學測英文作文
拿分技巧大公開！
名師學院盧克老師
如何學好解題
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寫作禁忌
避免錯誤
慣用寫法
文法使用方式
練習寫作
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禁忌1
 沒寫完
就算剩十八分鐘,有十八分鐘的寫法!
只剩八分鐘,有八分鐘的寫法!!
辦法:大不了一個圖一句,三句話解決!
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禁忌2
 用中文思考.中文成語
不要考自己翻譯!
你的中文能力遠超過你的英文能力!
辦法: 請準備好自己熟悉的句型
直接套用英文的句型,片語!
基礎萬用句型: As soon as S + Ved, S + Ved.
基礎萬用片語: To her surprise, S + V.
基礎萬用片語: All of a sudden, S + V.
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禁忌3
 在前兩句就出現重大錯字
From my onion,…
In my opinion,….
In my heart, my father is the an impotent person.
In my heart, my father is the an important
person.
辦法: 前兩句設計好固定句型(甚至句子),直接套用!
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毛病1
 沒有一個圖是無趣的,無趣的是那個作者!!
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96年學測
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毛病2
一直跟要新題目,又反覆犯一樣的錯!
發個誓吧!!不要再犯單複數的錯!!
再發個誓吧!!
每個看圖說故事的動詞都記得用過去式!
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毛病3
作文不好意思給老師改
拖到最後兩個月才肯給老師看,錯誤的習慣都已經造成了!
• 經典錯誤1: I think and you drink coffee.
• 經典錯誤2: If I go home after 10:00, I will be
dangerous.
• 經典錯誤3: He got drunk. Because he drank too
much wine.
習慣1
建立自己得字庫(待換字)
形容風景: beautiful  breath-taking
phenomenal picturesqu spectacular
形容美女:pretty estunningly
beautiful
gorgeou glamorous
adorable
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形容食物:delicious
tasty
mouth-watering
delicate
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習慣1
哭:cry  weep sob wail
break down in tears
生氣: get angry  lose sb’s
temper
lash out hit the roof freak out
切記: 單字背了是拿來用的!! 不是拿來等著被
考的!
習慣2
建立自己的句庫(萬用句型)
萬用句型1: The more S + V, the more + S + V.
萬用句型2: No matter wh S + V,S + V.
萬用句型3: On Ving, S couldn’t help but +
Vr.
提醒: 每個句型的練習一定要請老師看!
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習慣3
一題三版
一定要靜下心來面對自己得舊作!
仔細看每一個句子,一次一次地把它改到更好!!
成長是在這個過程中發生的!!
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那文筆到底怎麼練?
• 示範1.
Tom wants to improve his talking skill.
怎麼改?改哪裡?
Tom wants to improve his talking skill.
Tom is eager to improve his talking skill.
Tom is eager to enhance his talking skill.
Tom is eager to enhance his communicating skill.
Tom is eager to enhance his communicating
technique.
原句: Tom wants to improve his talking skill.
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• 示範2.
One night, she was cooking dinner.
One night, she was cooking delicious dinner happily.
One night, she was preparing a mouth-watering supper
in a happy mood.
One night, she was preparing a mouth-watering supper
in a merry mood with her dog waiting.
One night, she was preparing a mouth-watering supper in a
merry mood with her dog, Lucky, impatiently waiting
behind
her.she was preparing a mouth-watering supper in a
One
night,
merry mood with her dog, Lucky, impatiently waiting
behind her and the door wide open.
原句: One night, she was cooking dinner.
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• 示範3.
She saw a gorilla and she screamed.
Suddenly, she saw a gorilla and she screamed.
All of a sudden, a gorilla showed up and she screamed.
All of a sudden, a gorilla popped up out of nowhere and
she screamed.
All of a sudden, a gorilla popped up out of nowhere and
she
couldn’t
help a
but
scream.
All
of a sudden,
gorilla
popped up out of nowhere ; as a
result, she couldn’t help but scream at the top of her lung.
All of a sudden, a gorilla popped up out of nowhere ; as a
result, she couldn’t help but scream at the top of her lung,
not knowing what she could do.
原句:She saw a gorilla and she screamed.
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總結
1.別忘了為你故事裡的主角的外型,背景,心境多著墨!
2.名詞就多加些形容詞,動詞多用些副詞來修飾!!
3.在故事高潮點,主角的心情是最好灑狗血的地方
4.故事收尾的力道也很重要
進階作文
故事從天氣環境開始
春: It was a calm spring morning. The breezes
were agreeable and the birds were singing
merrily in the air. You could even smell the fresh
fragrance of the grass.
夏: It was a scorching hot summer afternoon.
One’s skin could immediately feel the heat and
hurt from the sunshine. Everyone was in sweat.
進階作文
故事從主角性格/背景開始 (善用: 同位語 )
1.Tom, a 42-year-old bachelor whose girlfriend just
walked away from him without an explanation,
got an invitation to a wedding party from one of
his best friends.
2.Joseph, a notorious philosophy professor who
was famous for his hot temper and loud voice,
was once again struggling on the edge of an
emotional breakdown.
書信類猜題
1.安慰信:你有一個同學因為外型(腹凸,髮禿,或太
矮太醜)的關係沒有自信,請寫一封信安慰或同
學苦戀,單戀,失戀被霸凌的安慰信或考試不好
被責罵的安慰信
2.鼓勵信:你有一個同學常被其他同學欺負(霸凌),
你會建議他怎麼做,你如何鼓勵他勇敢地面對?
書信類猜題
3.上書:給校長或老師的一封信,真對你所觀察到
不合時宜,不合理的校規或現象,提出你的看法
4.請求或求救: 沒自信/壓力太大/失戀/人際關係
差
5.勸說信:同學作弊/霸凌/沉溺網咖/墮落
書信常用句型
告知來意 I am writing this letter to inform you
that…
提供建議 Here are my suggestions. First,…
提醒叮嚀 Keep in mind that…
請求拜託 I would appreciate it if you could….
警告
By no means should you + Vr
功課1
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The girl saw a cat.
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功課2
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We went to a beach.
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功課3
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Health is important.
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謝謝
盧克老師和名師學院祝各位
同學學測大獲全勝！
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