NOTICE & NOTE BACKGROUND J a c k Lo n d o n (1876-1916) not only wrote adventure stories, he lived them. London traveled as o hobo across the United States, tried his luck in the Klondike Gold Rush, escaped a typhoon on a seal-hunting ship, and soiled the South Seas in his own boat, the Snark. London's formal education was limited, but he read widely using public libraries. Many of his works, including the story "To Build a Fire," hove themes involving survival and humans versus nature. His novel The Call of the Wild (1903) brought London fame and is still one of his best-known works. London died in Californio at age 40. J /u oslo SETTING A PURPOSE l i© fs 6elul AU 9 /a A !p v usln H P!cjv© A ol al al J p o ls iiq s J U 1 ᄋ 〕 6u!qsllqn U nsJeHUE SU2 1H © :S1!P J〕 ^EI.A <U <U As you read, pay attention to the details that depict the protagonist's dealings with the natural setting as well as details that contrast the actions o f the man with those o f the dog. Notice & Note Use the side margins to notice and note signposts in the text. I ay h ad broken cold and gray, exceedingly cold an d gray, ; hen the m an tu rn ed aside from the m ain Yukon trail and w clim bed th e high earth bank, w here a dim and little-traveled trail led eastw ard through the fat spruce tim berland. It was a steep bank, and he paused for breath at the top, excusing the act to D himself by looking at his watch. It was nine o’clock. There was no S. a_ -& sun or h in t o f sun, though there was no t a cloud in the sky. It was a clear day, and yet there seem ed an in ta n g ib le pall1 over th e face o f things, a subtle gloom that m ade the day dark, an d th at was due to the absence o f sun. This fact did no t w orry the m an. He was used to the lack o f sun. It had been days since he h ad seen the sun, an d he knew that a few m ore days m ust pass before th at cheerful orb, due south, would just peep above the skyline and dip im m ediately from view. intangible (m-tan ja-bal) adj. un ab le to be defined or understood. pall: overspreading atmosphere of gloom and depression. To Build a Fire 461 NOTICE & NOTE 2 The m an flung a look back along the way he h ad come. The Yukon lay a mile wide and hidden under three feet of ice. On top of this ice were as many feet of snow. It was all pure white, rolling in gentle undulations where the ice jams of the freeze-up had formed. North and south, as far as his eye could see, it was unbroken white, save for a dark hairline that curved and twisted from around the spruce-covered island to the south, and that curved and twisted away into the north, where it disappeared behind another spruce-covered island. This dark hairline was the trail—the m ain trail—that led south five hundred miles to the Chilkoot Pass, Dyea, and salt water; and that led north seventy miles to Dawson, and still on to the north a thousand miles to Nulato, and finally to St. Michael on the Bering Sea, a thousand miles and half a thousand more. A N A LY Z E C H A R A C TER Annotate: Mark words or phrases in paragraph 3 that describe the man. 3 strangeness an d weirdness of it all—m ade no im pression on the m an. It was not because he was long used to it. He was a newcomer in the land, a cheechako,2 and this was his first winter. The trouble with him was that he was without imagination. He was quick and alert in the things of life, but only in the things, and not in the significances. Fifty degrees below zero meant eighty-odd degrees of frost. Such fact impressed him as being cold and uncomfortable, and that was all. It did not lead him to meditate upon his frailty as a creature of temperature, and upon m ans frailty in general, able only to live within certain narrow limits of heat and cold, and from there on it did not lead him to the conjectural3 field of immortality and mans place in the universe. Fifty degrees below zero stood for a bite of frost that hurt and that must be guarded against by the use of mittens, earflaps, warm moccasins, and thick socks. Fifty degrees below zero was to him just precisely fifty degrees below zero. That there should be anything more to it than that was a thought that never entered his head. Infer: What does this description of the man suggest about how he will fare during his journey? A N A LY Z E SETTIN G Annotate: In paragraphs 4-5, mark words that describe the weather conditions. Predict: How will the weather affect the events of the story? But all th is—the m ysterious, far-reaching hairline trail, the absence of sun from the sky, the trem endous cold, and the 4 As he tu rn ed to go on, he spat speculatively. There was a sharp, explosive crackle that startled him. He spat again. And again, in the air, before it could fall to the snow, the spittle crackled. He knew that at fifty below, spittle crackled on the snow, but this spittle had crackled in the air. Undoubtedly it was colder than fifty below—how m uch colder he did not know. But the temperature did not matter. He was b o u n d for the old claim 4 on the left fork o f H enderson Creek, | where the boys were already. They had come over across the divide from the Indian Creek country, while he had come the roundabout way to take a look at the possibilities of getting out logs in the spring % 2 cheechako: Chinook jargon for “newcomer, , or “tenderfoot.” 3 conjectural: based on guesswork or uncertain evidence. 4 claim: piece of land staked out by a miner. 462 Unit 5 J f NOTICE & NOTE OKO5 S' S. ljs l qn ~ .E UE SU2 JJnsJeH o_ I 1 0 H© -& from the islands in the Yukon. He would be into camp by six o’clock; a bit after dark, it was true, but the boys would be there, a fire would be going, and a hot supper would be ready. As for lunch, he pressed his hand against the protruding bundle under his jacket. It was also under his shirt, wrapped up in a handkerchief and lying against the naked skin. It was the only way to keep the biscuits from freezing. He smiled agreeably to himself as he thought of those biscuits, each cut open and sopped in bacon grease, and each enclosing a generous slice of fried bacon. He plunged in among the big spruce trees. The trail was faint. A foot of snow had fallen since the last sled had passed over, and he was glad he was without a sled, traveling light. In fact, he carried nothing but the lunch wrapped in the handkerchief. He was surprised, however, at the cold. It certainly was cold, he concluded, as he rubbed his num b nose and cheekbones with his m ittened hand. He was a warm-whiskered man, but the hair on his face did not protect the high cheekbones and the eager nose that thrust itself aggressively into the frosty air. At the m ans heels trotted a dog, a big native husky, the proper wolf dog, gray coated and without any visible or tem peram ental difference from its brother, the wild wolf. The animal was depressed by the trem endous cold. It knew that it was no time for traveling. Its instinct told it a truer tale than was told to the m an by the m ans judgment. In reality, it was not merely colder than fifty below zero; it was colder than sixty below, than seventy below. It was seventy-five below zero. Since the freezing point is thirty-two above zero, it m eant that one hundred and seven degrees of frost obtained. The dog did not know anything about thermometers. Possibly in its brain there was no sharp consciousness of a condition of very cold such as was in the m ans brain. But the brute had its instinct. It experienced a vague but menacing ap p reh en sio n that subdued it and made it slink along at the m ans heels, and that made it question eagerly every unwonted5 movement of the man, as if expecting him to go into camp or to seek shelter somewhere and build a fire. The dog had learned fire, and it wanted fire, or else to burrow under the snow and cuddle its w arm th away from the air. The frozen moisture of its breathing had settled on its fur in a fine powder of frost, and especially were its jowls, muzzle, and eyelashes whitened by its crystaled breath. The m ans red beard and moustache were likewise frosted, but more solidly, the deposit taking the form of ice and increasing with every warm, moist breath he exhaled. Also, the m an was chewing tobacco, and the muzzle of ice held his lips so rigidly that he was unable to clear his chin when he expelled the juice. The result was that a crystal beard of the color and A N A LY Z E C H A R A C TER Annotate: Mark details in paragraph 6 that describe the dog's behavior. Analyze: How does the dog's behavior differ from the man's? apprehension (ap-ri-hen'shan) n. fear or anxiety; dread. unwonted: unusual. To Build a Fire 463 NOTICE & NOTE A N A LYZ E C H A R A C TER Annotate: In paragraph 9, mark the description of the man's thought process. Infer: What motivations do the man's thoughts reveal? How could these lead to a dilemma that advances the plot? 6 appendage: something attached to another object. 7 spirit thermometer: alcohol thermometer. In places where the temperature often drops below the freezing point of mercury, alcohol is used in thermometers. 8 reiterated: repeated. 464 Unit 5 o l -s ii o . s no H © JJn s Je H wls u Predict: What do you think will happen, based on the details abo 니t the springs? How do these details help develop the theme? S . n mark the clues that convey how dangerous the trail is. MJ UM 0ul A N A LY Z E SETTIN G Annotate: In paragraph 11, solidity of amber was increasing its length on his chin. If he fell down it would shatter itself, like glass, into brittle fragments. But he did not m ind the appendage.6 It was the penalty all tobacco chewers paid in that country, and he had been out before in two cold snaps. They had not been so cold as this, he knew, but by the spirit therm om eter7 at Sixty Mile he knew they had been registered at fifty below and at fifty-five. He held on through the level stretch of woods for several miles, crossed a wide flat, and dropped down a bank to the frozen bed of a small stream. This was Henderson Creek, and he knew he was ten miles from the forks. He looked at his watch. It was ten o’clock. He was making four miles an hour, and he calculated that he would arrive at the forks at half past twelve. He decided to celebrate that event by eating his lunch there. The dog dropped in again at his heels, with a tail drooping discouragement, as the man swung along the creek bed. The furrow of the old sled trail was plainly visible, but a dozen inches of snow covered the marks of the last runners. In a m onth no m an had come up or down that silent creek. The m an held steadily on. He was not much given to thinking, and just then particularly, he had nothing to think about save that he would eat lunch at the forks and that at six o’c lock he would be in camp with the boys. There was nobody to talk to; and, had there been, speech would have been impossible because of the ice muzzle on his mouth. So he continued monotonously to chew tobacco and to increase the length of his amber beard. Once in a while the thought reiterated8 itself that it was very cold 10 and that he had never experienced such cold. As he walked along he rubbed his cheekbones and nose with the back of his mittened hand. He did this automatically, now and again changing hands. But rub as he would, the instant he stopped his cheekbones went numb, and the following instant the end of his nose went numb. He was sure to frost his cheeks; he knew that, and experienced a pang of regret that he had not devised a nose strap of the sort Bud wore in the cold snaps. Such a strap passed across the cheeks, as well, and saved them. But it didn’t m atter much, after all. W hat were frosted cheeks? A bit painful, that was all; they were never serious. Empty as the m ans m ind was of thought, he was keenly 11 observant, and he noticed the changes in the creek, the curves and bends and tim ber jams, and always he sharply noted where he placed his feet. Once, coming around a bend, he shied abruptly, like a startled horse, curved away from the place where he had been walking, and retreated several paces back along the trail. The creek, .E -& NOTICE & NOTE p 2 SJ a< t: cpssuo}! © m js/AqAe2 :sl!p .l〕 al i l•^ cu cn l ln EO 6 〕ul q SU U2 30H© IJHsJeH 1|!若芝 a_ -& he knew, was frozen clear to the bottom —no creek could contain water in that arctic winter—but he knew also that there were springs that bubbled out from the hillsides and ran along under the snow and on top of the ice of the creek. He knew that the coldest snaps never froze these springs, and he knew likewise their danger. They were traps. They hid pools of water under the snow that might be three inches deep, or three feet. Sometimes a skin of ice half an inch thick covered them, and in turn was covered by the snow. Sometimes there were alternate layers of water and ice skin, so that when one broke through he kept on breaking through for a while, sometimes wetting himself to the waist. 12 That was why he had shied in such panic. He had felt the give under his feet and heard the crackle of a snow-hidden ice skin. And to get his feet wet in such a temperature m eant trouble and danger. At the very least it m eant delay, for he would be forced to stop and build a fire, and under its protection to bare his feet while he dried his socks and moccasins. He stood and studied the creek bed and its banks, and decided that the flow of water came from the right. He reflected awhile, rubbing his nose and cheeks, then skirted to the left, stepping gingerly and testing the footing for each step. Once clear of the danger, he took a fresh chew of tobacco and swung along at his four-mile gait. panic (paninc) n. sudden, overpowering feeling of fear. To Build a Fire 465 0 NOTICE & NOTE 13 In the course o f the next tw o hours he came upon several sim ilar traps. Usually the snow above the hidden pools had a sunken, candied appearance that advertised the danger. Once again, however, he had a close call; and once, suspecting danger, he compelled the dog to go on in front. The dog did not want to go. It hung back until the man shoved it forward, and then it went quickly across the white, unbroken surface. Suddenly it broke through, floundered to one side, and got away to firmer footing. It had wet its forefeet and legs, and almost immediately the water that clung to it turned to ice. It made quick efforts to lick the ice off its legs, then dropped down in the snow and began to bite out the ice that had formed between the toes. This was a m atter of instinct. To perm it the ice to remain would mean sore feet. It did not know this. It merely obeyed the mysterious prompting that arose from the deep crypts9 of its being. But the m an knew, having achieved a judgment on the subject, and he removed the m itten from his right hand and helped tear out the ice particles. He did not expose his fingers more than a minute, and was astonished at the swift numbness that smote10 them. It certainly crypts: hidden recesses. 0smote: powerfully struck. © 5polsJsnllyMAml!lz :sl!pal 〕 a 6 e . E l AJ I SU2 30H© U UI0〕 6J s llq n d JJnsJeH S. SE -& 466 Unit 5 NOTICE & NOTE was cold. He pulled on the m itten hastily, and beat the hand savagely across his chest. 14 At twelve oclock the day was at its brightest. Yet the sun was too far south on its w inter journey to clear the horizon. The bulge o f the earth intervened betw een it and H enderson Creek, w here the m an w alked u n d er a clear sky at n oon and cast no shadow. At h alf past twelve, to the m inute, he arrived at the forks o f the creek. He was pleased at the speed he h ad m ade. If he kept it up, he w ould certainly be w ith the boys by six. He unbuttoned his jacket an d shirt an d drew forth his lunch. The action consum ed no m ore th an a quarter of a m inute, yet in th at b rief m om ent the num bness laid hold o f the exposed fingers. He did not put the m itten on, bu t instead struck the fingers a dozen sharp sm ashes against his leg. T hen he sat dow n on a snow -covered log to eat. The sting th at followed upon the striking o f his fingers against his leg ceased so quickly that he was startled. He had had no chance to take a bite o f biscuit. He struck the fingers repeatedly and retu rn ed them to the m itten, baring the o th er h an d for the pu rp o se o f eating. He tried to take a m outhful, b u t the ice m uzzle prevented. He h ad forgotten to build a fire and thaw out. He chuckled at his foolishness, and as he chuckled he no ted the num bness creeping into the exposed fingers. Also, he no ted th at the stinging w hich had first com e to his toes w hen he sat dow n was already passing away. He w ondered w hether the toes were w arm or num b. He m oved them inside the m occasins and decided th at they were num b. 15 He pulled the m itten on hurriedly and stood up. He was a bit frightened. He stam ped up and dow n until the stinging returned (> A N A LY Z E C H A R A C TER Annotate: In paragraph 14, mark what the man forgets to do and how he feels. Infer: What does this action tell yᄋ니 about the man and how nature might be affecting him? What effect will these actions have on him? into the feet. It certainly was cold, was his thought. That man AU U10〕6 u ls lq n S . l us no y = ◎ u n s Je H l o . .E is -& from Sulphur C reek had spoken the tru th w hen telling how cold it som etim es got in the country. A nd he h ad laughed at him at the time! T hat showed one m ust no t be too sure o f things. T here was no m istake about it, it was cold. He strode up and dow n, stam ping his feet and threshing his arm s, until reassured by the retu rn in g w arm th. T hen he got out m atches and proceeded to m ake a fire. From the undergrow th, w here high w ater o f the previous spring had lodged a supply o f seasoned twigs, he got his firewood. W orking carefully from a small beginning, he soon had a roaring fire, over w hich he thaw ed the ice from his face and in the protection o f w hich he ate his biscuits. For the m om ent the cold of space was outw itted. T he dog took satisfaction in the fire, stretching out close enough for w arm th and far enough away to escape being singed. 16 W hen the m an had finished, he filled his pipe and took his com fortable tim e over a smoke. T hen he pulled on his m ittens, settled the earflaps o f his cap firm ly about his ears, and to o k the creek trail up the left fork. T he dog was disappointed and yearned back tow ard the fire. This m an did no t know cold. Possibly all the generations To Build a Fire 467 NOTICE & NOTE of his ancestry had been ignorant of cold, of real cold, of cold one hundred and seven degrees below freezing point. But the dog knew; all its ancestry knew, and it had inherited the knowledge. And it knew that it was not good to walk abroad in such fearful cold. It was the time to lie snug in a hole in the snow and wait for a curtain of cloud to be drawn across the face of outer space whence this cold came. On the other hand, there was no keen intimacy between the dog and the man. The one was the toil slave of the other, and the only caresses it had ever received were the caresses of the whiplash and of harsh and menacing throat sounds that threatened the whiplash. So the dog made no effort to communicate its apprehension to the man. It was not concerned in the welfare of the man; it was for its own sake that it yearned back toward the fire. But the man whistled, and spoke to it with the sound of whiplashes, and the dog swung in at the m ans heels and followed after. A N A LYZ E SET T IN G Annotate: In paragraph 16, mark the words that contrast what the dog and the man understand about the cold. Summarize: How does this paragraph support the influence of Charles Darwin's theories in naturalist writings? 17 The m an took a chew o f tobacco and proceeded to start a new amber beard. Also, his moist breath quickly powdered with white his mustache, eyebrows, and lashes. There did not seem to be so many springs on the left fork of the Henderson, and for half an hour the man saw no signs of any. And then it happened. At a place where there were no signs, where the soft, unbroken snow seemed to advertise solidity beneath, the m an broke through. It was not deep. He wet himself halfway to the knees before he floundered out to the firm crust. 18 He was angry, and cursed his luck aloud. He h ad hoped to get into camp with the boys at six o’clock, and this would delay him an hour, for he would have to build a fire and dry out his footgear. This was im p era tiv e at th at low tem perature—he knew th at m uch; and imperative (im-per"9-tiv) adj. of great importance; essential. he turned aside to the bank, which he climbed. On top, tangled in the underbrush about the trunks of several small spruce trees, was a high-w ater deposit o f dry firew ood—sticks and twigs, principally, Analyze: How does this tone reflect the author's attitude about man's ability to control nature? 468 Unit 5 H e w orked slowly and carefully, keenly aware o f his danger. Gradually, as the flame grew stronger, he increased the size of the twigs with which he fed it. He squatted in the snow, pulling the twigs out from their entanglement in the brush and feeding directly to the flame. He knew there must be no failure. W hen it is seventy-five below zero, a m an m ust not fail in his first attem pt to build a fireᅳ that is, if his feet are wet. If his feet are dry, and he fails, he can run VS .E o_ ◎ UnsJeH u Elyv UOJ noH story's tone. 19 S. l ! s q qn LA N G U A G E CO N V EN TIO N S Annotate: Mark details in paragraph 19 that reveal the AJ U1 6 but also larger portions of seasoned branches and fine, dry, last years grasses. He threw down several large pieces on top of the snow. This served for a foundation and prevented the young flame from drowning itself in the snow it otherwise would melt. The flame he got by touching a match to a small shred of birch bark that he took from his pocket. This burned even more readily than paper. Placing it on the foundation, he fed the young flame with wisps of dry grass and with the tiniest dry twigs. -& NOTICE & NOTE Auedluo〕 5 .E UESUS 30 H© llsjlqn UnsJeH Q_ -& along the trail for a h alf a mile and restore his circulation. But the circulation o f wet and freezing feet cannot be restored by ru n n in g w hen it is seventy-five below. No m atter how fast he runs, the wet feet will freeze the harder. 20 All this th e m an knew. The old-tim er on Sulphur C reek had told him about it the previous fall, and now he was appreciating the advice. A lready all sensation had gone out o f his feet. To build the fire, he h ad been forced to remove his m ittens, an d the fingers had quickly gone num b. His pace o f four m iles an h o u r h ad k ep t his heart pum ping blood to the surface o f his body an d to all the extrem ities. But the in stant he stopped, the action o f the pu m p eased dow n. The cold o f space sm ote the unprotected tip o f the planet, and he, being on th at unprotected tip, received the full force o f the blow. T he blood o f his body recoiled before it. The blood was alive, like the dog, and like the dog it w anted to hide away and cover itself up from the fearful cold. So long as he walked four m iles an hour, he pu m p ed that blood, willy-nilly,11 to the surface; b u t now it ebbed away a n d sank dow n into the recesses o f his body. T he extrem ities were the first to feel its absence. His wet feet froze the faster, and his exposed fingers nu m b ed the faster, though they h ad n o t yet begun to freeze. Nose and cheeks w ere already freezing, while the skin o f all his body chilled as it lost its blood. 21 But he was safe. Toes and nose and cheeks w ould be only touched by th e frost, for the fire was beginning to b u rn w ith strength. He was feeding it twigs the size o f his finger. In an o th er m inute he w ould be able to feed it w ith branches the size o f his wrist, and then he could rem ove his wet footgear, and, while it dried, he could keep his naked feet w arm by the fire, rubbing them at first, o f course, w ith snow. The fire was a success. He was safe. He rem em bered the advice o f the oldtim er on Sulphur Creek, and smiled. The old-tim er h ad been very serious in laying dow n th e law th at no m an m ust travel alone in the K londike after fifty below. Well, here he was; he h ad h ad the accident; he was alone; an d he h ad saved himself. Those old-tim ers w ere rather w om anish, som e o f them , he thought. All a m an h ad to do was to keep his head and he was all right. Any m an w ho was a m an could travel alone. But it was surprising, the rapidity w ith w hich his cheeks and nose w ere freezing. A nd he h ad no t tho u g h t his fingers could go lifeless in so short a tim e. Lifeless they were, for he could scarcely m ake th em m ove together to grip a twig, and they seem ed rem ote from his body and from him . W hen he touched a twig, he h ad to look and see w h ether or n o t he had hold o f it. The wires w ere pretty well dow n betw een him and his finger ends. 0 extremity (lk-strem l-te) n. the outermost or farthest point or portion; the hand or foot. A N A LY Z E C H A R A C T E R Annotate: In paragraph 21, mark what the old-timer said and how the man reacts to it. Evaluate: How does the man's attitude toward the old-timer's advice continue to evolve? 1willy-nilly: without choice. To Build a Fire 469 All o f w hich counted for little. There was the fire, snapping and crackling and prom ising life w ith every dancing flame. He started to untie his m occasins. They were coated w ith ice; the thick G erm an socks were like sheaths o f iron halfway to the knees; and the m occasin strings were like rods o f steel all tw isted and knotted as by som e conflagration.12 For a m om ent he tugged w ith his num b fingers, then, realizing the folly o f it, he drew his sheath knife. 23 But before he could cut the strings it happened. It was his own fault, or, rather, his mistake. He should no t have built the fire under the spruce tree. He should have built it in the open. But it had been easier to pull the twigs from the bush an d drop them directly on the fire. Now the tree under w hich he h ad done this carried a weight o f snow on its boughs. No w ind h ad blow n for weeks, and each bough was fully freighted. Each tim e he had pulled a twig he had com m unicated a slight agitation to the tree—an im perceptible agitation, so far as he was concerned, but an agitation sufficient to bring about the disaster. H igh up in the tree one bough capsized its load o f snow. This fell on the boughs beneath, capsizing them . This process continued, spreading out and involving the whole tree. It grew like an avalanche, and it descended w ithout w arning upon the m an and the fire, and the fire was blotted out! W here it had burned was a m antle o f fresh and disordered snow. 24 The m an was shocked. It was as though he had just heard his own sentence o f death. For a m om ent he sat and stared at the spot where the fire had been. T hen he grew very calm. Perhaps the old-tim er on Sulphur C reek was right. If he h ad only had a trail mate, he w ould have been in no danger now. The trail m ate could have built the fire. Well, it was up to him to build the fire over again, and this second tim e there m ust be no failure. Even if he succeeded, he w ould m ost likely lose som e toes. His feet m ust be badly frozen by now, and there w ould be som e tim e before the second fire was ready. 25 Such were his thoughts, but he did n o t sit and th in k them . He was busy all the tim e they were passing th ro u g h his m ind. H e m ade a new foundation for a fire, this tim e in the open, w here no treacherous tree could blot it out. Next he gathered d ry grasses and tiny twigs from the high-w ater flotsam .13 He could no t bring his fingers together to pull them out, but he was able to gather them by the handful. In this way he got m any rotten twigs and bits o f green m oss th at were undesirable, but it was the best he could do. He w orked methodically, even collecting an arm ful o f the larger branches to be used later w hen the fire gathered strength. A nd all the w hile the dog sat and w atched 22 LA N G U A G E C O N VEN TIO N S Annotate: Mark the sentences in paragraph 24 that indicate the story's tone. Analyze: Is the tone still consistent or has it changed? If it has changed, how so? 12conflagration: large fire. 13high-water flotsam: branches and debris washed ashore by a stream or river during the warm months, when the water is high. 470 Unit 5 NOTICE & NOTE u > n s eo . 〕 l U2 H0H © llsjlq n cj U n sJe H u .f .E ii -& him, a certain yearning wistfulness in its eyes, for it looked upon him as the fire provider, and the fire was slow in coming. 26 W hen all was ready, the m an reached in his pocket for a second piece of birch bark. He knew the bark was there, and, though he could not feel it with his fingers, he could hear its crisp rustling as he fumbled for it. Try as he would, he could not clutch hold of it. And all the time, in his consciousness, was the knowledge that each instant his feet were freezing. This thought tended to put him in a panic, but he fought against it and kept calm. He pulled on his mittens with his teeth, and threshed his arms back and forth, beating his hands with all his might against his sides. He did this sitting down, and he stood up to do it; and all the while the dog sat in the snow, its wolf brush of a tail curled around warmly over its forefeet, its sharp wolf ears pricked forward intently as it watched the man. And the man, as he beat and threshed with his arms and hands, felt a great surge of envy as he regarded the creature that was warm and secure in its natural covering. 27 After a time he was aware of the first faraway signals of sensation in his beaten fingers. The faint tingling grew stronger till it evolved into a stinging ache that was excruciating, but which the m an hailed with satisfaction. He stripped the m itten from his right hand and fetched forth the birch bark. The exposed fingers were quickly going num b again. Next he brought out his bunch of sulphur matches. But the trem endous cold had already driven the life out of his fingers. In his effort to separate one match from the others, the whole bunch fell in the snow. He tried to pick it out of the snow, but failed. The dead fingers could neither touch nor clutch. He was very careful. He drove the thought of his freezing feet, and nose, and cheeks, out of his mind, devoting his whole soul to the matches. He watched, using the sense of vision in place of that of touch, and when he saw his fingers on each side of the bunch, he closed them —that is, he willed to close them, for the wires were down, and the fingers did not obey. He pulled the m itten on the right hand, and beat it fiercely against his knee. Then, with both mittened hands, he scooped the bunch of matches, along with much snow, into his lap. Yet he was no better off. 28 After some manipulation he managed to get the bunch between the heels of his m ittened hands. In this fashion he carried it to his mouth. The ice crackled and snapped when by a violent effort he opened his mouth. He drew the lower jaw in, curled the upper lip out of the way, and scraped the bunch with his upper teeth in order to separate a match. He succeeded in getting one, which he dropped on his lap. He was no better off. He could not pick it up. Then he devised a way. He picked it up in his teeth and scratched it on his leg. Twenty times he scratched before he succeeded in lighting it. As it flamed he held it with his teeth to the birch bark. But the burning brim stone A N A LY Z E S E T T IN G Annotate: Mark the sentences in paragraph 27 that depict the man's struggle with nature. Draw Conclusions: How do these details represent naturalist ideas? To Build a Fire 471 NOTICE & NOTE W ORDS OF THE W ISER Notice & Note: Mark the advice the "old-timer on Sulphur Creek" had offered to the man. Contrast: What did the main character think of the warning initially, and what does he think now? 14spasmodically: in a sudden, violent manner; fitfully. 15apathetically: with little interest or concern; indifferently. 472 Unit 5 J E0 M CES U21ICTH0© H 〕 6ulsndynsJeH went up his nostrils and into his lungs, causing him to cough spasmodically.14 The match fell into the snow and went out. 29 The old-tim er on Sulphur Creek was right, he thought in the m om ent of controlled despair that ensued: After fifty below, a man should travel with a partner. He beat his hands, but failed in exciting any sensation. Suddenly he bared both hands, removing the mittens with his teeth. He caught the whole bunch between the heels of his hands. His arm muscles, not being frozen, enabled him to press the hand heels tightly against the matches. Then he scratched the bunch along his leg. It flared into flame, seventy sulphur matches at once! There was no wind to blow them out. He kept his head to one side to escape the strangling fumes, and held the blazing bunch to the birch bark. As he so held it, he became aware of sensation in his hand. His flesh was burning. He could smell it. Deep down below the surface he could feel it. The sensation developed into pain that grew acute. And still he endured it, holding the flame of matches clumsily to the bark that would not light readily because his own burning hands were in the way, absorbing most of the flame. 30 At last, w hen he could endure no m ore, he jerked his hands apart. The blazing matches fell sizzling into the snow, but the birch bark was alight. He began laying dry grass and the tiniest twigs on the flame. He could not pick and choose, for he had to lift the fuel between the heels of his hands. Small pieces of rotten wood and green moss clung to the twigs, and he bit them off as well as he could with his teeth. He cherished the flame carefully and awkwardly. It meant life, and it must not perish. The withdrawal of blood from the surface of his body now made him begin to shiver, and he grew more awkward. A large piece of green moss fell squarely on the little fire. He tried to poke it out with his fingers, but his shivering frame made him poke too far, and he disrupted the nucleus of the little fire, the burning grasses and tiny twigs separating and scattering. He tried to poke them together again, but in spite of the tenseness of the effort, his shivering got away with him, and the twigs were hopelessly scattered. Each twig gushed a puff of smoke and went out. The fire provider had failed. As he looked apathetically15 about him, his eyes chanced on the dog, sitting across the ruins of the fire from him, in the snow, making restless, hunching movements, slightly lifting one forefoot and then the other, shifting its weight back and forth on them with wistful eagerness. 31 The sight of the dog put a wild idea into his head. He remembered the tale of the man, caught in a blizzard, who killed a steer and crawled inside the carcass, and so was saved. He would kill S. ^ 0 1 0 〕J6slldensJeHUESU01 30H© 3. -& the dog and bury his hands in the warm body until the numbness went out of them. Then he could build another fire. He spoke to the dog, calling it to him; but in his voice was a strange note of fear that frightened the animal, who had never known the m an to speak in such a way before. Something was the matter, and its suspicious nature sensed danger_ it knew not what danger, but somewhere, somehow, in its brain arose an apprehension of the man. It flattened its ears down at the sound of the m ans voice, and its restless, hunching movements and the liftings and shiftings of its forefeet became more pronounced; but it would not come to the man. He got on his hands and knees and crawled toward the dog. This unusual posture again excited suspicion, and the animal sidled mincingly16 away. 32 The m an sat up in the snow for a m om ent and struggled for calmness. Then he pulled on his mittens, by means of his teeth, and got up on his feet. He glanced down at first in order to assure himself that he was really standing up, for the absence of sensation in his feet left him unrelated to the earth. His erect position in itself started to drive the webs of suspicion from the dogs mind; and when he spoke peremptorily,17 with the sound of whiplashes in his voice, the dog rendered its customary allegiance and came to him. As it came within reaching distance, the m an lost his control. His arms flashed out to the dog, and he experienced genuine surprise when he discovered that his hands could not clutch, that there was neither bend nor feeling in the fingers. He had forgotten for the m om ent that they were frozen and that they were freezing more and more. All this happened quickly, and before the animal could get away, he encircled its body with his arms. He sat down in the snow, and in this fashion held the dog, while it snarled and whined and struggled. 33 But it was all he could do, hold its body encircled in his arms and sit there. He realized that he could not kill the dog. There was no way to do it. W ith his helpless hands he could neither draw nor hold his sheath knife nor throttle the animal. He released it, and it plunged wildly away, its tail between its legs and still snarling. It halted forty feet away and surveyed him curiously, with ears sharply pricked forward. The m an looked down at his hands in order to locate them, and found them hanging on the ends of his arms. It struck him as curious that one should have to use his eyes in order to find out where his hands were. He began threshing his arms back and forth, beating the m ittened hands against his sides. He did this for five minutes, violently, and his heart pum ped enough blood up to the surface to put a stop to his shivering. But no sensation was aroused in his hands. He had an impression that they hung like weights on the A N A LY Z E SET T IN G Annotate: Mark the point in paragraph 31 where the narrative shifts from the man's perspective to the dog's perspective. Compare: One naturalist idea is that humans are simply animals. How do the thoughts of the man and the instincts of the dog suggest that London views them both as animals trying to survive? 16sidled mincingly: moved sideways with small steps. 17peremptorily: in a commanding way. To Build a Fire 473 NOTICE & NOTE A N A LY Z E C H A R A C TER Annotate: Mark the words in paragraph 34 that show a shift in the man's attitude. Evaluate: How do the man's actions reflect a change in his attitude? What underlying motivations drive his choices and actions now? ends of his arms, but when he tried to run the impression down, he could not find it. 34 A certain fear o f death, dull and oppressive, cam e to him . This fear quickly became poignant18 as he realized that it was no longer a mere m atter of freezing his fingers and toes, or of losing his hands and feet, but that it was a matter of life and death, with the chances against him. This threw him into a panic, and he turned and ran up the creek bed along the old, dim trail. The dog joined in behind and kept up with him. He ran blindly, without intention, in fear such as he had never known in his life. Slowly, as he plowed and floundered through the snow, he began to see things again—the banks of the creek, the old tim ber jams, the leafless aspens, and the sky. The running made him feel better. He did not shiver. Maybe, if he ran on, his feet would thaw out; and, anyway, if he ran far enough, he would reach the camp and the boys. W ithout doubt he would lose some fingers and toes and some of his face; but the boys would take care of him, and save the rest of him when he got there. And, at the same time, there was another thought in his m ind that said he would never get to the camp and the boys; that it was too many miles away, that the freezing had too great a start on him, and that he would soon be stiff and dead. This thought he kept in the background and refused 18poignant: painfully affecting feelings; touching. S: i■ ; yI I I : ; 圓 " 474 Unit 5 © NOTICE & NOTE to consider. Sometimes it pushed itself forward and dem anded to be heard, but he thrust it back and strove to think of other things. 35 It stru ck him as curious th at he could ru n at all on feet so frozen that he could not feel them when they struck the earth and took the weight of his body. He seemed to him self to skim along above the surface, and to have no connection with the earth. Somewhere he had once seen a winged Mercury,19 and he wondered if M ercury felt as he felt when skimming over the earth. 36 His th eo ry o f ru n n in g until he reached cam p and the boys had one flaw in it: He lacked the endurance. Several times he stumbled, and finally he tottered, crum pled up, and fell. W hen he tried to rise, he failed. He must sit and rest, he decided, and next time he would merely walk and keep on going. As he sat and regained his breath, he noted that he was feeling quite warm and comfortable. He was not shivering, and it even seemed that a warm glow had come to his chest and trunk. And yet, when he touched his nose or cheeks, there was no sensation. Running would not thaw them out. Nor would it thaw out his hands and feet. Then the thought came to him that the frozen portions of his body must be extending. He tried to keep this thought 19Mercury: in Roman mythology, messenger of the gods, who is depicted wearing winged sandals and a winged hat. To Build a Fire 475 NOTICE & NOTE A N A LYZ E S ETTIN G Annotate: Mark details in paragraph 37 that indicate the man's fate is sealed. Analyze: In what ways has the setting driven the plot and led to this moment? A N A LYZ E C H A R A C TER Annotate: Mark details in paragraph 38 that show the man is dying. Draw Conclusions: How do his thoughts signal the resolution of the story? What is the man's final realization? Unit 5 V — cn © lloH 476 S. uollj 20anesthetic: medication that causes loss of the sensation of pain. 0 i 6 u l llqn<J JJnsJeH AI IU UES down, to forget it, to think of something else; he was aware of the panicky feeling that it caused, and he was afraid of the panic. But the thought asserted itself, and persisted, until it produced a vision of his body totally frozen. This was too much, and he made another wild run along the trail. Once he slowed down to a walk, but the thought of the freezing extending itself made him run again. 37 And all the time the dog ran with him, at his heels. W hen he fell down a second time, it curled its tail over its forefeet and sat in front of him, facing him, curiously eager and intent. The warmth and security of the animal angered him, and he cursed it till it flattened down its ears appeasingly. This time the shivering came more quickly upon the man. He was losing in this battle with the frost. It was creeping into his body from all sides. The thought of it drove him on, but he ran no more than a hundred feet when he staggered and pitched headlong. It was his last panic. W hen he had recovered his breath and control, he sat up and entertained in his m ind the conception of meeting death with dignity. However, the conception did not come to him in such terms. His idea of it was that he had been making a fool of himself, running around like a chicken with its head cut off—such was the simile that occurred to him. Well, he was bound to freeze anyway, and he might as well take it decently. W ith this newfound peace of m ind came the first glimmerings of drowsiness. A good idea, he thought, to sleep off to death. It was like taking an anesthetic.20 Freezing was not so bad as people thought. There were lots worse ways to die. He pictured the boys finding his body next day. Suddenly he 38 found him self with them, coming along the trail and looking for himself. And, still with them, he came around a turn in the trail and found himself lying in the snow. He did not belong with himself anymore, for even then he was out of himself, standing with the boys and looking at himself in the snow. It certainly was cold, was his thought. W hen he got back to the States, he could tell the folks what real cold was. He drifted on from this to a vision of the oldtim er on Sulphur Creek. He could see him quite clearly, warm and comfortable, and smoking a pipe. “You were right, old hoss; you were right,” the m an mumbled to 39 the old-tim er of Sulphur Creek. Then the m an drowsed off into what seemed to him the most 40 comfortable and satisfying sleep he had ever known. The dog sat facing him and waiting. The brief day drew to a close in a long, slow twilight. There were no signs of a fire to be made, and, besides, never in the dogs experience had it known a m an to sit like that in the snow and make no fire. As the twilight drew on, its eager yearning for the fire mastered it, and with a great lifting and shifting of forefeet, it NOTICE & NOTE whined softly, then flattened its ears down in anticipation of being chidden21 by the man. But the m an remained silent. Later, the dog w hined loudly. And still later it crept close to the m an and caught the scent of death. This made the animal bristle and back away. A little longer it delayed, howling under the stars that leaped and danced and shone brightly in the cold sky. Then it turned and trotted up the trail in the direction of the camp it knew, where there were the other food providers and fire providers. 21chidden: scolded. CHECK YOUR UNDERSTANDING Answer these questions before moving on to the A n a ly z e th e Text section on the following page. 1 How does the man's attitude change toward the old-tim er on Sulphur Creek? A He begins to distrust him. B He begins to respect him. C He intends to ignore him. D He hopes not to meet him. 2 Why did the man w atch the terrain so carefully as he w alked? F He was looking for rabbit holes under the snow. G He thought he would lose the trail if he didn't watch. H He feared breaking through to w ater under the snow. ^ J He was looking for the m atches he had dropped. s. i S' S 3 Why did the man think he would make it to his cam p? A He thought he knew and understood the cold. B The cam p was close and the path was well traveled. 1 5 C The boys he would be m eeting had m arked the route. D The old-tim er on Sulphur Creek told him he would. A N A LY Z E C H A R A C TER Annotate: In paragraph 40, mark the actions the dog associates with humans. Interpret: What are the dog's motives for staying with the man? How does this behavior relate to naturalism?
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