ENG4C Death of a Salesman Persuasive Essay Assignment LEARNING GOAL: We can use our knowledge and understanding of Death of a Salesman to write a five paragraph persuasive essay on one of the specific topics mentioned below. REMEMBER: Persuasive essays require authors to use their ability to convince the reader that their point of view (opinion) is the right one. Essay Topics: 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. Is Willy Loman a success or a failure? Is Willy Loman a tragic hero? Do Willy’s conflicts (with society, his family and/or himself) ultimately lead to his demise? Why does Willy resist change so much? Examine how Willy’s regrets in life lead to his current mental state. What is Miller’s attitude toward the main character? Does his play ridicule Willy? Is it sympathetic toward him? Or does Miller remain essentially neutral and objective? SUCCESS CRITERIA: See class generated list located on Class Net Evaluation Rubric Knowledge / Understanding ▪Demonstrates knowledge of the literary text (Death of a Salesman) ▪Demonstrates understanding of proper essay format (logical introduction, body and conclusion) R Level 1 Level 2 Level 3 Level 4 Thorough understanding; very few / minor errors in essay format Limited understanding; many errors in essay format Some understanding; a number of errors in essay format Considerable understanding; a few errors in essay format Limited thinking; weak support; some of the writing process completed Fair thinking and support; most of the writing process completed Considerable thinking and support; all of the writing process completed Strong thinking and support; writing process completed thoroughly Limited clarity; weak organization; weak / no transitions; incorrect incorporation of quotes; many errors in spelling and grammar and / or page formatting Some clarity; fair organization; fair transitions; fair incorporation of quotes; number of errors in spelling and grammar and / or page formatting Considerable clarity; good organization; good transitions; correct incorporation of quotes; few errors in spelling and grammar and / or page formatting Strong clarity; strong organization; strong transitions; strong incorporation of quotes; few / minor errors in spelling and grammar and / or page formatting Limited connections; limited / weak incorporation of persuasive writing elements Fair connections; some incorporation of persuasive writing elements Good connections; good incorporation of persuasive writing elements throughout Solid connections; solid incorporations of persuasive writing elements throughout Thinking ▪Generates a thesis that is on topic ▪Gathers logical ideas / evidence from the play to support thesis /arguments. No unrelated information that destroys unity. ▪Demonstrates writing process skills by completing all required steps (Brainstorming, Outline, Rough Draft, Peer evaluation) Communication ▪Ideas are presented clearly (avoids awkward phrasing) and logically organized ▪Effective and varied sentences are used ▪Uses transitions to clearly show ideas connections ▪Quotes from the play are correctly incorporated to support arguments. No floating quotes! ▪Applies correct spelling and grammar (based on level of writing) with emphasis on RunOns, Fragments, Parallel Structure ▪Applies correct MLA page formatting Application ▪Makes connections between the selected topic/ arguments and source material (supporting ideas and evidence from the play are fully explained and linked to argument / thesis) ▪Incorporate persuasive writing devices throughout the essay to achieve a persuasive tone. ENG4C ENG4C Persuasive Essay Outline Which Essay Topic did you select: __________________________________________________________________________________________ Introduction: Hook (How will you introduce the essay topic—anecdote, definition, description, questions etc.?): State your thesis: Briefly introduce your supporting arguments (3-4) in the order they will appear in the essay: Body: (Organize argument paragraphs: Strong-Weak-Strongest, or using the chronological order of the plot—it depends on your thesis) Supporting Argument 1 Supporting Argument 2 Supporting Argument 3 Counter Argument: Counter Argument: Counter Argument: Your Argument Your Argument Your Argument Evidence to support your arguments: Evidence to support your arguments: Evidence to support your arguments: Conclusion: (NEVER introduce new arguments / evidence/ ideas in the conclusion) Rephrase thesis: Briefly summarize your supporting points: Conclude with a universal statement e.g. the lesson learned, final judgment (although NOT about whether or not the play is “good”). etc. ENG4C Name: ______________________________ Persuasive Essay Brainstorming 1. What topic have you selected and why? 2. What the thesis / argument you will present? 3. List your possible support ideas (3-4): Name: ______________________________ Persuasive Essay Brainstorming 1. What topic have you selected and why? 2. What the thesis / argument you will present? 3. List your possible support ideas (3-4): ENG4C Persuasive Essay Success Criteria I can…. Show my understanding of key narrative elements (character, theme) from Death of a Salesman Follow my “persuasive essay writing” note to produce a properly formatted persuasive essay Use my knowledge of the play to generate a thesis that is academic and on topic Support my thesis with appropriate subtopics and counter-arguments Show that I have worked through the writing process by completing and submitting my initial brainstorming, outline, rough draft and peer editing checklist with my final copy Present my ideas coherently and logically Use effective and varied sentence structures Show logical progression of ideas by using transitional words and phrases Effectively select and incorporate textual evidence / quotes Write with correct spelling and grammar Use proper MLA page formatting Make strong connections between my selected topic and evidence from the play Incorporate persuasive writing techniques (word choice, repetition, hyperbole etc.) to achieve a persuasive tone throughout my essay