Robinson’s Persuasive Essay : 5 paragraph essay
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Attention
Grabber
4 - Above Standards
3 - Meets Standards
2 - Approaching Standards
The introductory paragraph has a
strong hook or attention grabber
that is appropriate for the
audience. This could be a strong
statement, a relevant quotation,
statistic, or question addressed to
the reader.
The introductory paragraph The author has an interesting
has a hook or attention
introductory paragraph but the
grabber, but it is weak,
connection to the topic is not clear.
rambling or inappropriate
for the audience.
1 - Below Standards
The introductory
paragraph is not
interesting AND is not
relevant to the topic.
Focus or Thesis The thesis statement names the
The thesis statement
Statement
topic of the essay and outlines the names the topic of the
main points to be discussed.
essay.
The thesis statement outlines some
or all of the main points to be
discussed but does not name the
topic.
The thesis statement does
not name the topic AND
does not preview what will
be discussed.
Support for
Position
Includes 3 or more pieces of
evidence (facts, statistics,
examples, real-life experiences)
that support the position
statement. The writer anticipates
the reader\'s concerns, biases or
arguments and has provided at
least 1 counter-argument.
Includes 3 or more pieces
of evidence (facts,
statistics, examples, reallife experiences) that
support the position
statement.
Includes 2 pieces of evidence (facts,
statistics, examples, real-life
experiences) that support the
position statement.
Includes 1 or fewer pieces
of evidence (facts,
statistics, examples, reallife experiences).
Evidence and
Examples
All of the evidence and examples
are specific, relevant and
explanations are given that show
how each piece of evidence
supports the author\'s position.
Most of the evidence and
examples are specific,
relevant and explanations
are given that show how
each piece of evidence
supports the author\'s
position.
At least one of the pieces of
evidence and examples is relevant
and has an explanation that shows
how that piece of evidence supports
the author\'s position.
Evidence and examples
are NOT relevant
AND/OR are not
explained.
Transitions
A variety of thoughtful transitions
are used. They clearly show how
ideas are connected
Transitions show how ideas Some transitions work well, but
are connected, but there is some connections between ideas
little variety
are fuzzy.
Closing
paragraph
The conclusion is strong and
leaves the reader solidly
understanding the writer\'s
position. Effective restatement of
the position statement begins the
closing paragraph.
The conclusion is
The author\'s position is restated
There is no conclusion recognizable. The author\'s within the closing paragraph, but not the paper just ends.
position is restated within
near the beginning.
the first two sentences of
the closing paragraph.
Sentence
Structure
All sentences are well-constructed Most sentences are wellwith varied structure.
constructed and there is
some varied sentence
structure in the essay.
Grammar &
Spelling
Author makes no errors in
grammar or spelling that distract
the reader from the content.
Capitalization & Author makes no errors in
Punctuation
capitalization or punctuation, so
the essay is exceptionally easy to
read.
The transitions between
ideas are unclear OR
nonexistent.
Most sentences are well
Most sentences are not
constructed, but there is no variation well-constructed or varied.
is structure.
Author makes 1-2 errors in Author makes 3-4 errors in grammar
grammar or spelling that
or spelling that distract the reader
distract the reader from the from the content.
content.
Author makes more than 4
errors in grammar or
spelling that distract the
reader from the content.
Author makes 1-2 errors in
capitalization or
punctuation, but the essay
is still easy to read.
Author makes several
errors in capitalization
and/or punctuation that
catch the reader\'s
attention and interrupt the
flow.
Author makes a few errors in
capitalization and/or punctuation that
catch the reader\'s attention and
interrupt the flow.
Robinson’s Persuasive Essay : 5 paragraph essay
Attention Grabber
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Focus or Thesis
Statement
Focus or Thesis
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Focus or Thesis
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Focus or Thesis
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Support for
Position
Support for
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Support for
Position
Support for
Position
Support for
Position
Support for
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Evidence and
Examples
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Examples
Evidence and
Examples
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Examples
Evidence and
Examples
Evidence and
Examples
Evidence and
Examples
Transitions
Transitions
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Closing paragraph
Closing paragraph
Closing paragraph
Closing paragraph
Closing paragraph
Closing paragraph
Closing paragraph
Sentence Structure Sentence Structure Sentence Structure Sentence Structure Sentence Structure Sentence Structure Sentence Structure
Grammar &
Spelling
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Spelling
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Spelling
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Spelling
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Spelling
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Spelling
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Spelling
Capitalization &
Punctuation
Capitalization &
Punctuation
Capitalization &
Punctuation
Capitalization &
Punctuation
Capitalization &
Punctuation
Capitalization &
Punctuation
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