Peer Feedback Two
Unit 10 (5%)
● Peer Feedback Two Unit 10 folder
● Post your feedback for your peers directly on the Project 2 Peer Feedback
Discussion Board as a reply to their thread.
Peer Feedback Two
You will provide peer feedback on the Research Essay Drafts posted to your Project 2
Peer Feedback group discussion board (please consult your instructor to clarify the
exact number of reviews required).
Post your feedback directly to your peers on the discussion board as a reply to their
thread, and then copy and paste it into this template below. To be evaluated, your
reviews must be in both places: the discussion board and this document.
Draft 1
Peer’s Name:
Your Feedback: Hi
Great job on what you have so far but I have some feedback. It felt like your discussion
post felt more opinion-based rather than critiquing or evaluating the author’s argument.
It has a good basic structure but needs to be a bit clearer and more developed. You
only used a primary source and did not add a secondary source which was required.
The topic you have chosen is very important and relevant which is great but focus on
analyzing how well Colier supports her argument. There was also no use of GenAI
which is good. To conclude well job so far, just needs clearer organization, proper
citations and a better focus on critiquing the author's argument. It has a great base, it
just needs some touches to make it great.
Draft 2
Peer’s Name:
Your Feedback: Hi
Your essay is very well done and thank you for identifying the themes of the video.
You’re very well organized your ideas clearly with the introduction, summary, response,
and conclusion, which helped me follow your critique. One suggestion however is
improving your focus on evaluating how Sue Ding presents her argument by analyzing
her use of evidence, tone or visuals. Rather than just discussing the topic itself. I love
how you included references from primary sources and three secondary sources you
did a good job citing. Overall, this is a well-researched draft!
Please consult your instructor if more than two peer reviews are required.
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