Descriptive essay
A descriptive essay describes a person, event or thing in detail. For this
term we will learn how to write a descriptive essay about your favourite
essay
Planning for essay
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Planning
Paragraph 1 -First draft
My favourite teacher is Mrs Mtshali. Mrs
Mtshali is very tall and beautiful. She has
brown eyes and is light in complexion.
She looks like an African Queen. Mrs
Mtshali
wears very expensive and
stunning clothes. I think Mrs Mtshali is a
fashionista. Mam teaches isiZulu and Life
Orientation at Kwambonambi Primary
School. She lives in Mtubatuba.
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Planning
Mrs Mtshali is a kind and loving
person. She is generous and polite
Mam does not scream at us. She
is like a mother-figure in my life.
Mrs Mtshali is very intelligent, she
teaches very well. I like Mam
better than any other teacher
because she goes out of her way
to take care of us when we are
sick and when we sad or upset.
Planning
I love isiZulu because Mrs Mtshali
teaches us about our culture and
our history. She also teaches us to
be proud of our home language.
She is very fair and has no
favourites in class. Mrs Mtshali
loves all of the children she
teaches, but she is also strict with
us.
Planning
I wish Mrs Mtshali happiness and
joy for the rest of her life. She will
forever remain my most favourite
teacher. She is the queen of my
heart.
My favourite teacher is Mrs Mtshali. Mrs Mtshali is very tall and beautiful. She has brown eyes and is light in complexion.
She looks like an African Queen. Mrs Mtshali wears very expensive and stunning clothes. I think Mrs Mtshali is a
fashionista. Mam teaches isiZulu and Life Orientation at Kwambonambi Primary School. She lives in Mtubatuba.
Mrs Mtshali is a kind and loving person. She is generous and polite Mam does not scream at us. She is like a motherfigure in my life. Mrs Mtshali is very intelligent, she teaches very well. I like Mam better than any other teacher because
she goes out of her way to take care of us when we are sick and when we sad or upset.
I love isiZulu because Mrs Mtshali teaches us about our culture and our history. She also teaches us to be proud of our
home language. She is very fair and has no favourites in class. Mrs Mtshali loves all of the children she teaches, but she is
also strict with us.
I wish Mrs Mtshali happiness and joy for the rest of her life. She will forever remain my most favourite teacher. She is the
queen of my heart.