We see this in the film’s opening scene, running and evading terrorists from Lebanon who are trying to recover their stolen uranium. Worked up into a fit of rage, this film made me regret the choices our consumer culture has made.