‘Fearless’ by Janice Galloway Revision Setting • Set in the West Coast of Scotland during the 1950’s. • Set during a time when women were treated unfairly and men did nothing to stop it. • Not told a specific village as sexism existed in more than just one place. • “I never had access to their private thoughts voiced in private places, the bookies, the barbers, the pub” • “The hard, volatile maleness of the whole West Coast Legend” Things to remember when analysing • “I never had access to their private thoughts voiced in private places, the bookies, the barbers, the pub” • “The hard, volatile maleness of the whole West Coast Legend” • Repetition of ‘private’ • Use of a list to show the amount of places women weren’t allowed to go – which would be strange now. • Word choice of ‘hard and ‘volatile’ • ‘West Coast’ to highlight not set in just one village. Character • The character of Fearless is portrayed as an angry, bitter man. He resents the outside world and particularly dislikes women. • He is a very sexist character but ultimately shown to be a coward in the end (as all sexist people are suggested to be). • “Pebble-glass eyes” • “The thing about Fearless was that he lived in a state of permanent anger” • “Greengray sleeves dripped over permanent fists so just a row of yellow knuckles, like stained teeth, showed beneath the cuffs” • “Pebble-glass eyes” • “The thing about Fearless was that he lived in a state of permanent anger” • “Greengray sleeves dripped over permanent fists so just a row of yellow knuckles, like stained teeth, showed beneath the cuffs” • Metaphor showing how hard and emotionless Fearless was. • Word choice of ‘permanent anger’ • Word choice of ‘permanent fists’ • Use of the simile to demonstrate his unhygienic nature and hardness of his fists, like teeth. Theme • The theme of the short story is sexism. • This is best shown through the actions of the men and women in the story. • “I don’t remember men doing anything much at all” • “His wife left him. It was our fault really” • “I don’t remember men doing anything much at all” • “His wife left him. It was our fault really” • Men ignored the actions of Fearless because they were either also sexist or felt scared of Fearless as well. • Women at the time blamed themselves for the actions of Fearless. Narrator • The narrator is Janice Galloway as a child which is an unusual narrative stance. • Galloway as a child is the only one to stand up to Fearless when he attacks her and her mother. • The end of the story shows the opinions of an adult Galloway who still despises sexism and still stands up against it. • “All I saw was a flash of white sock with my foot attached, swinging out and battering into his shin” • “The outrage is still strong, and I kick like a mule” • “All I saw was a flash of white sock with my foot attached, swinging out and battering into his shin” • “The outrage is still strong, and I kick like a mule” • Word choice of “flash” to highlight the quickness of her actions which were not premeditated. • Word choice of “white sock” to show that she was a young, innocent girl. • Word choice of “battering” to emphasise the force in which she kicked him. • Use of the simile to show she will continue to stand up to sexism, not literally kicking it anymore but metaphorically. Things to remember! • The quotes shown here are just a small selection and you should use the quotations you are most familiar with and the ones which will fit into the essay question the best. • Remember to not just retell the plot of ‘Fearless’ but to fully analyse and answer the question set.