January 8, 2014 Dr. Sven Poppert, Associate Editor Ms. Philippa Harris, Executive Editor BMC Infectious Diseases BioMed Central 236 Gray's Inn Road London WC1X 8HB, United Kingdom Dear Dr. Poppert, This letter concerns our revised submission of MS: 1540810597208125, which previously was entitled, “B cells are competent antigen presenting cells in Leishmania (Viannia) infection”. We have responded to the reviewers’ comments (specific responses below). As indicated in your letter, this required time and consequently, this revision is being submitted after the normal time period, as a new submission, now entitled, “CD4 T cell activation by B cells in human Leishmania (Viannia) infection” as a consequence of these revisions. Specific Responses: Reviewer: Simona Stager -“Upregulation of CD69 and CD25 can also occur following exposure to inflammatory cytokines and does not necessary mean that there is TCR engagement and antigen recognition. In order to rule out bystander activation, the authors should perhaps incubate T cells from CL patients with supernatants from B cells (CL patients). This is a pertinent observation and we appreciate that this issue has been raised. In response, we have included additional results that provide a description of the cytokine profile of supernatants from cultures of purified patient B cells incubated with pLAg. No significant secretion of 13 cytokines (IFN-, IL-10, IL-4, IL-9, IL-13, IL-6, IL12p70, IL-1β, IL-5, IL-2, IL-17A, IL-22, TNF-) was observed, suggesting that inflammatory cytokines produced by B cells do not account for CD4 T cell activation that is observed under these experimental conditions. These data have been added to the paper and are presented in Figure 6 and summarized briefly (page 13) in the Results section. Therefore, we consider it is likely that antigen presentation is the main mechanism of CD4 T cell activation. However, we recognize that direct observation of cognate B cell-CD4 T cell interactions has not been made. Consequently, the text has been thoroughly revised to reflect this point. Based on the evidence presented and the extensive literature establishing B cell antigen presentation as an important mechanism for T cell activation in several contexts, it is reasonable to state the likelihood of this 1 mechanism in our model. Therefore, we have re-written every section and modified the title to reflect that antigen presentation by B cells in our model is likely, though not explicitly proven. We believe that the additional data showing that the supernatants from the pLAg stimulated B cells do not produce cytokines that might act upon T cells address the concern raised by the reviewer. -“Fig.2: representative histograms for the healthy subjects should also be shown.” We have added representative histograms for the healthy subjects in this figure (Fig. 2A). -“What happens to B cells from HS if they are stimulated with pLAg? Do they also upregulate CD86?” B cells from healthy subjects do not upregulate any of the activation markers tested after incubation with pLAg. This information was presented in figure 2B, as pLAg stimulated B cells had identical levels of expression of activation markers as controls (non-pLAg-stimulated B cells); this result was previously presented as 100% of control. . We agree that more clarity was needed on this point and thus have modified the figure to line graphs that show the lack of change in each of the healthy subjects (Fig. 2B). -“Fig.3: without the comparison between the Ag-presenting capacities of B cells and DCs it is impossible to understand the role of B cells in Ag-presentation. And the results presented in Table 1 do not allow drawing conclusions on this issue.” Dendritic cells are potent antigen presenting cells (APCs) that reside in sites of antigen entry and thus are the main initiators of adaptive immune responses. After initial activation and expansion of antigen-specific immune cells, B cells have been shown to be highly efficient APCs and cytokine-secreting cells that can contribute to the maintenance and shaping of these responses (references 31-37). Our study compares the efficiency of purified B cells vs. all cells present in peripheral blood mononuclear cells, which includes DCs, to activate CD4 T cells. We believe this is a valid experimental design and comparison for human patient studies to establish B cell capacity for this function. Demonstrating this in humans naturally infected with the parasite is important to validate this function as a target for immunomodulation and to generate hypotheses exploring their role in the pathogenesis of reactivation or mucosal dissemination. We firmly believe the implications of activation of CD4 T cells by B cells are independent of the capacity that purified DCs would have as APCs in our model. The issues with Table 1 are addressed below (Page 4 of Response to Reviewers). -“pLAg should be checked for LPS contaminants” We believe LPS contamination is not a concern for these studies for two reasons: 1. PBMCs from healthy subjects stimulated with pLAg did not show any CD4 T cell or B cell activation in relation to controls (Figures 1 and 2). 2 2. TLR4 is not expressed by human B cells or CD4 T cells, so co-cultures of these purified populations do not respond to LPS. Any expression of TLR4 in these cell types induced by inflammatory signals would result in significant upregulation of activation markers and/or cytokine secretion in purified T cells or B cells incubated alone with pLAg if LPS-initiated signals would be present. This was not the case as shown in figures 4, 5 and 6. -“what is the difference in terms of phenotype between PBMC B cells from HS and CL patients?” There were no differences in the surface molecules expressed by B cells in control cultures from healthy subjects and CL patients evaluated in this study, namely CD20, HLA-DR, CD80 and CD86. Representative plots to show this are now included in Figure 2A. -“Fig.3: the results for HS B cells should also be shown. Can HS B cells also activate T cells in the presence of pLAg?” (Note: This is now Figure 4) Cells from healthy subjects did not show any measurable upregulation of activation markers in either CD4 T cells or B cells in PBMC cultures. This is in line with previous observations we have made in these particular populations, where we have found cells from healthy donors do not proliferate, produce IFN-, TNF- or IL-13, or upregulate the transcription factors T-bet or GATA-3 in response to stimulation with live or killed L. panamensis (references 4 and 40 from the paper and Diaz, et al., J Inf Dis 2010, 202:406-415). It is very likely that the absence of clonal expansion of Leishmaniaspecific lymphocytes in non-sensitized subjects is the reason for this lack of response. The fact that healthy subjects failed to respond to pLAg was previously indicated on page 10 of the text. -“Fig.3 (Current Fig. 4): CD69 expression did not increase in most of the samples.” CD69 expression increased in all of the cultures when comparing B cells, CD4 T cells plus pLAg to the controls. The increase in some of the patients was of low magnitude and thus it was hard to observe because of the scale used in the figure. This scale was used because some of the patients had much larger increases. Such a wide range of variation (107.3 to 957.6% of control) is not unusual in human studies. We have modified the scale used in the figure (now Fig. 4C) to make the increase more evident. -“Moreover, CD69 is upregulated on T cells in the presence of pLAg only. Why?” CD69 is upregulated on T cells in the presence of pLAg in 7 out of 10 patients. Six of these patients have a low increase (from 2 to 29%) and one has an 84% increase. The paired analysis for the whole group did not detect a statistically significant difference between T cells exposed to pLAg and those not exposed to antigen (p=0.08). We believe the CD69 upregulation observed in T cells of these patients is due to a TCR independent mechanism, but considering the lack of statistical significance of the whole group, we thought this did not warrant a discussion. This upregulation of CD69 is now clearly 3 stated in the Results section (page 12). It is important to observe that all patients in whom CD69 expression was induced by pLAg in CD4 T cells alone demonstrated further and significant upregulation of this expression in the presence of B cells. - Representative plots for the CD69 and CD25 staining should be shown.” Representative plots for CD25 and CD69 expression have been added (Fig. 4A). -“Table 1: this experiment is quite confusing. Lots of cells in the PBMC can produce many cytokines during 5 day incubation. It would have been better to measure cytokine production in B cell/CD4 cultures from HS and CL patients with or without pLAg.” We thank the reviewer for pointing out the lack of clarity in this section. Our goal was to establish that the cytokine profile in both types of cultures (PBMCs and purified B cells+ CD4 T cells) were similar. We agree with the fact that the display of cytokine data in Table 1 was confusing, as was the corresponding section in the text. We have eliminated Table 1 and reorganized the paper to include cytokine data for each culture type separately and with line figures for all 13 cytokines evaluated (Figure 3 for PBMC cultures and Figure 6 for CD4 T cell/B cell cultures). Our previous studies in patients and residents from this region have shown that no significant cytokine secretion is detected in cultures from healthy subjects (references 39-41). Consistent with this, we did not observe any upregulation of activation markers in CD4 T cells, B cells or DCs from healthy subjects in this study. Therefore, it would be expected that there would be little/no cytokine secretion by purified B cells and CD4 T cells from healthy subjects stimulated with pLAg. Indeed this is what occurs. We have now included cytokine data from control cultures in Figure 6 (CD4 T cells alone, CD4 T cells + pLAg, B cells alone and B cells + pLAg) to further clarify this this point. -“Fig.5: representative plots for the staining should be shown;” We now include the representative FACS plots (Fig. 7A) showing that L. panamensis antigen upregulates costimulatory and MHC molecules and enhances BCRmediated endocytosis (Fig. 7C) in Ramos cells. -“p16, second last paragraph: Ramos cells cannot be compared with B cells from CL patients, which are heterogeneous and are derived from an inflammatory environment. It is impossible to draw conclusions about the role of the BCR based on the experiment shown in Fig. 5A” We concur that this conclusion was inadequate. Consequently, we have removed these comments and rewritten our conclusion for this experiment, which now indicates that L. panamensis can induce upregulation of activation markers without BCR engagement (page 15). -“IL-10 is not a Th2 cytokine as stated on p.4 and p.15” We have changed this statement. Indeed, we agree that numerous other cells can produce IL-10. 4 -“representative plots for the data represented in Fig.2 should be shown” We have added the representative FACS plots for the expression of CD86, CD80, HLA-DR for HS and CLP; these are now shown in Figure 2A. -“the citation #22 on p.5 is incorrect. This work did not directly demonstrate that B cell present antigens; the conclusions were a suggestion on very indirect evidence.” We agree with the reviewer on the lack of direct evidence for antigen presentation in this paper. The study in reference employs an elegant model with B cell deficient mice and B cell and antibody transfer to conclusively show that a B cell function different to from antibody secretion mediates CD4 T cell activation (proliferation and cytokine production). The authors do not show cognate interactions between Leishmania specific-B cells and CD4 T cells. Since the paper did not include direct evidence for antigen presentation we have removed this reference from the introduction and rewritten the sentence in relation with the other study referenced on L. amazonensis infection. Reviewer: Ingeborg Becker -“This conclusion is overstated, since the authors do not show data to validate this assumption, including controls that rule out the possibility that cytokines produced by B cells could be responsible for the activation of T cells. It is therefore necessary, that in addition to showing up-regulation of co-stimulatory molecules in B cells incubated with pLAg, the cytokine production of these B cells should be analyzed.” We accept the reviewers’ comment about overstating the conclusion since we have not shown cognate B cell-CD4 T cell interactions in our cultures. We have added the data she requests showing that B cells incubated with pLAg do not secrete any cytokines, eliminating the possibility that cytokines produced by B cells are responsible for the activation of CD4 T cells. We believe this additional data allows us to suggest that antigen presentation is a potential mechanism of CD4 T cell activation. -“It would also be recommendable to wash antigen stimulated B cells before incubating them with CD4 T cells.” We thank the reviewer for this suggestion. If washed cells would not activate CD4 T cells, this experiment would suggest that CD4 T cells are being activated by pLAg directly through a TCR-independent mechanism without participation of any APC. We show that CD4 T cells incubated alone with pLAg do not upregulate activation markers (Figure 4; Page 11 Results Section); further, we have added data showing that B cells stimulated with pLAg also do not secrete cytokines (Figure 3; Please also see response above to Dr. Stager). Furthermore, CD4 T cells from healthy subjects do not show any activation after incubation with pLAg, also proving that pLAg does not activate CD4 T cells through TCR independent mechanisms. Therefore, the 5 proposed experiment would be redundant in terms of ruling out activation of T cells by pLAg alone, and would not show occurrence of cognate B cell-CD4 T cell interactions. -“Furthermore, control experiments that rule out direct B and T cell contact, as can be achieved by Boyden Chambers, should be included.” We have addressed this point through the additional experiments added concerning evaluation of the production of 13 cytokines by B cells stimulated with pLAg. These data clearly show a lack of secretion of cytokines by B cells after stimulation with pLAg; therefore cytokine secretion does not appear to be the mechanism responsible for CD4 T cell activation. We agree that the experiment proposed with Boyden chambers provides an alternate approach and could further support this point. However, the lack of cytokine secretion is compelling and the proposed experiment would not show any cognate B cell-CD4 T cell interactions. -“In conclusion, the authors must either provide uncontroversial evidence showing that B cells are competent antigen presenting cells, or adjust the title and all the sections referring to the B-cell antigen presenting capacity and substitute them with a statement only describing the up-regulation of co-stimulatory molecules in B cells.” The title has been modified to “CD4 T cell activation by B cells in human Leishmania Viannia infection” and the text has been revised to indicate activation of CD4 T cells by B cells rather than antigen presentation. However, we believe that after addition of the cytokine data it is reasonable for us to suggest that antigen presentation has a role in CD4 T cell activation based on the following: 1) we show that L. panamensis antigens induce CD4 T cell activation only in individuals having Leishmania infection, a result reflecting the occurrence of an adaptive immune response to Leishmania antigens and implicating specific CD4 T cell clones expanded in vivo and therefore TCRmediated activation; 2) the vast literature showing the competence of B cells as APCs; 3) the fact that B cells are the only APCs present in the B cell/CD4 T cell co-cultures; and 4) the lack of cytokine production by B cells when incubated with pLAg that eliminates the possibility of bystander activation. Despite this evidence, to provide an uncontroversial demonstration of antigen presentation we would have to show cognate B cell-CD4 T cell interactions directly. This would require us to identify and isolate Leishmania-specific B cells and CD4 T cells from the patients to establish cell lines. This technology is not within our current capacity and is beyond the scope of this study. Therefore, as the reviewer suggests, the paper has been re-written with this limitation clearly indicated and modified the title to reflect that antigen presentation by B cells in our model is likely, but not a proven fact. -“Reference 30 must be revised, since it does not describe how pLAg was prepared (the manuscript section on Cell Culture states that reference 30 discloses how pLAg was produced, yet this is not evidenced).” We thank the reviewer for pointing out this inconsistency. We have replaced the reference with a brief description of the preparation of pLAg (Page 8, Methods section; Cell Culture). 6 Overall, we believe that our revised manuscript entitled, “CD4 T cell activation by B cells in human Leishmania (Viannia) infection” as a consequence of these revisions, is now considerably improved. Our findings clearly demonstrate the importance of B cells in regulating the immune response during L. (Viannia) infection, indicating that these cells provide a target for immunotherapeutic approaches for treatment. Sincerely, Diane McMahon-Pratt Daniel Rodriguez-Pinto Nancy Saravia 7