English 384-001: Writing Ethnography Fall 2011 Professor: Terry Myers Zawacki, English Department Office: RobA435 Phone: 703.993.1187 Email: tzawacki@gmu.edu Office Hours: Wednesday 12:00 – 1:00 and by appointment or drop-in Class meets MW 10:30 – 11:45, Research Hall 202 Class wiki:* http://english311writingethnography.pbworks.com/w/page/35054195/FrontPage Course Description: "Writing Ethnography" entails the close study of a local culture; we will be concerned with the theoretical and practical processes of observing, interviewing, note taking, analyzing, and writing (about) a culture. For this first- hand “fieldwork,” you'll choose a particular site to study, perhaps a culture in which you yourself are already located. Your research site may be a place, a group, or even individuals who share some common experience, interest, or concern. You’ll spend a lot of time at your site, observing, talking to participants, writing field notes, and interviewing “informants” (people with particular knowledge of the culture). The research you gather will inform and form the ethnographic narrative you write. Along the way, you’ll turn in regular “integrative memos,” describing your progress, making connections among your research data, and identifying themes that will help to focus your narrative; you’ll also turn in, on a regular basis, sections of your ethnography in progress. As background for this work, you’ll read ethnographic accounts written by academics as well as a number written by students. These readings are loosely focused on the diversity of the communities we are part of and interact with in our day-to-day lives. The course culminates in a final portfolio containing your ethnographic account of the culture you’ve studied; any materials you’ve gathered at and about the site; your field work journal, integrative memos and reflections; and portions of transcribed interviews you’ve conducted with informants. Underlying all of our work will be these rhetorical and ethical questions: How do the ethnographer’s own identity and purpose(s) for the research influence what is observed, recorded, and written up? For what audiences and for what ends is the culture being re/presented on the page? To what extent should participants in the culture have a voice in that re/presentation? Course goals: This course will help you develop primary research, writing, and analytical skills that will serve you well no matter what your academic and career goals may be. You will learn how to conduct systematic qualitative research by observing closely and taking careful notes, by interviewing individuals and groups and listening carefully, and by writing up and analyzing your data thoughtfully and ethically. Using all of the information (data) you’ve collected, you’ll learn how to tell a lively, focused, wellsupported, logically and ethically sound story about the culture you’ve studied. And you’ll consider how and what you might give back to this culture in return for all that they have given you—their time, their insider information, their insights, and their stories. * Please note that the course number has changed to English 384; however, the wiki space still goes by the old course number because only Wikispaces can change the name of a wiki.) 1 Ethnography weaves together the strands of several stories: the personal story of the ethnographer, the story of the ethnographer working in the field, the stories of the people at the site, and the story of the site. --adapted from a talk given by Professor Peggy Yocom, Mason folklorist Required Texts: Best, Amy. Fast Cars, Cool Rides: The Accelerating World of Youth and Their Cars. (Best) Duneier, Mitchell. Sidewalk. (MD) (Note: We’ll read only a few chapters from each of these books, so you may want to figure out how to share the books with each other.) And…our class WIKI-http://english311writingethnography.pbworks.com/w/page/35054195/FrontPage* On the Wiki, you’ll find our syllabus, broken down into weekly pages, as well as links to sites and readings, individual folders for you to store and share your assignments and sections, and very important “how-to” handouts. About the latter: You’ve probably noticed that we don’t have a textbook on the procedures and processes for writing ethnographies, so I’ve posted how-to information on site selection, developing research questions, writing lay summaries and informed consent documents, gaining access, writing field notes, interviewing, etc. You’ll also see links to required readings from the open-source textbook, Translating Culture. Required articles on e-reserve. Search by my last name or the course number. Password “seeing” Yocom, Margaret. “’We’ll Watch Out for Liza and the Kids’: Spontaneous Memorials and Personal Response at the Pentagon, 2001” Searle, Sarah. “The Mason Life Program: An Ethnography …” Eberle, Sonja. “Arrival” and “’What Makes a Puppet a Puppet Rather Than a Potholder?’” (student ethnography) Foster, Holly. “Bingo” (student ethnography) Pohedra, Jennifer. “Beyond the Stage: An Ethnography of Comedian Culture” (student ethnography) “Ralph’s Sports Bar” (student ethnography) Lawless, Elaine. “Prelude,” “Prologue,” and “Introduction” to Women Escaping Violence: Empowerment Through Narrative (Please print out the Lawless articles for an in-class “close-reading” discussion). Also required: Tape recorder for interviewing! Recommended Texts for further study: Hammersley, Martyn. Ethnography: Principles in Practice. Routledge. (Strongly recommended) Students must use their Mason email accounts—either the existing “MEMO” system or a new “MASONLIVE” account to receive important University information, including messages related to this class. See http://masonlive.gmu.edu for more information. 2 Thomas, Jim. Doing Critical Ethnography. Sage: Qualitative Research Methods Series 26 Recommended E-reserve student ethnographies depending on your interests: Gray, Diedre. “Let the Fans Speak: A Study of Anime Culture” (student ethnography) Keating, Kristen. “Dog Fancier Culture” (student ethnography) Antram, Alex. “A Different Place of Worship” (student ethnography) Important websites to bookmark: Office of Research Subjects Protections: http://www.gmu.edu/research/ORSP/HumanPoliciesAndProcedures.html Training information for those seeking Human Subjects Review Board permission for research: http://www.gmu.edu/research/ORSP/HumanTraining.html More useful websites: Folklore resources: http://folklore.gmu.edu/Pages/Resources_At_GMU/media.php Course Requirements: Participation—Our class is run as a workshop, so I do little lecturing. Instead you’ll be reporting on your work, leading discussions on the readings, and working with each other in pairs and in groups to respond to and critique each other's work. Attendance and active participation are very important. In order to be an active participant, you'll need to be prepared for every class, whether it be keeping up with the reading, spending time at your fieldwork site, analyzing and reflecting on the materials you’ve gathered, and/or writing up your fieldwork. We often write at the beginning of the class, so it will also be important for you to be on time. (From the university catalog: “Students are expected to attend the class periods of the courses for which they are registered. Inclass participation is important not only to the individual student, but also to the class as a whole. Because class participation may be a factor in grading, instructors may use absence, tardiness, or early departure as de facto evidence of nonparticipation.” See: http://catalog.gmu.edu/content.php?catoid=17&navoid=1274#attendance) Assignments The ethnography (18 pages or longer) with accompanying portfolio materials constitutes the major portion of your writing work (and final grade) in the course. These materials include the proposal, lay summary, signed informed consent forms, and your fieldwork notes and transcriptions. Other assignments include writing exercises, reading logs, your fieldwork journal, interview transcription, and regular updates and integrative memos. Grading Your final grade will be based on your demonstrated understanding (in discussions, reading logs, quizzes, peer review, and ethnographic project) of the theory and practice of writing ethnography and your proficiency in writing an interesting, astute, wellsupported, and technically correct final ethnography. Final ethnography and portfolio with evidence of ongoing fieldwork = 30%; sections of your ethnography = 30%; reading logs (due when indicated on syllabus), quizzes, exercises, contributions to class and group discussion = 20%; average of other materials (proposal, lay summary, integrative memos, interview transcript) = 20%. 3 Some grading and revision logistics: You’ll turn in sections of your ethnography at regular intervals, where noted on the syllabus. These will be given grades that will be averaged together as part of your overall 30% section grade. For the final ethnography, each of the sections can be—and may well need to be—revised. You may also choose to revise sections as soon as they are returned to achieve a higher grade. However, if you have turned in sections late, you will not have this revision option. Note on late work: Assignments are due at the beginning of the class period. You must be in class to turn in these assignments on time. The proposal, lay summary, integrative memos, and ethnography sections will be given a late grade if they are not turned in the day they are due. Please do not give these to another student to turn in if you are unable to attend class. Rather, you should make arrangements with me for turning in the work late. Exercises, reading log entries, and other daily kinds of assignments may not be made up if you are absent the day they are due. In the event of an unavoidable absence, you should contact a classmate to find out what you missed so that you will be prepared for class when you return. Please feel free to talk with me about accommodating unavoidable absences. Accommodations for Students with Disabilities: If you are a student with a disability and need academic accommodations, please see me and contact the Office of Disability Resources at 703.993.2474. All academic accommodations must be arranged through that office. Honor code: Finally, I want to remind you of the commitment all of us in the university community have made to upholding ethical standards for researching and writing in the academy. .The principle of academic integrity is taken very seriously and violations are treated gravely. What does academic integrity mean in this course? Essentially this: when you are responsible for a task, you will perform that task. When you rely on someone else’s work in an aspect of the performance of that task, you will give full credit in the proper, accepted form. Another aspect of academic integrity is the free play of ideas. Vigorous discussion and debate are encouraged in this course, with the firm expectation that all aspects of the class will be conducted with civility and respect for differing ideas, perspectives, and traditions. You may want to revisit the student honor code at: http://academicintegrity.gmu.edu/honorcode/. Provisional Schedule As the course progresses and I learn more about who you are as readers, researchers, and writers, I may adjust the pace of the course and the assignment due dates, so, if you’re not able to make it to class, be sure to contact a peer to see if the assignment and/or the due date has changed. Note: All assignments are due on the day they are listed on the syllabus. Week One August 29: Intro to Course. What are the meanings of “Culture” and a “culture”? How does one determine insiders and outsiders to a culture? What is an ethnography? Ethnographic method? What fields employ ethnographic methods? How is ethnography different from a feature article for popular media? What constitutes a research “site”? 4 In her ethnography Prom Night, sociologist Amy Best defines “culture” as “an ongoing process that requires not only a close examination of those practices, symbols, artifacts, and texts that comprise and organize daily life, but also recognizing that these aspects of daily life carry different meanings for the people in these settings as they do for the dominant culture” (12). August 31: Cultures you belong to--by birth, by family/community ties, by choice? In class, we’ll brainstorm lists of the cultures and subcultures you are part of and some of the distinctive features of these cultures as well as the cultural groups you’re either somewhat familiar with or not at all familiar with and which you would like to know more about. These lists will start you thinking about what culture/group/community you might like to investigate. Read: In the Wiki folder titled “Culture and Ways of Seeing,” read these pages: Looking for (at) Culture, Culture and Identity, Identity and Observation. Week Two Sept 5: Labor Day. No Class. Sept 7: What is qualitative research? What does an ethnography look like? How is an ethnography different from a feature story? Read: 1) "Introduction to Primary Research" by Dana Driscoll in the open source textbook Writing Spaces. The chapter gives a good overview of qualitative methods, although not all of her discussion pertains to ethnography. Be sure to bookmark (or print) the chapter so that you can go back to refer to it throughout the semester. 2) “The Adventures of Greg: Introducing Greg Estrada,” a Washington Post Magazine feature available at http://www.washingtonpost.com/wp-dyn/articles/A28671-2005Apr6.html (April 10, 2005; Page W04). Then read on E-reserve, Jennifer Pohedra’s ethnography “Beyond the Stage.” Take note of the different approaches and techniques the feature story and the ethnography each employ. Notice too the elements of an ethnographic report in Pohedra’s project. 3) Explore the Story Corps and Valuing Written Accents sites and be prepared to discuss why I’ve included these sites as examples of ethnographic work. Write (to be turned in): A short list of sites you are considering for your ethnographic investigation, noting which ones you are particularly interested in and questions you may have. Or, preferably, write a short description of the site you are intending to study and why. Week Three Sept 12: Paired Introductions. Ways of Seeing. Who am I in/to the culture? What accounts for the “gaze” that observes, collects, and analyzes data? Read 1) “Body Ritual among the Nacirema” at http://www.msu.edu/~jdowell/miner.html. Jot down some points to discuss in class. 2) Also read the first chapter of the open-source textbook Translating Cultures at http://www.sbm.questionthequids.org/wp-content/uploads/introand-chapter-1-10.8.pdf. You’ll need to scroll down to get to Chapter 1 “Introducing Cultural Inquiry.” Write about your identity: In class, you made a list of cultures you belong to; now you’ll write in more depth about your identity related to these cultures. Here are some questions to consider: What are some of the different cultures you belong to, including cultures which are defined, at least partially, by fixed identities like race, ethnicity, class, sexual orientation, religion, age, size, and so on. What kinds of things have been said to you about the group? How closely do you relate to the group? How might participation in this group shape your perspectives on “other” groups? Do you remember any times when you claimed or denied one of the groups you belong to? (700 words or so, typed double-spaced. Begin with your name as an integral part of 5 your identity. You don’t have to address all of the questions nor write about them in the order above. Reveal only what you are comfortable sharing with your peers in the class.) Sept 14: Examining the elements of an ethnographic report. Read: To get a sense of what your final project might look like, read Sarah Searle’s ethnography of the Mason Life Program. Based on Searle’s and Pohedra’s ethnographies, be prepared to discuss what seem to be typical characteristics of an ethnographic report. Week Four: Sept 19: Identity, observation, reflexivity. In class: paired observation exercises. Read: In Wiki folder “Culture and Ways of Seeing,” read Roles and Goals as Participant Observer. Also read “Writing Observations,” Chapter Five in Translating Culture at http://www.sbm.questionthequids.org/wp-content/uploads/2009/05/chapter-5-e28093writing-observations-jan08.pdf. Take note of the guiding questions for observing that are included at the end of the chapter. Turn in: Proposal for your ethnographic research in which you describe the site, why you are interested, what secondary research you may want to consult, and how you will gain access. See directions for the research proposal and a student example in the Wiki folder “Doing Ethnography: Processes and procedures.” Sept 21: Lay summaries, consent forms, and the ethics of entry to a culture. The Human Subjects Review Board: What is it? Who must seek HSRB permission? Informed Consent—required from all participants in your study. Read: 1) Visit the “Policies and Procedures” page of the HSRB site (http://research.gmu.edu/ORSP/HumanPoliciesAndProcedures.html). Download and read the following documents: Classroom Projects Guidelines and FAQS, Guidelines for Informed Consent, and Human Subjects (Definition). 2) Visit the Human Subjects Forms and Instruction page at http://research.gmu.edu/ORSP/HumanFormsAndInstructions.html. Download and read the “Human Subjects Application Form” and the “Informed Consent Template.” Please note that you will turn in a lay summary and an informed consent form on Sept 26. However, you should be engaged in research on your site at this point, so, if you are interviewing people at/about your site, please prepare a consent form and lay summary in advance of the Sept. 26 due date. (You’ll find directions for writing a lay summary and an informed consent form in the folder “Doing Ethnography: Process and Procedures.” You’ll also find a number of student examples of consent forms and lay summaries.) Week Five Sept 26: Why ethnography matters. Read: Sidewalk: 1) MD “Introduction,” “The Book Vendor,” “The Magazine Vendor,” and the Appendix. In reading log (about 2 pages typed), note the questions that motivate Duneier’s investigation, what he says about his methods (for gaining access and for taping informants), his own positioning, and, in the two chapters, notice particularly the way he uses his interview and observational data to create lively scenes and highlight the issues. (Note: You’ll have a methods section somewhere in your project, so, in your fieldwork journal, be sure to keep careful notes on your own methods.) 6 Sept 28: Dunier documentary. Also due: Lay summary and Informed Consent forms. You’ll find directions for writing a lay summary and an informed consent form in the folder “Doing Ethnography: Process and Procedures.” You’ll also find a number of student examples of consent forms and lay summaries. September 30: Last Day to Drop Week Six Oct 3: Reciprocity and Why ethnography matters, cont. Read DM either “Sidewalk Sleeping,” or “The Space Wars,” and also read “Conclusion” and “Afterword by Hakim.” Be prepared to discuss Duneier’s conclusions, his reasons for including Hakim’s afterword, and any “lessons” you’ve taken away as models for your own ethnographic account. Write: In one or more double-spaced pages, describe one or more aspects of your fieldsite: a room/space occupied by the group; (i.e. the environment that is typical); the group/individuals you’ll be studying and where you will meet them; or a typical object from your site and why it’s significant. Feel free to use first person. Note: At this point, you should be visiting your site regularly and keeping field notes. Oct 5: Reflecting on fieldnotes, finding themes. Bring in the fieldwork you’ve collected thus far. We’ll talk about the process and write in class. We’ll also workshop your site descriptions. A heads-up: Three pages of a transcribed interview will be due on Oct. 12. Transcribing takes a lot of time, so you should set up your interview as soon as possible, if you have not done so already. Week Seven Oct 11 (Monday classes meet on Tuesday): Interviewing and Incorporating Interview Data. Read: Best: Introduction, Chapter One, Chapter Two. In the introduction, note how Best situates her ethnographic project in a cultural context (“American life and the car,” “Kids and Cars,” etc), how she defines “car culture,” and how she defines her terms and her study. In Chapters One and Two, notice how Best incorporates passages from her interview transcript into the chapter. Also notice how she sets up scenes that will bring readers into the culture. Note: Groups will lead the chapter discussions. No reading log is due but be prepared for a quiz. Please bring book to class for discussion. Oct 12: Workshopping interview transcripts. Interview someone relevant to your site. Tape record the interview. Transcribe at least three pages of the interview verbatim in a Q&A, single-spaced format. See directions for interviewing and transcribing in the Wiki folder “Interviewing and Coding.” The pages you transcribe should connect to themes you see emerging in your research thus far. Feel free to transcribe sections from different parts of the tape but be sure to identify the context for the sections you transcribe. Week Eight Oct 17: What’s the story? Finding themes. Coding your data. Read: Fast Cars Chapter Three and skim the Appendix. Note especially the kinds of cultural analysis Best does in each of the chapters. What is her “story”? In the appendix, note how carefully she describes her research methods. Jot down questions you have for Prof. Best when she comes to speak to our class. No log is due, but be prepared for a quiz on the readings. Also due: What’s your story? Write: Integrative memo (2-3 singlespaced pages with headings) on your fieldwork thus far: What themes do you see 7 emerging in your fieldwork? What data supports those themes? How do your interviews thus far support those themes? What questions do you think you want to pursue related to those themes? See Wiki folder “Doing Ethnography: Processes and Procedures” for a directions and an example. Note: Go back and review the handouts on the wiki from the early weeks of class on features of cultures and subcultures. You’ll need to include a definition of culture in your final ethnography! Oct 19: Tentative: Guest speaker sociologist Amy Best. Be prepared with questions to ask Prof. Best about her work and yours. Week Nine: Oct 24: Thickening” the description: defining terms, using secondary research, creating scenes. Read: Sonja Eberle’s chapter “What Makes a Puppet…?” on EReserve. Write: Describe in detail those aspects of your site—people, the setting, a particular event, and/or an object—that support a point you want to make. Create a scene, in other words, that will help to illustrate one of the themes you’ve identified in your research. Include details from your fieldwork journal, data from interviews, and/or secondary research. Experiment with incorporating quoted material from your interview and/or overheard conversations at the site as you’ve seen Dunier and Best do in their work. Think about this as one of the sections of your ethnography. You’ll workshop your drafts in class. Oct 26: Touching base and reflecting. Describe to your partner(s) where you are at this point in your research: what you’ve done, seen, recorded, and noticed. Describe themes you have already identified and how you’re working with those themes, other themes you see emerging, and possible focal points for the ethnography (a unifying theme). Ask yourself: What do I notice? Why do I notice what I notice? How can I interpret what I notice? Why does this story matter? Your partner(s) should be asking you questions to help you think about your research, and you should be taking notes on your responses to their questions to guide you in revising and writing sections. Week Ten Oct 31: What’s the story? How a Table of Contents (TOC) can help you organize the material. Read: Holly Foster’s “Bingo” on E-reserve. Notice how she organized her sections. In class, with a partner, you’ll develop a very preliminary TOC for your own study. I’ll ask you to reflect on your fieldwork thus far: Assumption you had going into the field and what you actually found; what, if anything, has surprised, intrigued, and/or disturbed you; and what you plan to do next. Write: Another section draft of your ethnography. Nov 2: The story gone wrong—a how-not-to-do-it ethnography. Read on E-reserve “Ralph’s Sports Bar.” Be prepared to discuss (critique) her method, her focus, and her analysis. Write: Transcribe additional segments from interviews that you plan to use in your ethnography. If you have no further interviews to transcribe, write another section of your ethnography based on material in your fieldnotes. Which ever of these you choose to do, you should be sure that the writing supports themes you’re seeing in your fieldwork. 8 Week Eleven Nov 7: This is a conference day. There will be no class. Assignment in preparation for your conference with me: Compile your materials thus far into a portfolio to show me. Bring any relevant writing about and materials from the site and note secondary research that may be applicable. (Consider, for example, the kinds of research Dr. Best used in addition to her own field work.) At the conference, you’ll talk with me about your evolving ethnography, the themes you see emerging, possible focus/foci, and your key informants and events. Together, we develop a preliminary TOC. We’ll also discuss the section draft you turned in. Nov 9: Conferences cont. Week Twelve Nov 14: What’s your story? Arrival stories: Traditional ethnographies usually include an “arrival story,” that is, a story about your first time visiting the site as a researcher or, depending upon your site, a story about how you are positioned in relationship to your informants. Recall how Dunier and Best explained how they came to the culture and discovered the questions they wanted to ask. Read on e-reserve “Prologue” and “Introduction” to Women Escaping Violence by Elaine Lawless. We’ll discuss this reading in class, so bring your printed-out copy. Questions: How much do you want to tell about yourself in your arrival story? How do you handle the emotions you might feel about a site? Nov 16: Workshop day: Arrival story and “What’s the story?” Write your arrival story. (Two or more double-spaced pages.) Bring a copy of arrival story to workshop, your table of contents, and any other sections you’d like to workshop with your group. Week Thirteen Nov 21: What’s the story you’re telling? Write: New section due to workshop and to turn in. Note: By this point, you should have turned in at least four sections of the ethnography. : Read around! (Explained in class) Nov 23: No Class. Thanksgiving Break. Week Fourteen Nov 28: Writing it up, cont. Assignment: Integrative memo due. The memo should include a tentative table of contents, an explanation of the material still to be included in sections to “thicken” the description as well as sections still to be written. See explanation in wiki folder “Doing Ethnography.” Along with your integrative memo, turn in drafts of any new sections you want to show me. Nov 30: Workshopping and editing sections. You should bring any new sections for your partner to read along with sections you’d like to have your partner(s) edit. Week Fifteen Dec 5: Why the story matters. Your “So what?” Analysis and conclusions. How have you answered the questions you posed in the arrival story? Assignment: Continue reviewing and editing ethnography. Dec 7: Compiling the portfolio. 9 Dec 14: Exam Day: 10:30-1:15 We will not have an exam in this class; however, you will give a short presentation on your ethnographic project and then we’ll spend time reading one another’s portfolios. Assignment: Portfolio and all accompanying material due. Criteria for evaluating portfolios: The portfolio provides evidence that the ethnographer has been conducting a systematic inquiry into the culture, as seen by the following: o Field data gathered from multiple visits and/or interviews with informants; o Log with notes on secondary and primary research and with evidence that writer has made analytical connections between secondary and primary research; o Collections of artifacts gathered from the fieldwork site, some of which may be digitally represented in the final ethnography itself. The final ethnographic study tells a focused, vivid, analytical and ethically sound story about the culture, showing clearly what makes this group a culture, as seen by: o careful selection of observation and interview data to support and clarify points the writer is making about the culture as well as to suggest larger theories that might explain the culture; o the incorporation of observation and interview data in a way that presents informants’ words and meanings ethically, fully, and coherently; o a balanced approach to both showing and telling about the culture with all details being relevant to the story of the culture that the writer is telling; o the incorporation of research and images (optional) that support the arguments with all images appropriately placed and captioned; o adequate analysis of all of the above to understand the significance of the research in terms of the culture the writer is studying (In other words, So what?) o a structure with a clear introduction to the culture, headings, subheadings, transitions, captions, and a logical conclusion; includes a definition of culture as we’ve been defining it in class and in the readings o reflections on the fieldwork process throughout the ethnographic story, demonstrating the writer’s ability to make thoughtful observations about the ethnographic project and connections among written, visual, and secondary data that’s been gathered. 10