FCAT WRITING (FOOD) RUBRIC Spam Bologna Hamburger Chicken Fried Steak T-Bone Steak Filet Mignon 1 2 3 4 5 6 FOCUS Minimally focused Loosely or slightly focused Generally focused Mostly focused Very focused Extremely focused; Purposeful ORGANIZATION May or may not have an organizational pattern; Usually lacks completeness or closure Little organizational pattern evident, Few transitions; May have beginning, middle, and end but may be brief Tried to organize; May use transitions; May lack logical progression of ideas; Lacks completeness Evident organizational pattern with some lapses; Uses transitions; Complete Organized with very few lapses; Effective use of transitions; Complete Logical organizational pattern; Effective use of transitions; Complete SUPPORT Supporting ideas are sparse; Little development; Supports may be lists and clichés; Low level, limited word choice Few supporting ideas or examples; Repeated ideas; Inadequate or illogical development; Limited, predictable word choice Uneven support; Some ideas are developed with details while others are not; Listy support; Adequate but limited word choice Consistently developed ideas; Several supporting ideas per paragraph; Specific details in some areas but not in others; Adequate but limited word choice Adequate support developed with ample use of specific details and examples; Mature command of language CONVENTIONS Filled with errors that impeded communication which include sentence structure, mechanics, usage, and punctuation; Commonly used words misspelled; Limited to simple sentences Errors occur in mechanics, usage, and punctuation; Commonly used words spelled correctly; Limited sentence construction with errors Knowledge of basics demonstrated; Attempted variety of sentence constructions but mostly simple Knowledge of basics demonstrated; Attempted variety of sentence constructions but mostly simple Conventions usually followed; Varied sentence construction with some complexity Ample development of ideas with varied, specific, substantial, relevant support; Mature command of language; Shows commitment to and involvement with subject; Freshness of expression; May use creative writing strategies Command of mechanics demonstrated; Few if any errors; Many varied sentence constructions