My Writing Process
For my writing process, I plan to make some changes after reviewing my informative
essay such as including a thesis statement and rewriting my introduction to not have
quotations and making it clearer to understand. Therefore, applying the rules of thumb
for punctuation would also help improve on grammar mistakes by using grammatical
rules since it is the most accurate method for punctuation. I will also be using more sentence
structures like short quotations and more pathos will be incorporated to add more emotion
and give people more of a visual example adding more pictures as well as graphs that can help
I state my evidence. The use of positions of emphasis could also help the reader
understand the key points of my sentences by adding them to the beginning and the end as I
was told that those are the parts that readers tend to remember the mos.