Sentences - Bristol Virginia Public Schools

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Day 1

Edgar Allan Poe was born on January 19 1809.

Because Poe’s mother had dyed and his father had deserted the family, he was raised as a foster child.

Correction of unclear pronoun reference

Spelling: homophones

Correct use of comma in date

Day 1

Edgar Allan Poe was born on January 19, 1809.

Correct use of comma in date

Because Poe’s mother had died and his father had deserted the family, Poe was raised as a foster child.

Spelling: homophones

Correction of unclear pronoun reference

Day 2

Poes first published work was a book entitled Tamerlane and Other Poems.

In 1836, Poe married his cousin, Virginia Clemm.

Use of underlining or italics with the title of book

Use of apostrophe to show possession

Elimination of comma with restrictive appositive

Day 2

Poe’s first published work was a book entitled Tamerlane and Other Poems .

Use of apostrophe to show possession

Use of underlining or italics with the title of book

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Elimination of comma with restrictive appositive

Day 3

Most of Poe’s writing were done between 1837 and 1845.

Poe lived in new york city during his most busiest writing years.

Capitalization of name of a specific place

Elimination of double comparison

Subject and verb agreement

Day 3

Most of Poe’s writing was done between 1837 and 1845.

Subject and verb agreement

______ most

Poe lived in New York City during his busiest writing years.

Capitalization of name of a specific place

Elimination of double comparison

Day 4

The death of Poe’s wife in 1847 made him very sad.

Poe died in Baltimore MD in 1849, the exact details of his death are unknown.

Use of separate sentences to correct run-on sentence

Use of commas in address

Use of precise adjective to improve style

Spelling out name of place in prose

Day 4

The death of Poe’s wife in 1847 made him very mournful .

Use of precise adjective to improve style

Poe died in Baltimore, Maryland in 1849. The exact details of his death are unknown.

Use of commas in address

Spelling out name of place in prose

Use of separate sentences to correct run-on sentence

Day 5

“The Fall of the House of Usher” is my most favorite story by Edgar Allan

Poe.

Where did you find that there book of Poe’s poetry at?

Elimination of there after a demonstrative adjective

Elimination of at with where

Elimination of superlative form with absolute adjective

Day 5

“The Fall of the House of Usher” is my favorite story by Edgar Allan Poe.

Elimination of superlative form with absolute adjective

______ ___ there at

Where did you find that book of Poe’s poetry?

Elimination of there after a demonstrative adjective

Elimination of at with where

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