Rapey Uzzaman
November 14, 2025
English 130
Prof, Dr. Sandra M. Cordoba
Changes I made from the first to the second draft are that I wrote everything I had as a
new thesis, and I put quotes. I work with my seek tutor, Ms. Rivera, who is an ESL
instructor, and I met with my supplement Instructor. We worked whole essay for the
second draft. My challenge is finding good quotes and making a good thesis to support
the whole paragraph. Question If secondary sources don’t support my essay taken from
my friends? Can I use two secondary sources different articles?
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