USING EXTENDED METAPHOR
Descriptive Composition Preparation
Objectives:
• De ine extended metaphor
• Read and analyse an example of an extended metaphor
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• Write a short descriptive paragraph with extended metaphor
Look again at the description of. The snake-like man in
the Language focus box. Write down all the words and
phrases that are linked to the characteristics of a snake.
• slithered
• slowly
• narrow, beady eyes
• head moved slowly
• sight of his prey
• coiled
• waiting to strike
Example of paragraph with an extended metaphor to
describe a football game as a con lict.
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We pulled on our colourful armour and prepared
ourselves for the coming battle. We were armed and
ready for the ight. As we strode out on to the battle ield,
the sound of the crowd bombarded us. Chanting illed
the air and the TV cameras trained their sights on us. The
whistle blew and our warriors charged into battle. It was
a long and hard ight, but in the inal moments, when it
looked like nobody would win, our brave attack resulted
in a goal, ired like a rocket. It killed the game o and our
opposition surrendered. Victory was ours.
Write an extended
metaphor to
describe the ocean
as a restless beast.
Use a paragraph
with 4-5 sentences.
Extended metaphor to describe the
ocean as a restless beast:
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The ocean surged and swelled, a
restless beast prowling the edge of
the world. Its waves, like feral
claws, tore at the rugged coastline,
leaving scars of foam and spray in
their wake. With every roar, the
beast seemed to bellow its
de iance, challenging the sky that
dared to loom above it. The wind
joined its cry, a wild accomplice in
its unrelenting fury. Yet, beneath
the chaos, there was a rhythm, a
primal heartbeat that spoke of the
beast’s untamed spirit and timeless
power.
DESCRIBING CHARACTERS
Descriptive Composition Preparation
Objective:
• Describe the given characters using sensory details, imagery and strong
vocabulary
Describe the character’s physical appearance.
Use 5-7 sentences.
Moana’s long, wavy black hair cascades down her
back like a waterfall of midnight silk, framing her
radiant face. Her deep brown eyes shimmer with
determination and curiosity, re lecting the vast
ocean she holds close to her heart. The warm
tones of her sun-kissed skin hint at her island
heritage, glowing with health and vitality. Moana’s
vibrant out it—a red crop top with intricate tribal
patterns and a lowing cream-coloured skirt
adorned with natural motifs—embodies the spirit
of her culture. Around her neck, she wears a
simple but meaningful necklace, symbolising her
connection to the ocean and her destiny. Every
movement she makes is illed with grace and
purpose, as if the rhythm of the waves themselves
pulses through her veins.
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Example Answer:
Describe the character’s physical appearance.
Use 5-7 sentences.
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The man is dressed in a light brown
uniform that looks like it’s made for hot
climates. He wears a wide-brimmed,
dome-shaped hat, which helps protect him
from the sun. His out it includes leather
straps and a belt, which hold various tools
and ammunition for his ri le. He is holding a
long, polished gun with both hands, ready
for action. His legs are wrapped in blue
fabric above his sturdy boots, likely for
extra support or protection. The man’s
pose is strong and alert, as if he is prepared
for an adventure or a dangerous situation.
Describe the character’s physical appearance.
Use 5-7 sentences.
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The little girl looks overjoyed as she laughs
with her head tilted back. She is wearing a
bright red and green out it, perfect for the
holiday season. Her long, wavy hair is
decorated with a pair of golden antlers and
tangled in colourful string lights that shine
brightly. The lights create a cheerful and
magical glow around her, adding to the
festive mood. Behind her, the blurred
background is illed with warm, sparkling
colours, likely from a decorated Christmas
tree. The atmosphere is lively and full of
holiday spirit, capturing the joy and
excitement of the season.
Describe the character’s physical appearance.
Use 5-7 sentences.
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The lady looks enchanting, standing gracefully
in a lush, green garden illed with blooming
white lowers. She is dressed in a lowing green
gown that blends beautifully with her
surroundings, giving her the appearance of a
woodland fairy. Her long auburn hair cascades
down her shoulders, with golden ribbons and a
delicate loral crown adding a magical touch.
Her hands are gently clasped near her chest,
and her expression is serene and dreamy. The
soft breeze seems to lift her dress and hair,
creating a sense of movement. The overall
scene feels like a moment captured from a
fairytale, full of peace and natural beauty.
Who is this?
A former Jedi named
Anakin Skywalker,
Darth Vader falls to the
dark side of the Force
and becomes a feared
Sith Lord, working for
the Empire in its
pursuit to control the
galaxy.
Who is this?
A chaotic villain with a
warped sense of
humour, the Joker is an
anarchist who seeks to
cause mayhem and
prove that anyone can
be driven to madness.
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Who is this?
The dark wizard who
seeks immortality and
domination of the
wizarding world, Lord
Voldemort's obsession
with power makes him a
ruthless and dangerous
igure.
Who is this?
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An alien warlord with a
twisted sense of
balance, Thanos seeks
to use the In inity
Stones to wipe out half
of all life in the universe,
believing it will restore
balance.
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Scar is the treacherous
and power-hungry uncle
of Simba, who plots to
kill his brother Mufasa
and take over the Pride
Lands. His jealousy and
desire for control make
him a classic villain in this
Disney animated ilm.
• Read the Extracts 1-7 of ‘Plantation’. Pages 175-186
• Do no. 1 of page 187.
• Do the table on page 188.
• Do no. 1 of page
187.
• Do the table on
page 188.