Day 1 John Donne is the most supreme example of the metaphysical poets, a name commonly gave to a group of English poets in the 1600’s. Inspired by philosophical views of the universe, they examined the role of the human spirit in the drama of life. Correction of unclear pronoun reference Correct use of absolute adjective Correct past participle of irregular verb Day 1 John Donne is the supreme example of the metaphysical poets, a name commonly given to a group of English poets in the 1600’s. Correct use of absolute adjective Correct past participle of irregular verb Inspired by philosophical views of the universe, these poets examined the role of the human spirit in the drama of life. Correction of unclear pronoun reference Day 2 As a young man, Donne delighted in the composition of love poems, religious poetry was the interest he turned to in later life. In both, Donne showed the same exact intensity and wit, using elaborate and fanciful comparisons called conceits. Elimination of redundancy Use of semicolon to correct run-on sentence Elimination of faulty parallel structure Day 2 As a young man, Donne delighted in the composition of love poems; he turned to religious poetry in later life. Use of semicolon to correct run-on sentence Elimination of faulty parallel structure In both, Donne showed the same intensity and wit, using elaborate and fanciful comparisons called conceits. Elimination of redundancy Day 3 Everyone is familiar with Donne’s unforgettable words, No man is an island, entire of itself…. In the same paragraph, Donne writes, “.…never send to know for whom the bell tolls; it tolls for thee". Correct placement of period within quotation marks Correct use of ellipsis points for partial quotations Use of quotation marks to show a writer’s exact words Day 3 Everyone is familiar with Donne’s unforgettable words, “No man is an island, entire of itself....” Use of quotation marks to show a writer’s exact words In the same paragraph, Donne writes, “…never send to know for whom the bell tolls; it tolls for thee.” Correct use of ellipsis points for partial quotations Correct placement of period with quotation marks Day 4 A master at blending thought and emotion, Donne’s forceful language has the quality of everyday speech. In his forties, John Donne became an anglican priest, and his sermons magnificent performances attracted huge crowds. Capitalization of religious terms Use of commas to set off appositive Correction of dangling modifier Day 4 A master at blending thought and emotion, Donne used forceful language with the quality of everyday speech. Correction of dangling modifier In his forties, John Donne became an Anglican priest, and his sermons, magnificent performances, attracted huge crowds. Capitalization of religious terms Use of commas to set off appositive Day 5 Largely ignored for almost 300 years, the work of John Donne was re-discovered in this century. Doubtless, Donne’s internal conflict between hope and disillusionment speaks as sincere to our age as it did theirs. Use of adverbs to modify verbs Correction of unclear pronoun reference Elimination of unnecessary hyphen Day 5 Largely ignored for almost 300 years, the work of John Donne was rediscovered in this century. Elimination of unnecessary hyphen Doubtlessly, Donne’s internal conflict between hope and disillusionment speaks as sincerely to our age as it did the poet’s. Use of adverbs to modify verbs Correction of unclear pronoun reference