“How to Guide for Thematic Essays” Global History 9 Mr. Meetze What is a Thematic Essay? A Thematic Essay is designed to function as a Traditional Essay where the student is provided a specific Theme found throughout history and then is given choices to prove that they can identify and explain key people, events, or topics from the course which will be written on a ‘Final’ Essay Paper on the Final Exam Thematic Essay Topics • • • • • • • • Belief Systems Change Citizenship Conflict Culture and Intellectual Life Decision Making Diversity Economic Systems Thematic Essay Topics • • • • • • • • Environment and Society Factors of Production Human and Physical Geography Human Rights Imperialism Interdependence Justice Movement of People and Goods Thematic Essay Topics • • • • • • • • Nationalism Nation State Needs and Wants Political Systems Power Scarcity Science and Technology Urbanization Rules for ALL Thematics • How Many Paragraphs should Thematic Essays be? • How many Documents do you need to cite in your Thematic essay? • Can You use the Theme in your Introduction Paragraph? Terms You Need to Understand • Student Thoroughly addresses all Tasks • Essay is More Analytical than Descriptive • Richly Supports the Theme with Facts & Details • Beyond a Restatement of the Theme NYS Sample 10th Grade Thematic Remember to Read & Highlight ALL S.S. Keys 1st ThingYour Thematic Essay Topic 2nd ThingYour ‘To Do List’ for your 2 Body Paragraphs 3rd ThingPotential Choices and if the Essay has any Excludors Thematic Essay Scoring 5,4,3,2,1 Rubric Score of 5: = 100 • • • • Thoroughly develops all aspects of the task evenly and in depth Is more analytical than descriptive (analyzes, evaluates, and/or creates* information) Richly supports the theme with many relevant facts, examples, and details Demonstrates a logical and clear plan of organization; includes an introduction and a conclusion that are beyond a restatement of the theme Score of 4: = 80 • • • • Develops all aspects of the task but may do so somewhat unevenly Is both descriptive and analytical (applies, analyzes, evaluates, and/or creates information) Supports the theme with relevant facts, examples, and details Demonstrates a logical and clear plan of organization; includes an introduction and a conclusion that are beyond a restatement of the theme Score of 3: • • • • = 60 Develops all aspects of the task with little depth or develops most aspects of the task in some depth Is more descriptive than analytical (applies, may analyze, and/or evaluate information) Includes some relevant facts, examples, and details; may include some minor inaccuracies Demonstrates a satisfactory plan of organization; includes an introduction and a conclusion that may be a restatement of the theme Thematic Essay Scoring 5,4,3,2,1 Rubric Score of 2: = 40 • • • • Minimally develops all aspects of the task or develops some aspects of the task in some depth Is primarily descriptive; may include faulty, weak, or isolated application or analysis Includes few relevant facts, examples, and details; may include some inaccuracies Demonstrates a general plan of organization; may lack focus; may contain digressions; may not clearly identify which aspect of the task is being addressed; may lack an introduction and/or a conclusion Score of 1: = 20 • • • • Minimally develops some aspects of the task Is descriptive; may lack understanding, application, or analysis Includes few relevant facts, examples, or details; may include inaccuracies May demonstrate a weakness in organization; may lack focus; may contain digressions; may not clearly identify which aspect of the task is being addressed; may lack an introduction and/or a conclusion Score of 0: • Fails to develop the task or may only refer to the theme in a general way; OR includes no relevant facts, examples, or details; OR includes only the theme, task, or suggestions as copied from the test booklet; OR is illegible; OR is a blank pape The ‘2 Liter’ Thematic Design? Thematic Outline First Take out a Sheet of paper Quickly Draw a big Square, an Upside Triangle, & a Triangle Within the Square divide the object into 4 sections using 2 lines. 1st Title of Thematic Essay Define the Theme Discuss the Use Your Sample Importance of the Theme to the Outline World Outside Info To Do List a. ‘Bottle Cap’ Write the Thematic Question b. 2 Body Paragraph Topics Intro- Min 4 Sentences c. Brainstorm at least 6 specific facts per Paragraph 7-10 Sentences Minimum Conclusion Min 4 Sentences Either Link Thematic to another topic or Relate the Theme to life today Open the ‘Bottle Cap’ Write the Thematic Question THEMATIC ESSAY QUESTION Directions: Write a well-organized essay that includes an introduction, several paragraphs addressing the task below, and a conclusion. Theme: Culture and Intellectual Life Throughout history, many cultures have experienced a Golden Age when great advances were made in a variety of different fields including the categories of Art & Architecture, Engineering, Literature, Poetry, Math, Medicine, Science, and Trading. Task: Identify two different cultures that experienced a Golden Age. Describe the specific achievements of each culture identified. Explain how these achievements continue to influence the modern world You may use any example from your study of global history. Do not use the United States. Some suggestions you might wish to consider include: Babylon or the Chaldeans of Mesopotamia Gupta Dynasty in India The Han or Tang Dynasty of China Athens in the 5th century The Roman Empire during the Pax Romana Islamic Empire during the 9th Century in Bagdad (You Must the Islamic Empire as One of your Choices for this essay only) Title of Thematic: Culture & Intelectual Life Reminder: 10-15 minutes total on the Outline Islamic Empire Intro- Min 4 Sentences To Do List Outside Info A. MedicineSpecifically? B. ??? C. Today Brainstorm at least 6 specific facts per Paragraph 7-10 Sentences Minimum A Your Choice B. C. Conclusion Min 4 Sentences Writing the Thematic Reminders 1. Make sure the Intro and Conclusion does not consist of ‘This is What I’m Going to Do’ and ‘This is What I just Wrote’ 2. Use your Outline for your essay. By doing so you address the clear plan and organization task of the question Writing the Thematic Reminders 1. After you write a sentence make sure you can not ask yourself a Who, What, Where, When, Why, or How question. If so you didn’t write with enough depth 2. Be sure to use your outside to Analyse the Theme not just making a huge laundry list of information. Your To Do List NEEDs to be very specific!!! Writing the Thematic Reminders 1. Check the grading rubric and self grade your essay 5,4,3,2,or 1 scale. 2. Did you address all aspects of the task? 3. Did you answer the question?