Topic Sentence: Priscilla is brave to
confront Monk and his gang of thugs.
For example, Priscilla calmly asks the Kobra,
“Who’s your leader, wimp?”
This shows that Priscilla is not afraid to speak
her mind.
This is important because everyone else
quivers in fear, terrified of Monk, but Priscilla
reveals true courage in the face of danger.
2nd chunk
• CD In addition, she chops the Kobra to break
his hold on Melvin.
• CM (This shows that) Priscilla is not
intimidated by Monk or his gang, even though
they have hurt other students in the past.
• CM (This is important because) She is the only
person at her school with the confidence to
defeat a bully.
• CS It is heroic and bold of Priscilla to help
Melvin escape from Monk.
Priscilla is brave to confront Monk and his gang of thugs. For
example, Priscilla calmly asks, “Who’s your leader, wimp?” Priscilla
is not afraid to speak her mind. Everyone else is afraid of Monk, but
Priscilla shows courage while defending her friend.
In addition,
she chops the Kobra to break his hold on Melvin. Priscilla is not
intimidated by Monk or his gang, even when they have hurt other
students in the past. She is the only person at her school with the
confidence to take on a bully. It is heroic and bold of Priscilla to help
Melvin escape from Monk.
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TS: Monk is a bully because he likes
to intimidate his fellow classmates.
• CD For instance, he makes the students pay to
eat in the cafeteria.
• CM (This shows that) Monk has complete
control over the weaker kids at school.
• CM (This is important because) Monk feels
powerful taking the students’ money and he
feels smug intimidating his classmates.
2nd chunk
• Also, Monk and his gang are violent thugs,
inflicting bruises on the other students at
school.
• CM (This shows that)
• CM (This is important because)
• CS