STUDY RESOURCE - ATAR COURSE CONCEPTS There are some course concepts you must understand before walking into any assessment or the ATAR English examination. Questions will include the course concepts so you need to know what they mean and how they relate to texts you have studied. Use this resource as a study tool to help you focus on the course concepts. There is room for you to add your own notes (especially quotes/examples from the text). This is by no means an exclusive list of concepts 😊. COURSE CONCEPTS Appreciation In what ways might we appreciate the quality or value of this text? PAST THE SHALLOWS by Favel Parrett ‘Parrett has authentically evoked the teenage voices of three brothers: in particular, the engaging and vulnerable younger brother, Harry.’ The prose is often spare and understated because it expresses the overwhelming sadness of the family’s situation in coming to terms with the loss of the mother in the tough environment in which they live and work. The novel explores many human experiences: loss, friendship, despair, tragedy, families, and the challenges to communicate with the important people in one’s life. This novel reveals people whose lives have been impacted by secrets and are irreparably damaged. Literature has resonance and longevity when it explores and exposes themes and ideas about humanity which are universal across time and place. There are also the ideas of living in small communities where there are few choices and life is difficult. Perhaps overall the title, reflecting the ocean, is the greatest insight into the human experience in this text. Beautiful, mysterious, frightening and at times treacherous, the many moods of the ocean when it is fully contemplated, when we push past the shallow understanding or façade, show us the multi-faceted nature of humanity and family life. It is this depth that has propelled the novel to national and international success. Attitudes What are the attitudes expressed by the author or the characters in the text? Attitudes (opinions or viewpoints) develop because of our values: contempt, bitterness, concern, optimism, hope, regret, determination, defiance, consideration, scepticism, indifference, sincerity, etc. Author Nostalgia for the innocence and hopefulness of childhood Awe and respect for the power and unpredictability of nature Awareness of the fragility of childhood Harry Caring Considerate Kind Fear of the ocean and his father and alarmed by the thought of the nature of both the ocean and his dad. Miles Responsibility Concern for his brother Sincerity Steve Cullen Abusive, bitterness and selfishness Joe and Miles sailing away Hopefulness (hoping for a better future) 1 Audience Who is the author speaking to through the text? Context Production- the environment in which the text was produced (writer's context/ authorial context; social, political, historical context) Reception - the environment in which the text was and is received (e.g. in a multicultural Australian classroom in a co-educational school, in a democratic society that promotes empathy towards women and children (and men) that are victims of domestic violence, and little tolerance towards the perpetrators of such violence. In addition to this, consider your own personal characteristics, beliefs, values and attitudes that have influenced how you have responded to this text Production context (of the author) Past the Shallows is set on the coastline of Tasmania in a place called Bruny Island. Australia, presented as a rugged frontier, has long been a bountiful source for storytellers and poets. Past the Shallows hosts the rough southern region of Tasmania as the background to a family’s struggle against nature, modernisation, isolation and even themselves. The landscape mirrors the lives of the family with the remote isolation typifying the children’s fractured place in the world and the turbulent sea, a strong metaphor for the volatile and emotive atmosphere that surrounds the family and indeed the community. The family is caught between two worlds. A modern approach to abalone farming has surpassed the family’s traditional approach and placed immense pressure on them to take risks. A once reasonably stable homelife is disrupted by affairs, money problems and death. A father, unable to cope, spirals out of control while his community watches from the sidelines unable or unwilling to intervene. There are those that are trapped in the isolation and those that will get away. Favel Parrett’s life that has shaped having lived in Hobart and she is familiar with the Tasmanian coast. Her childhood was dotted by trips to the beach looking for treasures and surfing. On this, she says:” You could always smell the ocean – the salt and slight smell of rotting kelp in the air. . .To me, the setting became one of the main characters in the book, as it brings something dark, sad and ancient to the story." When Parrett's young Harry declares he feels the ocean ''right inside him'', he's articulating the author's sacred connection with nature. ''I was this young and fairly impressionable girl and the ocean was always this big, terrifying, wild thing to me. But just sitting on top of the water and letting the energy pulse roll over you, there is the sudden realisation that the ocean is so much bigger than you,'' Parrett says. Her relationship with her brother as a source of companionship and security is also seen throughout Past the Shallows. ''The way I feel about my brother is all in my writing,'' says Parrett, who bequeathed James's blond curls to Harry. ''One of the worst things that could have happened to me when I was a child would have been losing my brother. Often siblings from broken families have to rely on each other because that's all you've got. What does Parrett bring to her writing? Parrett’s first-hand knowledge, experience and understanding of the Southern Ocean and Bruny Island gives her writing its authenticity. • She grew up in Tasmania in the Southern Ocean area. • She is a keen surfer and loves the sea. • She respects and admires the ocean and is aware of its features e.g. tides, temperature, challenges. • Her knowledge and understanding as well as respect and well- foundered fear of the ocean’s dangers have clearly shaped her descriptions of the ocean and what happens • Her observations of nature are based on her experiences of nature and they are clear and detailed, especially that of Tasmania and the sea • The way she creates the sea is like another character 2 • She has a close relationship with her brother on whom she loosely based the character of Harry and the characterisation is clearly shaped by her love and closeness to her brother The blend of memory and fiction provide a rich tapestry of human experience and aid the reader by giving a voice to the often-voiceless children in these difficult situations. Historical Context Due to the harsh, rustic environment of the Australian continent, colonial settlers in the late 1700s and early 1800s were forced to rely closely on a deep trust of their fellow men in order to survive. This concept has endured to the present day and has led to the prevailing value of “mateship” in mainstream Australian culture, a principle that encourages a tight-knit sense of respect, solidarity, and friendship among men. Today, “mate” is used as a common term of endearment among friends. Past the Shallows takes place just off the coast of Tasmania, Australia, and the story’s characters grapple with the same ancient, nearmythical landscape that humbled the continent’s early inhabitants. The notion of mateship plays a clear role in the novel’s central themes, as Harry, Miles, and Joe Curren’s loyal brotherhood imbues them with hope and purpose amidst their suffering. Reception Context (Australia, 2023) Generic Conventions (Narrative) SETTING The setting for any story is a significant part of the text’s meaning. While it is not definite when this novel is set there are hints and the mood of the 1980s but the geographical setting is very clear and indeed, a significant element of the novel’s distinctiveness and appeal. • • • • Hints to the 1980's and the mood of the 1980s Geographically this novel is set in the isolated and rugged south coast of Tasmania. Tasmania with its weather that is often changeable, unrelenting in its cold and bleakness, is home to small towns and settlements where the people depend on the fishing industry for their livelihood. Swimming and surfing are challenging because of the weather and the temperature of the water. Parrett knows this area of Australia and Tasmania which gives the novel much of its authenticity and realism. The boys and their father live on the “scrubby fringes of civilisation” The role of water – both the ocean and the rivers – is a compelling element of the setting and engenders much of the text’s dark power. The following extracts are from an article on Favel Parrett: “It wasn't until years later, at the age of 25, that Parrett learnt to surf and became intimate with life beyond the shallows. Surfing gave her new eyes. She came to see how the sea sucked and moved with swells, with silent currents and dark undertows that lay invisible to the naked eye; the way the board rolled 3 rhythmically on the hips of the sea and how that energy radiated from wave to rider.” …If surfing gave her the power of intimate observation, the untamed coastline of southern Tasmania, once her home, provides a dark backdrop for Past the Shallows, serving as a state of purgatory for Harry and his brothers, Miles and Joe, living with their brooding, malevolent father in a tumbledown shack on the scrubby fringes of civilisation.” • The epigraph at the beginning of the story comes from the explorer D’Entrecasteaux whose name has been given to the channel of water between the south-east of the Tasmanian mainland and Bruny Island. Bruny Island – and its Southern end in particular – is a wild and untamed area which attracts tourists for these features. Its pristine waters are well known for growing mussels, scallops and abalone. • The rugged, often bleak, difficult but pristine environment of Tasmania’s south east coast is metaphorical for the brothers’ home life. Nature embodies and reflects the family’s frailties. • The characters are faced with the challenging life of abalone fishing A unity of setting compounds the tragedy and the family’s fears and experiences: there is no escape or relief or respite. The setting is important as a narrative feature especially as it rarely changes place. This unity of setting focuses the action and intensity on the small community of Bruny Island and the tension of the Curren family and household. There are rarely any light moments or different places for relief. This closed environment reinforces the family’s difficulties. The actual Curren house represents the dislocation and destruction of the family unit and this is explored in chapter 4 after Harry has returned from the Hobart Show with Aunty Jean. They unpack six bags of food indicating that this is not the usual amount of food in the house. SOCIAL SETTING Socially and culturally the novel focuses on the small, coastal settlements where the main work is associated with the fishing industry and specifically, abalone harvesting. While the final abalone meat is a delicacy and is very expensive, it is difficult work and the financial rewards can be limited. This is a culture represented by white, essentially Anglo-Saxon and conservative values where life is difficult and making a living is often precarious. This is the life of the Curren family. HISTORICAL SETTING Consider the Indigenous history of Tasmania. There is evidence showing that Indigenous people inhabited Tasmania more than 35 000 years ago. At the time of British occupation in 1803, there were between 3000 and 10 000 Indigenous people in Tasmania. This is said to be the only successful genocide in the history of mankind, where Indigenous people were treated with extreme cruelty and died out. 4 MAJOR CHARACTERS The characters Writers very carefully choose what to tell us about their characters and they make language choices to position us to view them in particular ways. Parrett creates credible, engaging, compelling, complex characters who seem like real people. They are valuable vehicles for Parrett’s perspectives on the human experience. Adolescent voices are authentic. Adult voices reveal flawed and complex humans. Parrett talks about how attached she became to the three brothers and collected items which she thought “belonged” to each boy Miles Although Miles is the middle sibling, he takes care of, and takes responsibility for, his younger brother, Harry, after his older brother Joe leaves home and the father fails substantially in caring for the two boys. After Uncle Nick’s death, Miles takes his place on the abalone boat. He is responsible for manning the boat while his father, Jeff and Martin dive below. He is fearful of the day in which he will have to dive but feels its inevitability, with fate seeming to have chosen Miles’ path. Miles wishes he could have been a carpenter like Joe or like his grandfather, who was a real craftsman of fine furniture. Miles is stuck between many demanding and converging worlds. Only a child but old enough to feel the burdens of responsibility forced upon him, Miles must navigate the pressures like a boat in a raging storm. Harry needs Miles to shield him from their father and Miles is seen shielding Harry from Dad’s abuse, creating a childhood for Harry and taking him to Stuart’s place when things get scary. This responsibility leads Miles to dive into the cold Tasman Sea to attempt to save Harry after their father pushes him overboard. Miles must also please his father who demands he works on the boat. This is despite a friend of his father’s, Mr Roberts, urging that Miles do not work on the boat as he considers it unfair. Joe takes Miles surfing and this is a brief respite for the young boy. Miles will ultimately leave the town but not before almost all he cares about is taken from him. Miles Curren - Quotes First day of school holidays. First day he must man the boat alone while the men go down. Old enough now, he must take his place. Just like his brother before him, he must fill the gap Uncle Nick left. Chapter 2 There were things that no one would teach you—things about the water. You just knew them or you didn’t and no one could tell you how to read it. How to feel it. Miles knew the water. He could feel it. And he knew not to trust it. Chapter 2 ‘Don’t you get stuck here with your dad’, he said. ‘Don’t you let him…You’re too young to be out there working, Miles. It’s not right.’ Miles felt the words sink down right inside him. ‘You’ve had it rough enough’, he said. (Mr Roberts to Miles) Chapter 11 Harry The youngest of the three Curren brothers. Harry is a sweet, innocent little boy who is neglected after the death of the boys’ Mum and left alone for the majority of the day while Dad and Miles work on the fishing boat. Although Harry is 5 terribly mistreated by Dad, he is unusually thoughtful and selfless for a child his age, preferring to spend his money on his friends and brothers rather than himself and taking care of Miles when he is ill. While he is younger and smaller than Miles, he often risks his own safety trying to defend his older brother from Dad’s abuse. Even Aunty Jean, who has a strained relationship with the Curren family, seems to adore Harry and is moved to tears by his kind spirit, which reminds Jean of her late sister. Unlike Miles and Joe, who love to surf, Harry is terrified of the water and avoids going out on the family’s boat because he is prone to seasickness. Although Harry is generally very sensitive and skittish, he is inherently curious and loves to explore nature and collect “treasures” on the beach. He shares a deep connection with animals that leads him to meet George Fuller’s dog Jake in the woods, follow him to George’s shack, and gradually befriend the lonely old man. Harry forms a close relationship with George, who becomes a warm paternal figure in the little boy’s life. It is eventually revealed that Harry is likely the biological son of Uncle Nick rather than Dad, a fact that tortures Dad and ultimately leads him to throw Harry overboard from the fishing boat in the midst of a bitterly cold winter storm. Harry drowns in the ocean despite Miles’s attempts to save him, and the loss of their beloved little brother devastates Miles and Joe. The Harry character may be viewed as representative of the metaphysical approach to life. His frequent pausing to reflect on life, the ocean, time and death in many ways seemed to be preparing Harry for death. Joe Joe had moved out when he was thirteen, leaving Miles and Harry to survive with their father and ultimately Joe leaves them. Only Joe seems to grasp at something beyond the small town where they live. Aunty Jean Jean embodies that human paradox of being in pain but not able to articulate this feeling. On the surface Jean appears hard and difficult, but she does want to help the brothers. Parrett effectively evokes these features of Jean: ï‚· She is the only female role model the boys have left. ï‚· She grieves for her sister and sees so much of her in Harry. ï‚· She loves and protects Harry but cannot be gentle or tender with him. When the boys have lunch with Jean (pp. 83–88), the reader gains a powerful insight into the character of Jean: She is strict, difficult, demands certain standards, has high expectations of the boys. There are secrets about the family tension and Miles finds baby things in the cupboard. 'He just kept thinking about the little blankets and the baby clothes and how all that stuff was perfect and clean and never used.' Jeff Jeff is characterised by cruel, vindictive, and bullying behaviour. There are several incidents that reveal this behaviour: ï‚· staring menacingly ï‚· shooting the shark ï‚· forcing Harry to drink alcohol ï‚· his overall enjoyment at seeing the boys uncomfortable. 6 Jeff - Quotes The shark hadn’t hurt him – not even a scratch. She lay on her side, her blue skin already turning grey, and Miles felt sick as he watched Jeff slice through her white underbelly with ease. Her stomach and insides slid through blood onto the deck. She was pregnant. Jeff hacked into the full womb and three pups spilled out; two dead and half eaten, the other trying to swim in its mother’s blood against the hard surface of the deck, tiny gills stretched open, black eyes searching. Jeff bent over and stabbed it through the head, grinning as its body came up on the long knife, still fighting. He chucked it at Miles and laughed as he wiped blood off his face. Miles caught the baby in his arms. It was dead now, black eyes fixed. It was fully formed, more than half a metre long, maybe only days away from being born. It would have survived if Jeff had just let it go, let it slide off the back of the boat. It had made it this far, battling its siblings, killing and feeding off them. Waiting. It would have been born strong, ready to hunt, ready to fight. Dad The Curren family is dominated by the father and his behaviour. Steven Curren epitomises the human paradoxes that are often found in families. As the only parent of Joe, Miles and Harry he is the carer and the provider but his cruelty, personal demons and behaviour create tension and conflict within the family and impact on the daily lives of his sons. Interestingly, we only read his name once when officials from the Fisheries Department visit their home. The lack of such personal reference reinforces the coldness of this man. At the centre of his behaviour is the grief, bitterness and pain involved in the death of his wife and the family secrets of what happened on that fateful night. He is a complex, deeply flawed individual who is plagued by addiction and tortured by the demons of his past wrongdoings. Dad is implied to have once been an involved, caring parent, as evidenced by Miles’s memory of his father taking care of Harry and brushing his hair when he was younger. While Dad’s current patterns of cruelty could potentially be attributed to an innate character flaw, this dramatic shift in his demeanor suggests that there was a time when he genuinely cared for his family. Then they heard Dad yelling from inside. Yelling at them, at everyone. Yelling at no one. And Miles could hear the words. They came through the brown walls, through the air, and cracked open the night: ‘I never wanted you.’ (Dad) Chapter 24 He just kept staring at Harry. And his hand moved away from Harry’s hair, moved down to the string around his neck. And he cupped it in his palm—a white pointer’s tooth. ‘It’s his’, he said, and his face went pale. ‘His.’ He let the tooth go. He stared down at Harry. ‘She was leaving, because of him. Because of you.’ Chapter 36 George George Fuller is reminiscent of the marginalised characters who have appeared in novels like Jasper Jones and To Kill a Mockingbird. Despite this early characterisation as someone to be feared, he is both caring and kind to Harry and the only person that Harry and Miles can actually turn to for help. 7 The ocean ï‚· The ocean both provides the family their livelihood but takes the life of their beloved Harry. ï‚· Miles and Joe love surfing – for them, it’s an escape from their real lives. ï‚· Joe is even planning on sailing to the South Pacific. ï‚· Parrett shows us just how fickle the ocean can be and reminds us that we have absolutely no control over it. ï‚· Harry fears the water and Miles both loves and hates it. ï‚· Miles seems particularly aware of this danger. ï‚· Each time Miles goes out on the boat, something seems to go wrong. ï‚· Harry is not allowed on the boat, because he gets seasick before they even leave the jetty. ï‚· The climactic scene, on the boat in the storm, is both page-turning and harrowing. ï‚· The ocean has been a symbol of the inner turmoil of this family and now, with a huge storm from the south approaching, this turmoil spills over into the real world. ï‚· As their father attacks the two sons in his anger, Harry takes more and more of the brunt, forcing Miles to protect his younger brother. Unsurprisingly, the two end up in the water waiting to die. ï‚· Miles is unable to save his younger brother. ï‚· Miles finds out that Harry is dead; it is an intense moment for the reader. MINOR CHARACTERS Genre ï‚· Bildungsroman novel The end of a childhood is a change that is inevitable but one that comes prematurely for some of the characters. Miles is conscripted to work on the family boat instead of enjoying the school holidays. An accident that sees a worker injured secures Miles an unwanted ongoing position on the boat. It is not until after the devastation caused by his father has passed that he is able to surf with a childhood friend and enjoy the simple teen life for a brief moment. The novel is presented in a way that places it in a state of change which Harry notices intuitively. The story surrounding the Curren family, much like the abandoned houses he sees with George, is a part of a larger changing world. Generations and ages will come and go and the events of this story are but a fleeting section of time. ï‚· Gothic novel “Gothic is preoccupied with death, personal turmoil, a sense of foreboding, and buried secrets". Most Australian Gothic stories are set in the bush or outback. Past the Shallows belongs to a coastal Gothic genre and it is set on the volatile south coast of Tasmania. The setting is wild and unpredictable. The land is also a haunted space because the settlers failed to acknowledge the Indigenous population’s ownership. The key characters are men and boys in turmoil and the beach works as both a physical and moral boundary. The coast can be a 8 menacing location, particularly at night, and in many coastal stories there are grotesque and disturbed characters such as the murderous alcoholic father in Favel Parrett’s Past the Shallows. He is trapped by his addiction to alcohol and becomes increasingly abusive in his relationship with his sons. ï‚· Family drama novel The novel is presented in a way that places it in a state of change which Harry notices intuitively. The story surrounding the Curren family, much like the abandoned houses he sees with George, is a part of a larger changing world. Generations and ages will come and go and the events of this story are but a fleeting section of time. Dad is frighteningly abusive towards his own children. Aunty Jean longs desperately to care for Miles and Harry but lacks the ability to do so. Joe similarly pities his brothers, but cannot help them in the ways in which he seems like he should be able to. ï‚· Novel Characters Setting Plot P.O.V Stylistic devices Ideas and themes The power of relationships/ The power and impact of relationships Idea vs Theme - what is the difference? A theme is an idea, concern or argument conveyed in a text. The notion of relationships forms an integral part of Past the Shallows, largely because it could be argued that our relationships with others is what defines our lives. In the novel, however, Parrett chooses to focus largely on two aspects of this theme. o The paradoxical nature of family/ The complexities of family life In Past the Shallows, the role of family is paradoxical. In many ways family represents safety and intimacy. For example the brothers’ relationship with each other, their mother and granddad. However, their relationship with their father subverts this expectation as Steven is physically abusive, cruel, and dangerous. All families have their miseries, secrets and joys, and the familial relationships between the Currens are no different. Dad is frighteningly abusive towards his own children. Aunty Jean longs desperately to care for Miles and Harry but lacks the ability to do so. Joe similarly pities his brothers, but cannot help them in the ways in which he seems like he should be able to. The loss of a mother, wife and sister can completely corrupt the family dynamics and have impacts that last long after their death. Even Mum herself was immortalised as somewhat of an angel in Miles’ mind, although it becomes clear that she was not a perfect mother either. Family life can obviously thus be extremely complex and difficult. There is no “ideal” family, and though Miles and Harry suffer terribly at the hands of Dad’s abuse, there are certainly many subdued moments of tenderness between them that redeem the life they live. This is, perhaps, something we can all relate to on some level or another, and Parrett puts this theme at the forefront of the novel in order to engage with her readers as such. o Our inherent need for nurturing, caring relationships This is mostly true of Harry, but could easily be said about the other characters, too. All Harry seems to crave is to be loved, which is something he finally finds in George when it becomes clear that Dad has no empathy for him, and Mum is no longer alive. Even Miles, at times, can be distant, both physically and An idea has a more open meaning and can be understandings, thoughts, notions, opinions, views or beliefs. 9 metaphorically. Parrett asserts that this is an intrinsic part of being human—to want love, especially when we are deprived of it. The importance of brotherhood There is a genuine care and love shared by Miles and Harry, yet Miles feels somewhat burdened by the responsibility of being the older brother. Amidst the chaos of their Dad’s alcoholism, brothers Harry, Miles, and Joe Curren are subject to rampant abuse and neglect. As their father’s behaviour grows increasingly erratic and their family structure deteriorates in the wake of their Mum and Uncle Nick’s deaths, the Curren brothers are forced to become one another’s support system, and they remain steadfastly loyal to one another. The infallible strength of their bond provides a level of solidarity and understanding that is unique to siblings, and the brothers are able to find solace in each other’s company even in the midst of traumatic circumstances. The deeply loyal brotherhood between Harry, Miles, and Joe reflects the inherent resilience of the human spirit in the face of cruelty, while also highlighting how some burdens cannot be shouldered alone. With the three brothers at its core, Past the Shallows shows how hardship can strengthen sibling bonds, and how this brotherhood is a crucial element of enduring life’s challenges. Despite quintessential moments of conflict and sibling rivalry between Miles and Joe, Miles’s relationship with his older brother serves as an escape from his troubled home life and the forced drudgery of his job on the family fishing boat. Joe (who, at thirteen, moved out of Dad’s house to live with the boys’ Granddad) is concerned for his brothers’ wellbeing, and often takes Miles out to surf and fish in order to give his brother a temporary escape from his difficult life. These shared serene moments with his older brother are a respite for Miles, providing him with a sense of comfort and stability that he does not receive from Dad at home or at work on the boat. While family is not purely a force of good in the novel—after all, most of the brothers’ struggles stem from their father, an abusive alcoholic—the boys’ relationships with one another show how family can also serve as a lifeline in the midst of pain. Since quality time with Joe is what buoys Miles in an otherwise heartbreaking life, he is resentful and afraid when his older brother builds a boat and plans on leaving Bruny Island to escape the painful reality of their disintegrated family. Although Joe is nineteen and it is ostensibly normal for him to leave home, the value Miles places on their brotherhood turns this act into a personal affront that threatens to destabilize Miles’s sense of security. Miles’s deep distress surrounding Joe’s departure speaks to how vital Joe’s brotherly friendship has been in keeping Miles afloat emotionally, highlighting the way that family bonds can be a balm for pain and suffering. Similar to his brotherhood with Joe, Miles’s relationship with his younger brother, Harry, is in many ways characteristic of a typical bond between siblings. The abuse they both receive from Dad, however, creates a profound, unspoken loyalty between Miles and Harry that gives each of them a sense of purpose and a reason to persevere through their mistreatment. Though the youngest of the three brothers, Harry is mature beyond his years and often makes sweet gestures toward Miles such as buying him a goodie bag at the boat races, caring for him when he is sick, and even trying to defend him from Dad’s ire. While Miles is sometimes impatient and frustrated by Harry’s naïveté, his little brother’s thoughtful treatment of him is a nurturing presence that helps fill the void of Mum’s death and Dad’s neglect. 10 Miles returns the favour of Harry’s kindness, remaining loyal and protective of his little brother even under the looming threat of violence from Dad. After a particularly harrowing episode of drunken violence from Dad and his equally abusive friend Jeff, Miles tenderly packs a bag for Harry and leaves his little brother at his friend Stuart’s house (where he knows he will be safe) and returns home alone to face the brunt of Dad’s drunken wrath. Despite the abuse that the two younger Curren brothers continually face, their brotherly bond gives them the strength and resilience they need to endure their circumstances. This strong bond of solidarity that Miles and Harry share culminates in Miles facing his phobia of the deep ocean to save Harry after Dad throws him overboard, a moment that parallels Miles’s childhood memory of Joe saving him when he fell in the river. Although he is unable to save Harry from drowning, this act is the ultimate display of Miles’s steadfast love, courage, and self-sacrifice as he risks his own life in an attempt to rescue his little brother. Although family is the cause of Harry and Miles’s hardship in this circumstance, as Dad is the one to throw Harry overboard, the brothers’ close familial bond remains a source of resilience and comfort for them both as they desperately try to stay alive in the freezing water. The novel resists a clean ending, as brotherhood ultimately does not save the day and vanquish evil. Instead, the ending is steeped in both heartache and hope, reflecting the realistic complexity of family life. While Dad’s abusive nature wreaks havoc on the Curren family and eventually kills Harry, the unyielding loyalty between Miles and Joe is made even stronger by the tragedy of their little brother’s death. Miles and Joe’s brotherhood allows them to band together to continue the legacy of Harry’s kind spirit, overcome the painful memories of their traumatic upbringing, and ultimately break free of Bruny Island. Kunkle, Jenn. "Past the Shallows Themes: Brotherhood, Loyalty, and Hardship." LitCharts. LitCharts LLC, 6 Apr 2019. Web. 19 Jul 2021. The fragility of childhood innocence versus the realities of adult life Childhood innocence centres as one of the main thematic concerns that Parrett demonstrates, largely due to the fact that the rituals of growth and maturation are ones that every human undergoes, no matter their ethnicity, gender or age. In the novel, this is largely seen in Miles’ character arc. He constantly battles with balancing his responsibilities as the oldest son living in the Curren house and maintaining his youth—he is still only (around)thirteen, after all. In fact, he is first introduced as he is reflecting on the “First day of school holidays. First day he must man the boat alone while the men go down,” the juxtaposition emphasising his struggle in understanding his childhood innocence and responsibilities that he is forced into. Miles wishes he could live in the idyllic, rose-tinted fantasy of the world that his younger self may have adopted (hence the ethereal images of the memories of his mother) but is quickly aware of how easily this view can be fractured. This, however, does not stop him from longing for the simple days of childhood. In a moment of vulnerability that we seldom see with Miles otherwise, Parrett says, “He was just a kid. A baby. He was nothing,” as the truncated sentences and blunt tone reveals how he is forced into growing up too quickly and now has difficulty grounding his own identity. The notion is also true of Harry, who is the epitome of childhood naivety and innocence. Parrett has an obvious intent to encourage the reader to care for Harry as to make his death all the more shocking and inhumane when it occurs. “Harry had a way about him. A way that made you promise to take care of him,” 11 Miles states, the second person pronoun inviting the reader to understand Harry’s virtue that, tragically, acts as his ultimate downfall. It is much easier to adopt the bitter hardness of Dad than it is to continue to appreciate the world with childlike wonder as Harry does. It is clear that Parrett is making the commentary that, as unfair as it is, the most pure and wholesome things in the world are also the most vulnerable. The centrality of conflict, violence and destruction to human existence Past the Shallows is a rather nuanced depiction of physical abuse against children. However, it is important to note that Parrett is not simply providing an illustration of this issue, but what it represents in terms of a more universal understanding of the pains of being human. She ultimately makes clear that, as horrific as it may seem, violence and destruction are inherent parts of our existences. Of course, this is the most obvious in how prevalent Dad’s abuse is, and how widely spread the implications of such terrible actions are on the children. Some would even argue that he is a two-dimensional caricature of what abusers look and act like. However, it is also important to understand that we only see Dad through the eyes of the young children, Harry and Miles, who may not fully comprehend why their father lashes out in such a way. From their perspectives of him, we can only garner that his first and only response to losing his wife is to turn to anger rather than confront it in a healthy way. Consider the role of the recurring metaphor of the ocean in terms of Parrett’s purpose to reveal just how cruel some aspects of humanity can be. At the novel’s climax, there is an overwhelming sense of just how intrinsic to the human experience these notions of conflict and violence are. In one of the rarer moments of description and detail, Parrett states, “Waves came in sets and in this kind of surf, where the water suddenly hit shallow, you could get rogue waves. Bombs. Sometimes twice the size of the rest.” By comparing the waves to bombs, the composer makes clear her intention to turn the focus to the rabid nature of the external world as a metaphor for the unpredictability of our lives. The tragedy of abuse and addiction Dealing with grief/ The long-term effects of grief and loss/ Coping with grief Perceptions of monstrosity Rather than talking about ‘monstrosity’, you should say something about the idea of monstrosity. For example, ‘Society’s perception of monsters is radically different to the realities of characters’ hearts.’ The contrast between Steven, the boys’ father, and George Fuller, the town ‘monster’, demonstrate that true monstrosity is not external, but intrinsic. Despite George’s deformities, Harry finds a place of respite, love and protection in his home. On the other hand, his father, a figure that traditionally represents love and protection, is monstrous in reality. George’s kind and caring nature, despite being initially presented as a reclusive monster, conveys a larger commentary on the fact that humans should take to treat others with kindness and not judge a book by its cover. 12 The impact of past events on human’s ability to move forward or not/The unresolved past and its intrusion on the present Memory as an emotional driver The pain of isolation The failure of communication and its effects Human truths: love, compassion, understanding, fear, loss, anger Past the Shallows is a rather nuanced depiction of physical abuse against children. However, it is important to note that Parrett is not simply providing an illustration of this issue, but what it represents in terms of a more universal understanding of the pains of being human. She ultimately makes clear that, as horrific as it may seem, violence and destruction are inherent parts of our existences. Of course, this is the most obvious in how prevalent Dad’s abuse is, and how widely spread the implications of such terrible actions are on the children. Some would even argue that he is a two-dimensional caricature of what abusers look and act like. However, it is also important to understand that we only see Dad through the eyes of the young children, Harry and Miles, who may not fully comprehend why their father lashes out in such a way. From their perspectives of him, we can only garner that his first and only response to losing his wife is to turn to anger rather than confront it in a healthy way. Consider the role of the recurring metaphor of the ocean in terms of Parrett’s purpose to reveal just how cruel some aspects of humanity can be. At the novel’s climax, there is an overwhelming sense of just how intrinsic to the human experience these notions of conflict and violence are. In one of the rarer moments of description and detail, Parrett states, “Waves came in sets and in this kind of surf, where the water suddenly hit shallow, you could get rogue waves. Bombs. Sometimes twice the size of the rest.” By comparing the waves to bombs, the composer makes clear her intention to turn the focus to the rabid nature of the external world as a metaphor for the unpredictability of our lives. The devastating impact of secrecy in small towns Though still incredibly important to the novel as a whole, this theme is more subtle than the ones previously mentioned. It is explored through passing moments or quips made by the characters, probably as to reflect the generally subdued culture of small town environments. A disturbing, yet somewhat understandable, moral paradox lies in this thematic concern—the other residents of the town are undoubtedly aware of the abuse and trauma that has befell the Curren family, yet do virtually nothing to intervene. Parrett is making an important commentary about social pressures and even the phenomenon of the bystander effect and how it is amplified in such a localised, claustrophobic setting. “Don’t you let him …” Mr Roberts tells Miles, “You’re too young to be out there working, Miles. It’s not right.” Parrett then goes on to end the paragraph with a truncated sentence, “And he let Miles go,” the line break emphasising the significance of this action. Similarly, “[Stuart’s mum] was worrying, having one of her moments where nothing happened and just went still for a bit.” Truthfully, neither Mr Roberts, nor Stuart’s mother, nor any other member of the 13 community, are necessarily immoral characters in recognising the abuse of the children but not acting upon their ethical obligations. However, Parrett is making the bold statement about how humans often fail to do what is right, particularly in situations where everybody knows everybody’s business. This is arguably the most devastating impact of secrecy—our constant refusal to confront the issues that we face collectively and individually. Interacting with nature and the landscape can be challenging/ The interrelationship between people and place. The role of nature in Past the Shallows gives a dramatic backdrop to the story as well as holds a mirror to the characters’ thoughts, feelings and behaviours. The ocean acts in some ways as a storyteller, reflecting lives and cultures in the Tasmanian community. Nature is a double-edged sword, providing beauty, substance and a livelihood for community as well as presenting an imposing threat to the residents. It is Harry who finds the beauty in nature above all. Although he is aware of the perils of nature, spooked by water after the stories of his uncle’s disappearance, he still takes time to enjoy natural beauty. Harry is struck by the appearance of a cormorant. Out of time and place, the bird in some ways will represent him. He seeks treasures on the beach and stores them at home. He watches the southern lights and finds comfort in them during troubled times. He is enamoured with a puppy and lets it lead him to George, a source of nurturing and safety. Joe and Miles find their own source of beauty in nature. When they ride the waves and integrate with them they find escape and cleansing. Nature in return is unpredictable. On one hand it can provide the abalone and salmon that will help the struggling family and yet, with a single motion, it can throw a rogue wave and a shark into the boat causing loss and injury. Nature will not relent its treasures easily for the divers as they risk their lives to battle seas and currents in the precarious profession. Parrett suggests that man’s place in nature is best when surrendered to its power, like a surfer on a wave or a boy sitting in an orchard. Resisting nature is presented as futile. Furthermore, nature is presented as a blueprint by which humans will act. A tempestuous sea is a dangerous temper. A baby shark slaughtered unnecessarily when it could have survived reflecting the struggle of childhood. Water that was always there. Always everywhere. The sound and the smell and the cold waves making Harry different. And it wasn’t just because he was the youngest. He knew the way he felt about the ocean would never leave him now. It would be there always, right inside him. Chapter 1 Harry picked up an abalone shell, the edges loose and dusty in his hands. And every cell in his body stopped. Felt it. This place. Felt the people who had been here before, breathing and standing live where he stood. People who were dead now. Long gone. And Harry understood it, right down in his guts, that time ran on forever and that one day he would die. Chapter 1 It was fully formed, more than half a yard long, maybe only days away from being born. It would have survived if Jeff had just let it go, let it slide off the back of the boat. It had made it this far, battling its siblings, killing and feeding off them. Waiting. It would have been born strong, ready to hunt, ready to fight. (The shark’s babies) Chapter 9 He lived for this, for these moments when everything stops except your heart beating and time bends and ripples—moves past your eyes frame by frame and 14 you feel beyond time and before time and no one can touch you. (Miles, in the surf) Chapter 22 But ultimately it wasn’t up to you. This ocean could hold you down for as long as it liked, and Miles knew it. Chapter 37 Impact Think about controversial moments in the novel that had an impact on you, and moments where you felt empathy for any of the characters. Some examples 😊: The epigraph of the text is immediately confronting as there is a sense of foreboding evoked by the diction and descriptive language. The same foreboding is evoked by the short sentences on page 10. 'Miles knew the water. He could feel it. And he knew not to trust it.' Right from the start we empathise with Harry as he is 'different' and left on the beach when his brothers go surfing. His loneliness is further explored in the part where Harry sees the cormorant. (p.p. 2-3) Interpretation/ Reading Gender reading Applying a feminist reading: Feminist literary scholarship makes us aware of aspects of the text we may not have noticed such as the gendered nature of some imagery. In this novel the mother is absent, the aunt is distant and the world is masculine. The sea is a male dominion, providing food with men as the ‘hunters’. Moreover, the novel’s lack of female characters reflects a more masculine culture. In fact, many of the central themes and aspects of the novel express this, from the exploration of violence and brotherhood. This is done both to adhere to the realism of the environment—fishermen villages are generally more masculine, after all—and to deconstruct the notion of masculinity itself. Postcolonial reading Page 4 - Reference to the history of the Indigenous people of Tasmania. 'People who were long dead now. Long gone.' Psychoanalytical reading Intertextual reading Texts are not created in vacuum. Authors are conscious of a world of textuality from their own reading and the texts they read build on others. ï‚· The sea A powerful motif and often represents the experience of human struggle. The struggle is often physical with humans – usually males – fighting the elements of the sea and either conquering or losing the struggle. What follows is usually an 15 emotional awakening, as the characters involved come to understand something within themselves or about their relationship with the world. In many texts the sea is a central character. The sea is not just a setting or backdrop: it creates a space for discovery, connecting different places but also connecting with the mind. The sea also has a spiritual connection through the Bible with Jesus’ disciples as fishermen who depended on the sea for their sustenance. More recent Australian writers, especially Tim Winton, have also used the sea as an essential part of their texts. Indeed Favel Parrett’s second novel, When the Night Comes (Hachette, 2014) again uses the sea and the Southern Ocean as a powerful creative force in her work. ï‚· Family Another important experience that unites us all is the sense of family, and yet family can also be a source of disunity. Language features DESCRIPTIVE LANGUAGE and DICTION Consider the use of strong yet simple word choices and the power of the adjectives. The words in bold below contribute to the creation of meaning in this evocative opening: Out past the shallows, past the sandy-bottomed bays, comes the dark water – black and cold and roaring. Rolling out the invisible paths. The ancient paths to Bruny, or down south along the silent cliffs, the paths out deep to the bird islands that stand tall between nothing but water and sky. Wherever rock comes out of deep water, wherever reef rises up, there is abalone. Black-lipped soft bodies protected by shell. Treasure. FIGURATIVE LANGUAGE Metaphors The sea as a metaphor and a character. The sea can almost be seen as another character and indeed is a strident metaphor for the complexity of the boys’ lives. During the novel's climactic scene, six-foot swells threaten to swamp and capsize Miles's Dad's fishing boat. When one such wave overcomes the side, Parrett writes that "a mountain of water broke the sides." In this metaphor, Parrett illustrates how Miles perceives the immense weight and looming quality of the wave by likening the water to a mountain. As Miles swims with Harry on his back, trying desperately to beat hypothermia and make it to safety, Parrett writes that "Miles was in the orange light that came before darkness. The sun burning brightly before it fell below the earth." In this metaphor, Parrett illustrates how Miles perceives the onset of hypothermia as a feeling akin to watching the sun's dying rays before it falls below the horizon line—a metaphor that suggests Miles's body is shutting down, on the verge of death. 16 Simile  ‘“Dad had Harry by the shoulders and he shook him like a rag doll.” The simile, ‘like a rag doll,’ is used to create violent visual imagery that enhances Steven’s damaging actions towards his son, Harry, as he is enraged during one of their abalone fishing ventures.  While describing the ocean-side setting of Past the Shallows, Parrett writes that the shoreline cliffs are "like giant guardians standing tall." In this simile, Parrett emphasizes the protective function of cliffs by personifying them as giant figures who stand guard against the turbulent and often violent sea.  After Dad pushes Harry overboard, Miles goes to save him by climbing onto the ship's rail and jumping. However, Dad holds him back: "He climbed onto the rails, was ready to jump, but Dad grabbed him up— held him like stone." In this simile, Parrett underscores the crushing strength with which Dad holds Miles down by comparing Dad's grip to stone.  To illustrate Miles's enthusiasm for surfing, Parrett writes that "Miles could get into his wetsuit so fast, even when it was damp and stuck to your skin like glue." In this simile, Parrett captures the unpleasant feeling of putting on a damp neoprene rubber wetsuit by comparing the material's tight, wet, friction-causing material to glue. Personification IMAGERY The Pressure of Water (Tactile Imagery) While describing Miles's caution around the turbulent ocean and his awareness of invisible currents, Parrett writes that "Miles had only been down once, but that was enough. He’d been scared of the darkness and of the kelp wrapping around his legs. He’d been scared of the heavy feeling in his chest. And it made his head buzz like crazy, the pressure. The weight of all that water." In this example of tactile imagery, Parrett evokes the physical feeling of weight and pressure on Miles's body when he was submerged deep underwater. Hot Chips and Gravy (Olfactory Imagery) In a scene where Joe comes to pick up Miles after work, Miles gets in Joe's van and can immediately smell the hot chips (fries) and gravy Joe has bought for him. In this example of olfactory imagery, Parrett immerses the reader in Miles's perspective and articulates his hunger by showing how he focuses on the comforting smell of warm food after a long day of work. Fish Turning Bright White (Visual Imagery) After going fishing with George, Harry, who doesn't like to eat fish, stands by while George cooks the fish. First enticed by the surprisingly pleasant scent of the cooking fish, Harry watches "in amazement as something that had been so ugly, the colour of mud, turned bright white as it cooked." In this example of visual imagery, Parrett immerses the reader in Harry's childish perspective, showing 17 how the process of a fish changing color as it cooks can appear like magic to a child. Firm and Sweet Flesh (Gustatory Imagery) Even though Harry had been concerned about being made to eat the fish he and George reeled in, Parrett writes that "the flesh was firm and sweet and Harry had never tasted anything so delicious." In this example of gustatory imagery, Parrett conveys how Harry's anxiety around eating something unfamiliar is soothed by the surprisingly delicious taste and texture of the pan-fried fish. IRONY "Glad to see you working hard" (Verbal Irony) Forced to help on the boat while Dad, Jeff, and Martin dive for abalone, Miles self-consciously tries to look busy because he knows he will be criticized for being lazy. He offers to help Martin clean his catch, but Martin insists it isn't Miles's job and tells Miles to have a cup of tea. Jeff, a much crueller man than Martin, surfaces just as Miles lets his guard down and takes a sip while looking at some seals. In an instance of verbal irony, in which the speaker means the opposite of what he says, Jeff says, "Glad to see you working hard, Miles." With this comment, Jeff reinforces Miles's fear that he would be criticized for not working as hard as the men. George Knows Harry's Name (Situational Irony) When Harry follows Jake the dog to George Fuller's shack on the outskirts of town, Harry is hesitant to come too close to the property, as he has heard frightening rumors about George. While playing with the dog, Harry notices George step outside. Harry runs away fast, but he is confused when George seems to be calling Harry's name. In this instance of situational irony, Harry is haunted by the unexpected revelation that George knows who Harry is when Harry has no memory of ever meeting George. Mum Was Eloping with Uncle Nick the Night They Both Died (Situational Irony) As the novel progresses, Miles pieces together the fragments of memory he has from the night his mother crashed her car and died. While he had believed Dad's story that Uncle Nick coincidentally also died the same night because he went to check the moorings on the boat during a swell, Miles finally recalls how Uncle Nick had been in the car with him, Mum, and Harry. He remembers how Nick and Mum had touched each other flirtatiously. With the details that the car was stuffed with luggage and Mum had talked to the boys about how much they would enjoy Hobart, Parrett points the reader to the conclusion that Mum and Uncle Nick had an affair, and were leaving town with Miles and Harry to start a new life. Moreover, Miles's Dad ran Mum's vehicle off the road and into the tree, then murdered Uncle Nick, who had survived the crash that killed Mum. In this multi-layered instance of situational irony, Miles realizes he had accepted false narratives concerning Mum and Nick's deaths while he meanwhile held in his memory the truth of his father's guilt. Uncle Nick is Harry's Biological Father (Situational Irony) In addition to the dramatic revelation that Dad is somehow involved in Mum's and Uncle Nick's deaths, Parrett concludes the novel with a further instance of situational irony by revealing through an accumulation of evidence that Uncle Nick was Harry's biological father. Miles remembers how Nick lovingly stroked Harry's cheek when he got in the car the night Nick was eloping with Mum. Dad also lets his resentment for Harry be known by repeatedly shouting about how 18 he never wanted Harry, and he takes his anger out on Harry with greater violence than he does Miles, his actual son. METONYMY MOTIF ï‚· The ocean/water/unpredictable sea is a recurring motif ï‚· The trauma of losing their mother ï‚· Cuttlefish ï‚· Shark’s tooth ï‚· Food ï‚· Nausea Early in the novel, the reader learns that Harry suffers from sea and car sickness. The motif of Harry's contextual nausea gains a deeper significance once Parrett depicts the connection between his sickness and his trauma. Having been in the car on the night his mother died, Harry gets car sick because he is trying to repress having to access his traumatic memory. Similarly, Harry's nausea on the boat speaks to the anxiety and danger he feels in his stomach when trapped in a context with Dad, an authority figure he cannot trust. ï‚· Memory Memory is highlighted as a powerful emotional force in the lives of human beings and also functions as a narrative element that develops the storyline. ï‚· pp 8–9 – the night everything changed ï‚· p 77 – Miles sees the flowers on the tree ï‚· p 87 – Harry gets a haircut ï‚· p 90–93 – Grandpa’s treasures ï‚· pp 129–30 – Miles relives a conversation with his grandad ï‚· pp 166–8 – a photo triggers Miles’ memory ï‚· pp 186–7 – flashbacks from the car crash ï‚· pp 213–4 – the dangers of remembering ï‚· pp 229–32 – a significant realisation ï‚· pp 240–43 – fond childhood memories ï‚· pp 247–9 – returning to a moment. ï‚· Repression Throughout Past the Shallows, characters repress the memories and emotions in an attempt to distance themselves from addressing the unpleasant reality of how their father treats them and how their mother died. Parrett establishes the motif early in the book when Miles reflects on the danger of the ocean what happened to Uncle Nick, stopping his thoughts before he relives the memory of his mother's car crash. Similarly, Harry becomes carsick as Aunty Jean's passenger on the road their mother died on, and he shuts his eyes and dissociates from the moment until it passes. As the novel progresses, Miles's traumatic memories surface more frequently and in greater detail. In the end, Parrett resolves the motif by having Miles finally accept the truth of his father's involvement in 19 Mum's and Nick's deaths—a truth Miles had needed to repress because of his and Harry's reliance on Dad as their only living parent. PARADOX Paradoxes and inconsistences” throughout the entire novel. For example: ï‚· Dad’s constant anger and abuse, despite the warmth and comfort we often associate with familial relationships ï‚· Miles being torn between the childhood innocence he misses and the adult reality he is forced into ï‚· Aunty Jean’s desire to help the boys while simultaneously being harsh and somewhat irritating ï‚· The ocean—a metaphor for the human experience in general—being both beautiful, calm and healing and extremely violent, unpredictable and volatile ï‚· The other members of the town being able to recognise the family’s toxicity yet being unable or unwilling to help in any major capacity ï‚· The past and the present constantly melding and intruding on each other REPETITION Epigraph – past; black; deep; The repetition of the word “knew” indicates a personal relationship with the ocean. Miles is connected to the ocean on a deep level, meaning that he understands that it can betray those who enter it. Page 10 SYNECDOCHE SYMBOLISM The water symbolises the relationship and the complexity of the relationship that Miles has with his father. He knows his father and he knows equally not to trust him. The Unpredictable Sea The turbulent, powerful ocean in which Miles perceives both serenity and danger is a symbol for his dysfunctional relationship with his father. Early in the novel, Parrett writes that Harry gets seasick and so can't go out on the boat, while Miles has a much higher tolerance for the unsteady waters. The boys' relationships to the water reflect how they relate to Dad. While Harry spends most of his time avoiding Dad's abuse by roaming far from the ocean in the rural landscape or spending time with safe authority figures, Miles feels obligated to put up with Dad's variable mood and outbursts of violence. Miles also finds occasional peace at sea, particularly when the abalone catch is plentiful and he is able to leave work to surf with Joe. Ultimately, the symbolic connection between the threat of the sea and the father is brought together when Dad pushes Harry into the water during a life-threatening swell. In this scene, Dad's violence is matched by the violence of the ocean storm. White Lilies In Past the Shallows, white lilies symbolize mourning. While Mr. Roberts drives him home, Miles braces himself to pass the tree where his mother crashed her 20 car and died. He is traumatized to see that someone has brought white lilies to the tree, as the flowers trigger his memory of how people brought white lilies to the tree immediately following her death as a gesture of condolence. George Fuller also has a vase of white lilies in his home, suggesting that he, as someone who knew Mum, may have been the one who brought the lilies on the tree to mark the anniversary of her death. White Shark-Tooth Necklace The white shark-tooth necklace that Miles and Harry find in Mum's car seat is a symbol of the truth of Mum's death. When they find the shark tooth among the parts of Mum's crashed vehicle, which Granddad stored in his garage, Miles and Harry recognize the necklace's significance but aren't immediately able to recall what exactly it means. Miles keeps the tooth and eventually gives it to Harry to wear while they go out on the boat during the swell. Dad discovers the necklace on Harry's neck and understands immediately that it belonged to Uncle Nick. Miles remembers how Nick gave him the necklace when he got in the car with Mum and the four of them set off for the town of Hobart. The tooth necklace provides the key to unlocking the full truth of what happened the night she died: once Miles makes the connection, he recalls that Dad pulled Nick from the vehicle and murdered him as revenge. Light While Harry, Miles, and Joe’s trepidation toward Bruny Island’s unpredictable water parallels their fear of Dad’s erratic behaviour, the sun’s rays are a bright presence that imbues the boys with happy memories of their Mum. They often notice the light and feel comforted by it as they endure the island’s brutal elements, just as they are comforted by Mum’s love even in her absence. This is particularly evident when Harry’s fear of the dark is quelled by the sight of the southern lights outside his bedroom window as he remembers seeing them with his mother in the past. For the Curren brothers, the presence of the light that reflects off of the dark, turbulent ocean water serves as a both a literal source of warmth in the frigid winter and a figurative reminder of optimism, strength, and renewal. Abalone Shell Symbolises the cycle of life, self-reliance and independence, and healing Seahorse Strength, power, perseverance, teaches us that we have the rtesources with us to overcome adversities no matter how small we feel, power of the father figure, observation and awareness. Vulnerability While seahorses have a tough exoskeleton that protects them from many predators, they are still extremely vulnerable. For every 1,000 seahorses who are born, only one will survive to reach maturity. Crabs are one of their natural predators, but humans are their bigger threat.2 Seahorses are not strong swimmers either, but they’re strong tails enable them to hold on to aquatic plants and other anchors to steady themselves. The seahorse spirit reminds you that while people can appear to have tough shells, the fact is – we all have vulnerabilities. It’s important to recognize this reality in ourselves and in others. 21 Recognizing your own vulnerabilities and acknowledging them is a way to empower and protect yourself, as well as to grow as a human being. Medium and Mode Medium= the means of communicationspoken word, graphics, electronic/digital forms E.g. If the medium is radio, then the mode is speech or music. If the medium is novel, then the mode is writing. Texts can be multi-modal. Consider the effectiveness of the medium and/or mode in presenting ideas, perspectives, issues, etc. Medium = Novel Mode = written text Mode = listening, speaking, reading/viewing and writing/creating Mood Point of view Perspective The way we see the world is shaped by our values, attitudes and assumptions. It is a culturally learnt position that shapes the reader's view of a text. It creates a position of preferred reading. Perspectives are also presented to readers through the conventions used in the text. Purpose Nostalgia for a past when they were loved and cared for and had a seemingly normal childhood (when their mother was still alive). Point of view is interesting as it can move between characters. This book is written in the third person; it is a limited (from the perspective of two characters) third person narration. Omniscient third person narrations are useful because even though they are not from one character’s perspective, they can direct readers from one character to another by changing point of view and letting us see into the minds of each character. These different characters become focalisers who make us focus on different perspectives through their individual points of view. We can sense how different characters are thinking and can imagine the way they see the world. We are made aware of their thoughts as they encounter different things and react. ï‚· ï‚· Children’s perspective Alternating between Harry and Miles again gives us more insight into the “individual human experiences” and how their different expectations and personalities influence the way certain situations are seen. What is Parrett’s purpose and intention? ï‚· Parrett’s purpose in writing the novel is to convey the idea that storytelling plays a role in helping humanity understand themselves. • To tell a story involving real human despair in a challenging and at times, unforgiving landscape 22 • • Representations The way ideas are portrayed and represented in texts, using language devices, forms, features and structures of texts to create specific views about characters, events and ideas. Representation embeds attitudes, beliefs and values and reinforces or challenges existing values and ways of thinking or may attempt to reshape them. To build the reader’s empathy and understanding of one another To make the reader realise that sometimes life is miserable and that is very difficult to overcome those challenges Representation of human experiences in the novel ï‚· Coping with loss and grief ï‚· Unresolved tension ï‚· Impact of tragedy ï‚· Cruel use of power and control ï‚· Abuse of authority as a parent: paradox ï‚· Abuse of authority as an adult e.g. Jeff and Steven force Harry to drink alcohol ï‚· A family torn/under stress/in pain/unable to articulate/express their grief and despair especially Steven Curren; this also affects Aunty Jean and Dad's behaviour affects everyone ï‚· How the past and secrets can impact and destroy ï‚· Fear of the sea and its impact: Harry and Miles ï‚· Escape from the family and the conflicts: Joe ï‚· The power and impact of personal revenge e.g. Steven’s anger/hatred towards Harry because of what has happened in the past and Jeff’s revenge/anger against nature and the shark on the boat ï‚· Cruelty and wanton destruction of nature by a human who should have more respect ï‚· The need for people to find caring, compassionate, and nurturing friendships: Harry and George and Jake ï‚· Life is complex with mysteries and uncertainties ï‚· Life can be unfair ï‚· The challenges of growing up The ocean represents the human experiences of: • Death • Fear • Tragedy • Cruelty • Risk • Necessity • Terror • Joy and escape • Violence • Conflict In Chapter 9 this combination of various human experiences of violence, conflict and revenge and the emotions of terror, fear, anger and unreasoned rage are represented in the incident involving Jeff and the shark. Parrett positions us to see the contrast between how Martin kills the fish versus Jeff’s wanton and chilling cruelty. Jeff’s killing of the pregnant shark is partly in revenge for the shark’s attack. For a brief time the shark has control as if it represents the power of nature: The eye of a champion- a wolf of the sea. Not only does Jeff use an unfair advantage of a rifle but he laughs. Ironically through 23 the incident they lose the abalone and salmon as if the ocean also has its revenge. The true cruelty occurs when Jeff “hacked into the full womb” of the shark and Jeff’s violent attack is sickening. The baby shark could have lived but Jeff enjoys this revenge on the ocean. Martin suffers a broken leg which in turn will mean that Miles will have to work longer and more frequently on the boat. Harry, Miles and Joe represent victims of abuse and the father is a representation of what abusers look like (also the duality within the character of such abusers). Jeff represents everything that is evil in human nature. The absence of the mother represents an absence of nurture, love and care in the boys lives. The ocean represents the duality in nature, human nature and in family relationships. The storm in the climatic moment of the novel is both pathetic fallacy and a culmination of the volatile situation within the Curren family. Stylistic Features • Parrett’s use of short sentences and repetition represents family tension e.g. the secrets surrounding the death of uncle Nick: Not one bit. Not his beanie. Not his boots. • • • • • Her sentences also represent the paradox of the ocean. Miles understands the dangers of water especially in not trusting it and this will be important compared to Harry and Joe: Miles knew the water. He could feel it. And he knew not to trust it. Longer sentences are used to represent characters’ reverie and represent the poignancy of their loss: The incident in the goat pen at the Hobart Regatta is a tender and sweet moment which enables Harry to fondly remember times with his mother. The sentence where Harry reminisces is long as it is echoing Harry’s reverie about a world which does not exist. This long, flowing sentence linked by five conjunctions- and- gives it a slow, gentle mood. The area of this township is all poor, depressing and generally dilapidated: “scrub and shacks…kit homes, most tiny, bare fibro, unpainted. ….Their gardens full of rusty car shells, dead tractors, decaying boats marooned on land." This is a community under stress because of the challenges of making a living and the Curren family are under even more stress so Parrett creates this landscape and context to highlight the tension and conflict. Parrett’s style is established from the opening page and this style continues throughout the book: Parrett’s prose - powerful, sparse and understated, deceptively simple, sometimes violent and yet also life affirming. Language is accessible as it shapes the characters and their interaction with each other, and the physicality of the ever-present ocean adds to the novel’s power and interest Through Parrett’s experiences of this area of Australia she brings realism and authenticity to her descriptions Later Miles goes surfing to escape the oppression and tension of his family and this passage represents the paradoxes of the ocean: the best surfing for 24 this area is in winter but this is the most inhospitable time to be surfing so the sea is almost laughing at Miles in seducing him to surf in these freezing conditions: The cold water bit at his hands and feet as he began the paddle. Winter brought massive swells, awesome to watch and not much fun to be in, but today the bluff was still like liquid mercury. Near perfect three-foot lines. The paddle was easy. The waves were easy. The ocean was at peace. The repetition and the use of short sentences builds the suspense and thrill of the ocean and its dual pleasure and pain. Text Structure The opening and ending echo each other and create a bookend effect, sometimes also known as a circular plot as the story returns to where it started, but the slight differences in the ending imply that all has not stayed the same. The opening immediately establishes some important features of Parrett’s narrative style: Out past the shallows, past the sandy-bottomed bays, comes the dark water – black and cold and roaring. Rolling out the invisible paths. The ancient paths to Bruny, or down south along the silent cliffs, the paths out deep to the bird islands that stand tall between nothing but water and sky. Wherever rock comes out of deep water, wherever reef rises up, there is abalone. Black-lipped soft bodies protected by shell. Treasure. The novel ends with the same evocative description with a change: Out past the shallows, past the sandy-bottomed bays, comes the dark water – black and cold and roaring. Rolling out the invisible paths. To somewhere warm. To somewhere new. So, the ending gives a structural symmetry to the story and a resolution to the tragedy The story is also non-linear with flashbacks as Miles remembers his mother and later the accident. Miles’ recollection of the memories of Mum often fractures the narrative in quite startling ways—this could reflect on how our past never truly leaves us and can intrude on our present actions when we least expect it. More broadly, it could even suggest the inherent confusion and unpredictability that comes with being human. Structure: • Non-linear and the flashbacks are important in providing background to the mystery and secrets of what impacts on the family: something sinister and tragic has happened to result in the death of their mother. So, the reader learns about the past at the same time as the past comes into focus. • This narrative framework introduces some of the key ideas including secrets and the power of secrets to damage the family as they do not deal with them. Memory and Structure: • There are two main secrets- one involving Uncle Nick and the other involving the mother and her death. Clearly both experiences have affected the family. 25 As the story progresses there are hints and suggestions about how Nick and the mother died and why. As early as Chapter 2 this secrecy and dark mystery is represented in the references to not only Uncle Nick having died but that seems to be linked to the Curren family’s economic situation: “the bank owned the boat now. Because the bank owned everything.” Tone/ Voice Values and Beliefs Power Relationships Working for social justice/working to change society Protecting the rights of children Parents and children; grown-ups and children; Indigenous people and colonisers; nature and humans; humans and nature Resources: 1. Kunkle, Jenn. "Past the Shallows Plot Summary." LitCharts. LitCharts LLC, 6 Apr 2019. Web. 4 May 2025. 2. ReadingAustralia © Copyright ETANSW 2018 26
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